Nawet po pokonaniu swojego mordercy, księcia Rena, Mingshin nie ma czasu na odpoczynek. Szokująca śmierć najmłodszego syna władcywstrząsa rodziną królewską, a dziewczyna staje się zdeterminowana, by znaleźć odpowiedzi, jak do tego doszło.Który czarnoksiężnik ponosi za to odpowiedzialność?
Nocny Smok, cienisty mistrz Rena, nadal nie pokazał twarzy. Mingshin zdaje sobie sprawę, że pozostaje kwestią czasu, nim wróg odkryje, że potężny Boski Kamieńznajduje się w jej posiadaniu. Już raz go użyła, by zmienić chronologięwydarzeń i nie może dopuścić, bymagiczny przedmiot wpadł w niepowołane ręce.
Gdy Nocny Smok się zbliża, Mingshin musi zdecydować, czy ufa swoim przyjaciołom wystarczająco, by podzielić się sekretem potężnego kamienia. Czy Jieh–którego wychowano, by gardziłmagią– wciąż będzie ją kochał, gdy się dowie, że ta staje się magiczką?Dziewczyna musi znaleźć odwagę, by odkryć przed najbliższymi swoje prawdziwe moce i powstrzymać Nocnego Smoka, zanim ten zniszczy bieg zdarzeń świata raz na zawsze.
Książka zawiera treści nieodpowiednie dla osób poniżej szesnastego roku życia.
Kate Chenli writes adult and young adult fantasy. As a Chinese immigrant, Kate is a proud US citizen who also cherishes her Chinese heritage. She has a Master’s degree in Computer Engineering, but has always enjoyed creating elaborate worlds and characters more than designing complex software. Besides reading and writing, her passion is world travel (five continents down and counting.)
Unfortunately, this one ended up being a DNF for me. I really struggled to connect with the characters, and because of that, the story just never grabbed me the way I hoped it would. I got about halfway through before deciding to put it down.
That said, the audiobook production is excellent. The narrator has such a strong presence and I’ve enjoyed her work on other fantasy titles. The writing itself flows nicely too it just wasn’t clicking for me personally.
I think readers who are more into YA fantasy and enjoy Asian-inspired storytelling might still find this series engaging. For me, though, the pacing and character dynamics didn’t hold my interest.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with the audio ARC in exchange for an honest review!
thanks to union square & co. and kate chenli for the review copy! it took me months to prepare a review as to why this book was underwhelming. i was so excited for this sequel. the first book was amazing and i truly loved it. mingshin's story is something i find very unique and so i was extremely enthusiastic for this book. but i dnf-ed it so many times at around the 10-18% mark and couldn't get back to it no matter how hard i tried. it didn't call to me the way the first book did and it makes me sad.
i was genuinely looking forward to the sequel. i thought i was the only one who felt off about this one but it was also other readers who loved a bright heart as much as i did :(
This is a tough one for me. I am disappointed after loving the first book in this duology, yet I was still entertained enough to finish this sequel.
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The bad:
First off, there was lot of info dumping in the beginning. Thankfully, the pace picks up around the 25% mark.
This book also suffered a lot from ‘showing not telling’. For example, we’re told how fiercely Mingshin loves Jieh at every moment. And I believe it. But she repeats it a lot to herself for no particular reason. Which is great. People should feel this way about their partners. But how is this contributing to the scene? What are you doing to demonstrate how much you love him? Because all your conversations seem to be off page. I felt more chemistry between them in the first book. At one point, I was even rooting for Hanxin to start a love triangle just to give some life to this relationship. LoL.
A lot of very important events happened off page too and we are told about it afterwards like we’re supposed to care….
Plot holes like Mingshin protecting Aylin, after Aylin committed murder, baffle me. At the same time, when Mingshin comes into her full power, everything seemed conveniently easy for her. She basically mastered all the magic types in a day. Why should I cheer for this?
