Jump to ratings and reviews
Rate this book

A Dance with His Angel: Their Angels Short Story

Rate this book
It was stumble over my feet at first sight when I met and bowed to Lady Eden, as if I were a knight and she a queen straight out of a medieval fairy tale, at our best friends’ wedding rehearsal dinner. Then it was run out of the room, or continue to embarrass myself when she returned my greeting and called me Lord Martin. I was wholly flustered and instantly captivated by the single mother, who is as beautiful and sweet as an angel…and also much too young for me.

Needing to gain her trust after she’d been treated so poorly in the past, I have every intention of taking things slow during our courtship. If only I could stop my alarming penchant for dropping to my knees and blurting everything that crosses my mind…

A Dance with His Angel is a standalone short story about a shy, adorable nerd and the sweet single mom who upends his best-laid plans. Martin and Eden’s story takes place between The Guardian’s Angel and His Relentless Angel from the Their Angels series, which you do not need to have previously read to enjoy this book. Happily ever after guaranteed.

66 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 3, 2026

Loading...
Loading...

About the author

May Alder

19 books567 followers
May Alder would like to thank her life-long maladaptive daydreaming disorder and rampant #daddyissues for the storylines that have been brewing in her mind for years. Her need to turn them into something productive, a positive instead of a negative, has spurred her to write her stories and release them into the world.

Ratings & Reviews

What do you think?
Rate this book

Friends & Following

Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!

Community Reviews

5 stars
72 (37%)
4 stars
56 (28%)
3 stars
50 (25%)
2 stars
11 (5%)
1 star
5 (2%)
Displaying 1 - 30 of 62 reviews
Profile Image for Ashley Fields.
209 reviews8 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 29, 2026
YOU GUYS. I never thought I'd swoon for a redheaded, Ren Faire loving, shy, short king who says "my lady"... but here we are. 😂

Martin is absolutely perfect for our fmc, Eden. She's 18 and a single mom to 2-month old Ivy. 🥰 They meet at mutual friends' wedding (James and Shayla from The Guardian's Angel), where Eden is the maid of honor and James is the best man, naturally. From there - it's pretty instalust.

Martin is 100% down bad for Eden right away, and absolutely adores Ivy. He turns into a full-on clumsy, embarrassed, stuttering mess - which does wonders for Eden who's been incredibly insecure after pregnancy + giving birth. His praise and words of devotion are just... all the green flags. 🥹🥰

This was honestly a really fun read. It's a short novella (less than 70 pages) so it's quick + easy to read, super low angst, and achingly sweet with a healthy dose of spice.
Profile Image for Canadianmombooks.
655 reviews
April 5, 2026
This was short and sweet. I love this world and geeky Lord Martin was so sweet! I just loved them together. Cannot wait for the next book.
Profile Image for Soft Nectarine ~.
489 reviews1,019 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 27, 2026
I’m not really into GINGER short kings that call their crush “my lady” 👀😬 short novella with a slightly TOO NERDY MMC!

James is a short king who falls FAST & HARD for a teen mom Eden. I’m talking about proposing within 2 days 🧡💨 Their courtship is very reneissance-esque with a poor nerd x hottest girl in school dynamic even though he’s older & she’s not really an outwardly beauty (maybe in his eyes!). He exclusively calls her “my lady”…even in bed…

Funniest moment: when he shouts “merciful heavens” when he sees her boobies

This fell a little short for me because I just couldn’t see mmc as…desirable. Sorry I’m shallow, okay! He was short, extra nerdy (not in a sexy way), a bit desperate…AND A GINGER! Just kidding, we love all gings here 🧡✨ James was just a little out of my zone of desire.

contemporary novella
single mom
short king
age gap
(super) insta love
milk drinking 🥛
courtship
HEA

Thank you to May Alder for this ARC in exchange for my honest review!
Profile Image for Kate.
23 reviews8 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
April 2, 2026
This book honestly wasn’t long enough—I needed more!

I did not expect a short king to become one of my all-time favorite MMCs, but here we are. From the very beginning, Martin and Eden’s connection felt instant and genuine, and getting to watch their love story unfold was such a joy. Martin had me completely swooning with his nerdy charm, and I loved how effortlessly Eden was drawn to him.

After everything Eden went through—with her baby daddy and the impact it had on both her and Shayla—I found myself rooting so hard for her to finally get the happily ever after she deserved. Seeing Shayla get her love story made me want that even more for Eden, and this book truly delivered.

Martin set the standard every single time. The way he went out of his way to make Eden feel comfortable, valued, and cared for? Absolutely everything. He showed her exactly how she should be treated, and I was kicking my feet through so many of their moments.

