After reading two parts of the four from this enormous book, 400 pages or thereabouts, I gave up with more regret than I'd have anticipated; partly because I was enthusiastic about finding out a "historical" rendition of the life of the real Macbeth behind Shakespeare's play, and partly because this author had given me great moments before, only to fail me afterwards, so I'd hoped this would be the definite rebound.
But no, it wasn't. I'm starting to think Dunnett doesn't know what moderation and balance mean, because she rushes from one extreme to the other. If her Lymond Chronicles are so difficult for the obtuse plot and the way too scarce information she gives to the point of leaving first-time readers confused and frustrated in the dark, this novel is unexpectedly infodumpy and excruciatingly so. If Lymond is a perfect specimen of male beauty and she doesn't waste a chance to remind us that he's both genders' wet dream, Thorfinn is a perfect specimen of male ugliness and she is wont to repeat for our benefit just how ugly he is, always has been and always will be. If the language in the Lymond series is full of literary quotes in several languages that nobody but a scholar understands, this one avoids at all costs to include phrases in Norse and Gaelic, doing so only when it's unavoidable or when a word is not so translatable directly into English . . . and so on. And whilst I understand she may have felt a need to separate this novel from her better known work so all this differentiation could be deliberate, I'm also sure that balance was a desirable goal that I don't think she strove for.
The major flaw, and the one that made me bail out of this, was the abundance of as you knows, which was quite a surprise because, as I've mentioned, Dunnett isn't known for spoon-feeding information to her readers. On the contrary, she expects readers to find out by themselves and doesn't take them by the hand so they won't stumble. Oh, sure, she loves so much to show off her vast knowledge, and that might be another factor in this, too. I am aware that turn-of-the-millennium Orkney is neither a period nor a place the average HF reader will be versed in; I sure don't know a thing about the Orkney islands during the Dark Ages and my knowledge of 11th century Scotland is pitiful, but that's no excuse for the author's taking the "they won't know, so I'll tell them everything" path and dropping large and persistent descriptive passages that read along the lines of "In Whatstheplace, the Mormaer of X did . . .", "Meanwhile, Earl Whatshisname of Whatsthatotherplace had . . .", "Whoeverheis of Y had gone to . . . and King Canute had been in Whereverthatis . . ." and so on. She tells us what's what, who's who, what they're doing, whose family they are, who married whom and how they bedded, how many children and cattle they have, who they're related to, what happened in Norway whilst this was happening in Orkney and what happened in Alba whilst that was happening in Normandy, and how much it snowed in this place whilst . . .
Just damnably exhausting!
I didn't pick this book to be told everything, and I don't want (plus I suspect I don't need to) know every single piece of historical data to enjoy a novel. I don't want to know where every character is placed, and I don't need to keep track of everyone all the bloody time, and I definitely don't want to be force-fed too much information. I want a story, and this monsoon downpouring style of narration that drags on and on and on for double the length of an average novel isn't telling one. It's plain infodump, and for that there's this nice thing called an encyclopaedia. It just sucks all energy and joy out of reading, all interest in learning more about the time and people on my own once I'm done reading.
As for the main character, I am not qualified to opine on the plausibility of Dunnett's theory that the Scottish king Macbeth mac Finlay and the Viking earl Thorfinn Sigurdsson (she spells it Sigurdarson here) are one and the same, I don't possess enough knowledge to agree with it or discard it on a purely historic basis, but as a reader as well as for what I do know, I lean towards disagreeing with the use of this hypothesis as the main plot seeing the poor results in terms of story and the suspension of disbelief that implies the explanation of why Thorfinn is Macbeth (it's just his baptism name!) as well as combining Ingibjorg Finnsdottir with Lady Gruoch because, if Macbeth can be two different men rolled into one, then why not Lady Macbeth too? And Dunnett's Macbeth is one flat character, although in fairness it's possible that it's a result of not having a POV and if I know this writer, she's likely to try to make him sympathetic later in the book. No, he's not unlikable. He's simply flat, and uninteresting, borderline one-note at times, and annoying at other times, especially when younger. I can't help but muse that she may have lost one good plot potential in having Thorfinn and Macbeth as separate people instead, and also she may have written herself into a corner with her decision to tell all of Macbeth's life since he was 5 years old to his death in one single novel, which could be why she also forces so much information in as an attempt to not leave anything out instead of just letting it flow following a certain story of smaller scope, not his whole life.
So, there you have it: infodumping at intolerable levels, too much telling, dragging narration, flatness in characterisation and historical hypotheses that stretch belief. I'm out!