Kiah Thomas started telling stories when she was a kid; reimagining the endings in books she read. She rediscovered her love of kids books when she had children of her own, and started writing beginnings as well as endings. Kiah is passionate about books that kids and adults can enjoy together. She lives in Melbourne, Victoria with her husband, three children and at least seven stuffed toy penguins.
The illustrations in this book immediately caught my attention. The soft, beautiful artwork creates a calming atmosphere and adds so much charm to the story.
The book follows two turtles who turn everything into a competition—until one turtle falls off a cliff and the other jumps after him simply to keep competing. While I appreciated the message about the dangers of constant comparison and competitiveness, the execution didn’t quite work for me.
The writing felt flat and lacked the humor and energy I was expecting from a story with such a playful premise.
Unfortunately, I don’t think it would hold my child’s attention for the entire book.
Overall, this one had a meaningful lesson and lovely illustrations, but I wish the storytelling had been more engaging.
Terence and Frank are way too competitive, which leads to the pair of them falling off a cliff. (Stay with me here!) When cooperation rather than competition is the only way to save themselves, can they manage to do it?
I really liked Kiah Thomas’ fable, but it’s Jake A. Minton’s illustrations that really make this picture book.
In the interest of full disclosure, I received this book from NetGalley and Charlesbridge in exchange for an honest review.
Terrence, a turtle, is falling OFF A CLIFF ! And so is Frank. How did this even happen ? Will they get down safely ?
What made me want to read this book, titled Two turtles, is totally the visuals. The dominance of the greens, and earthy tones, loved the palette. Plus, the cuteness of the characters (that little bird!!) I loved the style, it combined : cute, funny, and pretty pages. The nature details and backgrounds were really nice to the eye.
I had no clue where the story was gonna go. I didn't read the synopsis (because I liked to be surprised).
And yes, I discovered, surprisingly, that it was quite comical in the tone (and more). It used multiple types of comical methods : the comical grotesque, the physical/exaggerated gesture, and the comedy of the absurd.
Terrence and Frank are so stubborn and have their own pride, their own goal : beat the other like friends, or siblings do, on stupid, harmless - but sometimes not - dares. In the chase of who's gonna win this new challenge ? Who's gonna be the smartest, the more resourceful. They even do something stupid, falling off and jumping off a cliff... Daring each other to be the first one down there.
Even if it could end badly, even if they managed to land safely, and help each other in a moment of crisis... One manages to win.
"You're probably thinking about how we're all winners when we work together. And you're right.
But everything is a competition with Terrence and Frank."
Everything is a competition in the end. And they will absolutely never stop. We know these two turtles now ! It was a fun read, thank you to Charlesbridge for the eARC, in exchange of a honest review.
Kiah Thomas’s Two Turtles is a playful and cleverly structured picture book that turns a simple predicament into a study of friendship, rivalry, and resilience. The story follows two turtles who find themselves stuck together, and Thomas uses this small, contained scenario to explore how friends navigate frustration, competition, and cooperation. The humour is gentle but constant, driven by the turtles’ escalating attempts to outsmart each other while still relying on one another to solve their shared problem. The dynamic between the two characters was a standout feature for my children. Both my 5‑ and 8‑year‑old were especially entertained by the humorous rivalry, the way each turtle tries to take the lead, prove a point, or come up with the “better” idea. That competitive energy felt instantly recognisable to them, and it kept them fully engaged from page to page. Jake A Minton’s expressive illustrations amplify the comedic tension, using facial expressions and visual pacing to highlight the turtles’ stubbornness and determination. The artwork works in tandem with the text, creating a rhythm that makes the book highly effective as a read‑aloud. Overall, Two Turtles succeeds not just as a funny story but as a thoughtful look at how friends navigate challenges together. It’s a book that entertains young readers while quietly reinforcing problem‑solving, patience, and the value of sticking with someone—even when you’re trying to outdo them.
This beautiful story completely won my heart from the very first page. Two Turtles by Kiah Thomas is a gentle yet powerful read that explores competitiveness, working together and problem resolving.
Thomas does a wonderful job building characters that feel real and relatable, allowing readers to connect with their struggles, growth, and bond. The pacing is steady and thoughtful, giving each moment space to breathe and resonate.
The writing style is clear making it an easy yet meaningful read. It is also a wonderful read aloud book, easily encouraging thoughtful conversation and connection, whether shared with children, students, or a group setting. There is a warmth in the storytelling reflecting on the importance of companionship, understanding, and perseverance.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the advance copy. All opinions are my own.
What a fantastic book about being competitive but to also be reasonable when it comes to danger and safety. Being competitive is natural within us all, but what to do when things get out of hand? This picture book connects with younger readers using humorous language as two turtles are falling off a cliff.