One of the biggest things that bothered me was the title of “Princessa”. Given that this is a spanish word. And this story takes place in an alternative Chinese society. You see my problem? But I could be missing something…
Sentences also felt a bit clunky, with awkward phrases and sentences divided by comas at odd times. At one point, somebody tells Mingshin that she is the only one who can defeat the Night Dragon. And she responds with “Oh, Thank you.” Why are you saying thank you, girl?
The author also seemed to want to expand the magic system, but I didn’t learn much. Why can you heal people with earth magic? Beats me.
Additionally, at one point, a bombshell is dropped and we find out two characters close to our protagonist are magic users (in hiding because of plot) and no one bats an eye. Their response is basically: “👍🏻” . Unfortunately, there are many more stoic reactions, like this one, to revelations that should seem like a big deal but are treated like we’re talking about the weather.
Also, she never told her loved ones that she had died and was given a second chance! Either another plot hole or just very deceptive character in nature. There’s no reason to withhold this information.
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The good:
I know this was mostly a rant, but even after all of that, it was still a very entertaining conclusion. I did like the friendships and banter between all the characters. And It was good to see a wholesome group of friends supporting each other without having too many suspicions of betrayal amongst themselves, as it tends to happen in fantasy books.
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I genuinely don't know what happened here. The previous book was a really good YA fantasy novel which I rated 5⭐, but this one ... Everything was so rushed, a lot of sequences were just passed over, everything was so easy to accomplish by everyone, so many telling not showing. The impression I got was that it was not crafted with as much care as the first book. There's enough material for two books here, if only things were properly paced and described. There was also no clues or hints in the narrative to help the readers re-orient themselves to who's who from the first book, which made the reading experience even more confusing because the cast was relatively complex. It kinda got worse towards the end because the pace only got more rushed.
A bright heart was one of my favorite reads of 2024 and to say i was disappointed by its sequel is an understatement.
A bright heart was delightful and made my chinese webnovel heart happy. The characters were endearing, the romance cute and it felt complete by itself despite the unanswered questions.
A fiery spirit takes place immediately after and I really wish I hadn’t read it. The digital arc was a mess, the writing felt different, the pace was uneven and the characters gave me nothing. Between the abrupt transitions between scenes, the plot armor and the ridiculous deus ex machina twist, this was not the sequel book one deserved and not even Yunle could save it.
Duets are often a hit or miss and this was a miss. But as I really loved book one, I would recommend to read it solo and enjoy the open ending.
Thank you netgalley for sending me this ARC in exchange of an honest review.
A Fiery Spirit takes a different route than A Bright Heart, shifting focus to Mingshin’s hidden power and the growing court intrigue. The stakes feel much bigger this time—not just about Mingshin, but entire kingdoms, along with a fresh cast of characters.
The story is split into two parts, and I have to admit, the first part felt repetitive. The constant cycle of attacks, failures, and retries started to wear on me, making it feel slow at times. But thankfully, everything changes once we hit the second part. That’s where the real action kicks in, and I finally got the answers I’d been waiting for.
That said, while the second part delivered on the excitement, the pacing felt too rushed. Major events kept unfolding back-to-back, leaving barely any time to absorb what just happened before moving on to the next. Meanwhile, the first part dragged due to those repetitive attack sequences, making the transition between the two a bit jarring.
Another thing that left me wishing for more was the romance. Mingshin and Jieh’s relationship seemed to take a backseat to the larger conflict, when I wished it had been highlighted more.
I had really high hopes for this book after loving the first one, and while it wasn’t a bad read—it even had a pretty satisfying ending—I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was missing when I finished it.
I received a review copy through Netgalley, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. Huge thank you to the author and publisher!
Nie czytałam pierwszej części, więc nie mam porównania, czy jest lepsza, czy gorsza od Czystego Serca. Historia mi się podobała pod tym względem, że w normalnych okolicznościach sama bym po nią nie sięgnęła, więc fajnie było przeczytać coś nowego.
