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Before the Mountain Falls
1939. When pregnant evacuee Norma Sparrow arrives in a remote Welsh valley, she brings more than just her battered suitcase. She holds close a secret that could destroy the fragile new life she’s desperate to build…
Fleeing London as war breaks, Norma has reinvented herself as Mrs Finch – a respectable young widow. It’s a lie born of desperation: pregnant, penniless, and abandoned by the man who promised to marry her, she has nowhere else to turn. In the heart of the Welsh hills, far from the shame of her past, she might finally find the fresh start she’s always dreamed of.
But keeping secrets in the close-knit valley of Pontybrenin proves impossible. Billeted with a stern church minister and his family, Norma finds herself drawn into a world she never expected. She finds friendship in unlikely places and a love that makes her believe in second chances. Yet beneath all these fragile new feelings, she must face her deepest fear – the one that’s haunted her since childhood: that she’ll fail her baby the way her own mother failed her.
As war darkens over Britain and the tight-knit Welsh community faces losing their mountain homes, Norma discovers that the courage to stay – and to love – might be the bravest choice she’s ever made.
A deeply poignant tale of resilience, found family and second chances – heartwarming, captivating and impossible to forget. Perfect for fans of When the World Fell Silent.
Fleeing London as war breaks, Norma has reinvented herself as Mrs Finch – a respectable young widow. It’s a lie born of desperation: pregnant, penniless, and abandoned by the man who promised to marry her, she has nowhere else to turn. In the heart of the Welsh hills, far from the shame of her past, she might finally find the fresh start she’s always dreamed of.
But keeping secrets in the close-knit valley of Pontybrenin proves impossible. Billeted with a stern church minister and his family, Norma finds herself drawn into a world she never expected. She finds friendship in unlikely places and a love that makes her believe in second chances. Yet beneath all these fragile new feelings, she must face her deepest fear – the one that’s haunted her since childhood: that she’ll fail her baby the way her own mother failed her.
As war darkens over Britain and the tight-knit Welsh community faces losing their mountain homes, Norma discovers that the courage to stay – and to love – might be the bravest choice she’s ever made.
A deeply poignant tale of resilience, found family and second chances – heartwarming, captivating and impossible to forget. Perfect for fans of When the World Fell Silent.
374 pages, Paperback
Published February 18, 2026
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February 21, 2026
1939. London. Norma Sparrow is pregnant, she loses her job as a seamstress and the room she rents and boards a train for women and children being evacuated. She arrives in a tiny town in Wales called Pontybrenin, she pretends to be married and goes by the name of Mrs. Finch.
Norma is billeted with the local minister, Emrys Powell and his wife Miriam and their adult son Aneurin, and Norma knows she's unwelcome and doesn't fit in. The Powell’s are deeply religious, old fashioned and she struggles with feeling isolated, she misses England, being able to go to the pictures and have some fun.
Emrys travels to see his mother and brother on her farm at Mountain Moel, here he holds a church services for those who live in the rural community and they speak Welsh. Miriam can’t understand why Norma isn’t excited to be pregnant, something she longs for, especially when she lugged her sewing machine with her and should be making things for the baby’s arrival.
Norma discovers what real friendship and love is, but because of her childhood and being in foster care Norma feels like she doesn’t deserve him or her baby and she will fail at being a mother like her own.
The other issue is the war, while Wales might be part of the British Empire, many men like Emrys think they should stay out of it, he was injured in The Great War and two of his brothers killed and he doesn’t want Aneurin to have be in the same predicament. When a letter arrives at Pant Glas farm, informing them the whole area is going to be taken over by the English army and used as Artillery Range Emrys is determined to save his heritage and the beautiful valley.
I received a copy of Before the Mountains Falls by Luisa A. Jones from Storm Publishing and NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review. I highly recommend reading this book, it shines a light many things I didn’t know about Wales, the traditions and language, rocky relationship with England, and the Second World War and was based around real events.
The evacuees, both women and children, how many found it very hard to adapt to living in the country and especially Wales and it’s a story of resilience and courage, standing up for what you think is right, both Norma, Emrys, Aneurin and Gwenllian do this.
Everyone deserves to be not judged and a second chance, a family and a home, please write a sequel Ms Jones, I highly recommend and five stars from me.
Norma is billeted with the local minister, Emrys Powell and his wife Miriam and their adult son Aneurin, and Norma knows she's unwelcome and doesn't fit in. The Powell’s are deeply religious, old fashioned and she struggles with feeling isolated, she misses England, being able to go to the pictures and have some fun.
Emrys travels to see his mother and brother on her farm at Mountain Moel, here he holds a church services for those who live in the rural community and they speak Welsh. Miriam can’t understand why Norma isn’t excited to be pregnant, something she longs for, especially when she lugged her sewing machine with her and should be making things for the baby’s arrival.
Norma discovers what real friendship and love is, but because of her childhood and being in foster care Norma feels like she doesn’t deserve him or her baby and she will fail at being a mother like her own.
The other issue is the war, while Wales might be part of the British Empire, many men like Emrys think they should stay out of it, he was injured in The Great War and two of his brothers killed and he doesn’t want Aneurin to have be in the same predicament. When a letter arrives at Pant Glas farm, informing them the whole area is going to be taken over by the English army and used as Artillery Range Emrys is determined to save his heritage and the beautiful valley.
I received a copy of Before the Mountains Falls by Luisa A. Jones from Storm Publishing and NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review. I highly recommend reading this book, it shines a light many things I didn’t know about Wales, the traditions and language, rocky relationship with England, and the Second World War and was based around real events.
The evacuees, both women and children, how many found it very hard to adapt to living in the country and especially Wales and it’s a story of resilience and courage, standing up for what you think is right, both Norma, Emrys, Aneurin and Gwenllian do this.
Everyone deserves to be not judged and a second chance, a family and a home, please write a sequel Ms Jones, I highly recommend and five stars from me.
