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Really disappointing. Predictable story, flat romance, and bland/insufferable main characters.
-Didn't feel any connection between Alice/Tim, their romance was so hollow and rushed.
Tim didn't give a damn about Alice, he was only ever concerned about his own problems/feelings and then at the end he was all about Cal (which was super boring). The only reason Tim seemed to even want Alice was because he found her hot and liked her family, I never got the sense he truly knew her or even cared for her, his feelings for her were so cold (well, except for when he was horny).
Alice on the other hand was desperate for sulky-attention-seeking-loser Tim despite having a million other problems to deal with. Their relationship wasn't interesting or believable, they had no passion or chemistry. Them exchanging I-love-you's after dating for all of five minutes was laughable, it came out of nowhere.
-I preferred Alice and Tim's relationship with their families than each other, it was far more interesting reading about their interactions with their parents/siblings than the flat romance they had going on.
-Didn't buy Alice wanting to be with Tim after the Cal reveal, she was already sick of being a second mother of sorts to her siblings, so her accepting Tim/Cal as a package didn't seem likely. Why would she want to be saddled with a teen boyfriend with alcohol problems and a newborn baby when she had so much going on in her own life?! I can't believe she didn't walk away from Tim's car crash life, her staying didn't fit with her personality or circumstances. And then Alice getting upset at the end when she found out Cal wasn't Tim's was even more nonsensical, in reality she would be relieved not to be stuck being a teen stepmother when she'd spent so much time resenting and stressing about playing mummy to her siblings.
-Really couldn't stand Tim, he caused all sorts of problems for himself and I didn't feel sorry for him one bit. He was a whiny, self-pitying brat.
I hated how lame and sleazy he was when it came to Alice, he was such an immature perv. Then there was him getting angry and bitchy whenever Alice or Hester deigned to say or do something he didn't like, he would snap at them and get all pissed over nothing. At times he sounded like a misogynistic prick, especially when it came to Hester's relationship with Cal, he was a total hypocrite. Also, him not getting a paternity test when he found about Calvin was beyond ridiculous, that should have been the first thing he did.
-This was all there was to Tim:
Oh no, I drink and do drugs and sleep around and flunk out of school and my parents are disappointed in me. Poor me, my life's so hard. No understands me, pity me.
Oh no, Hester just told me I'm the father of her baby. I don't even remember sleeping with her because I was apparently in a drunken stupor, but that's not suspicious at all. Oh well, I won't do a DNA test to confirm its mine because it has red hair and that means it has to be mine because no-one else in the world has red hair.
Oh no, Hester doesn't love baby Calvin like a mother should. It doesn't matter that she's a teenager and a first time mum or that I'm a crappy dad myself, I'm still going to judge her and act like she's awful. Poor me.
Oh no, Alice said/did something totally reasonable but I'm going to take it as an insult and call her out on it and make her feel guilty, that way she can look like she's done something wrong and I'll come out smelling like roses. Ugh.
-What the hell was Tim's problem with the name Calvin? He actually called it a 'pussy name' and then proceeded to call his son Cal instead. Ugh, he was an absolute idiot.
-Hated all the parts where Tim narrated Cal's 'thoughts', I guess it was meant to be cute or something but it was just cringey.
-I was so pissed at Tim inviting himself into the Garret house and eating all of their food when they barely had enough for themselves. He never stopped to think about their struggles, everything was about him. He was a selfish, entitled, greedy git.
-Hated Alice's parents for leaving her to deal with the kids and finances, I know Alice's dad was hurt and the mum was pregnant but they shouldn't have expected Alice to pick up the pieces and put so much pressure on her. Absolutely detested them for having so many kids when they could barely afford the ones they had, not only that they couldn't even look after them properly without getting the older teens to do the bulk of the work. Alice and Jase should have been getting on with their own lives, not constantly looking after their bratty siblings.
-I rolled my eyes at Alice saying she'd never climaxed before yet was able to the first time she and Tim got it on. Yea, I doubt Tim could be that good when he'd only ever had drunk sex before.
-The dialogue was really at bad times, it was so stilted and forced.
-I remember liking the Garretts and all the younger kids in the first book, but I found them annoying in this, especially George/Patsy and the parents.
Nowhere near as good as My life Next Door, Tim was an awful character and the whole Calvin arc was boring. The only thing I really enjoyed were the few Nan and Sam/Jase scenes.