Podobała mi się przyjaźń między bohaterami, motyw found family. Niektóre zwroty akcji były naprawdę interesujące, ale miejscami miałam wrażenie, że bohaterom coś za łatwo idzie. Oczywiście nie zawsze, bo były chwile, gdzie też się wzruszyłam czy się stresowałam 🤭
Końcówka słodka i bardzo fajnie moim zdaniem kończy dylogię ☺️
I’d like to thank the amazing @netgalley & @dreamscape_media for the amazing opportunity to listen to audio copies of these books. I am forever thankful ❤️ From the beginning of the Synopsis of book 1 I was gone with these books. 😵💫 Add on: 1️⃣Court Intrigue 2️⃣ Chinese Mythology 3️⃣ A Fierce and Strong Female Main Character 4️⃣Swoon Worthy Romance And girl these books are ones you want to add on to your TBR asap!🤭 We follow Mingshin, a woman who helped a man she love become king but doesn’t see the betrayal coming until the blade is sheathed in her body. Dying lying in a pool of her bed, she makes a desperate plea to the gods to turn back time and give her a chance to change her fate. But with any change of time, the chances of destruction are always near by… I loved how Kate is able to weave Chinese mythology into a unique and engaging story that it’s always a shock when you reach the end of her books. Mainly cause it flows and wraps its way around your heart that you don’t wanna leave the world she created. The narrator brought an extra layer to this story and was the perfect choice to give this book life. This series is a solid 5 star duology that I would recommend from the roof tops ❤️
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the early review copy of this book. These opinions are my own.
Actual Rating: 3.5
My Unhinged and Messy Thoughts At 93% I was actually super confused. I ended up looking at reviews to figure out if this was a duology or a trilogy because it was feeling super rushed. Turns out, it is a duology, and this was the conclusion.. and it was RUSHED. I felt like the book either needed to be longer, or another book needed to be added to the series. The pay off wasn't really worth it after having such an intense story. Plus, the ending was left in such a way, that it really does feel like there could be another book, but the author has stated this was the end of the duology.
The Audiobook This book was narrated by Natalie Naudus, who also voices all of Sue Lynn Tan's books, which automatically makes her a favourite. I find her voice so soothing and yet again, she proves how fantastic of a narrator she is. Unfortunately, even her voice couldn't save how rushed the ending was, and how dissatisfied I am.
In Conclusion I will absolutely read more books by this author and listen to more audiobooks by this narrator.
A Fiery Spirit was a sequel that I was looking forward to since I really enjoyed the first book. But in the end it just left me unsatisfied. First, there wasn’t the same built-in tension as the first book since there was no revenge plot this time around. Secondly the pacing wasn’t stellar, so the story felt both rushed and like it dragged on, because it never felt like the group accomplished anything until the very end.
I really wish that the book kept the pacing of the first half of the book, since it was enjoyable as a YA fantasy court intrigue story. Meanwhile the second part was basically just a hunt for the Night Dragon, where every step forward resulted in two steps back. Not to mention that the big battle that serves as the climax of the story was given less space. I also wish that more focus had been dedicated to the characters, especially Yunle and her life maneuvering at the unstable court. She and Fei were my favourites, and the best part of a book that could have been better if it had maybe been split into two books instead. --- Thank you to NetGalley and Union Square & Co for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review.
A Fiery Spirit was really hard for me to read because it felt like too much time had passed since reading A Bright Heart (which was published Oct 2023), and it was difficult to remember characters and major plot lines and events. It was really tough in the beginning as there was quite a bit of cyclic fighting, attacks, regrouping against the main antagonist, which felt like it never got the protagonist anywhere. Though the second half of the story was very action packed, it all seemed very rushed. Not sure if book 2 needed some more TLC and editing prior to publishing, as it likely deserved, or the author felt like she needed to throw all the tricks of the trade into one story.
I really loved book 1 and it may be unfair to hold my review of book 2 against it. Maybe if I read this again in the future with book 1, it will all be cohesive again. I have to give this a solid 3 at this point in time.
Thank you NetGalley and Union Square & Co. - A subsidiary of Sterling Publishing | Union Square & Co. for the opportunity in exchange for an honest review.
this was an underwhelming sequel to a book (a bright heart) that I really enjoyed. this book suffered in a couple of ways: (a) not having a lot of the fun time travel elements that made the first book fun, and (b) needing enormous amounts of exposition in the form of info dumps throughout.