March 18, 2026
4.5 stars for Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones. This was the second novel that I had the pleasure of reading by this author. I enjoy that Luisa A. Jones tends to have a strong female protagonist in her cast of characters. Before the Mountain Falls was set in both London and the countryside of Wales during the beginning of World War II. The author, Luisa A. Jones, focused on two little known occurrences that were unique to Welsh people during that time period. The themes of new beginnings, friendships, acceptance, relationships, ambition and loss were prevalent throughout the novel. Before the Mountain Falls was well written and meticulously researched. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys historical fiction and enjoys getting to know characters that will penetrate your heart and mind.
Thank you to Storm Publishing through Netgalley for allowing me to read Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones. All thoughts and opinions are completely my own.
Thank you to Storm Publishing through Netgalley for allowing me to read Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones. All thoughts and opinions are completely my own.
April 8, 2026
This author is new to me. I enjoyed this book so much, I’ve already borrowed her previous book. She writes everyday life with exquisite detail and it’s realistic, never boring. I became quite invested in all the characters. It was wonderful seeing the characters grow as people. So many heartwarming and sad moments. I look forward to many more by this author. Highly recommend.
I was blessed with an ARC. Thank you, NetGalley. The opinions expressed are my own and unbiased.
I was blessed with an ARC. Thank you, NetGalley. The opinions expressed are my own and unbiased.
March 20, 2026
Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones was a moving and emotionally charged historical fiction novel that I couldn’t put down. Luisa A. Jones has become one of my favorite authors because she has a remarkable ability to evoke a wide range of emotions in her readers. This novel was particularly realistic, which made me feel a deep connection to the characters and their struggles. I experienced a range of emotions, from love and admiration to hatred and despair, as I witnessed their triumphs and trials. The writing was exceptional, and the characters were incredibly realistic, showing their flaws and desires. I eagerly anticipate her next book and can’t wait to see what she has in store for us.
Thanks, Storm Publishing via NetGalley.
Thanks, Storm Publishing via NetGalley.
March 20, 2026
Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A Jones is a heart-warming second chance story taking place in Wales at the very beginning of WWII. Norma is a very young woman who has been left at the Registry Office by the man she was supposed to marry. She had managed to keep her pregnancy a secret from her landlady and told her she was to be married and now, where was he? When she went looking she found he’d been arrested and would possibly hang. She went to the tailor’s shop where she worked, but was told she needed to leave because of her condition. The male owner quietly slipped her some money, but not much. She took her bags to the train station where they were sending evacuees out of London to safer places. It seems she had been supposed to apply, not just show up, but a customer from the sop spied her, realized she needed help, and gave up her seat for Norma. She had spent some of her precious money on a used wedding ring and now had to give a name. She made up one on the spot. When she got to Wales, the spots were all filled and so the constable took her to the manse, where she met Emrys and Miriam, and Emrys’ son, Aneruin.
Norma had a bad start in life and she didn’t want that for her child. She planned to give him/her up when the time came. Living in the manse was not easy but she managed and slowly Miriam became her friend, as did Aneruin. They had plenty of their own stuff going on what with war looming, but they were as kind as they could be, until someone saw she and Aneruin kissing. Then she was out. It was a lovely story of people coming to terms with reality. She was a great character, as were some of the peripheral characters. The plot was gentle, not always easy, and support came from the most interesting places. She got herself into a fix and Miriam’s sister, a midwife, brought her back to the manse and shamed them into keeping her. From then on, everything that happened was surprising. It was a readable, interesting story.
I was invited to read Before the Mountain Falls by Storm Publishing. All thoughts and opinions are mine. #Netgalley #StormPublishing #LuisaAJones #BeforeTheMountainFalls
Norma had a bad start in life and she didn’t want that for her child. She planned to give him/her up when the time came. Living in the manse was not easy but she managed and slowly Miriam became her friend, as did Aneruin. They had plenty of their own stuff going on what with war looming, but they were as kind as they could be, until someone saw she and Aneruin kissing. Then she was out. It was a lovely story of people coming to terms with reality. She was a great character, as were some of the peripheral characters. The plot was gentle, not always easy, and support came from the most interesting places. She got herself into a fix and Miriam’s sister, a midwife, brought her back to the manse and shamed them into keeping her. From then on, everything that happened was surprising. It was a readable, interesting story.
I was invited to read Before the Mountain Falls by Storm Publishing. All thoughts and opinions are mine. #Netgalley #StormPublishing #LuisaAJones #BeforeTheMountainFalls
April 1, 2026
I enjoyed this book , especially the feisty character Norma who was not afraid to speak her mind . Jilted and pregnant she left London to start afresh. She ended up in a small mountainous Welsh village and as an evacuee was billeted in a staunch pastor’s home with his wife and older son. The outskirts of this mountainous area was the home of about forty families who had farmed and supported each other for decades. However , they were told the British government wanted it for a military base during the Second World War. This was so devastating to this Welsh community and an historical fact not known to me. The community outside the mountain area was small but again supported each other . Norma’s was a skilled seamstress and this along with her inner and outer beauty made her somewhat unique. Her straight talk caused some family quarrels but in the end she found the love and support she missed growing up.
March 10, 2026
Before the Mountain Falls is a deeply-moving story set in Pontybrenin at the outset of the Second World War. Not only is this a captivating novel with such elaborate characters, it is an informative work of fiction that gives a voice to the Welsh farming community whose story is little-known, or perhaps lost to history.
Fiesty, pregnant evacuee, Norma, leaves London for the Welsh countryside and finds herself billeted with the devout Reverend Emrys Powell and his wife, Miriam. What a shock to the system for all parties! There are moments that made me smile and the dialogue is marvellous. Norma, with her brash, Cockney ways, is like a fish out of water and it’s safe to say, she turns the Powell household upside down!
Moel Carnau, the mountain that initially makes Norma feel hemmed in, becomes a familiar, reassuring presence. Whatever Norma’s circumstances or whatever madness infected the world, the mountain will always be there, constant and solid.
But in 1940, the peace of these Welsh mountains was destroyed by an eviction notice. Thousands of acres of land were taken over by the British government for military use. An entire community lost their land, their livestock, their livelihood and their homes that had been part of their family for generations. The author portrays this devastating part of Welsh history with sensitivity and empathy.
