UPDATE (02/19/26): I just finished an ARC of the republished trad version, and I'm sorry to say but I didn't like it as much as I hoped. This story went from a 4.5⭐️ rating to 3⭐️.
There are things I liked. The world and characters are more developed, and Reece’s character arc is clearly defined. His struggle isn’t just about his feelings toward monsters anymore; it’s more about self-love and figuring out how to be in a committed relationship. That was there in the indie version too, but it’s more front and center here. There are also a lot of added scenes, which give Reece and Cyrus more time together and more chances to grow their relationship on the page.
I can see what the publisher was trying to do: take a cute, smutty, novella-esque monster romance and expand it into a full-length novel. In theory, that makes sense. But the execution just didn’t work for me.
The story is longer, yes, but a lot of that extra length comes from unnecessary descriptions, repeated inner thoughts, and very step-by-step scene writing. There’s a lot of telling instead of showing, and many moments feel over-explained. Because of that, the pacing really dragged.
At the end of the day, I don’t think this story needed to be expanded this much. What I loved before was how cozy and straight to the point it was, and now it drags. It’s still a cute, comforting monster romance. . . I just prefer the indie version.
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INDIE REVIEW
4.5⭐️ A toothachingly sweet and insanely sexy MM monster romance
"Man or monster, who gives a fuck. Love is love.”
WHAT TO EXPECT:
✨ humans and monsters
✨ MMC #1 is a sweet and tender Kraken who loves to paint
✨ MMC #2 is a man who's scared of monsters and feels a bit lost
✨ swim lessons for a triathlon
✨ forced proximity
✨ grumpy x sunshine
✨ friends to lovers
✨ flirty banter
✨ dual pov
✨ locker room sex
✨ sexting / video chat
✨ spicy: pleasure dom, praise, degradation, cockwarming, nipple play, tentacles
Summary:
Reece Rollins decided to sign up for a triathlon, but there are two things holding him back: his fear of monsters and his sub-par swimming skills.
After his sister's wolven mate recommends he use the olympic size swimming pool at Leviathan Fitness, Reece runs into Cyrus, who offers to help him. Cryus is a Kraken - one of the oldest and rarest of monsters. With tentacles instead of legs, he's the perfect person to help Reece train for the swim portion of the triathlon. They may come from different worlds, but they make a perfect pair. Can Reece get over his fear of monsters to see that Cyrus is the one for him?
My Thoughts:
No one is more surprised than I am by how much I LOVED this story. Seriously, I went in with zero expectations and was blown away. From the endearing characters to the spice, this definitely ranks at the top of my monster romance reads!
What I liked:
Daddy Kraken Cryus. I would die for this Kraken. He is the most gentle, sweet, loyal monster in all the land and sea. He is everything! And the fact it took him 600 years to find his mate had me crying for this sweet, sweet soul. I'm so glad Reece didn't do anything to hurt his feelings because I wouldn't have put up with that! Cy must be protected at all costs. 💕 Also, I swooned every time he called Reece, Darling.
Redeemed Reece Rollins. I didn't read the first book in the series but it seems like he was sort of a dick and prejudiced against monsters. He still has some of that mentality at the beginning of this story, but Cyrus' kindness wins him over almost instantly. I really enjoyed seeing Reece overcome his fears and learn to be accepting. As he spends more time with Cryus, his hard exterior falls completely falls away, and we get to see a beautiful man who finally feels like he can be himself and free. Reece's character development gave this story a bit more depth and emotion.
This story was the perfect combination of heartwarming and heart-throbbing. One moment, my heart felt like it was going to burst with love with how adorable Reece and Cryus were, and then the next minute, my 🐱 was throbbing. The spice. . . it's HOT. And look, I'm not into tentacles, but I am into Daddy Cryus. 🥵 He may be a sweetheart in the streets, but he is a sexy dom in the sheets! The things this Kraken says had me sweating. 😅
In case you haven't already figured it out, I'm a huge slut for Daddy Cryus. So here are a few lines from Cyrus I just loved (all for different reasons)!
"So obedient. So fucking filthy. Stroke that cock and imagine me bending you over your desk and fucking you." Yes, Daddy Cy.🧎
"I'd wait centuries for him, and I'd give him as long as he needed to work through his feelings."
"I have three hearts." And they all beat for you.
"You can be a dickhead, but your my dickhead. My life is infinitely better with you in it, Reece Rollins."
Overall, this book took me by surprise and has worked its way up to being one of my favs! I was hesitant about reading this for a while because I didn't think I'd be into a Kraken and a human, but now I'm annoyed I waited so long! It's free on KU so just give it a try.