Motion to Claim

by Dani Loughary

357 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 20, 2026

Reviews

[Tay · Rating 5 out of 5]

ARC REVIEW:

This was my first time diving into an omegaverse, and wow I did not expect to love it this much. Dani Loughary has such a captivating writing style, and the banter between the main characters? Top tier. It felt sharp, natural, and had me smiling the entire time.

The courtroom scenes were honestly some of my favorite parts. They gave reality show energy in the best way I was fully invested in the cases and wanted even more of them. And while yes, this book definitely has spice (I’m an unreliable narrator here because even a little feels like a lot to me 😅), I’d rate it about a 4/5 🌶️ BUT what really stood out is that the plot never took a backseat. There’s so much substance here.

I also really appreciated how the story touches on deeper topics like mental health and eating disorders. It added a layer of depth that made the characters feel incredibly real. Speaking of real… their stubbornness drove me a little crazy at times, but honestly, that just shows how well they were written. Flawed, emotional, and relatable.

If you love enemies-to-lovers, fated mates, political stakes, and a total badass FMC with amazing banter, this one is absolutely worth picking up.

[Emlyn Knerem · Rating 4 out of 5]

Thank you to Dani Loughary and Red Fox Creative for the opportunity to be an ARC reader for Motion to Claim!

I’m a pretty new reader to the Omegaverse and I didn’t know what all I was getting myself into - but I definitely enjoyed the ride! I was very appreciative of the author’s note at the beginning of the book that gave me a quick rundown about the Omegaverse before I jumped in. I felt like I had a solid foundation as I started the book so I could understand the world right away.

I am a sucker for an enemies-to-lovers trope, so when I came across Motion to Claim, I had a feeling it would be something I would like! Both characters are easy to like and root for right from the start and their banter is *CHEF’S KISS* - it gave me flashbacks to The Hating Game by Sally Thorne.

I think sometimes with stories like this, it can get so unrealistic it’s hard to read. Something Dani Loughary did really well, in my opinion, was weave the Omegaverse world so well into what real life could look like, that it didn’t take me out of the story at all.

I’m excited to read more Dani Loughary in the future! If you like good banter, lust, humor, and some really good spicy scenes - check out Motion to Claim!

[Lindsay Longacre · Rating 4 out of 5]

ARC Review 📚⚖️ Rating: 4/5 Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️/5

Who doesn’t love a spicy enemies to lovers story? Add in the fact that they are both talented lawyers and this is an Omegaverse story so there is a lot of tension and chemistry. I am fairly new to the Omegaverse romance trope but Dani did a lovely job of explaining what it meant in the beginning as well as throughout the story. I was able to really delve into the lives of these alphas, betas, and omegas.

Ava, the viper of a defense attorney, was one of the funnest female main characters I’ve read in a while. She was fiery, sassy, bad ass, and never stepped down from what she believed was right. Granted, she had some secrets and fears but they never diminished her badassery.

Mark, the tiger of a DA, was really just a big ol softie in the end. But he too was talented lawyer who was able to make the best choices in the end when it came to politics, alpha and omega rights, and of course, for his mate.

It’s funny to think about how these two weren’t able to tell they were mates from the jump. The tension and chemistry both inside and outside of the courtroom was unmatched. And it only intensified once they discovered who they truly were to one another. I mean the spice was there when they were just hooking up but the moment she was going through her heat and they realized they were mates - whoooeee! One can only hope to be as loved as an omega who finds her alpha because boy did Mark love Ava. The paramedic at the end said it best - anyone who fights like those two did had to have some sort of chemistry.

The only reason why I didn’t give it 5 stars was because I thought when Ava’s secret was revealed to Mark, and everyone really, there wasn’t a lot of blow back. I expected Mark to be a little more upset, but I guess those alpha/omega bonds are just too powerful for that. And her life was literally at stake so I guess there wasnt really time to be mad. A little more character building during that big reveal wouldn’t had me giving the book top marks.

Thanks to Dani for letting me be a part of the ARC team! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!

[Lucille Villa · Rating 4 out of 5]

ARC Review:

4⭐️ for Motion to Claim — aka “I came for the drama and stayed for the emotional chaos.”

This was my first dip into the omegaverse and honestly? Not a bad place to start. It’s an easy, smooth read with just enough tension to keep things interesting without frying your brain. Classic enemies-to-lovers vibes where they’re both like “I absolutely do NOT like you”… and then immediately get entangled anyway. The denial didn’t stand a chance.

Also, as someone who struggles with an ED, I really appreciated feeling seen in a story like this. It caught me off guard in a good way.

Overall: fast-paced, messy feelings, and a couple who folded way faster than they’d like to admit. No complaints here.

[Ilonka Gangadin (masbookslessgluten) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I’ve officially fallen down the omegaverse rabbit hole and I’m not coming back anytime soon. Mark is absolutely feral for Ava, and that push-pull of his instincts versus his respect for her makes their dynamic so compelling. Rivals in the courtroom but perfectly in sync behind closed doors? Say less. His protective, possessive edge is balanced by how deeply he admires her strength, her voice, and everything she stands for.

Beyond the chemistry, this story digs into heavier themes: misogyny, oppressed minority, and the quiet cost of hiding who you are just to survive in a world that underestimates you. Ava’s resilience and the connection between these characters really shine, making their fight feel just as powerful as their romance.

[Katie Shaver · Rating 4 out of 5]

⚖️📚 ARC Review

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

If you love enemies-to-lovers with sharp banter and tension you can feel through the pages… this one delivers.

Set between two opposing lawyers, this hidden omega romance was such a fun, addictive read. The chemistry? Immediate. The rivalry? Top-tier. And the banter between them honestly stole the show for me . It was witty, layered, and full of that push-and-pull that makes this trope so so satisfying!

✨ Expect:
– Enemies to lovers tension
– Sharp, clever banter
– Hidden omega dynamics
–Court Room Drama

Thank you to Author, Dani Loughary for this ARC! 💼🌶️

[Emma Marshall · Rating 4 out of 5]

We are immediately thrown into a high-stakes legal battle that sets a blistering pace for the rest of the story. The friction between the two opposing lawyers is palpable, creating a cutthroat energy that keeps both the reader - and the characters - on edge. What really piqued my interest, though, was the moral ambiguity; as the case develops, the lines blur, making it difficult to tell which lawyer is truly the morally grey one.