I love time travel fix-it style books, but by this point, none of the old lifetime is relevant, so it’s just a typical young YA fantasy. that’s not a bad thing, but this sequel is missing what attracted me to book one.
this book was almost sloppy on the worldbuilding and exposition. so many details were just shoved in via dialogue or paragraphs of explanation, and many were unnecessary for the plot and story. as a result, the pacing and flow were off. the magic system got a lot of explanation, but for what? we learn histories of some characters which fill in missing details, but not in a way that enhances the story
I still enjoyed seeing a resolution to this story and getting to watch our MC grow in confidence. the little bit of political intrigue was also fun, though I would always take more
This was an underwhelming book I had to force myself through. The relationships were bland and nothing felt natural, it felt like things were happening because time book said they did, not because it was part of the siory.
One of my favorite books that came out last year was A Bright Heart. It was a fun read, and I had zero expectations because it’s really underrated—I didn’t see anyone marketing it. So, I was so excited when I found out about the sequel, A Fiery Spirit, and I’m glad I got to read it early. Shout out to Union Square & Co.! Now, let’s talk about the book!
This book picks up not long after the ending of the first one. And oh, it starts with a funeral—because why not? The funny thing about this book is that the cover is bright, colorful, and cheerful, but the actual story is full of murder and backstabbing. It was a wild ride, and I really enjoyed it. Of course, there are pros and cons, and I think I liked the first book better, but I’d say this one lived up to its older sister.
Things I liked about this book: •Mingshin, our protagonist. She still has flashbacks to her life in the other timeline, and her trust issues play a big role in this book, with their own development—which I really liked. As someone with trust issues myself, I’d say it’s an accurate portrayal. She’s also very smart, kinda manipulative, and lies a lot… but that’s understandable. Her hatred towards Aylin, her cousin, is honestly hilarious. It’s like, “Hmm, maybe she would be different if she wasn’t raised by her evil dad,” but then immediately “Yeah, screw that, she’s too far gone.” She was such a fun MC to follow, and I love her as a character. It’s also interesting to see a book character be one step ahead of me (a book reader). •Yunle, our princess, and probably the secret protagonist of this book. She’s amazing and really shines throughout the story. I think she might be the author’s favorite. •Jieh’s mother is such a fun character. She’s the classic evil, manipulative mother-in-law you’d see in a typical Asian drama, but I feel like, in a way, she actually likes Mingshin—because Mingshin is just as cunning and manipulative as her. It’s kinda funny. •The pacing is really fast, so I don’t think you’d get bored—there’s a lot of drama. •It’s also a very easy read, even if you pick it up at 9 PM after getting home from work. If you’re new to English fantasy books, this is a great one to start with. •I liked the ending.
Neutral… because I kinda get it: •One of the things I disliked in the first book was the romance. Jieh is a green flag, but I found their relationship a bit flat. However, this book makes it clear that the romance between Mingshin and Jieh isn’t the main focus, and as someone who isn’t into romance, I respect that choice. Their relationship feels more like a comfort zone that Mingshin could easily lose if the kingdom found out about her magic. I feel the same about Fei and Yunle’s relationship—it’s there, but romance isn’t the main focus of the story.
What I disliked about this book: •Speaking of magic, I didn’t like how overpowered Mingshin becomes. If this had been better established in the first book, it wouldn’t feel like she suddenly became a quick learner. She’s so close to being a Mary Sue, though luckily, she still fails sometimes. •There’s a lot of convenience in this book. There’s plenty of drama, but most of the problems are solved way too quickly. They’re literally fighting a god in this book, yet the stakes don’t feel high enough because previous conflicts were resolved too easily. • The repetition is annoying. One time, Mingshin narratedsomething, and then another character pointed out the exact same thing. It kinda feels like this: Mingshin’s brain: “I think I’m scared.” Character B: “Mingshin, you’re scared.” Like… bro, I know.
Overall I really liked this book. I don’t think I can rate it higher than 4.5, but definitely not lower than 4. I think 4.25 is a fair score. It has a somewhat closed ending, but there’s still a little gap in case the author wants to write a sequel. If they do, I’ll definitely read it!
