Coming from two of my favorites in the picture book world I had HIGH expectations for this one. Unfortunately, Mac Barnett, genius that he is, let me down. Christian Robinson can do no wrong as far as I'm concerned, but I do prefer his less monochromatic work. The illustrations are fresh, evocative, and cute as usual.
The story, though. Hm. It has some pacing and/or focus issues for me. The narrative feels front heavy. If the ultimate focus is the friendship between Leo and Jane and how their life situations fit together, she deserved more pagetime. Of course I appreciate the appearing act orchestrated in the first two spreads, but part of me questions that usage of space for a narrative that ultimately is about two characters. The same sentiments go for the funny family interaction and exorcism scenes. I might have just begun the book with Leo, wandering and lost; unseen. Those pictures were too good to lose. I also wondered if the thwarted robbery could have been more drawn out and suspenseful, but it was managed well enough. The final resolution though, definitely feels too quick to me. Maybe it's just my taste, but I think this would have worked better as an early reader. Break all the funny or sad incidents into their own brief chapters, keep the language simple. There's certainly something original in a tale of a ghost mistaken for an imaginary friend.
The tone of the story almost feels as if it is being told by a precocious child. A majority probably think that means it's great writing for a picture book, but I'm not convinced. Picture books should not have to feel like they are the creations of, or in the spirit of children. Some bookmakers have achieved that goal well with depth and humor, but Leo: A Ghost Story doesn't make the cut. Everyone else seems to like this book though, so I sincerely hope Barnett and Robinson work together again and try to top this effort.