The Virgin Bride

by Sara Desmarais

Daniel Corey, a recent college graduate, who happens to be a virgin, meets a powerful woman, Kristen McCarthy, and falls in love. Follow Daniel's transition to Danielle, as Kristen slowly feminizes him and transforms him into her perfect, sissy lover, her sissy bride.

414 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 2, 2015

Reviews

[Zakfar Magni · Rating 2 out of 5]

Story premise was good. There was also good character buildup. However, after some initial chapters the story because extremely boring because of infusion of repeating dialogues. Story progress halted completely. If written properly, the story would have about quarter the word count. And in that case, it would have been a very good book. In its current form, it's extremely painful to read. I would suggest avoiding this book.

[LCL999 · Rating 1 out of 5]

Incredibly boring. Each chapter seemed to have the same descriptions, the same phrases, as the cardboard characters moved ever so slowly through the simple plot. After nearly half way I gave up and never finished it. The best part is the cover.

[Chester J. · Rating 5 out of 5]

One of the best

Very impressive. One of the best books that I have read in a long time. Very erotic for such along storyline. It is easy to do for a short story, but much tougher for such a long story. Makes .e wonder how an author can know so much about a subject without being part of the scene. A must read for anyone into a for relationship.

[Chris · Rating 3 out of 5]

The plot line was predictable but quite a good read, however my main complaint is that this book isn't available through Amazon as shown and I had to purchase it through Lulu. Past purchases have been PDF as they don't support the Kindle format but now they no longer support PDF which makes reading only possible through the e-reader format which is inconvenient and restricting.

[Corinne · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fascinating story.

The reader, at least I, keep changing between feeling sorry for or envying Daniel, the main character, and ends feeling very happy on behalf of Danielle.
It was great pleasure to be allowed into Kristen's Universe.

[Anne Mouse · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting erotic and psychological story how Daniel comes to accept and embrace a very different lifestyle

[Titania Goodsummer · Rating 1 out of 5]

Simple story. Simple one-dimensional characters. The same descriptions and explanations and repeated ad nauseam in each chapter.
A real turn-off.