Before the Mountain Falls is a beautiful reminder that dire circumstances, poor choices and harsh judgment do not define a person’s entire life. Norma’s life is transformed by the power of forgiveness, community and new-found friends and family…..and I loved every minute of her story.
Fiesty, pregnant evacuee, Norma, leaves London for the Welsh countryside and finds herself billeted with the devout Reverend Emrys Powell and his wife, Miriam. What a shock to the system for all parties! There are moments that made me smile and the dialogue is marvellous. Norma, with her brash, Cockney ways, is like a fish out of water and it’s safe to say, she turns the Powell household upside down!
Moel Carnau, the mountain that initially makes Norma feel hemmed in, becomes a familiar, reassuring presence. Whatever Norma’s circumstances or whatever madness infected the world, the mountain will always be there, constant and solid.
But in 1940, the peace of these Welsh mountains was destroyed by an eviction notice. Thousands of acres of land were taken over by the British government for military use. An entire community lost their land, their livestock, their livelihood and their homes that had been part of their family for generations. The author portrays this devastating part of Welsh history with sensitivity and empathy.
Before the Mountain Falls is a beautiful reminder that dire circumstances, poor choices and harsh judgment do not define a person’s entire life. Norma’s life is transformed by the power of forgiveness, community and new-found friends and family…..and I loved every minute of her story.
April 22, 2026
What an enjoyable read this was. I absolutely adored What We Left Behind by Luisa and couldn't wait to read this book by her which was also set during WW2 and in the same Welsh village. This time we followed the story of Norma a down on her luck Londoner who has come to Pontybrenyn, pregnant and alone with a trainful of evacuees. I loved the feisty, outspoken character of Norma, she was a joy to read and to find out more about as the story progressed. I was sad when I finished the book as I enjoyed it so much and would love to read more about Norma, Miriam and the others. I was especially interested in reading all about the farms and mountain being taken over by the MOD and how difficult it must have been for the 'real' inhabitants.
A fabulous read thank you Luisa for your wonderful story.
A fabulous read thank you Luisa for your wonderful story.
March 3, 2026
I have been trying to find adequate words to talk about this exceptionally written and very powerful novel by Luisa A Jones. Before the Mountain Falls is an incredibly moving story. I It grabbed onto my heart and never let go from the moment I saw the opening quote by Oscar Wilde. “We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars”. And then the sadness gripped me when I read how Norma, the main character, is sitting and waiting on her wedding day for the groom who never shows up. Her emotional injury becomes visible in the crushed petals that fall on her lap. I knew this was going to be an emotionally charged novel—and it is— plus it is an honest portrayal of relationships between people of different classes and cultures. But there is so much more to this unforgettable story—including the impact of what happened to the Welsh people when WW2 began, and how they lost their homes and lands to the English government. Plus the lesser known evacuee situation for pregnant women and those with small children. Conditions for those evacuees did not always prove pleasant or fair.
Faith and religion are also a big part of this story and how sometimes people don’t practice what they preach. Initially a number in the community, those in a Welsh village and in big city London, were judgemental and unforgiving to Norma. She saw this with her landlord, employer and then in her new home in Wales. Emrys is a minister who should know better but whose actions and tongue are harsh. The Bible scripture “Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you," certainly comes to mind. How we treat others will be reflected back on ourselves. So take the opposite stance by not condemning others, and avoid being condemned. ‘Forgive, and you will be forgiven," and so forth.
This novel shows the destruction of judging by mere appearances and self-righteous condemnation. A lot of this happens in Before the Mountain Falls until a few kind hearts lead by a positive example. The novel sends out a warning against hypocritical judgement. Nobody is above making mistakes. It is part of being human. And we don’t know what others have been through that has led to their unsavoury or unfortunate situations. The joy in this novel is the promise of hope and forgiveness when eyes open to the truth. Then healing comes and lives turn around.
Norma is on the brunt end of terrible treatment because she is pregnant and unwed. But even though she tried to remedy her situation, her plans to marry the father of her child did not work out. He turns out to be a worse character than she knew. Without work or a home now due to her pregnancy, she is forced to leave the city and become an evacuee, hoping it will give her a fresh start. I felt sad for her and all those women of the past who were rejected and who did not have the luxuries of support, love and family. Norma was basically abused and used in past relationships. But she is strong and it is her determination that keeps her going. Her journey into a new life and setting, shows her bravery. It is a second chance but not without many trials. Fortunately it eventually leads her to receive what she craves and should have. I was totally won over by this woman. The author has given us a full picture of both her vices and virtues making her realistic. Her character arc was well presented. The scraps of cloth she used to make her special gifts, represent a diverse group of people sewn together and beautified by special stitching (coming together from various backgrounds with common needs). We, as humans, have the same desires to be loved, have a home and opportunities to share and expand our skills.
And as for skills, Norma was an incredibly gifted seamstress. I loved her vision and passion to have her own business. Beautiful clothes meant a lot to her. They were a way she expressed herself. To let others know she was ‘worth looking at’, ‘deserving’ of their ‘attention’. It was her way of making up for years of poverty, plus it also gave her joy to share her gift with others: to make people happy through the beautiful items she created so they could feel the same as she did.
I appreciated how well all that the characters were presented. Norma, of course, stands out but next to her Gwenllian, Norma’s mother-in-law, for her feistiness and honesty. It is easy to see why Norma, once she got to know her, enjoyed talking to her. She became a surprising support and the voice of wisdom and grace along with Aneurin and Grandfather Joe (I adored these two). They are the beacons in this novel. I also appreciated the difficult position of Miriam who had a conscience, but often let the expectations of others (particularly her husband) rule her actions.
There are so many beautiful and moving passages in this novel but I will share one. When Norma is panicking about something she has done, she suddenly remembers what Aneurin said to her when she was afraid. ‘Look around you, now. Tell me what you see.’ She begins to focus on the birds, the path, the golden leaves and the mountain. The mountain that previously loomed ‘forbiddingly over her.’ Now that she has visited it, it feels more like a ‘guardian,’ ‘a reassuring presence.’ The mountain represents something new for her. It is constant and non-judgemental. This is the sort of support she has needed in her life and never had from people. She has always been fighting to survive, receive acceptance and just wanting to be loved and appreciated. Does she eventually find what she is looking for? Yes. And in the most beautiful ways imaginable. Her world changes and this story brims over with the power of forgiveness when people come together in a new harmony showing grace and kindness to each other.