The ‘enemies’ dynamic is amplified by the fact that neither Mark nor Ava fits neatly into the roles their society expects. Without giving too much away, the revelation that they aren’t exactly what they “should” be according to their secondary genders adds a strong layer of complexity. It turns their rivalry into something more personal - they aren’t just fighting each other in court, but pushing against the expectations the system is trying to enforce.

While the story is firmly rooted in the Omegaverse, the New York setting feels grounded and current. From relentless traffic to the eye-watering cost of living, the author leans into the realities of city life, making the world feel lived-in and believable.

When the verbal sparring between Ava and Mark reaches its breaking point, the shift into something more intimate feels less like surrender and more like a continuation of the same fight. Both are determined to maintain control, convinced this will be a one-time lapse.

Of course, the chemistry built through their rivalry proves impossible to contain. What follows becomes a subtle competition - who will break first. It’s a high-stakes game of emotional chicken, where their refusal to give the other power is constantly tested by an undeniable connection. This tension sits at the heart of the book: the hardest person to overcome isn’t your opponent, but yourself.

As the story moves into its middle section, it leans into that addictive “you shouldn’t want this, but you do” energy - very reminiscent of Bridesmaids by Jane Costello. The shift from courtroom to wedding reception works particularly well, acting as a catalyst for their dynamic. Stripped of professional structure, their connection feels more exposed, with glimpses of something deeper breaking through the surface.

Returning to the courthouse brings a sharper, more suffocating tension. They fall into deliberate silence about what’s happened, relying instead on their assumptions about each other. This dynamic reminded me of Hollow Huntress, where characters believe they understand each other completely - only to realise those assumptions are what keep them from the truth.

The strength of this section lies in that unresolved tension. Because neither is willing to bridge the gap between their professional personas and their private desires, the story maintains a constant sense of anticipation - you’re waiting for the moment everything finally snaps into honesty.

One of the most touching details is Mark’s nickname for Ava: Cereus. For a character defined by control and precision, this moment of quiet reflection adds surprising softness. Comparing her to a night-blooming cactus - rare and only seen by a few - reframes her “Viper” persona as something guarded rather than cold.

What makes the emotional arc especially compelling is how differently they come to understand their feelings. Mark’s realisation is controlled and deliberate, while Ava’s only surfaces when her carefully maintained composure cracks. This contrast creates a strong emotional push and pull between them.

As the story progresses, the tone deepens. Ava’s resistance to the Alpha structure is revealed to come from a place of personal trauma, adding significant emotional weight to her character. It transforms the central conflict from simple tension into something rooted in trust, vulnerability, and healing.

The side characters play an important role here, often forcing moments of reflection that the leads would otherwise avoid. For Mark, a careless comment from a friend highlights cracks in his composed exterior. For Ava, moments with her younger brother reveal the person behind the “Viper,” adding warmth and depth to her character.

As we move toward the final act, the tension shifts inward. The real conflict is no longer external, but rooted in how both characters avoid confronting their own truths. They aren’t just performing for others - they’re performing for themselves. This is what makes the final stretch so compelling. While Ava and Mark cling to their roles, the cracks are visible to everyone else. That disconnect builds a quiet but powerful tension, pulling them toward an inevitable moment of honesty.

By the final quarter, the tone shifts again - less sharp, more intimate. After so long maintaining control, Ava and Mark begin to let those masks slip. This transition - from calculated enemies to something far more vulnerable - gave me strong Hollow Huntress vibes, particularly in the way emotional intimacy finally breaks through the tension.

[Plot Feelings · Rating 5 out of 5]

Rating: ⚖️🖤 4.5/5

Dani Loughary grabbed me from the very first page and did not let go. Not once. The tension, the writing, the world, the characters. All of it. Thoroughly enjoyed every single second of Ava's journey and I am not okay about how much I loved this book. 🖤

Synopsis:

Ava is one of New York's most feared criminal defense attorneys. Sharp, powerful, and completely untouchable. She has built her entire career around one purpose: fighting for omegas in a system that was never designed to protect them. The irony? She is one. And if anyone finds out, everything she has worked for crumbles. In a system built to silence her, she became the loudest voice in the room. Mark Taylor is Manhattan's youngest District Attorney, politically ambitious, reform minded, and the one person in any courtroom who can match her. Their battles across the aisle are legendary. Hating each other is easy. What happens when it stops being easy is the whole book. This is rivals to lovers set in an omegaverse where the stakes are not just personal. They are political, systemic, and deeply human. ⚖️

What I Loved:

First, can we just appreciate that this book does not lean on the lazy alpha stereotypes? 👏 Mark does not walk in already knowing everything. He notices the gaps in his knowledge, sits with the discomfort of them, and actually does the work to understand. That is so rare and so refreshing and honestly? It made him so much more compelling as a character and as a love interest. An alpha who does the research. We love to see it.

Ava absolutely wrecked me in the best way. Watching her peel back her armor one agonizing layer at a time, learning to be vulnerable without losing a single drop of her ferocity, and still showing up as the absolute badass lawyer she is? 🖤 Her journey to open up and let someone in while staying completely and unapologetically herself is the kind of character arc that stays with you.

The moments of vulnerability between these two hit so differently against the backdrop of all that courtroom tension. 😮‍💨 Sharp enough to win any case. Brave enough to finally lose control. The enemies-to-lovers slow burn is earned here, and the tension is absolutely immaculate throughout.

The themes are where this book really soars. ✊ Watching omegas fight for their fundamental rights within broken systems, seeing that fight actually succeed, feeling the weight of what it means to hide who you are just to survive in a world that was never built for you. It is so timely. The mental health representation is handled with real care and intention. And the way Loughary uses the omegaverse not just as a romance device but as a lens for examining systemic inequality and bodily autonomy? That is the kind of writing that makes a book mean something beyond its pages. This is not just an alpha gets the omega story. This is a story about what it costs to fight for your right to simply exist. 🖤✊

Why Not 5 Stars:

Genuinely loved this book. But I wanted more of an open, fully stated resolution on the larger systemic fight. The themes are so present and so powerful that when the ending came I was left wanting the story to plant its flag a little harder on that ground. It tipped me just barely over the line from a 5. Barely. 😤

The Vibe:

This book is Suits meets omegaverse with all the heat and none of the mercy. ⚖️🔥 Two people who speak the same language of ambition and justice and cannot stand how much they need each other. If you like your romance with sharp dialogue, real stakes, a side of systemic rage, and spice that absolutely earns its place in the story, this is your next read.

