This book is first in the series of Deadwood Mysteries by Ann Charles. It generally gets great reviews, and the descriptions and excerpts that I read were interesting so I decided to give it a try. I have to say that it fell flat for me. It is evidently written to a formula, and after a short while that formula began to seem forced and artificial. Ms. Charles tries to be all things to all readers and ends up with a story that has no heart. The main character, Violet, is a down-on-her-luck, wise-cracking real estate agent, single mother of two, and lonely heart trying to make ends meet. To complicate matters, she's got 4 men chasing after her and she's having a hard time choosing among them, not least of all because at one point or another they are all suspects in a series of gruesome disappearances of young girls. Violet spends a lot more time trying to unravel the mystery than she does trying to get traction in her real life, which has her always on the verge of financial ruin. There is lots of meat here to keep our interest, and that's part of the problem. There is really too much going on, and while the mystery of the abducted girls is central, Charles never does a very good job of explaining why Violet feels so compelled to solve it. Violet makes jokes and cracks wise throughout. A little of this goes a long way for me. I like funny books, but I want them to be consistent and reasonable too. When Violet finally finds herself captured and about to be killed by the serial murderer, rather than acting properly terrified, she continues to make dumb jokes and smart-ass remarks both internally and to the killer. That really was the last straw for me. I managed to finish the book, but it was a struggle and there was much groaning involved. Through all my suffering, it was evident to me that Ann Charles is a disciplined and talented writer. She does a marvelous job of writing breezy dialogue, creating a consistent and believable voice, and inventing surprising plot twists. Her characters are a little flat, but that is really to be expected in a plot driven story with so much going on. I really think that the problem, for me as I seem to be alone in this assessment, is that she tries too hard and ends up overextending even her considerable talents. Hope this is helpful to someone.