This is a relationship driven story with many valleys, peaks and surprises. The mountain is a great symbol of strength and acceptance. We are reminded of all the discord below in its shadow until people find it in their hearts to not judge, to forgive and find peace with each other.
The novel is perfectly executed and the ending is uplifting but I wanted to read more! Hopefully there is a sequel? I highly recommend Before the Mountain Falls as it will leave a serious everlasting mark on your heart. A must read for ’26 Historical fiction lovers. 5 Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thanks to Storm Publishing and Netgalley for a review copy.
Faith and religion are also a big part of this story and how sometimes people don’t practice what they preach. Initially a number in the community, those in a Welsh village and in big city London, were judgemental and unforgiving to Norma. She saw this with her landlord, employer and then in her new home in Wales. Emrys is a minister who should know better but whose actions and tongue are harsh. The Bible scripture “Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you," certainly comes to mind. How we treat others will be reflected back on ourselves. So take the opposite stance by not condemning others, and avoid being condemned. ‘Forgive, and you will be forgiven," and so forth.
This novel shows the destruction of judging by mere appearances and self-righteous condemnation. A lot of this happens in Before the Mountain Falls until a few kind hearts lead by a positive example. The novel sends out a warning against hypocritical judgement. Nobody is above making mistakes. It is part of being human. And we don’t know what others have been through that has led to their unsavoury or unfortunate situations. The joy in this novel is the promise of hope and forgiveness when eyes open to the truth. Then healing comes and lives turn around.
Norma is on the brunt end of terrible treatment because she is pregnant and unwed. But even though she tried to remedy her situation, her plans to marry the father of her child did not work out. He turns out to be a worse character than she knew. Without work or a home now due to her pregnancy, she is forced to leave the city and become an evacuee, hoping it will give her a fresh start. I felt sad for her and all those women of the past who were rejected and who did not have the luxuries of support, love and family. Norma was basically abused and used in past relationships. But she is strong and it is her determination that keeps her going. Her journey into a new life and setting, shows her bravery. It is a second chance but not without many trials. Fortunately it eventually leads her to receive what she craves and should have. I was totally won over by this woman. The author has given us a full picture of both her vices and virtues making her realistic. Her character arc was well presented. The scraps of cloth she used to make her special gifts, represent a diverse group of people sewn together and beautified by special stitching (coming together from various backgrounds with common needs). We, as humans, have the same desires to be loved, have a home and opportunities to share and expand our skills.
And as for skills, Norma was an incredibly gifted seamstress. I loved her vision and passion to have her own business. Beautiful clothes meant a lot to her. They were a way she expressed herself. To let others know she was ‘worth looking at’, ‘deserving’ of their ‘attention’. It was her way of making up for years of poverty, plus it also gave her joy to share her gift with others: to make people happy through the beautiful items she created so they could feel the same as she did.
I appreciated how well all that the characters were presented. Norma, of course, stands out but next to her Gwenllian, Norma’s mother-in-law, for her feistiness and honesty. It is easy to see why Norma, once she got to know her, enjoyed talking to her. She became a surprising support and the voice of wisdom and grace along with Aneurin and Grandfather Joe (I adored these two). They are the beacons in this novel. I also appreciated the difficult position of Miriam who had a conscience, but often let the expectations of others (particularly her husband) rule her actions.
There are so many beautiful and moving passages in this novel but I will share one. When Norma is panicking about something she has done, she suddenly remembers what Aneurin said to her when she was afraid. ‘Look around you, now. Tell me what you see.’ She begins to focus on the birds, the path, the golden leaves and the mountain. The mountain that previously loomed ‘forbiddingly over her.’ Now that she has visited it, it feels more like a ‘guardian,’ ‘a reassuring presence.’ The mountain represents something new for her. It is constant and non-judgemental. This is the sort of support she has needed in her life and never had from people. She has always been fighting to survive, receive acceptance and just wanting to be loved and appreciated. Does she eventually find what she is looking for? Yes. And in the most beautiful ways imaginable. Her world changes and this story brims over with the power of forgiveness when people come together in a new harmony showing grace and kindness to each other.
This is a relationship driven story with many valleys, peaks and surprises. The mountain is a great symbol of strength and acceptance. We are reminded of all the discord below in its shadow until people find it in their hearts to not judge, to forgive and find peace with each other.
The novel is perfectly executed and the ending is uplifting but I wanted to read more! Hopefully there is a sequel? I highly recommend Before the Mountain Falls as it will leave a serious everlasting mark on your heart. A must read for ’26 Historical fiction lovers. 5 Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thanks to Storm Publishing and Netgalley for a review copy.
April 2, 2026
Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones is a deeply moving, beautifully written historical novel that completely swept me away. Inspired by true events, this is the kind of story that lingers long after you’ve turned the final page.
Set in 1939, the story follows Norma, a young woman whose life unravels in an instant—pregnant, unmarried, and abandoned at a time when society offers little compassion for women in her position. With nowhere else to turn, she reinvents herself and escapes to rural Wales, hoping for a fresh start. What unfolds is a powerful journey of survival, resilience, and ultimately, belonging.
Norma is an unforgettable protagonist—flawed, fierce, vulnerable, and incredibly human. I found myself rooting for her from the very beginning, feeling every setback and small triumph along the way. Her growth throughout the story is handled with such care, and watching her slowly carve out a place for herself in a tight-knit and often judgmental community was both heartbreaking and uplifting.
The Welsh setting is absolutely stunning and so vividly brought to life. Wales isn’t just a backdrop—it becomes a character in its own right. The sense of community, the culture, and the looming impact of war are woven seamlessly into the narrative. I especially appreciated the spotlight on lesser-known aspects of WWII history, including the experiences of evacuees and the devastating displacement of Welsh farming communities.
The supporting characters add so much depth to the story. From the strict yet complex minister’s household to the unexpected friendships Norma forms, every relationship feels authentic and layered. There’s a beautiful exploration of themes like forgiveness, faith, love, and the consequences of judgment—making this much more than just a historical romance.
