I'm afraid this book was more or less ruined for me at the beginning. You cannot, I repeat cannot, keep someone from accessing their own land. It is illegal! Also, you cannot graze your cattle on someone's land just because they can't access it or they're not using it, that is also illegal. So, from the very beginning we have 2 big problems: 1. The plot is too contrived, all the hero had to do was go get the Sheriff, who would say, let him have access to his land or be arrested. Because you must have ingress and egress for your own land! You own it. 2. The heroine is a thief! She's stealing this man's land and the food for his cattle. That's his pasture, that's his grass, whether he has to go through your land to get to it or not, whether he is using it or not. That's theft and trespassing, she could be arrested and jailed or forced to pay very big fines, because her cattle consumed someone's grass and because she was trying to steal a huge amount of land from him. Also, it could result in the hero person losing his herd, because they were depending on that food for their cattle. So, congratulations madam heroine, you could be starving someone's cattle and destroying their livelihood because you're a criminal.
The beginning was just too contrived for me. It was silly. And the truth was, it was an easy fix, just have her access to the pasture be easier than his, so that he wants to negotiate with her because it will save him time or be easier on his herd.
Also, I had a real struggle with it being more or less ok that the heroine is stealing, willfully and knowingly stealing. This was also unnecessary and didn't show her as being crafty and smart in my eyes, but rather conniving and villainous. She was trying to steal his land and she did steal his grass. That's not the brains of a wise and good heroine, but rather the brains of a corrupt and evil villain. This plot point was also unnecessary, she didn't need to be stealing for the plot to be furthered.
I was also frustrated by the idea that because the hero had a large ranch he should just willingly let someone steal his land from him, after all, he had more. First, it's his land and I don't care who he is or what he's done, stealing is wrong. Second, if you're not aware of how ranching works, you don't keep spare land around just to look at you use it, all of it. The hero had cattle depending on that land, he had invested time and money in those cattle, and needed them to have that grass in order to live, he couldn't just shrug off 5,000 acres and move on. It was illogical and a bad attempt to make the heroine look better for willfully committing crimes.
Additionally, there was a lot of repetition, we are told around 4 times in the book that the heroine's brand is a double w, two w's, two of them, not one, but two! This repetition was carried out in several areas of the book (how the hero's ma was treating the heroine, how the heroine's pa was treating the heroine, etc) and it began to wear on me.
Also, a heavily pregnant woman approaches too stupid to live territory by riding into a danger a month from her delivery date. It felt highly selfish and idiotic to have no consideration for the life and safety of the baby, because she wanted to be involved in what was going down. I found myself extremely angry at this fictional character, she was risking her life, the baby's life, and the peace of everyone involved, because she couldn't just be an adult and stay home.
I was so disappointed in this book, I was really hoping I would enjoy it. I am such a softie when it comes to marriage of convenience stories, but this book just frustrated me. So, I guess, if these sorts of things don't bother you then, read away, but for me it was just too much.