I mean I wouldn’t say it’s “once-in-a-generation” fiction but it was good! Beautiful prose which is half the point — a little much for my personal tastes but objectively well-written with more than a few very intriguing concepts packed into such a short/tight story. If this really picks up (very cool flex that I am the first to review/log it here haha) it’ll turn into an Expedition 33 situation. Very much interested in checking out this author’s other works!
This was a pretty fun short story. I thought the start had a bit too much babble that didn't really make sense, but the end was really cool. Very big fan of the attempts to keep the inhabitants of the ship alive.
You can find all sorts of things scrolling late on Twitter. This was one of them. It would appear that I am one of the first people in the world to read this short story, and I would suggest that you stop what you're doing and join the club. Ten or fifteen minutes of your time. Unfortunately I am a sucker for this sort of stuff and I was got pretty good, as I am wont to do. You're not too stupid to understand it and if you can't put it in words how it made you feel you can measure how heavy your heart is and honestly that's more than half the battle these days. I'll never write like that, which I hate. But I can read it; it'll do. It always has.
Usually I would take notes, write something put-together, etc. but I wanted to get in on the rush of it all. Good night folks.