Dani Loughary, motion granted. I am fully claimed. 🖤⚖️

[Theresse (Tess) Gregory · Rating 4 out of 5]

♡ “Well, come on then, Viper. Let’s see if your bite is as vicious as your hiss.” ⚖️

⚖️♡⚖️---ARC Review---♡⚖️♡

This book ended up being a really enjoyable, lighter read compared to some of the heavier or longer stories I usually gravitate toward. Even with the enemies-to-lovers setup, it kept a fun, fluffy tone that made it easy to get through and just enjoy the ride. One of the things that stood out most was the unique take on the omegaverse. I’m used to pack dynamics dominating that space, so having a story that stepped outside of that norm felt refreshing. It still carried the familiar elements of the trope, but in a way that felt a bit different from what I’ve read before.

♡ “That’s not a possibility, though, so I’ll just remind her. No one f*cks her like I do. No one can, and no one ever will again.” ⚖️

Mark and Ava absolutely carried the story for me. Their banter was consistently entertaining, and I loved that it never really faded, even as their relationship shifted from antagonistic to something deeper. There was a natural ease to their dynamic, especially in how they managed to maintain their professional relationship alongside everything else. One thing I did find amusing throughout was that they didn’t immediately realize they were mates. While Ava’s use of suppressants made that more understandable, it still felt a bit odd at times and added a layer of irony to their interactions that I couldn’t help but enjoy.

⚖️ “Ava Kendrick. Manhattan’s most ruthless defense attorney, my personal nemesis, and the only woman who has ever made me want to strangle and kiss someone in the same breath.” ♡

Mark, in particular, was such a standout. He tried so hard to present himself as this tough, alpha-type figure, but underneath it all he was a total softie. Watching him come to terms with his approach to leadership and actively work to do better was one of my favorite parts of the book. Ava was equally compelling in a different way. I loved how she used her position to advocate for and support marginalized omegas, especially doing that work pro bono. It added a meaningful layer to the story, and I appreciated how the book drew parallels to real-world issues without feeling overly heavy-handed. The contrast between Ava’s strength and Mark’s emotional growth created a dynamic that felt both balanced and intentional.

♡ “Ava, I guarantee there are plenty of arguments in our future. Probably even today, since you have a tendency to make me want to strangle you regularly. But with stuff like this, my job is to be whatever you need me to be.” ⚖️

That said, there were a few elements that didn’t fully work for me. Mark’s decision to involve another woman, even with understandable reasoning, just didn’t sit right. It didn’t create massive drama, but it was enough to pull me out of the story a bit. I also found the reveal of Ava’s secret to be somewhat underwhelming. Given how much buildup there was, I expected a stronger reaction, especially from Mark. While his immediate response made sense in the moment, I kept waiting for a deeper follow-up that never quite came. The ending also felt a little uneven. Some plot points seemed rushed or glossed over, while others didn’t get the development they needed to fully land. It didn’t ruin the story, but it did leave things feeling slightly disjointed by the time everything wrapped up.

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Spice: 2.5/5

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Tropes:
⚖️ Omegaverse ♡
♡ Enemies-to-Lovers ⚖️
⚖️ Fated Mates ♡
♡ Hidden Omega ⚖️
⚖️ Mental Health Rep ♡

[Nathalie Hayden · Rating 4 out of 5]

An Engaging Omegaverse with a Fierce FMC and Strong Character Payoff
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Motion to Claim opens with a hook that instantly sets the tone: “I hate his face. Well, that isn’t exactly true. It’s a devastatingly handsome face that I quite enjoy looking at, so long as he doesn’t realize I’m looking.” It captures a universally recognizable kind of reluctant attraction and immediately draws the reader into Ava’s witty voice.

I don’t usually seek out enemies-to-lovers, but I do love omegaverse, and the fact that both leads are 30-something professionals made this an easy decision. That opening line confirmed I made the right choice!

Dani Loughary’s Author’s Note deserves praise. She clearly explains her specific omegaverse structure along with brief genre context. I’ve read many omegaverse novels but none by her, so this clarification was genuinely helpful and created a strong foundation for the worldbuilding.

Loughary made a particularly clever choice in making Ava a criminal defense attorney. In popular culture, defense attorneys are often portrayed as morally compromised or opportunistic. Here, Ava is sharp, powerful, and principled. She uses her position, money, and influence to protect omegas from a system that was not built for their benefit. Her inner voice further strengthens her characterization; the way she processes her circumstances feels authentic and grounded. Even when she has immature moments, her decisions remain consistent with her values. This combination of career and personality adds meaningful thematic weight and elevates the story beyond a standard omegaverse romance.

[Mild spoiler regarding MMC's behavior in this paragraph.]
Mark was more challenging for me in the first three-quarters of the novel. His actions in early courtroom scenes left me disappointed, and some of his later reactions to conflict — including issuing an ultimatum and blocking Ava — highlighted how deeply insecurity was driving his behavior. Additionally, describing himself as “popular,” along with word choices such as “situationship,” felt inconsistent with the polished, mid-30s professional persona he attempts to project publicly. His internal monologue frequently spiraled into overthinking and repetition, and at times mirrored Ava’s tone closely enough that the dual POV distinction blurred.

That said, as the book progresses, these weaker elements diminish considerably. When Mark’s vulnerability surfaces, it works. A line like, “Liquid heroin straight to the heart is less of a high and less addictive than she is,” captures the intensity of his feelings in a way that feels raw and sincere. Moments like that reveal the depth beneath his posturing.

The steam is unapologetically spicy, with knotting, fated mates, and the full range of erotic omegaverse elements. What elevates it is how well the intimacy is woven into the narrative. Giving Ava and Mark dual POVs allows readers to experience both characters’ vulnerabilities, which separates good spice from truly great spice. The explicit scenes don’t overwhelm the page count; their placement and intensity feel deliberate and satisfying.