The first book was really good, definitely a little different concept of fairy tail and magic but it doesnt help that shes in love with a hot prince. The flow was good, it kept me from getting bored from the story and the twists and turns from the story makes a lot of sense so I was really glad about how the ending turned out. I'm hoping to read more Chinese fairy tale books like this.
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„Ognista dusza” Kate Chenli to powieść, która wzbudziła we mnie emocje skrajnie różne, bo od szczerego zaciekawienia po lekkie rozczarowanie. W końcu podeszłam do całej książki z zaintrygowaniem, zwłaszcza że świat stworzony przez autorkę ma w sobie coś wyjątkowego i chciałam wiedzieć jak zakończy się historia Mingshin. No i już od pierwszych stron widać, że akcja jest intensywna, a pomysł na konstrukcję czasu i cofania wydarzeń pozostaje jednym z najciekawszych pomysłów na fabułę w całej serii, ale coś tu jest nie tak.
Gdyż równolegle z tym zaciekawieniem przyszła… Pewna niepewność. Wydarzenia dzieją się momentami aż zbyt szybko, jakby ktoś przewijał historię o kilkanaście rozdziałów do przodu. W szczególności kluczowe momenty fabularne zdają się mijać w mgnieniu oka, a ważne rzeczy są opowiadane przez bohaterów w stylu "ktoś coś komuś wyjaśnił" i tyle. Brakuje tej koniecznej pauzy, tego momentu na oddech, który pozwala czytelnikowi naprawdę zanurzyć się w emocjach bohaterów i jakkolwiek poczuć dreszczyk emocji z oczekiwania. Miałam wrażenie, że autorka ma świetny pomysł na całą historię, ale nie potrafi i pozwala mu w pełni wybrzmieć, jakby spieszyła się do finału, wiedząc, że ma jeszcze wiele wątków do upchnięcia.
Do tego dochodzi struktura opowieści, w której dialogi i rozmowy dominują nad działaniem. Chodzi o to, że dialogi potrafią być bardzo dobre i potrzebne, ale tutaj jest ich chwilami po prostu za dużo. Rozmowy tłumaczą, co się wydarzy, co się może wydarzyć, co ktoś planuje… A same opisy czynów, scen akcji czy głębsze zatrzymanie w emocji pojawiają się rzadziej. To właśnie powoduje też specyficzny dysonans, bo książkę o dziwo czyta się lekko i niezwykle szybko, ale jednocześnie ma się wrażenie, że wszystko dzieje się zbyt błyskawicznie. Co nie jest dobre.
Mimo to chcę wyraźnie zaznaczyć, że „Ognista dusza” to nie jest zła książka. Uważam, że historia ma ogromny potencjał, a część z tego potencjału faktycznie wykorzystuje. Jednym z jej największych plusów jest to, że młodszy czytelnik z łatwością ją polubi, bo to dość niezła młodzieżówka. Do tego postacie, nawet jeśli czasem nie dość dobrze ukazane, dają się lubić lub chociaż rozumieć. Podobało mi się również to, że autorka trzyma się swoich zasad w kreowaniu magii i atmosfery, bo czuć, że miała na to całkiem niezły pomysł. Do plusów dorzucę też fakt, że książka jest naprawdę angażująca. Nawet jeśli tempo bywa zbyt szybkie, trudno odmówić jej zdolności wciągania czytelnika. To jedna z tych historii, które czyta się jednym tchem, a to nadal ogromna wartość, szczególnie w młodzieżowym fantasy.
Ostatecznie „Ognista dusza” zostawiła mnie z uczuciem, że mogła być czymś lepszym, gdyby dostała więcej czasu i rozbudowania. Ale jednocześnie dała mi na tyle przyjemnych wrażeń, że nie jestem aż taka zła... To powieść, którą poleciłabym osobom szukającym lekkiego fantasy z ciekawym pomysłem i dynamiczną narracją, ale jednocześnie takim, którzy potrafią przymknąć oko na niedociągnięcia.