Emotionally, this book delivers on every level. It’s tender and heartbreaking at times, but also full of hope, warmth, and quiet strength. The balance between personal struggles and wider historical events is handled masterfully, creating a story that feels both intimate and expansive.
What truly makes this a 5-star read is how immersive and affecting it is. The writing is rich without being heavy, the pacing keeps you engaged, and the emotional payoff is incredibly satisfying. It’s one of those books that reminds you why you love historical fiction in the first place.
Final verdict: A powerful, emotional, and unforgettable story of courage, second chances, and finding your place in the world. Perfect for fans of character-driven historical fiction, especially readers who loved The Nightingale.
Set in 1939, the story follows Norma, a young woman whose life unravels in an instant—pregnant, unmarried, and abandoned at a time when society offers little compassion for women in her position. With nowhere else to turn, she reinvents herself and escapes to rural Wales, hoping for a fresh start. What unfolds is a powerful journey of survival, resilience, and ultimately, belonging.
Norma is an unforgettable protagonist—flawed, fierce, vulnerable, and incredibly human. I found myself rooting for her from the very beginning, feeling every setback and small triumph along the way. Her growth throughout the story is handled with such care, and watching her slowly carve out a place for herself in a tight-knit and often judgmental community was both heartbreaking and uplifting.
The Welsh setting is absolutely stunning and so vividly brought to life. Wales isn’t just a backdrop—it becomes a character in its own right. The sense of community, the culture, and the looming impact of war are woven seamlessly into the narrative. I especially appreciated the spotlight on lesser-known aspects of WWII history, including the experiences of evacuees and the devastating displacement of Welsh farming communities.
The supporting characters add so much depth to the story. From the strict yet complex minister’s household to the unexpected friendships Norma forms, every relationship feels authentic and layered. There’s a beautiful exploration of themes like forgiveness, faith, love, and the consequences of judgment—making this much more than just a historical romance.
Emotionally, this book delivers on every level. It’s tender and heartbreaking at times, but also full of hope, warmth, and quiet strength. The balance between personal struggles and wider historical events is handled masterfully, creating a story that feels both intimate and expansive.
What truly makes this a 5-star read is how immersive and affecting it is. The writing is rich without being heavy, the pacing keeps you engaged, and the emotional payoff is incredibly satisfying. It’s one of those books that reminds you why you love historical fiction in the first place.
Final verdict: A powerful, emotional, and unforgettable story of courage, second chances, and finding your place in the world. Perfect for fans of character-driven historical fiction, especially readers who loved The Nightingale.
March 19, 2026
I am a huge fan of Luisa A Jones’s writing and was thrilled to learn there was to be a new novel. ‘Before the Mountain Falls’ is another fantastic read. I was taken back to WWII, travelling from Blitz-ravaged London to rural Wales with evacuees. I was used to reading about children being evacuated, but the main character in this novel is an unmarried, pregnant woman who’s been jilted at the altar. Norma Sparrow is a wonderful, feisty, talented woman who comes alive on the page. She is taken in by the dour, disapproving, non-conformist minister, Emrys and his wife, Miriam. The story revolves around a true event - the requisition of farming land on Mynydd Eppynt by the British Government for military purposes. I know the area well and it’s still used by the army but I didn’t realise how many farmers and members of the mountain communities were displaced, losing their homes, livelihoods and stock. The author handles these personal stories sensitively and with compassion. It is here that Gwenllian, Emrys’s mother, shows her true colours. At first, she appears harsh but I loved her support for Norma against the odds as the story enfolded. The gentle, loving Aneurin is another favourite character. The characterisation in the novel is superb and each one stayed with me long after I’d finished the book. I have no hesitation in recommending this poignant and uplifting novel, beautifully written by such a talented author.
April 13, 2026
Thank you to NetGalley and Storm Publishing for the advanced reader copy of Before the Mountain Falls by Luisa A. Jones.
This was a deeply emotional World War Two historical fiction novel that really stayed with me. Set in 1939, the story follows Norma as she is forced to flee her past and take on a new identity in a quiet Welsh village. Pregnant, alone, and desperate, her situation immediately pulls you in.
What really stood out to me was how raw and honest the story felt. Norma’s experience—especially her complicated emotions around protecting a child she never wanted—was written in a way that felt incredibly real and impactful.
I also loved the contrast between Norma and Miriam. Miriam’s longing for a child she cannot have adds another layer of emotional depth, and watching how their lives intertwine—and how both women learn from each other—was one of the most powerful parts of the book.
The writing is emotional and grounded, and the story handles difficult themes with care while still keeping you fully engaged.
This is one of those books that lingers with you after you finish it. Highly recommend if you love character-driven historical fiction with emotional depth.
This was a deeply emotional World War Two historical fiction novel that really stayed with me. Set in 1939, the story follows Norma as she is forced to flee her past and take on a new identity in a quiet Welsh village. Pregnant, alone, and desperate, her situation immediately pulls you in.
What really stood out to me was how raw and honest the story felt. Norma’s experience—especially her complicated emotions around protecting a child she never wanted—was written in a way that felt incredibly real and impactful.
I also loved the contrast between Norma and Miriam. Miriam’s longing for a child she cannot have adds another layer of emotional depth, and watching how their lives intertwine—and how both women learn from each other—was one of the most powerful parts of the book.
The writing is emotional and grounded, and the story handles difficult themes with care while still keeping you fully engaged.
This is one of those books that lingers with you after you finish it. Highly recommend if you love character-driven historical fiction with emotional depth.
March 9, 2026
Unforgettable Characters in a Powerful Story
This book completely blew me away. Set in 1939 as the world stands on the edge of war, the story follows Norma, a young woman forced to run when she finds herself pregnant, unmarried, and alone after the man who promised to marry her is arrested for murder.
Norma is a wonderfully written characterwho is strong, frightened, determined, and deeply human. Watching her become “Mrs Finch” and try to build a new life in the remote Welsh valley of Pontybrenin is both heartbreaking and inspiring. Her courage and vulnerability make her impossible not to care about.