Overall, Motion to Claim delivers a compelling omegaverse romance. Ava, as the standout hidden omega heroine, anchors the story and makes it well worth the read. Recommended for readers who enjoy enemies-to-lovers dynamics, professional rivals, and high-stakes romance with depth.

I received an advance reader copy and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.

[onlyhereforthehea · Rating 5 out of 5]

🌶️🌶️🌶️/5

Dani Loughary is a new-to-me author and I genuinely can’t believe my luck in stumbling across her ARC application. Motion to Claim was so good. Going in, I wasn’t sure what to expect, but I ended up really enjoying it. This book made my romance + Law & Order-loving heart very happy.

Motion to Claim is an omegaverse story that follows Ava and Mark. Ava is a defense attorney hiding a secret and Mark is her rival district attorney. And when I say these two fight like cats and dogs, I mean it. They are constantly clashing in the courtroom and you can imagine how that tension translates outside of it. The tension, the sexual energy, the banter…all top-tier.

But what really made this book work for me were the characters.

Mark was such a good alpha. He had the confidence, the swagger, the dominance when it mattered, but underneath all of that he was genuinely a good man. He cared about Ava, took care of her and just felt like green flags all around.

And Ava, she broke my heart a little. She’s spent her whole life being strong while also being scared. Watching her navigate that push and pull, wanting to let someone in but not knowing how, felt so real and well done. I was rooting for her just as much as I was rooting for them.

When they finally get together, it’s explosive. And watching them slowly fall for each other while unable to actually admit it? Torture in the best way. I believed so much in the connection between Ava and Mark and desperately wanted their HEA.

I really loved everything about this book. It was an easy, engaging read. The trial aspects kept me interested, the relationship kept me invested and the side characters added to the story without ever feeling overwhelming. I also really appreciated the omega storyline. It felt like an allegory for real-world issues and marginalization. It added an extra layer to the story without ever feeling too heavy-handed.

I also have to mention the pacing. This is under 300 pages, and somehow it still feels full and complete. The depth, the development, the plot, it’s all there without anything feeling rushed. A good reminder that a story doesn’t need to be 600+ pages to feel rich and satisfying.

I read somewhere that this was a new genre for Dani Loughary and that she was nervous going into it. She absolutely shouldn’t have been. She knocked it out of the park.

Go out and grab this book. You won’t regret it. It’s a great time.

✨ I received an ARC for this book. Thank you to Dani Loughary and her team for the opportunity to read and review.

[Aly · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Well, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go spend my evening with someone who doesn't make me mildly nauseous." -Motion to Claim

🐺🐾 Tropes: 🐺🐾
Enemies to Lovers
Hidden Omega
Fated Mates
Badass-but-Girly Pop
Mental Health Rep
Knotting 🥵🥵

Enemies to Lovers, Lawyer vs Lawyer, verbal banter: but really it's hot and steamy pent up attraction!

DAMN. That's about all I can say since I'm still reeling from how good this book is! This book did NOT disappoint! I'm a huge sucker for any type of fated mate/werewolf romance book and this hit the palette so well.

Ava and Mark are everything! The way she's an actual Ice Queen but is kind and compassionate to other women? The way Mark FOLDS for her. I can honestly say that Ava is an absolute treasure and deserves all the good things in the world. She's also extremely hot, smart, and a total badass. I love that she's fierce and strong but still girly-pop coded and is glamorous as hell. Not only is she all these things, but she also fights for Omega rights, realizing that women need to help lift each other up when the systems are broken against them. This not only was a novel about Ava and Mark, but it was a novel towards systems that are broken and how they need to be fixed. THE IMPACT!

Mark though? What a golden retriever alpha. I loved this man so much. He's a very strong (morally) character that just gets better and better as the book continues. We see him smooching up to the *higher* beings, just to come to light later on in the book. He notices what is wrong with things he thought he knew, and he quickly corrects the error of his ways.

I loved the side characters of the book. We briefly get to learn more about Ava's brother and brother-in-law, and I have to admit, they stole the show for a while for me. I loved their interactions with Ava and Mark, and I loved that they were an actual family.

The SPICE? 4/5 easily. Again, I'm a huge *sucker* for anything werewolf, knotting, fated Mates, etc., so this was definitely a nice spicier book.

The romance ✔️ The spice ✔️ The themes ✔️ The writing ✔️

[Ari · Rating 5 out of 5]

Thanks to @ Dani and her team for the ARC :)

I have read this as a holiday read and boy, oh boy.

If you like romance with bickering, sharp dialogue, and two people who absolutely should not be together but absolutely cannot help but want each other, this is the book for you.

From the very first courtroom setting, Ava and Mark are classic adversaries: she’s a ruthless defence attorney, he’s the youngest district attorney with a moral backbone and enough ego to not bow down to her. The tension is immediate and delicious. No slow burn whatsoever here (yes, they kiss on page 36, and I didn’t mind that in the slightest!).

They are so well matched, they don’t outshine one another - Ava is just as formidable as Mark. On one hand though, you have Ava with her vulnerabilities (TW: eating and control struggles). On the other hand, you have Missouri farm boy Mark who quotes theatre, listens to vinyl, plays hockey, wants to run for mayor and is a consent king. He continued to baffle me on every single page.

The omegaverse layer is done so well. Not overwhelming if you’re a veteran of the genre, but still fresh through the MMC x FMC couple. The scenting, the proximity, the internal conflict, all lands well without losing the story’s grounding in their professional lives.

The side characters add so much, between golden retriever brother Jack, sister Jess and her tiny son, Ava’s immediate circle shipping them and running betting pools, I became attached to every little thing in this book.

The political arc landed particularly well for me, and gave the story a satisfying sense of world building and scale beyond just the romance. The focus as well on omega rights was particularly interesting to read, as an enjoyer of political arcs in my reading of choice.

This is absolutely enemies to lovers done right: equal power, high tension, emotional payoff, and an MMC which is somehow both feral and incredibly respectful. Coupled with courtroom drama, political ambition, and my beloved omegaverse, you’re really looking at a story that cannot be put down from start to finish. Oh, and I will be thinking about Mark Taylor for an unspeakable amount of time.