Everything about them is to outsmart and beat each other, but is falling down a cliff a race you really want to win? It is so easy to discuss the consequences with children. The importance of letting some things go in life and how it can actually be healthy and good decisions.
The illustrations are so hilarious. They style of illustration is so well done and the actions and expressions of the turtles are so enriched. The illustrations go hand-in-hand with the text to really bring about meaning.
The terribly tragic and terrifically funny tale of “The Two Turtles” who just can’t stop one-upping each other has been a favorite of my little ones. Frank and Terrance hurtling off a cliff made for a great opener to discuss working together and losing gracefully (with young ones any chance to talk through those feelings is a big plus for me)! I loved how Thomas doesn’t lecture the reader, but leaves room for kids to work out the silliness and life lesson for themselves. The beautiful illustrations and absurd situations are reminiscent of John Klassen. Highly recommend for the 3-6 crowd.
Thanks to NetGalley & Charlesbridge for the complimentary copy of this ebook. The opinions expressed here are entirely my own.
Super adorable and nonsensical in just the right way for young readers. The spare illustrations are a good fit - they're whimsical and avoid pulling focus from the characters who are the heart of this story. Most kids can relate to silly competitions between friends. And every kid can see that turtles falling from a high cliff is a problem in need of a solution. Arg! They must work together - even if it means neither really win the contest. (Terrance's declaration of victory is dubious at best!) Kids will see that safety comes first, and there will be time for more for fun and games - and competition - tomorrow.
Well, this was absolutely delightful. Two Turtles follows two competitive, ornery turtles (Terrence and Frank) and the circumstances in which they find themselves falling off a cliff to the treachery below. Can they put aside their competition and work together? What will happen? I can totally see myself using this in a toddler storytime, it reminded me so much of Jon Klassen in terms of the dry humor and expressive illustrations. I can't wait for this to hit the shelves!
I was given the opportunity to read this title by NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
A clever and witty story of two turtles who are very competitive and always trying to beat the other. When stuffing their shells full of different objects to prove who can fit the most in, there is a mishap and Frank topples off the top of the cliff. Determined not to let Frank beat him to the bottom, Terence follows him down. The storyteller begs them to work together and save themselves, but can they? Or is winning, (and dying) more important? There are many opportunities to encourage prediction and problem solving throughout.
Jake A Minton's illustrations provide the perfect foil for this funny story with a range of page spreads, illustrated writing and different perspectives. The double page spreads that show the cliff on one side and the turtles falling on the other draw the eye to the plunging turtles and the mix of close up and panoramic views contribute different perspectives to the story. At time minimal text is needed as the illustrations progress the plot, and the impending doom. The facial expressions and different body positions of turtles in free fall add to the humour.
Perfect harmony between text and illustrations is achieved and the second person narrative draws the reader into the dare devil antics.
A great, engaging read! I'm a twin and can absolutely see my brother and I having these types of competitions. I even had a fight with a friend once in elementary school over who started the most fights! (Her, of course!) Kids will love the fast-paced action and stunning illustrations, and parents will relate to raising turtles like Frank and Terrance! Parents will also appreciate the lesson in teamwork, and don't be surprised if this is a new favorite read!
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for this ARC, I greatly enjoyed it! I will definitely recommend this to my local preschool!
Oh this is such a good book! I like how the author arranged the sequence of the story. I'm glad he started with the suspense part then "flashback" interchanging. The reason why they are in that predicament was mentioned in the middle of the book. It's funny and completely silly. The illustration is top notch that it made the character designs of animals adorable. The unpredictable ending added some twist to this engaging and humorous story.
Oh my heck, we LOVED this book. From the very first page my kids could not stop giggling. This is such a sweet and humorous book about the pitfalls of being overly competitive, something my kids really related to. Highly recommend pulling out this one for sibling rivalries!
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC!
I love Terrence and Frank. This is a hilarious book about being competitive as well as working together. I love the story, and the illustrations are just amazing, beautiful and details and the facial expressions on some of the creatures is just too much. Love it
I could be biased. I have a turtle. Her name is Feisty. But actually this picture book is perfection. Simple, carefully chosen words. Turtle rivalry. Beautiful hilarious pictures. Suspense. Mortal danger. Working together (- finally). Punchline. Perfection!
Two turtles is a humorous look at cooperation versus competition. The illustrations are bold and complement the short snappy text. The narrative holds many opportunities for prediction and character analysis. The ending contains a final punchline that will encourage further discussion of the story.
Frank and Terrence are two competitive turtle. They race about anything, almost everything. And they are in trouble because of it. Let's see if they can fix it.
It's a light, funny story, with great illustrations. Feels good to read and also entertaining.