If you like: ♡ historical fiction ♡ chinese history ♡ power fantasies
a must read if you read a bright heart
❥ A Fiery Spirit jumps straight into the action from where A Bright Heart left off. I would highly recommend to read this book immediately after finishing the first one to keep the momentum going. I had forgotten a bit of what had happened previously and took some time to remember as the scenes played out.
❥ The middle of the book felt a bit lacklustre. I felt like ther should not have been a big monologue in the middle part explaining what had happened and instead shown us these things. I felt like it would have been more interesting, and created a more powerful connection to all characters involved. Plus, from the sounds of it, it would have been more interesting than some of the scenes we actually saw.
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❥ Remembering that this storyline is based off of vengeance, I feel like we didn’t see that side of Mingshin anymore. We did not see the need to right the world, or even any bitterness cloud her. Some of the most diverse aspects of Mingshin’s personality was given to Ilene to make her a more villainous character. Last book Mingshin was cunning, but this book she is simply powerful.
❥ The ending felt nice. It wrapped things up nicely that I didn’t have any complaints, but it left an opening for a third book that I will read if it gets published. I am happy with my experience with this book, but know it could have been even better had there been a few tweaks.
❥ A Fiery Spirit is a good continuation of A Bright Heart. If you enjoyed the first book, you must read this one. The middle is a bit lacklustre and soggy, taking away some of the best scenes to ‘show’ instead of telling. It could have used a few more rounds of revising, but it is not a bad read. If you enjoy Prince Jieh and Mingshin you should definitely continue the series!
❥ PS. if you are a fan of Natalie Naudus she does an excellent reading in this series. Definitely check out her other audiobook readings if you like this type of story.
Thank you netgalley for providing me with an arc of this audiobook in exchange for an honest review.
I'd like to thank Edelweiss and the publisher for allowing me a chance at reading this book.
I was a HUGE fan of the first novel. It gave me all the feels - time travel, headstrong heroine, swoony male lead.
So I was pretty delighted when I got to read the ARC. Finishing it, I was pretty sad.
I think the author is a fantastic writer, and I think she knows how to tell a good story. I am unsure if this book needs a firmer editor or needs more padding.
The book picks up directly after book one ends. Mingshen and her Prince are trying to figure out the whereabouts of the evil lord who wishes to get ahold of the stone. Mingshen is trying to keep her magic a secret from her love due to the conflicting views about those who use magic. Her friends are willing to help her.
For some reason, this book has a modern tone to it. The first book had a sense of 'refinement' in the way its characters spoke, situations and customs. This one felt like someone fed it through a historical to modern-day translation. I've seen enough CDramas where people are called 'bitch', so that wasn't a HUGE issue for me, but it became huge issue when it was used so often. At times, some of the dialogue felt like I was watching teens talk on the telephone in text - mere words away from slang.
The way the book transitioned through events was a choppy format where characters didn't move through doors or travel across grounds, they kind of just showed up in the place they needed to be in the next paragraph.
Instead of things happening we are told in HUGE monologues. Characters would also comment on how a character would feel or react as for example "he looked as if he saw a ghost", like instead you inferring based on what was said, the character would comment on how the character was reacting within the moment during the huge exposition dump. In fact, the amount of exposition dumps in this was out of control.
Did I understand the plot? I did, and I liked it. But I wanted to know what exactly happened to the book series I was hoping to enjoy? I never read the ARC for book one, so I have no idea how much was changed from that to published format. But so far, as someone who loved book one, reading this ARC made me cautious and wary over what we'll get later this year. It needs another run through of edits.
thank you to the publisher for the e-arc of this book!!