The minister and his family add so much depth to the story. What begins as a stern and uncertain arrangement slowly turns into something far more meaningful. Their relationships grow bringing warmth, friendship, and a sense of belonging that Norma has never truly known.
The characters are what truly make this book shine. Each one feels real and layered, and together they create a story full of emotion, hope, and unexpected love. An unforgettable read that stayed with me long after I finished. Thanks to NetGalley and to the publishers of this book for giving me a free advance copy of the book to preview and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This book completely blew me away. Set in 1939 as the world stands on the edge of war, the story follows Norma, a young woman forced to run when she finds herself pregnant, unmarried, and alone after the man who promised to marry her is arrested for murder.
Norma is a wonderfully written characterwho is strong, frightened, determined, and deeply human. Watching her become “Mrs Finch” and try to build a new life in the remote Welsh valley of Pontybrenin is both heartbreaking and inspiring. Her courage and vulnerability make her impossible not to care about.
The minister and his family add so much depth to the story. What begins as a stern and uncertain arrangement slowly turns into something far more meaningful. Their relationships grow bringing warmth, friendship, and a sense of belonging that Norma has never truly known.
The characters are what truly make this book shine. Each one feels real and layered, and together they create a story full of emotion, hope, and unexpected love. An unforgettable read that stayed with me long after I finished. Thanks to NetGalley and to the publishers of this book for giving me a free advance copy of the book to preview and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
March 29, 2026
Before the Mountain Falls was a really lovely, quietly impactful read. The Welsh pronunciation guide at the front was such a helpful touch—it made the whole experience feel more immersive and accessible.
I especially enjoyed the insight into Welsh culture. Having spent time in Wales as a child, it felt nostalgic in parts, and the setting really came to life. The story itself is quite intimate and character-driven. Norma’s journey felt very real—her being pregnant and drawn first to Johnny and then to Aneurin felt less about romance and more about wanting stability, a father figure for her child, whether consciously or not. Aneurin is such a green flag, which made that dynamic even more compelling.
I did go in expecting a bit more war action given the WWII setting, but you don’t really get that. Instead, the focus is on the everyday realities for women and children who were billeted, and the emotional weight of that. It’s a quieter story, but an authentic and touching one that didn’t need the drama to land.
I especially enjoyed the insight into Welsh culture. Having spent time in Wales as a child, it felt nostalgic in parts, and the setting really came to life. The story itself is quite intimate and character-driven. Norma’s journey felt very real—her being pregnant and drawn first to Johnny and then to Aneurin felt less about romance and more about wanting stability, a father figure for her child, whether consciously or not. Aneurin is such a green flag, which made that dynamic even more compelling.
I did go in expecting a bit more war action given the WWII setting, but you don’t really get that. Instead, the focus is on the everyday realities for women and children who were billeted, and the emotional weight of that. It’s a quieter story, but an authentic and touching one that didn’t need the drama to land.
March 9, 2026
Before the Mountains Fall by Luisa A. Jones was a moving and engaging historical novel that pulled me in from the very beginning.
In 1939, Norma Sparrow’s life falls apart when she is stood up on her wedding day. Pregnant and unmarried at a time when that carried enormous social stigma, she leaves London during the wartime evacuations and heads to Wales. There she reinvents herself as Norma Finch, pretending to be a married woman in order to avoid being judged and treated as an outcast.
I loved the characters in this story. They felt real and layered, and I quickly became invested in their lives. The setting in wartime Wales added another dimension to the story, and the book does a wonderful job capturing the emotional weight of the time.
This was a story that truly made you feel all the emotions—hope, heartbreak, fear, and resilience. Norma’s journey, and the choices she has to make to survive and protect herself, made for a compelling and often touching read.
Overall, this was a beautifully written historical novel with memorable characters and an emotional story that stayed with me after I finished.
A solid 4-star read for fans of character-driven historical fiction.
In 1939, Norma Sparrow’s life falls apart when she is stood up on her wedding day. Pregnant and unmarried at a time when that carried enormous social stigma, she leaves London during the wartime evacuations and heads to Wales. There she reinvents herself as Norma Finch, pretending to be a married woman in order to avoid being judged and treated as an outcast.
I loved the characters in this story. They felt real and layered, and I quickly became invested in their lives. The setting in wartime Wales added another dimension to the story, and the book does a wonderful job capturing the emotional weight of the time.
This was a story that truly made you feel all the emotions—hope, heartbreak, fear, and resilience. Norma’s journey, and the choices she has to make to survive and protect herself, made for a compelling and often touching read.
Overall, this was a beautifully written historical novel with memorable characters and an emotional story that stayed with me after I finished.
A solid 4-star read for fans of character-driven historical fiction.
March 21, 2026
A historical story with rich characters who fit into the times portrayed. Once again this author has told us a great story, giving characters, often sidelined by society, dignity. It is well researched and fits within the context of the times. There is a humorous side to some of the stereotypes describes e.g. Rev Emrys Powell and his wife who take in a pregnant evacuee called Norma. Norma brings this previously well run household to a standstill. In the end Norma's life is transformed and she experiences friendship, forgiveness, community and a new family.
Reading this story was a humbling experience which brought tears to my eyes and outrage. But I really enjoyed it.
Thank you to netgalley and Storm Publishing for allowing me to read an advance copy..
Reading this story was a humbling experience which brought tears to my eyes and outrage. But I really enjoyed it.
Thank you to netgalley and Storm Publishing for allowing me to read an advance copy..
February 22, 2026
1939 isthe main focus of this book. Norma is jilted at the “ altar” by her prison bound boyfriend, pregnant, loses her housing and job as a seamstress due to all of these factors, she changes her identity, becomes billeted to Wales where she is housed with a minister, his younger second wife and his young adult son. The story focuses on their relationship, with conflicts and compassion . The story also focuses on life in Wales in the early days of World War II, the difficulties and hardships facing these hardworking people, I enjoyed this well researched, well written story.
March 16, 2026
Read as an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
This was a beautifully written story that mixed fact and fiction perfectly. I found that Norma was written with honesty and everything that she went through hit home.