My only complaint is that it ended way too soon. I’m not ready to let them go—I need more of Martin and Eden’s story, May!
5 reviews
April 3, 2026
Oh my this was a fun read. A Dance with his Angel was a super short and sweet read. Eden is our fmc, she is 18 years old and is a single mum, our mmc is Martin who is 26 and is head over heels for Eden immediately. Like the moment they meet type of immediately.
He is a short king, probably about 5’6, has red hair and is slightly shy and very nerdy (endearing). He calls her ‘my lady’ and she calls him ‘my lord’ every time they refer to each other. It’s truly insta love. But because it is such a short novella it makes sense that things need to happen quickly.
I haven’t read any books in this series yet and I assume some of the characters mentioned have their own books, but I was never confused or felt lost by not knowing them. This novella had me kicking my feet and giggling throughout, I only wish it was longer so I could enjoy it more. Definitely worth checking out if you’re looking for a quick, sweet, ren fair vibes read.

I received this book as an ARC from the author. This review was given freely, and is my honest thoughts.
Profile Image for Lauren Gonzales.
64 reviews3 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 29, 2026
I was once again so excited to read a short story from May Alder! A Dance with His Angel, is a novella in May’s “Their Angels” series, and while I think it is the 3rd or 4th book in the series, it chronologically takes place between the first and second novels. Luckily these are all standalones so you don’t need to have read the others to enjoy this one!
At its heart this book is just a really sweet story about a young girl who has made some teenage mistakes and her knight in shining armor who just wants to love her and her baby with all of his heart. I loved both the m and fmc, Eden and Martin and I wish we could have had a full length story about them but at the same time, it was nice to have a quick read that was drama free! Because this story is so short, there isn’t a ton of spice, but what’s there is very sexy and we get a tiny bit of one of my favorite kinks!
I received an advanced review copy for free and am leaving this review voluntarily.
Profile Image for cuore__di__carta.
199 reviews2 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 27, 2026
ITA/ENG REVIEW

Se avete voglia di leggere una storia breve e dolcissima, questo fa per voi: Eden è una giovane mamma single, Martin un super nerd amico di amici che si innamora di lei al primo sguardo.

I protagonisti sono dolcissimi, l’atmosfera è positiva e piena di comfort, poi la scrittura dell’autrice è cadenzata e fluida, migliora tutto. Una bella lettura per il weekend. Esce il 3 aprile in inglese!



If you’re looking for a comfort read full of passion, spice and sweet talk, then Eden and Martin’s story is what you’re looking for.

Eden is a young single mom full of insecurities, while Martin is the super nerd friend of a friend. They match instantly, their chemistry is undeniable and oh so tender.

As always, May Alder fashions the perfect story with some beloved characters of this amazing series. Can’t wait to read more!
Profile Image for Dara Butler.
279 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
April 2, 2026
ARC Review: Thank you to May Alder for sending me an advanced copy to read and review.

This short story was only 66 pages, but it was so cute without being straight spice. It had the perfect combination of story and spice.

Martin isn’t the usual MMC I read. He’s a nerdy, ginger, short king. However, May Alder had me falling for this man. The connection between Eden and Martin was instant, and that’s what I really liked about this story.

Eden is a single mom to Ivy. I love how Martin showed her that not all men are the same by the way he regarded her infant daughter. This is the first book I’ve read in the Angels series, but I definitely won’t be my last. I can’t wait to go back and read them all!
Profile Image for Rebecca.
6 reviews2 followers
April 6, 2026
Review of advance copy received from Author

A Dance with His Angel brings us back to the “Angel” series, where Eden and Martin first popped up as side characters in “The Guardians Angel” (Shayla and James’ story). This time, we finally get to see their whirlwind romance through their own eyes.

Martin is totally quirky and actually trips over himself the first time he meets Eden. Eden—and her baby daughter Ivy—immediately mean the world to him. Compared to the other books in the Angel series, this one feels more relaxed and sweet, especially with the Renaissance Faire vibe, Martin bowing to Eden, and the cute “My Lord”/“My Lady” nicknames. It takes a bit to get used to, but it’s fun. The story flies by (only 66 pages!), and Eden and Martin are so well matched. Overall, it’s a charming addition to the Angel Series.
Profile Image for Emma Maria.
6 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 31, 2026
ARC Review 🌷
May Alder hits every damn time. I absolutely ate Eden’s and Martins story up. In classic Alder-Style it was fast paced with insta lust. I received the ARC after I had a hard week and it absolutely made it better, so if you need a little pick me up that is cute, swoony and not way too long: there you go. I loved both character’s enthusiasm about the other one, and also, can we please please please talk about cute nerdy guys that just blurt stuff when it comes to mind, because I loved that about Martin so much, it was absolutely adorable.

