Drags a bit, but not a terrible version. It has great potential.
The worst part? The grammar.
I'm not talking spelling, as the author pushes in her beginning message, but the punctuation mishaps, the tense changes, and the inconsistencies. For example, a servant by the name Bellan becomes Ballan at one point. He and she get mixed up frequently. Sentences have missing words and added words("The weight of my that truth threatened..."). Also, there is a common misuse of semicolons. And there are many extra spaces, or missing spaces between periods and the next sentence. Sometimes, there are no periods at all. Dialogue is often missing punctuation marks, or they are in the wrong spot. It's a jarring halt that disturbs the flow of the book.
With a bit of an edit, this could easily be a four star book.
For my clean readers: language-some, but no f-bombs. Violence-fighting, kidnapping, attempted murder, murder, graphic details of violence, rape attempts, though nothing actually happens, and physical abuse. Romance-kissing, some sexual content that can be skipped over that isn't graphic.
Still, it's not something I would recommend for teens.