[Bcgorbooks · Rating 5 out of 5]

Thank you Dani for the Advanced Readers Copy of Motion to claim!!

4.5/5 stars
3.5/5 on spice rating

Dani if you were nervous about writing this genre don’t be! As someone who has never read a book like this it was perfect for easing into this genre of books. Personally this was the perfect level for me to read for never having read anything in the omegaverse.

I DEVOURED this book. Once I got started I was hooked trying to figure out what was going on. And for as fast as I read this book at no point was I bored. I definitely didn’t predict what was going to happen in the end plot wise at all. It was full. It was eventful. It was enemy-to-lovery. And most importantly it was well written. Sometimes when you read a shorter (lol 300 pg) book you feel like plot points are lost or rushed but I didn’t feel like our main story line got lost. We got closure on a lot of our points as well as a NICE epilogue!! (I’m a sucker for an epilogue)
Our author finds a way to not only develop our main characters but also incorporate real world politics and issues into her book while maintaining the narrative. It was very clear that our author did her research on both the omegaverse AND legal field.

Here’s why it’s not 5 stars but 4.5.
There’s one main plot point early in the book that our main character Ava fights for legally that I wish we got just a tad more closure on. We’re introduced to some pro bono work that Ava does to help the omega women but feel like that part of the story kinda got forgotten and it was a big part of our FMCs story. If I have anything to say negatively about the story it would be that. But otherwise the spice was spicy and the romance was romancing.

Would I personally read another book by this author: YES

In this genre: I’m not sure. Dani did an amazing job writing this in a way that was comfortable to read at entry level but I’m not sure if this genre is for me personally. If you are a fan of the omegaverse then YES this is for you!! If you’ve never read anything in the omegaverse then TRY READING THIS BOOK!!

[♡ Nicole ♡ (ThroneOfSnark) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Overall, I had a really fun time with Motion to Claim! Dani’s writing just works for me. There’s almost no lag, and the story pulls you in right away. The first half especially had me locked in. The banter between Ava and Mark was SO good, and I loved the dynamic of Ava being this insanely competent, feared lawyer while secretly existing in a world that would immediately underestimate her. Watching her absolutely dominate in a system stacked against omegas was incredibly satisfying, and I really appreciated getting a different, more empowered perspective on that role.

Mark also surprised me in a good way. He starts off very much in that “this doesn’t affect me, so I’m not involved” mindset, which felt realistic, and I liked seeing him slowly grow and challenge those beliefs. His development didn’t feel instant, it was something he had to actually confront and work through. Also… when the spice hits, it HITS. Definitely not lacking there.

That said, there were a few things that held this back from being a higher rating for me. The miscommunication trope is STRONG in this one (which I don’t usually mind) but it started to feel a little excessive. Like… y’all are lawyers. PLEASE just sit down and TALK. I was them begging at some points 😭 Also, I’m still newer to Omegaverse outside of manhwa, but the baby-talk/whiny aspects during heat just didn’t work for me personally. It pulled me out of the story a bit, even though I get that it might be standard for the genre.

Lastly, the final stretch (like the last 10–15%) felt a little out of nowhere. It didn’t ruin the story for me, but it did feel slightly disconnected from everything that came before, and I think the ending could’ve been handled in a way that flowed a bit better. Still, I enjoyed the ride overall, and I’m VERY excited for my preorder box because apparently I now need to smell like a dreamsicle at all times 😌✨

Tropes/Vibes:

⚖️ Enemies-to-lovers (lawyer vs lawyer!)
🔥 Hidden omega
💬 Top-tier banter
🧠 “we need to talk”… but don’t
💼 Courtroom and Bedroom drama
🌶️ Spicy once it gets there

[Lara Micourt · Rating 4 out of 5]

Reading this ARC was a refreshing experience for me. While I had some prior exposure to Omegaverse stories mostly from Wattpad it’s not a genre I’ve kept up with, so diving into one set in a legal setting felt new and interesting. Overall, I genuinely enjoyed the book and had a great time reading it.

One of the highlights for me was Ava. She’s a strong, confident female lead a redheaded lawyer who knows exactly who she is and doesn’t let anyone push her around. I really appreciated how she stands her ground and refuses to be talked down to. She’s determined, self-assured, and unapologetically bold, which made her character especially engaging.

Mark also stood out to me compared to other male leads I’ve read. Even though he has a few rough moments, they don’t define him. What I liked most is that he owns up to his mistakes and shows genuine remorse. Beneath his alpha status, he’s actually very sweet and emotionally aware. Once he understands his feelings, he doesn’t play games or send mixed signals he’s direct, honest, and clear about what he wants, which was refreshing.

Their dynamic was also enjoyable to follow. The tension between them, especially within the legal setting, added an extra layer of interest. I liked seeing them challenge each other in a professional environment while their personal relationship developed alongside it.

That said, I did find myself wanting a bit more depth in certain areas. The world-building around the Omegaverse elements had a lot of potential, and I would have loved to see it explored further, especially in ways that could have added more weight to the overall story. Mark’s ambitions felt like they could have been developed more fully to create a stronger sense of progression.

Even so, the book remains an enjoyable and engaging read. The pacing kept me interested, the characters were memorable, and the romantic elements were well done the chemistry and spice were definitely on point.

This was a fun and satisfying read!!!!

[nightlyreadingheather · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is only the second Omegaverse that I have read, and I have found myself wanting to read more!

Our FMC, Ava, and our MMC, Mark, battle it out in the courtroom daily. Mark is the Attorney for the DA's office, and Ava is a partner at a prestigious law firm in Manhattan. Ava has a soft spot for Omega rights in society, and Mark is just trying to hold his own and get attention for when he runs for Mayor.

The stakes are high when the two start to develop feelings. Not only will their getting together jeopardize both their careers, but Ava is hiding a big secret, one that she struggles to keep hidden daily.

I loved Ava! She is definitely a spitfire. She is really quick with the quips, and the banter back and forth between these characters had me giggling on quite a few occasions. She is really tough in the courtroom, but we do get to see a softer side when she is trying so desperately to help the innocent Omegas with their battles within society.

Mark is a great MMC! He struggles with wanting to make changes in the city by running for Mayor when the time comes, but he has to abide by the "rules" he doesn't always agree with. He comes from a country town and feels very different from those who have always lived in the big city.

