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First published September 1, 2026
not only the endless number of growing wars. It's systems breaking. Rolling blackouts. Water you can't count on. Supply lines snapping. Storms and heat and fires and floods. People being pushed from their homes. A crisis of what is real and what isn't, where no one can be sure of what to believe anymore. Trust in our world is almost entirely gone."Surely, one person fix this, if only they win this series of games, they will "get the scale and access to make a difference." You can believe this, because as the real world has shown us, billionaires make the world a better place.
They hear the roar of it, feel the whirring of the rotors, the helicopter so close to the water it's creating waves all around them the way a storm would. The sound is enormous. Physical. Jack feels it in his ribs.
Too fast, Jack thinks. Like it was already in the air.

Somehow, he survived the grenade blast.That is some top-notch writing right there! So thrilling.
They've dressed them all the same: thermal gear, goggles, face wraps. And the same little add-on nobody talks about—a plastic wristband clipped snug over her glove, warm against her pulse. A tracker. Heartbeat, location, motion. If it flatlines, they're already moving. Her wristband warms against her pulse.Yes, that was already stated not two lines of text ago. The fact that this appears on page one forces you to wonder, did anyone at all review this before it went to print? Later errors include events happening out of order (There are fifty people. Now there are thirty left. Now almost half the remaining people leave. Now there are thirty people left. Later: the group is flown to another country, then to another continent. On the same page they are then still in the first city before their flight. All in present tense with no suggestion that the second part is a flashback or recounting of earlier events), and more repetition like (paraphrased but not at all inaccurate):
There are spiders. There are snakes.In a book full of nonsensical, stupid moments, every scene with MrBeast wins the Most Cringe award. After a chapter that finishes dramatically with, "Jimmy Donaldson has reappeared and is walking to the microphone," ooohh boy, we get this delightful scene:
Spiders and snakes.
...
Spiders. Snakes.
Jimmy is onstage and leaning toward the mic stand now. He lifts a hand for quiet. But right before he begins to speak someone from the crowd yells out, "You're crazy until you're successful and then you're a genius."Sure it does. I suppose this is a MrBeast quote? No one who reads this book will ever know. MrBeast as portrayed in this book is a at various times a shark expert and expert underwater mimer, ...
Jimmy taps his index finger to the side of his head, smiling, and leans toward the microphone.
"Who said that?" He looks around and no one admits it. "It's a pretty good line, even if it's a little cringe," he says.
It gets him a good laugh.
Then he sees the shark's attention shift to his immediate left. And then the whole pattern changes, like someone just pressed a button. Jack carefully turns his eyes in the same direction—no sudden movements, not now—and sees another swimmer.(Please, dear reader: make a simple motion that communicates "Stay close. Don't thrash.") ... an utterly virtuous man, and later, MrBeast becomes an on-the-ground superspy and is able to fight off multiple trained thugs in close spaces and crack an entire multinational conspiracy.
Someone Jack recognizes instantly.
Jimmy Donaldson.
MrBeast himself.
As blown away as he is to see him here, Jack is even more shocked to see the guy is actually smiling at him. Like he's saying, Breathe. Move. Don't give them a reason.
He hadn't seen him since they boarded together.
Jimmy takes charge of the situation and makes a simple motion: Stay close. Don't thrash. Something about him makes Jack trust him: the calm. The way he moves like panic is a choice.

