The Line

Deadly Ambition Series #6

by Tim Weaver

A career-making rumor about a Hollywood icon could save a struggling journalist—or destroy her—in this twisting and atmospheric short story by Sunday Times bestselling author Tim Weaver.

Los Angeles, 1985. Journalist Hallie Pitney is fighting to keep her head above water selling minor stories to gossip magazines. She still dreams of her byline on something better—something that could finally launch her career.

Then a whisper reaches a legendary movie star may be hiding a devastating secret. For Hallie, this could be the story that changes everything. But a dark choice lurks behind Hollywood’s shuttered the story of a lifetime—or everything she stands for.

Tim Weaver’s The Line is part of the Deadly Ambition collection, stories about greed, control, and the sinister side of making dreams come true. They can be read or listened to in one bingeable sitting.

Genres: Short Stories, Audiobook, Thriller, Mystery, Novella, Fiction, Mystery Thriller

43 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 1, 2026

About the author

Tim Weaver is the Sunday Times Top 3 bestselling author of the David Raker missing persons series, the standalone thriller, Missing Pieces, and the novella collection, The Shadow at the Door. His novels have been selected for the Richard and Judy Book Club four times, and his work has been nominated for a National Book Award and the Ian Fleming Steel Dagger. He is currently developing an original TV drama with the team behind Line of Duty. He lives near Bath in the UK. Find out more about Tim and his writing at www.timweaverbooks.com.

Reviews

[Jayme C (Brunetteslikebookstoo)]

This was my first read from award winning UK author Tim Weaver-who is the author of the 13 book David Raker series about a Missing Persons investigator. I love how these collections give me a chance to read short stories by “new to me” authors.

Since I was listening to a story a day from this collection on my morning walk, I didn’t read the blurb in advance, so my initial thoughts were “that this story seemed dated”.

But, I soon realized that it was set in 1985, in Los Angeles.

Struggling Journalist Hallie Pitney is selling minor stories to gossip magazines while she waits for the story which could finally launch her career.

Then she is given a lead about a legendary movie star who may be hiding a devastating secret-AIDS.

Is she cutthroat enough to break the story?

This wasn’t a favorite for me, but it was a pretty strong collection and I enjoyed 4 of the 6.
About 43 pages

Tim Weaver’s “The Line” is part of Amazon’s “Deadly Ambition” collection-stories about greed, control, and the sinister side of making dreams come true. They can be read or listened to in one bingeable sitting and they are available now for free if you have Amazon Prime.

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2.5 rounded up

[Tonya]

This short story was not a thriller. It was more a case study of how far someone is willing to go to advance their career and possibly earn fame. The narration saved it in my opinion since it was not super engaging. My rating is bumped up from two to three stars because of the performance of the narrator.

[Jonetta]

the setup…
It’s 1985 Los Angeles and Hallie Pitney’s dreams of being a journalist with a major byline seem to be fading fast. She’s barely subsisting on tired stories sold to gossip rags, facing eviction from her apartment. Then she receives a tip about a legendary Hollywood actor, one that could put her into the sights of a major news outlet. But she reaches a crossroad where she must choose to go over that line into the dark for the limelight or do the right thing.

the heart of the story…
Hallie’s life was beyond bleak and I understood her desperation. The choices she faced were difficult but was it going to be worth crushing her soul in the long run?

the narration…
Kristin Atherton completely captured her character and did a wonderful job of providing distinct voices for all. Her storytelling was amazing.

the bottom line…
This was beyond dark and for a short story, it delivered some powerful themes. When it came time for Hallie to cross that line or turn back, I could barely breathe. I am still haunted by this one.

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(Thanks to Brilliance Audio and NetGalley for my complimentary copy of the entire collection. All opinions are my own.)

[Casey Reads 🌸]

Unlike other reviewers, I actually enjoyed this one. It is a historical drama/suspense. I found the story very interesting and well written.

The only thing I did not like is the ending felt abrupt and I would have preferred a more concrete ending and a few more pages to round it all out.

[Alan (The Lone Librarian) Teder]

Crossing the Line to the Dark Side
A review of the Amazon Original Stories eBook released on Kindle and Audio on April 1, 2026.

But at least the money I make can give me some breathing room, she says to herself. And if I’ve got breathing room, I can give this a real shot. I can research the kind of pieces that actually matter. I can get my bylines. I can be the best version of myself.

This was well written even if it didn't come with any surprises or twists. The reason for a time setting back in 1985 becomes guessable very quickly. Gutter journalist Hallie Pitney is looking for a big story to break her into the national limelight and a tip about a possibly sickened big movie star may be her meal ticket.

I was curious to learn that Tim Weaver's regular series with the David Raker character is about a missing persons investigator. Those were being written well before Jeffery Deaver's Colter Shaw series and the current Tracker TV show, so it would be interesting to check some of those out.