Both of these characters grow so much throughout the book! Ava learns that sometimes, you have to let people in. She does not like asking for help and would love to just handle things on her own. Mark learns that even though he thought that he knew a lot about the Omega struggles, he did not know the half of it, and his privilege kept him in the dark.

There was spice, but it does not take away from the plot whatsoever, and I really appreciated that aspect.

Their journeys, both together and separately, made this a heartfelt read and one that I highly recommend!

[Debra Ludlow-Wilson · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love an omegaverse book this was such fun and not just because of the legal tension. This was my first legal type read and Motion to Claim delivered a good mix of courtroom drama, emotional conflict and just enough heat to keep things very interesting, I need some spice these days.. hehe.. and it started earlier than I expected, yay!

At the center of the story is a strong willed Ava who refuses to be steamrolled into anything. I mean she��s sharp, she’s driven and not afraid to push back! This is even when the odds (and certain people) are stacked against her. I loved that she wasn’t perfect and her vulnerability made her such a great character to read.

Then there’s the Mark… and wow he brings that controlled and intense energy to the story, he’s the kind of character who always seems one step ahead but is clearly fighting his own internal battles!
The tension between him and the Ava? Oh perfect. It’s that push and pull power dynamic with chemistry that slowly builds and snaps into something much deeper (and hotter..hehe).

The other thing I loved with it was any side characters also added lot to the story and they don’t feel like just filler. They help the story… especially when loyalties and motivations started to blur. I enjoyed this part more than I thought I might!

And yes… there’s spice. Not overdone but definitely enough to add that extra edge some of us need in our omegaverse books. It builds alongside the emotional connection.

If I had one small critique, it’s that I would’ve loved just a bit more breathing room in certain moments to fully soak in the emotional parts but honestly, i enjoyed this book a lot.

I found this a great blend of legal drama, strong and fun characters and simmering tension that turns into something much more as you go. If you like omegaverse, power dynamics, emotional stakes and a touch of spicy heat then this one’s worth it.

[Sydney Lau · Rating 3 out of 5]

Motion to Claim is a rivals to lovers, omegaverse, lawyer x lawyer romance following Ava and Mark. Ava is hiding part of her identity from the world and Mark is the one man that pushes her limits. Chalking their attraction up to nothing more than pent up courtroom angst the rivals to lovers dynamic begins. As the two connect, they find it harder and harder to hide their true feelings.

Here’s what I loved. I loved Ava’s character and what she strives to do for others. Her selflessness to help other omegas gain control in situations that their society would rather them sit down and shut up in was commendable. She is a spitfire, and I appreciated that attitude in the male dominated field she practices in. She was fierce and had a huge heart. I enjoyed the rivals aspect of this book too. Ava and Mark were a lot of fun in the beginning, sparring back and forth while secretly yearning for each other was my favorite part!

Where this story fell flat to me was somewhere in the middle. It felt like we got to see one sweet night & morning where Mark takes care of a drunk Ava and suddenly they’re falling for each other even though we’ve only gotten snapshots of their hookups to this point. Their relationship needed more depth to me. After this, it was a frustrating race to the end of Ava and Mark doing the classic “we need to talk but not yet” dance until they’re literally forced to have the conversation.

Then, we have the ending. The last courthouse scene was so out of left field to me that it really took me out of the story. It didn’t seem to fit with the rest of the story. I was ready for the warm and fuzzy, HEA, part of the book and expected maybe a “where are they now” type of prequel to tie up some of the other characters fate.

If you’re a fan of omegaverse and have been looking for a spicy quick read with a little bit of suspense then I would definitely recommend this one to you! Like I said, there were portions I loved but ultimately it just wasn’t for me. Thank you to the author for this eARC in exchange for my review!

[Mabel · Rating 4 out of 5]

My rating 4 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 1/2 (when is GR going to allow 1/2 star option?)
Extra Hot Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5 with 🪢🪢🪢 😝

Tropes:
*Enemies-to-Lovers
*Fated Mates & Hidden Omega
*Bad A$$ MFC
*Sweet but possessive MMC
*Mental Health Representation
Genre: Contemporary Romantasy/Omegaverse

This book was unputdownable! This was my first read from this author & also with the Omegaverse trope.
The MFC, Ava is a tough and spicy defense attorney & her rival is the MMC, Mark who is a District Attorney in Manhattan. They are sworn enemies in the courtroom but once out of court their attraction to each other begins to emerge.
Ava is secretly an omega with Mark as an alpha, so of course, Ava is fighting her attraction to Mark.
As they spend more personal time together and their attraction grows & the harder it is for Ava to fight what she is feeling. Mark, of course, also feels the attraction to her as well and he feels a “pull” to be with her. This is a slow burn, but once they finally give in the 🌶️ comes out to play.
I loved Ava/Marks POV and made me giggle at times.
I loved the secondary characters, Jack and Mateo, her brother and brother in law! As well as Shelby, her friend and legal assistant, and Shelby’s husband, Ron.
For me, this was a fantastic first time read of an omegaverse “world” and the author is very descriptive and made it an interesting read for me. I love when an author makes you feel like you are “there” with the characters and their world and I felt like I was there.
I will definitely be reading her other books.
This book will be released on 4/20 & I highly recommend this book.
**Many thanks to the author who gifted me this eARC for my honest review**

[Alix Bliffen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Your Honor, I would like to motion that this book was fantastic!

Ava and Mark are the perfect rivals to lovers. Mark doesn't knock what Ava does and who she defends in court. She does it without crossing and ethics lines and uses the steps skipped and the technicalities presented in each case. She knows if her clients are guilty or not but she still defends them.

Mark wants to make changes in the world and he thinks the only way to do that is to make sure he is seen and doing things that will make him stand out. What he doesn't know is that there are people that don't want him to succeed and don't want those changes to be pushed for.

Ava is an Omega in hiding because she wouldn't be able to be a lawyer otherwise. She helps Omegas pro-bono to ensure they get the rights they deserve and have their voices heard.

When the tension finally explodes between Mark and Ava they can't figure out why they can't stay away until Ava's Omega breaks through and forces her to face the truth.