Historical fiction books are generally a tough thing to get right as there is so much information and context one has to know before going into the story and adding the Welsh was another layer. The author did a wonderful job at staying true to the history as well as shedding light on something that wasn’t talked about too much, pregnancy outside of marriage and the consequences on a young women in that time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and look forward to any others written after it.
This was a beautifully written story that mixed fact and fiction perfectly. I found that Norma was written with honesty and everything that she went through hit home.
Historical fiction books are generally a tough thing to get right as there is so much information and context one has to know before going into the story and adding the Welsh was another layer. The author did a wonderful job at staying true to the history as well as shedding light on something that wasn’t talked about too much, pregnancy outside of marriage and the consequences on a young women in that time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and look forward to any others written after it.
March 3, 2026
This is the second WWII historical novel set in Wales that I have read by this author. I really liked the characters, the plot and the author's quality writing. All the dialogue ringed true as did the situations. I really felt I got to know them and share in their concerns and troubles.
I highly recommend this heartfelt book to anyone interested in that historical period. The inclusion of Welsh phrases and history are a bonus.
Thank you to Storm Publishing and Netgalley for an advance copy.
I highly recommend this heartfelt book to anyone interested in that historical period. The inclusion of Welsh phrases and history are a bonus.
Thank you to Storm Publishing and Netgalley for an advance copy.
March 20, 2026
I loved every word of this book. A story during WWII, a pregnant unmarried woman all alone. A strong female character i kept rooting for. Well researched. I couldn’t get enough of this story.
March 18, 2026
Reading this book was an amazing and emotional experience. I really enjoy reading historical novels in this era, the Second World War, and this one contained many interesting facts about the way Wales was involved in the war effort.
Norma finds herself in a difficult situation, pregnant with no husband and no job, she grasps at an opportunity to escape to Wales for a new beginning.
Miriam tries to support Norma, while having emotional struggles of her own.
It was fascinating seeing how Norma adapted to her new community, it was an eye opener to find out the judgement of the village and to discover how the government was able to snatch away people’s homes and businesses.
Well researched, I felt that as well as being emotionally invested I also was educated about what actually happened at the start of the war and how communities really did have to work together for the greater good.
Norma finds herself in a difficult situation, pregnant with no husband and no job, she grasps at an opportunity to escape to Wales for a new beginning.
Miriam tries to support Norma, while having emotional struggles of her own.
It was fascinating seeing how Norma adapted to her new community, it was an eye opener to find out the judgement of the village and to discover how the government was able to snatch away people’s homes and businesses.
Well researched, I felt that as well as being emotionally invested I also was educated about what actually happened at the start of the war and how communities really did have to work together for the greater good.
July 13, 2026
I picked up this book on a whim and it was better than expected. The writing is excellent, the characters are flawed and they don’t have cardboard personalities - they change, they mature. I will definitely read more from Luisa Jones.
March 31, 2026
5 easy stars from me! This is my first book by this author and I can't wait to read more. It's an emotional story that has all the feels and the author sets the scene beautifully, weaving facts into this moving WWII tale. The characters felt real, and I was invested in their lives from the first chapter. Reading books like this reminds me just how much the world has changed and the discrimination and unfair treatment many women were subjected to. As well as this, the story highlights how evacuees were treated and the heartbreaking reality that not all child evacuees were treated with the love and care they so deserved. This is a thought-provoking and informative story of hope, strength, second chances, and courage. A beautiful story that will stay with me for a long time, and I've already recommended it to many.
Thank you to NetGalley, Storm Publishing and the author for a complimentary digital copy. My review is voluntary, and all opinions are my own.
Thank you to NetGalley, Storm Publishing and the author for a complimentary digital copy. My review is voluntary, and all opinions are my own.
May 18, 2026
Thank you for allowing me to review this book. I found it as deeply moving as the previous book, 'What we left behind'. The story follows the evacuation of children and women from London to Wales. The main characters are Norma, an unmarried pregnant woman and Miriam who takes her in, against the wishes of her husband.. Life is a total contrast in the Welsh countryside for a young woman from the East End. Language is also a barrier, but somehow despite many ups and downs Norma survives. She is tenacious and lives off her wits. A well written character and the story is based up the events of the Second World War.
I can recommend this book, and look forward to reading more from this author.
I can recommend this book, and look forward to reading more from this author.
July 2, 2026
Surprisingly good book that kept my attention. What happens when a girl from the streets of London leaves with evacuees when she is pregnant, friendless, and without family? The story follows her adventure into a close-minded community where her outspoken views are not appreciated. I found myself reading to the end to see just what did happen to her and with the interesting characters in the town.
July 4, 2026
great
A super book that really underlines what life was like in world war 2 how people dealt with difficulty a good easy read which pulls at your heart
A super book that really underlines what life was like in world war 2 how people dealt with difficulty a good easy read which pulls at your heart
May 3, 2026
Love
The narrative is crafted with such exquisite depth and emotional resonance that readers find themselves deeply immersed in the characters' experiences. The storytelling is so compelling that one feels an intimate connection with each character, experiencing their struggles, joys, and challenges as if they were close personal acquaintances. The writing evokes such a strong sense of empathy that readers are moved to mentally offer guidance, support, and counsel to these fictional individuals, blurring the lines between literary imagination and genuine human connection.
The narrative is crafted with such exquisite depth and emotional resonance that readers find themselves deeply immersed in the characters' experiences. The storytelling is so compelling that one feels an intimate connection with each character, experiencing their struggles, joys, and challenges as if they were close personal acquaintances. The writing evokes such a strong sense of empathy that readers are moved to mentally offer guidance, support, and counsel to these fictional individuals, blurring the lines between literary imagination and genuine human connection.
May 25, 2026
Enjoyable story.
April 2, 2026
Rating: 4.5 Stars
Inspired by true events, Before the Mountain Falls is the captivating new historical novel from Luisa A Jones.
Norma feels as if the bottom has fallen out of her world. In 1939, society didn’t look too kindly upon pregnant unmarried women and when the man she was meant to marry is arrested for murder, Norma realises that she has got only one option left open to her: to leave everything behind and start afresh elsewhere where nobody knows the truth about her and her circumstances. Assuming the identity of Mrs Finch, Norma puts a wedding ring on her finger and buys a one-way ticket to Wales.