Trivia and Links
Author Tim Weaver is a British writer of crime thrillers. His most popular book (based on current GR ratings and reviews) is The Blackbird (2022). His most recent book is The Missing Family (2024). Both of those are in the missing persons investigator David Raker series (2009 - ongoing?).

The Line is the 6th of 6 stories in the Deadly Ambition anthology collection from Amazon Original Stories released on April 1, 2026. The promo for the collection reads:

What drives someone to keep reaching for all that glitters, no matter the price? It’s easy to believe that more is better: more acclaim, more control, more wealth. But when dreams are fueled by greed, they can quickly twist into nightmares. These six propulsive short stories explore what happens when the true cost of ambition comes due.

You can watch for current and past Amazon Original Stories which are usually paired with their Audible Original narrations at an Amazon page here and see the Deadly Ambition collection here (links goes to Amazon US, adjust for your own country or region).

[Alya]

Thoughts
Unfortunately this was my second miss from the collection... I just found it boring and not entertaining..

Plot Summary
In 1985 Los Angeles, struggling journalist Hallie Pitney is desperate for a breakthrough beyond small gossip. When she hears a rumour that a famous film star is hiding a damaging secret, she sees her chance at a career-making story,
but digging deeper forces Hallie to face a difficult choice—chase the scoop of a lifetime or hold on to her principles.

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yeah no after reading this?? i’m 100% going through this author’s entire backlist and anything they put out next.

[Shannon Moeser]

One short story in the Deadly Ambitions Collection.

"The Line" takes place in Hollywood in 1985 and its main protagonist is Hallie, an ambitious woman, who at age 30 is still barely surviving as a freelance journalist. As I lived in Hollywood in the early 1960s, I found the picture of its decay since I had lived there fascinating; the author, Tim Weaver, is a good descriptive writer. It was also an accurate representation of the misconceptions surrounding AIDS in the mid-1980s, although younger readers would probably be confused by what we now know to be errors based on faulty assumptions. The plot was fairly complex, although the ending was a letdown because it left readers hanging. This was a short story that should have been a novella in length in order to effectively execute all the narrative threads. 3.5⭐️

[Maddie]

⭐️ ⭐️

[Jess]

*audiobook

Definitely the weakest story in this collection. It didn’t keep me interested and wasn’t memorable. It was “on theme” for the collection but I couldn’t care less about it.

[sara ۫ ౨ৎ]

─── 2 stars ᯓ★ˎˊ˗
⤷ started: july 29, 2026┊finished: july 29, 2026

i was so lost the first 30-ish % but afterwards i found it a very quick read. i don’t really agree with how the mc handled things but aside from that the ending was kinda satisfying

[Aggie]

This is the sixth and final installment of the Deadly Ambition collection. I would like to see this turned into a series.

[Nikos Drosinos]

2⭐️- I feel genuinely gaslit by this book 😅 I went in expecting a thriller, and this was mostly drama dressed up as one. 😔 The plot was very meh, and never really built any real tension. It just drifted along without ever feeling gripping or urgent. 😴

And the twist? Honestly, I’m still looking for it 😭 Nothing landed, nothing surprised me, and nothing changed how I saw the story.

Overall, not a thriller, not particularly engaging, just underwhelming. Quite forgettable 😪

[Suzy]

1 star! ⭐️

This was not good. None of these shorties are great, but this one I disliked the most!

[Bo.reads]

Set in 80s L.A., The Line follows Hallie, a struggling journalist chasing a big break—until a rumour about a movie star’s dark secret forces her to decide just how far she’s willing to go.

This one is more character-focused than twist-driven compared to the others, but it still brings plenty of tension to keep the stakes high. I liked the brief look at how cut-throat journalism can be, especially the pressure to land the next “scoop,” while also highlighting the ethical issues that come with chasing it.

Overall, this one was quieter than the others, but still effective and an enjoyable read.

2.5⭐️

[Lisa]

As I read the last page, I felt like I must have missed something. But nope, that’s how it ended. I was honestly expecting more. And an unlikable MC made it even harder to connect to anyone or anything in this short story. Many readers may enjoy it, but it fell flat for me.

**2.5 stars!

[Obsidian]

This one read as unfinished to me when we get to the ending. It also due to the subject (a so called journalist outing an actor who may be dying of AIDS) had me fuming. Taking place in 1985 we follow Hallie who is trying to become a mainstream journalist. She's constantly dealing with very little notice given to her work and very little money too. When she's told about a tip that could set her up for a long time, Hallie decides to run with it. Things don't go as planned though. And Weaver leaves too many strings unplucked in this one. He mentions future works may address this and I just got annoyed.

[Tierney Moore]

4.5 for another solid, fun entry in this series. Conscience vs. success is again central to the tale.