I wish there was a little bit more before the epilogue. I love how it showed them years down the road but I would have like to have seen some of the steps to get them to where it sounded like they were.

This book was amazing and a great read. It flowed beautifully and there was no drifting from the main point of the story. I love how Mark was able to make a friend that opened his eyes to Omega's and the hard path they truly have before Ava's truth was revealed to him.

I can't wait to see what else Dani has in store for us.

Thank you Dani for letting me read an early copy of this book.

[SmutGremlin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Enemies to Lovers, Courtroom Battles, and Unmatched Chemistry

Motion to Claim completely hooked me—and I ended up binge-reading it in a single day.

This is an omegaverse enemies-to-lovers romance between two powerhouse attorneys who have been going head-to-head in the courtroom for years. They dominate everyone else… except each other. Their rivalry is sharp, intense, and honestly just as compelling as their romance.

The FMC is an omega in hiding, presenting as a beta, and her internal struggle added so much emotional depth to the story. Watching her navigate fear, trauma, and the vulnerability of eventually revealing her truth was one of my favorite parts. It made the relationship feel layered and earned.

The MMC is an alpha who is completely drawn to her, even when he doesn’t fully understand why at first. Their chemistry is undeniable—from their courtroom clashes to the moments where that tension finally breaks. The push and pull between them kept me fully invested.

And when the spice finally hits? It delivers. It’s epic, hot, and everything you want from an alpha/omega dynamic—full of intensity, chemistry, and that addictive, steamy tension that leaves you wanting more.

This book balances heat, emotion, and tension really well. The buildup is just as satisfying as the payoff, and when they finally choose each other, it feels both powerful and deeply emotional.

If you love enemies to lovers, omegaverse dynamics, strong FMCs, and high-tension relationships that evolve into something real, this is absolutely worth picking up.

Also… who knew lawyers could be this attractive?

[Maya · Rating 5 out of 5]

✨⚖️ Motion to Claim by Dani Loughary | ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5/5) |ARC via Bookfunnel ⚖️ ✨

Ava Kendrick is exactly the kind of woman you want in your corner — razor-sharp, fiercely principled, and absolutely untouchable. As one of New York's most formidable criminal defense attorneys, she's built her entire life around protecting omegas in a world that's never had their backs. Mark Taylor, Manhattan's youngest District Attorney, is equally as driven, equally as ambitious, and — most inconveniently — equally as irresistible. These two have been striking sparks off each other in the courtroom for years, and honestly? It was only a matter of time before all that fire burned somewhere a little more dangerous.

What starts as legendary legal warfare slowly unravels into something neither of them planned for. The rivalry is electric, the tension is EVERYTHING, and watching two stubborn, brilliant people fall helplessly for each other while desperately pretending they aren't? I couldn’t put this one down. Throw in Ava's carefully guarded secret adding a ticking-clock urgency to everything, and this book had me in a chokehold from page one.

𝑴𝒐𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒐 𝑪𝒍𝒂𝒊𝒎 is the kind of story that reminds you why enemies-to-lovers never gets old — because when the stakes are this high and the chemistry is this good, there's nothing better than watching two people choose each other anyway.

🏷️ Tropes
·Enemies to lovers
·Omegaverse (Alpha/Beta/Omega dynamics)
·Secret identity / hidden truth
·Forbidden / secret relationship
·Slow burn
·Forced proximity (courtroom rivals)
·Ambition vs. heart
·Power couple energy

[Jessica · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just finished reading an advanced copy of a book that is about to be released on April 20th called, Motion to Claim. This is about Ava and she's a New York defense attorney who specializes in defending omegas because the system is stacked against them. And she is secretly an omega herself, but if that gets out she could lose her career she's worked so hard to achieve and uses to help others. Mark is a district attorney and the only person Ava has lost cases against. The way they fight in the televised courtroom has turned them into minor celebrities. These two hate each other, but after a heated argument leads to a night together, these two might just be what each other needs.
Well, motion to claim is granted, this book claimed me right from the start and didn't let me go until the very end! This was such a heated rivals to lovers story in the omegaverse and I couldn't stop turning the pages for more. It was packed with fighting an unjust system, feminine rage, sharp banter, and fighting their feelings for each other. I loved the character development and growth of both Ava and Mark so much. Ava was fierce and strong, she was protecting herself while fighting for others like her, she had walls built around herself so high but you see her finally learn to let someone in all the while staying true to herself. Mark was patient and protective, he knew when to take charge but also when to step back and admit when he was in the wrong. The slow burn and tension between these two was done so well. I really enjoyed this story! 🩷📚

Thank you to the author and her team for this ARC of Motion to Claim, in exchange for an honest review.

[Diana Meneses · Rating 5 out of 5]

I had the absolute pleasure to receive an ARC from the author of the book and I am leaving an honest review.

I read this book in a day. I repeat…I read this book in a day. My heart will detonate every time I meet a gentle hero.

This story follows Ava and Mark, ruthless rivals in the courtroom. Ava a clever defense attorney challenges Mark in every step. Mark, the youngest DA elected for New York, would never say that she gives him a run for his money every time they are in a case against each other. Their witty and fast banter is fantastic. After he remarks that she was unprepared and emotionally affected by him…Ava confronts him in his apartment…and their volatile chemistry just combusts.

I loved how passionate Ava is about omegas’ rights and winning her pro bono cases for them. This woman is prepared for war every time she has to enter a courtroom. She’s a hidden omega, which has helped her develop as an attorney. She’s fierce, intelligent, witty but soft when it matters. Mark is excellent at his job and during their enemies with benefits arrangement, realizes that he has a lot of privilege just from being an alpha. This man is gentle, family oriented, loyal and absolutely loathes misogyny.

Even though this book is fiction, it brings to attention that sometimes women are not given the same opportunities as men…which keeps being a modern concern. I love to see male characters supporting women.

Thanks Dani for letting me be a part of this ARC Team. I totally enjoyed this read and will recommend to anyone looking for witty banter, intelligent and ruthless characters in a Omegaverse.

[martha lorena. · Rating 3 out of 5]

* This was an ARC read, *

I went into Motion to Claim by Dani Loughary not really knowing what to expect since this was my first omegaverse, and honestly it was a pretty solid intro to the genre for me. Ava and Mark are rival lawyers, and when I say they do not like each other… they really don’t.the enemies-to-lovers tension was there immediately. The courtroom scenes especially were so good. You could feel the tension through the pages, and it carried into everything else.