A Fiery Spirit is definitely one of my most anticipated releases of this year. i love myself a chinese historical fantasy with all the court politics. i'm not sure how my mindset has changed over the past year but this book didn't hit the same highs as the first one.
getting it out of the way first,, the politics felt watered down, yet somehow it took up at least half the story. who didn't like who in court, Yunle getting shut down in meetings, and Mingshin fumbling her new magic in secret with Hanxin. it really took a good chunk of the story for it to finally get interesting for me, especially since the politics felt like a lot of rehashing what we already know from A Bright Heart.
the romance between Jieh and Mingshin didn't particularly speak to me either. i loved the moment when Jieh overcomes his prejudices against magic and accepts Mingshin. that has to be the big high for me, and that whole scene of him being poisoned was super dramatic. but every other time, it just kind of felt like they were off doing their own thing and while the romance isn't the biggest part of the story, i admit it was one of the things i liked most about the first book.
a lot of convenient moments in this book, where their plans go awry only to right itself again quickly, or having someone save Mingshin at the last moment, or even just (spoilers!!) her gaining All the Powers and becoming op. and i don't want her to die, i promise, but that ending felt like she should have. the world will go on because it's cruel and she will be forgotten by everyone but her loved ones. Jieh will rule with Yunle in memory of her. that's how i felt it should have gone.
but of course Nüwa ex machina and all that. haisss. i wanted to love this book so much more than i did. while i didn't hate it, it bored me at parts. still, there are some highlights. though i wouldn't have minded more Yunle/Fei content or even just Yunle maneuvreing in court while the rest were off on their quest instead of just a couple of paragrapgs of exposition. so much exposition.
Mingshen successfully prevented Ren, the prince who betrayed & killed her in an alternate timeline, from becoming king. Now, she needs to save her country from enemies who wield magic.
I really liked the first book in this series, especially the second chance redo plot. But what really drew me in was the characters and their struggles and growth. I was hoping for more of the same in the book, but it focused more on plot and action, and I found it harder to connect to the characters. While I appreciate all the world building and action and magic, i didn't like this book as much as I did the first.
Mingshen needs to protect the divine stone and learn more about magic in order to protect herself against the evil bad magic dude. But Jieh, her betrothed, despises magic and its users. (Not to mention that magic is still illegal. The more Mingshen turns to magic for help, the more secrets she has to keep from Jieh, the more their relationship fractures.
That could have been a great way to work on and build their relationship. Instead, this, along with many other conflicts in this book, felt like they resolved too easily. Important characters are healed before they die, misunderstandings in relationships are quickly repaired because of their great love for each other, gender inequality, learning magical skills, stupid mistakes... Every bad decision led to an easy good outcome. I felt like this book could have been extended and better developed. It had a lot of potential, but it fell flat for me
When some of these solutions were realistic, the resolution happened in the background, through side characters, so we only see the end result, and it feels too easy. I don't mind that the side characters got the chance to save the day. But they could've been given a pov chapter showing their struggle instead of just summarizing the event. This was a major growth moment for the side characters, and it happened mostly behind the scenes.
Overall, while the plot was interesting and the magic system & world development were creative, this book didn't live up to my expectations. It wasn't bad, but it could've been much better.
If you are interested in this series, definitely listen to it on audiobook! The narrator is one of the best I have ever listened to, this being my 3rd book with her as the audiobook narrator. She truly has a gift in bringing out the emotions of each character, and does a fantastic job of differentiating her voice between the main cast. She is so engaging and easy to listen to, and I hope to listen to more audiobooks with this narrator in the future.
The book itself picks up after the 1st book, but this time, another prince has suspiciously died, and the country is being threatened by the mysterious dark sorcerer, the night dragon. Ming-shin and her friends must act quickly to discover what has happened to the dead prince, while also determining the best way to fight off the night dragon. Simultaneously, Ming shin has learned she has started to develop magic powers...and must determine who she can trust with this knowledge as it is illegal and could end her relationship with Prince Jia.
I found the story to be equally as engaging as the first, especially due to the amazing narrator! Ming shin is such a fun character as she is so clever and caring towards her friends and family. The only thing I found confusing, just like in the first book, is the names of the characters. Specifically Ming shin has at least 4 names(Ming shin, shin, shinar, princess Alu) that she goes by, and the royalty also seem to have multiple names. I found it hard to keep track with so many characters with asian inspired names when I couldn't see them since I was listening on audiobook. I think it would have helped to be able to see them in person, however, I still think the audiobook is the way to go!