Norma had hoped to lie low and not draw attention to herself, but it doesn’t take long for the hidden valley of Pontrybrenin to weave its magic upon her. Although she is billeted with a strict church minister and the world is teetering on the edge of war, this is the first time in a long while where Norma feels like she has found a home of her own and a place where she belongs. It doesn’t take long for her to make friends, become part of the community – and even fall in love.
However, the heavy burden of her secrets is laying on Norma’s shoulders and she will soon be forced to make another difficult decision as she is compelled to choose between confessing the truth about her identity and the love that has come to mean everything to her…
Luisa A Jones is such a gifted storyteller and she is at the height of her powers with Before the Mountain Falls. A beautifully written, highly emotional and absorbing historical novel that tells the story of a strong, resourceful and resilient heroine, Before the Mountain Falls is a wonderful tale about finding the courage to start over, having the strength to brush yourself off and begin again even when the odds are stacked against you and discovering your place in the world that touched my heart, broke it into a million pieces and skilfully put it back together again at the end.
Hard to put down and impossible to forget, Before the Mountain Falls is a stunning novel by Luisa A Jones perfect for readers who enjoyed Kristin Hannah’s The Nightingale.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Inspired by true events, Before the Mountain Falls is the captivating new historical novel from Luisa A Jones.
Norma feels as if the bottom has fallen out of her world. In 1939, society didn’t look too kindly upon pregnant unmarried women and when the man she was meant to marry is arrested for murder, Norma realises that she has got only one option left open to her: to leave everything behind and start afresh elsewhere where nobody knows the truth about her and her circumstances. Assuming the identity of Mrs Finch, Norma puts a wedding ring on her finger and buys a one-way ticket to Wales.
Norma had hoped to lie low and not draw attention to herself, but it doesn’t take long for the hidden valley of Pontrybrenin to weave its magic upon her. Although she is billeted with a strict church minister and the world is teetering on the edge of war, this is the first time in a long while where Norma feels like she has found a home of her own and a place where she belongs. It doesn’t take long for her to make friends, become part of the community – and even fall in love.
However, the heavy burden of her secrets is laying on Norma’s shoulders and she will soon be forced to make another difficult decision as she is compelled to choose between confessing the truth about her identity and the love that has come to mean everything to her…
Luisa A Jones is such a gifted storyteller and she is at the height of her powers with Before the Mountain Falls. A beautifully written, highly emotional and absorbing historical novel that tells the story of a strong, resourceful and resilient heroine, Before the Mountain Falls is a wonderful tale about finding the courage to start over, having the strength to brush yourself off and begin again even when the odds are stacked against you and discovering your place in the world that touched my heart, broke it into a million pieces and skilfully put it back together again at the end.
Hard to put down and impossible to forget, Before the Mountain Falls is a stunning novel by Luisa A Jones perfect for readers who enjoyed Kristin Hannah’s The Nightingale.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
March 17, 2026
4,5⭐
Nora is pregnant and unmarried in London, where the WWII is starting to emerge after Hitler occupied Poland. Left unsupported by her baby's father, she decided to go to the country side with the evacuees (children and pregnant women). The billet found for her is in a Minister's house where his wife Miriam, longing to have a child of her own quickly sympathizes with her. But in order to be accepted, Norma pretends to be married so that this family accepts her.
Lie after lie, she founds herself in a difficult situation, especially after getting to know Aneurin, the Minister's son and falling for him.
Norma and Aneurin want to be together but the war, the small town and his family Catholicism makes it difficult for her to feel that she belongs.
A historical fiction romance that conquers us and brings us different family stories.
My favourite character was Miriam, with all her sympathy and desire to have a child. Loved the detail that the author had about the book Miriam read to help her in her marriage 😊
At the beginning it took me a while to "like" Nora with all her willing to find a man first thing but once she and Aneurin develop their relationship, she finds some sense and turns into a decent person!
First book I read from Luisa Jones and I'm very curious about all the others from her, since they are historical fiction.
Thank you to the publisher for sending me the ARC in exchange of an honest review ❤️
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Um romance muito bonito passado na Inglaterra da IIGM, quando as cidades, nomeadamente Londres foram evacuadas, levando crianças e grávidas para as localidades rurais. A religião, os costumes e crenças muito bem retratados e com personagens bem construídas. Não simpatizei com a personagem principal à primeira vista mas depois com o desenrolar da história revela-se uma mulher forte e determinada.
Recomendo para quem gosta de ficção histórica.
Nora is pregnant and unmarried in London, where the WWII is starting to emerge after Hitler occupied Poland. Left unsupported by her baby's father, she decided to go to the country side with the evacuees (children and pregnant women). The billet found for her is in a Minister's house where his wife Miriam, longing to have a child of her own quickly sympathizes with her. But in order to be accepted, Norma pretends to be married so that this family accepts her.
Lie after lie, she founds herself in a difficult situation, especially after getting to know Aneurin, the Minister's son and falling for him.
Norma and Aneurin want to be together but the war, the small town and his family Catholicism makes it difficult for her to feel that she belongs.
A historical fiction romance that conquers us and brings us different family stories.
My favourite character was Miriam, with all her sympathy and desire to have a child. Loved the detail that the author had about the book Miriam read to help her in her marriage 😊
At the beginning it took me a while to "like" Nora with all her willing to find a man first thing but once she and Aneurin develop their relationship, she finds some sense and turns into a decent person!
First book I read from Luisa Jones and I'm very curious about all the others from her, since they are historical fiction.
Thank you to the publisher for sending me the ARC in exchange of an honest review ❤️
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Um romance muito bonito passado na Inglaterra da IIGM, quando as cidades, nomeadamente Londres foram evacuadas, levando crianças e grávidas para as localidades rurais. A religião, os costumes e crenças muito bem retratados e com personagens bem construídas. Não simpatizei com a personagem principal à primeira vista mas depois com o desenrolar da história revela-se uma mulher forte e determinada.
Recomendo para quem gosta de ficção histórica.
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