This has been a strong series of shorts. Not perfect, because shorts rarely are given that different readers have different needs, preferecnes, and bugbears. But a lot fo fun to read :)

[M]

2/5🌟
This story had sooo much potential :(.
I hated the MC and I wish the story revolved around sloane more. My least favorite of the series.

My rating for Deadly Ambition series-
(Not reading in order)
1)The Roomate(#2 by Andrea Mara)-3.75/5🌟
2) A Fatal Delivery(#4 by Lauren Oliver)-2/5🌟
3)The Muse(#5 by Lauren Ting Brown)-3/5🌟
4)The line(#6 by Tim Weaver)-2/5🌟

[STEPH]

I wanted more. Could this be a full-length novel? I needed more of Hallie, please.

This novella really makes you contemplate morality—the thin red line between doing what’s right and surviving. For a struggling, unknown journalist like Hallie, a single choice could either save or destroy her entire sense of humanity.

I guess Hallie made her choice. One she will surely regret—and perhaps deserves to suffer for.

[mimi (catching up)]

The most “I succeeded, but at what cost” you’ll ever read.

↠ 4 stars

Thanks to Amazon Original Stories and NetGalley, who provided me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest opinion.

[Kasa Cotugno]

Probably the weakest of the Deadly Ambition Collection that I have read.

[Gary]

Set in Los Angeles in 1985, The Line follows journalist Hallie Pitney as she struggles to keep her head above water by selling minor pieces to gossip magazines. She dreams of seeing her byline on something far more substantial—a breakthrough story that could finally launch her career into the big leagues.

Her chance arrives when a whisper reaches her that a legendary movie star might be hiding a devastating secret. For Hallie, this scoop could change everything. But behind the closed doors of Hollywood lurks a dark dilemma: she must choose between chasing the story of a lifetime or holding on to her own morals and everything she stands for.

Part of the Deadly Ambition collection, The Line explores the sinister side of greed, control, and the hidden cost of chasing your dreams. This was a good, quick read with a solid premise. However, because of its shorter format, I felt it was just a bit too short to truly get hooked or fully immersed in the way I usually do with longer fiction. Hallie Pitney is an intriguing protagonist, and the 1985 Hollywood setting provides a brilliant, atmospheric backdrop for a story about ambition and secrets. Tim Weaver writes well as always, and he builds up the moral tension surrounding Hallie’s big decision nicely. I really enjoy Tim Weaver’s David Raker series, so I was keen to check out his contribution to this collection. While this shorter story doesn’t quite match the depth of his full-length novels, his strong storytelling skills still shine through.

The Line is a readable, atmospheric quick hit of suspense that raises some great questions about ambition and ethics. While it felt a little too brief for me to get fully hooked, it’s still a well-crafted piece from an author whose work I thoroughly enjoy. A fair three stars!

[Shabby -BookBistroBlog]

Set in 1985 L.A., in the Dirty-Dirty world of Hollywood where dog-eats-dog world of celebrity gossip, TMZ style sleazy news and a fast spreading fatal disease that is ravaging playboys. Like Porter Sloan. He's the stuff legends are made of, 4 marriages, 100s of women on the side, a successful career behind him...is now a recluse.
Why?..well that's where the rumor mill starts humming loud and fast.
Two journalists - Hallie Pitney & Jordan Sanchez are leaked a gossip thread by an agent and they both see it as a meal ticket out of their penury and in one case- a life & death situation.
Ethics wages a war against money and guess who wins?
You'd be surprised!
There's also a monkey on their back - blackmailing dirty cop. Is there any other kind?!!
It's a caustic, sharp account of gruesome underbelly of bright lights of celebrity culture.
Narration by Kristin Atherton is brilliant and I love third person POV too
“5 stars for anonymous reporter”
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[Lisbet Hill]

I missed 2 of the novellas in this collection, but I’m just not enjoying myself so I think I’m done. This one was so boring and had such an unimpressive outcome.

[Vuseor]

YAWNNNN YAWWNN 😴😴😴 plenty of boring material to read, this amazon series full of short stories was so disappointing for me.

To end the series with this was not.. really it for me. The start was mediocre, climax was predictable. End was like the others. honestly why did I even try to enjoy this.

Rating this book with the theme in mind 8/10. Theme was obviously there, so I appreciate that as much. But this as a whole was boring and stupid.

I didn’t enjoy this series and will be giving it overall 2 stars. There’s only 1 short story I sorta liked in here. 😬😬

[Howard Iske]

I don’t really have too much to say about this, other than I didn’t enjoy it. I found the main character extremely unlikable, and some of her choices infuriated me.

I listened to this on audiobook and the narration was OK. Nothing overly fantastic.

This is a hard pass for me.

[~Bellegirl91~]

I spoke too soon....


This one was boring as hell not gonna lie. What are the odds of me rating the book ends of this collection 1 star? I had so much potential for this last one but it seemed to repetitive to me personally and not the greatest.

All I say is good luck and kudos to those who end up liking this one. Not for me personally.