This is an amazingly creative YA fantasy that would be good for readers who like political intrigue, clever characters, found family, mystery, and magic. I highly recommend for readers 13+.
Thank you so much to NetGalley and Dreamscape Media for providing an advanced listeners copy in exchange for an honest review! It has been a pleasure listening to this series.
"Ognista dusza". Autor: Kate Chenli Wydawnictwo: Nowe Strony Ocena: 9/10⭐️
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"Czekaj na mnie, moja miłości. Nasze serca zawsze będą bić razam".
Mingshin, pokonała swojego zabójce, ale walka nie dobiegła jeszczs końca. W niewyjaśnionych okolicznościach ginie najmłodszy z książąt. Dodatkowo w cieniu czai się Nocny Smok, chcący władzy. Dziewczyna musi chronić Boski Kamień. Zbliżające się zagrożenie zmusza ją do podjęcia trudnej decyzji: czy zaufać bliskim i ujawnić swoją magię, ryzykując utratę ich zaufania czy to będzie zbyt niebezpieczne ?
Co to było za zakończenie dylogii. Pierwszy tom bardzo mi się podobał, nie mogłam doczekać się kontynuacji i powiem wam że się nie zawiodlam. Bawiłam sie równie dobrze co na pierwszej części.
Mingshin staje się jeszcze silniejsza. Bardzo lubię jej postać. Ma w sobie tyle dobra, chce chronić świat i swoich bliskich. Uwielbiam jej siłę, determinację oraz mądrość.
Jinshi zdecydowanie zasługuje na miano książkowego męża. Jest gotów zrobić wszystko dla Panny Lu. Uwielbiam to, że nie daje sie namówić nawet matce na posiadanie dam, jeśli zostałby królem. Dla niego liczyć się tylko Mingshin.
Bardzo podobał mi się wątek romantyczny miedzy tą dwójką, nie wybija się on na pierwszy plan, a jedynie idealnie wpasowuje się w całą historię i nadaje jej jeszcze większych emocji.
Nie ukrywam, że historia wywołała we mnie wiele róznych emocji, od uśmiechu, przez strach o bohaterów aż po łzy. Bardzo przywiązałam sie do bohaterów.
W książce pięknie ukazano siłę prawdziwej przyjaźni i lojalności. Postacie drugoplanowe są świetnie napisane, naprawdę da się je lubić.
Historia została znakomicie zakończona. Czuję się w pełni usatysfakcjonowana. Wszystko zostało wyjaśnione i domknięte. Chętnie w przyszłości przeczytam jeszcze jakąś historie autorki.
It hurts me to say this, but this book was a challenging read.
I loved A Bright Heart . It was such a good political revenge novel with clever plot twists. However, A Fiery Spirit was disappointing. While the story retains elements of court intrigue, the lack of intricate schemes and cleverness leaves the story feeling flat. Furthermore, the pacing was inconsistent and there were too many subplots happening at the same time. Although the story offered numerous exciting plot twists, some revelations felt abrupt and lacked clear foreshadowing. Not to mention, a lot of the conflicts and challenges were conveniently resolved, making a high-stakes situations feel less impactful, as it removes the uncertainty and tension.
Also, majority of the characters felt very one-dimensional with the exception of Yunle. I think this is largely attributed to the fact that a lot of what the characters go through are told to us, instead of allowing us to experience the journey with the characters. For example, when Mingshin was learning how to use her powers, there was no training arc. We never got to see her struggles or failures. It was just told to us that she went through training and now she has the ability to wield 9 forms of magic. I also had a hard time understanding the motivation behind the villain, Xiangyu. We were giving a glimpse of his past, which was intriguing, but we never fully explored it. Instead, he is your run-of- the mill antagonist driven solely by the lust for power and adoration. I will say, one of the highlights of the novel was the poetic justice that was bestowed on Mingshin’s uncle and cousins. I thought that was pretty clever.
Overall, this book was not what I expected. I think the author had some really good ideas, but the way it played out felt underwhelming. It does make me wonder if the story might have benefited more as a trilogy.