The chemistry between them is instant, but what I loved the most was the banter. It was sharp, funny, and didn’t disappear once things started shifting between them, which I really appreciated. They still felt like themselves even as their relationship changed.

Also, the fact that everyone else could basically see what was going on between them before they did… I loved that. The denial phase did not stand a chance. And the fated mates aspect just made everything more intense, especially since they didn’t even realize it right away.

I also really appreciated that the story touched on deeper topics like mental health and eating disorders. It added more depth to Ava’s character and made her feel more real.

For me personally, it did take me a little while to fully understand the omegaverse world.
But overall, I did enjoy it. It’s fast-paced, has really good tension, and the dynamic between Ava and Mark is what carries the story.
If you like enemies-to-lovers, fated mates, and lots of tension and banter, I think you’ll have a good time with this one, especially if you’re new to omegaverse like me.

[Whitney Cruthird · Rating 5 out of 5]

ARC review and I have QUESTIONS… mainly how am I supposed to function after this?? 😩⚖️ Mark and Ava!!! Like how can you not just go through daily life without them 😍

This book said “just one chapter” and then held me hostage like a toxic situationship. They are the couple that you just can’t look away from. This book just pulls you in and makes you laugh and want to pull your hair at the same time.

💀 Enemies to lovers but make it ✨petty✨ and do they ever
❤️MMC fell first, fell HARD, fell like he tripped down courthouse stairs
🩷FMC really said “I have a secret” and then protected it like it’s national security
🩶Lawyer x lawyer = flirting via verbal combat
🌶️Spice level: call the fire department 🚒🔥
🔥💋That trope? Oh it’s there. LOUD AND PROUD.

The tension??? UNWELL. But to be honest it’s the best tension and you will be all over it.
The banter??? Should be illegal. And requires wine and chips with queso
The moment everything comes out??? I was pacing my house like I was part of the case. I just felt like I was in the room when it all clicked and I was like thank you 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🤭🤭🤭🤭

He’s obsessed. She’s guarded. I’m stressed.

And the way he just folds for her??? Your honor, I’d like to submit my standards are now ruined. It’s the perfect omegaverse fairytale you will ever read.

10/10 would let this book emotionally ruin me again 💅📚

Thank you Dani Loughary for allowing me to read as review this as an arc. I so enjoyed it. You’re an amazing writer.

[Claire Carruthers · Rating 4 out of 5]

"I feel the last thread of my restraint snap. With a growl, I grab her by the back of the neck and crush my mouth to hers. "

Motion to claim
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶🌶🌶.5

I absolutely inhaled Motion to Claim in 1 day.
Such a feel good, different take on an omegaverse novel.
Ava and Mark are two of the biggest lawyers in the city and frequently go up against each other in the courtroom, could that "tension" be more?
Ava is hiding a few secrets that could put both of them at risk, alongside the fact the Attorneys office might have a few things to say about them being together.
The authors world building and courtroom scenes are ideal (as someone who watches alot of police/lawyer programmes this was so so good). Each character has a reason to be in this novel and fits perfectly.
In a world where womens rights are based on their "role" ( ie omega or beta) and are told what they can and can't do by men, I loved that Ava as a lawyer also takes on cases to help other women in society, especially betas. (Gotta love Women supporting/empowering other women).
Aaaaand those spicy scenes 🥵 ooooft! I want me a Mark!

Tropes + Things to Expect:
• Enemies-to-Lovers
• Hidden Omega
• Rival Lawyers turned Lovers
• Extra Spicy Scenes
• Set in New York City
• Knotting / Fated Mates
• Mental Health Representation

Motion to Claim is out on 20th April 2026.

Thank you to Dani for the opportunity to advance read Motion to Claim.

[Kylie Weigh · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was the best mix of a lawyer romance and omegaverse! This was so witty and sharp with such good undertones about women's rights/bodily autonomy and I severely loved that the author was able to indirectly weave it in with balance and grace!

I really loved Ava's fire and her unrelenting determination as a woman omega in a world that's not as open and accepting of a powerful woman who takes the punches and hits back harder.

Mark was cluelessly adorable and so unaware that it made me giggle. Despite that, Mark struggles with balancing his future and what's right and how to do both without compromising one or the other. He's very ignorant to the side that Ava defends because he himself is an Alpha with no ties or connections to omegas.

Despite the intense back and forth from opposite sides of the courtroom, they can no longer ignore that things are changing and about to get much more complicated. Secrets and walls are what's going to make or break this couple but they've faced worse in the courtroom!

Motion to Claim is more than a romance omegaverse - it's an enlightening and fresh look on politics regarding women and also empowering stemming from Ava's strength. It's insanely vulnerable when you learn the things that Ava does to herself so she can make waves in an ocean that's constantly pushing her out.
I love the title so much more now that I've experienced the story and it's so cute and well fitting!

[Libbie H · Rating 5 out of 5]

Motion to claim. Motion granted! Ava and Mark are an example of fighting leading to explosive make up spice! Oh wow!

Favorite Quote: What’s the saying? If you are neutral in situations of injustice, you have chosen the side of the oppressor.
Reading Platform: Kindle
Pros: a strong female lead.
Cons: It took a second to fully understand the universe.
Spice level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
Rating: 5/5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved how Ava was hiding in plain sight and showing how successful omegas can be in a world that wants to keep them repressed.

Mark is one of those man mans that is comfortable with his masculinity and enjoys Ava being dominate at times and letting her take the lead which helps Ava trust him more.

Ava is the kind of lawyer you want in your corner when she is helping Omegas get out of bad situations I freaking cheered her one! We all need a friendships like Ava and Shelby!

I loved how they took time to realize and you just wanted to smack them and go get your head out of your butt! I appreciated when Shelby’s husband called Ava out and made her realize her love for Mark.

I think one of my favorite parts was when they decided to bond and Ava had a contract drawn up ready to go! Mark signing without a second thought shows how much he trusted her. It was nice how this book ended and I enjoyed the epilogue. It felt like the story had a successful ending that gave the reader a satisfying end.