Great start. Does need some editing. But I can follow along really well. I love the growing of the community and the dungeon. Learning to trust each other and knowing that it isn’t just a one person ordeal.
I really wanted to love it. Too woo woo. Too much description in feelings and repetition. Also weird in continuously calling a teen character “they.” I skipped through a lot of that near the halfway point because it made me tired. I think the attempt was to be profound, maybe. Didn’t work for me.