Thank you May Alder for providing me with this ARC, it was amazing🩷
5 reviews
April 6, 2026
I received an ARC of this book, and the following review is my honest opinion. This has quickly become my favorite installment in the series to date! While Eden and Martin were background characters in previous books, they absolutely shine as leads here.
Lord Martin and Lady Eden are a perfect match. I loved watching Eden navigate her caution, which is understandable after her past and find someone as respectful as Martin. He is a true gentleman who knows exactly what he wants: Eden. My favorite part was seeing Martin realize that Eden truly enjoys his company and doesn't judge him. It was beautiful to see him find someone who loves him exactly for who he is. Highly recommended!
Profile Image for Lila Danisa.
1,022 reviews12 followers
April 6, 2026
3,5 stars rounded-up to 4 stars!

That was so freaking cute!!! Perfect for fast and quick reading!!!

This is short story about Eden, 18 years old single mom, and Martin, hot-nerdy chivalry man. We met both of them in Shayla and James book. For someone who have read their book, this short story is perfect addition.

The medieval theme surrounding the story was so freaking funny in a good way. The author made it not weird at all with how quirky Martin was and made it his charm. I loved it even more that Eden embraced that quirkiness. Martin and Eden was so freaking sweet and indeed deserved each other.

Thank you to May Alder for the ARC.
Profile Image for Kim B.
1,996 reviews10 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 26, 2026
This is the sweetest book! Definitely a little different feel from the other May Alder books but also similar in many ways (like the love at first sight, the age gap, etc.). Nerdy Martin meets sweet single teen mom Eden at their friends' wedding. It is definitely love at first sight for Martin and his bumbling behavior and Renaissance language is part of his charm. Eden is intrigued and quickly falls in love with him too. This one moves fast and was short....leaving me wanting more May Alder stories!
Profile Image for Adri (books.with.adri).
239 reviews14 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026
May Alder always writes the cuties, sweet, steamy books – she can never do wrong in my eyes.

I believe this is her first “historical” (not really historical) romance. At first I wasn’t too sure if I would enjoy it but once I started reading I fall in love with Lady Eden and Lord Martin. These two were so cute – specially Martin, which was a bit nerdy lol. But soo cute.

This book has everything I love…
Age Gap
He Falls First & Hard
Boy Obsessed
Insta- Love
Breeding K!nk
Milk Drinking
Single Mom
Short but Steamy
Profile Image for Erica Hamilton.
17 reviews
March 28, 2026
I have been so excited to read Eden and Martin’s story and it totally lived up to my expectations. Martin is truly such a gentlemen. This book feels so much different than any of the other May Alder books. I love the writing style and how she truly fell into Martins character with her writing. Martin might not be everyone’s cup of tea but he sure is Eden’s. I love when the nerd gets the girl! If you haven’t read a May Alder book I would highly suggest you do. The stories are always so captivating and this one is no different.
Profile Image for cloud_9_reads.
221 reviews31 followers
March 30, 2026
Dance With His Angel by May Alder was such a cute, feel-good read 🥹

This one is very much insta-love, something May Alder def knows how to do! I really enjoyed getting a nerdy, RPG-playing, Ren Fair–loving MMC paired with the sweetest FMC who just gets him right away. Their connection felt super soft and wholesome.

I loved how they were a little awkward and shy. It made everything feel extra adorable and the two of them together were just easy to root for! (Plus the spice…hot!) Overall this was a fun quick insta love read with sweet characters, a touch of spice, and a HEA ending.
Profile Image for St.Peaches.
122 reviews7 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
April 2, 2026
✨ ARC Review ✨
🌶️: 2,5/5
RELEASE DATE: 03/04/26

This book kinda makes me want to go to a renaissance fair and FIND ME A LORD 🥲🥲
THIS BOOK IS FOR ALL MY SHORT KING 👑👑👑

Ngl for a May Alders Novella this book is the most romantic one and not crazy SPICY 🤣🤣 A sweet little story for sure ❤️❤️
I love Eden and Martin story they are so sweet and innocent and just AAKKHH SO CUTE!!! A perfect interlude to Bailey and Isaiah CRAZY story ... 🤣🤣

Book Contains:
- Novella
- Single Teen Mom
- Nerdy Short King
- Age Gap
- Insta love
- 💦 in his pants
- Light Lactation Kink

🍑 HAPPY READING YALL!!!! 🍑
Profile Image for Chezza.
18 reviews
April 4, 2026
*ARC REVIEW*

A dance with his angel is a short story from the Their Angels series. Martin is a shy, short “lord” and his “Lady” is Eden, 18 years old and a single mother to Ivy. There was so much cuteness in their insta love story with Martin almost literally falling head over heels for Eden the moment he sets eyes on her. It’s sweet and nerdy which isn’t normally my type of thing but May has a way of storytelling that just works so well and makes me inhale her books.

