I received an ARC of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and feelings below are my own.
Hm. I did not like this book for a multitude of reasons.
First of all, it was very boring. A lot of the events of the novel weren't things the characters actively did. A lot of it was just passive actions happening to our characters. I rarely, if ever, felt like Burr did anything to impact the plot. It mostly just felt convenient. Lucky. Which, obviously, meant that I didn't enjoy this book. I wanted Burr to step up and do something, and he never does! People just do stuff around him and he goes with it! Boring!
And really, that's problem number two - I do not care about a single character or relationship in this book. No one really develops or grows or changes. Sure, they get older, they go through things that would theoretically shift the way someone interacts with the world, but I don't think the Burr at the beginning of the book and the Burr at the end of the book are different in any way, shape or form. I don't think anyone is different from their first introduction to their last. That, in turn, sours my feelings on the relationships. There's three relationships hinted at in this book and I won't give spoilers but my thoughts on them are 1) why did this happen?, 2) when did this happen?, and 3) who cares if this happened?
I really loved the concept of this world but it ultimately just fell flat for me. There's not a lot of time devoted to the Game, and the scenes we did get were weird and cryptic (for no reason) or just downright boring. I swear, every time we rejoined the Game, we were stuck in the same scene. And the ending part set in the Game was so stupid. That epilogue really was dumber than a bag of bricks. Oh, and this is also not even mentioning the non-Game parts of the world. I got very little sense for each location we got dropped into, however, that could just be me and my lack of visualisation ability at work here. Seriously, take this bit of criticism with a HUGE grain of salt.
The writing was fine, I guess? Nothing stood out to me as awful, but nothing really stood out to me as "holy wow, I have to jot this down" either. Just very passable, if a bit juvenile? Definitely read like more of a younger YA, or even a middle grade, novel at times. Again, not a problem, just doesn't help shift my rating any higher.
Overall, I just didn't have a good time with this, unfortunately. This book is 448 pages and it took me 5 days to read. Five. That's... basically unheard of for me. I read Alchemised, all 1000-and-something pages of it, in 4 days. And I also gave that book 2 stars. I think there are plenty of people who will get more out of this than I did, but I can't say I'll be rushing forward to recommend it, especially not when the author has much better works like Deeplight or The Lie Tree.
Just a small request before I go: more magpies, please. There really wasn't enough. (Signed, a magpie lover.)