I look forward to the next book.


🌟🌟🌟🌟/5
Profile Image for Alexa.
282 reviews
April 5, 2026
Lady Eden & Lord Martin

I loved their nicknames! It gave Bridgeton vibes! This was 100% one of May Alder's lighter reads! I thought it was adorable how awkward Martin was. When he randomly says "marry me"! So cute! The spice was still hot hot!! I really enjoyed revisiting all the characters in the Their Angels Series! It's the perfect addition to the series. I'm going to re read His Relentless Angel!

Meeting Eden... it was like staring at my twin soul. Like being shot through the heart with Cupid's arrow. Fate."
-lord Martin
Profile Image for Tia.
5 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 26, 2026
oh my sweet little nerdy babies❤️ the love that Martin has for Eden is what every girl dreams of, and the fact that he doesn’t mind that she’s a mom, he’s ready to take in that baby as his own from the get go. i’m obsessed with the fact that she just rolls with it when he calls her Lady Eden and decides to call him Lord Martin so he isn’t the only one embarrassed😭❤️ Also, i see you May, sprinkling in a little bit of that🥛, keep it up girl we love it
Profile Image for FHR.
1,158 reviews13 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 27, 2026
When attending their respective best friends wedding cause Eden and Martin to meet, it’s an immediate attraction for them both. But, Eden has a little to consider and it’s up to Martin to convince her that he is in for the long haul.

A no angst, quick read that is absolutely wonderful to read. I loved how these main characters were a part of previous characters lives. I can’t wait for the next instalment in this series.
Profile Image for The Bodacious Bibliophile.
1,162 reviews
April 5, 2026
I’m not really sure how to rate such an extremely short story. I guess I’ll give it three stars. It wasn’t really my cup of tea. The MMC was not my type. But he was extremely sweet as was the FMC.
It was all just way too quick and cutie and there was really nothing to the story at all. I’m not fully sure why the author gave us this novella other than just have two characters from other stories come together and that was it.
Profile Image for Michelle Fry.
138 reviews10 followers
Review of advance copy
March 26, 2026
You can never go wrong with a May Adler book!!

I devoured this book just like I have done all her other books…Martin and Eden were so cute together

It was so great seeing the other characters in this series as well…I couldn’t help but laugh over Isaiah and Bailey since I’ve already read their story

Can’t wait to read the next May Adler book!!
Profile Image for Cristina YB.
20 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 30, 2026
WoW!!! May has done it again... Martin and Eden's story is instant love. I can actually picture him has a Lord bowing to his Lady... swooning moments throughout!! Thank you May for getting their story out for us to read and enjoy.

I am leaving this review voluntarily after receiving an ARC copy from May Adler.
159 reviews4 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 30, 2026
May Alder knows how to write a spicy book, even if it is only 62 pages long!

In this novella we finally get the story of Martin & Eden, who met at Shayla & James’s wedding (His Guardian Angel).

Martin is a shy nerdy MMC, & he falls instantly for sweet single mum Eden. It’s a whirlwind romance for these two, but it’s hot & spicy & I’m totally here for it.
Profile Image for Meesh.
26 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
April 1, 2026
Friends. If you've never known the devotion of a giant nerd... I highly recommend. They yearn.

Such a funny read! I laughed and groaned out loud. It's the short kings' time to shine.

{I read the book as an ARC and my opinions in this review are genuine}

Lactati0n K!nk
Single Mom
Yearning!!!!
Short King
Age Gap Romance
Perfect Gentleman with a Dirty Mind
121 reviews1 follower
April 4, 2026
PLEASE WRITE LONGER BOOKS!!

I was SO excited for this book as I loved the series……….until I realized it was a short story. May, I love your books so much, but I’m BEGGING you… please give us longer ones. Waited months for this & I’m honestly so disappointed. I thought it would be longer…
Profile Image for Josephine.
263 reviews13 followers
April 4, 2026
the cutest thing you'll read all year! Awkward ripped nerd meets young single mum and they fall hard and fast, this was the perfect little glimpse into Eden and Martin's romance, it was the perfect edition to their moments in the series. I love the 'Their Angels' Series SO MUCH!! (And can't wait for book 3 and 4)
Profile Image for Lola.
239 reviews
April 17, 2026
Short, sweet, and unhinged (complimentary)
This is a super quick, low-drama read about a teen mom and a man who falls immediately. I wish it were longer because I would’ve happily stayed in their little bubble more

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily
Profile Image for Megan.
65 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 26, 2026
If you’re into awkward, clumsy guys who love Renaissance Faires, this is the perfect book for you! If not, the MMC may give you the ick. Either way, he’s exactly the right match for our FMC Eden and they get their happily ever after.
Thank you to the author for this ARC.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 62 reviews