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A Most Unsuitable Arrangement: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Her grandfather has arranged her future.
Unfortunately for him, he forgot to consult her heart.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is not, in fact, a Bennet.
Orphaned young, she has been raised under the watchful eye of her grandfather — known in Meryton as Mr Grant, but in truth the powerful Earl of Granfield. A lifelong strategist who has arranged matters for ministers and monarchs alike, his lordship believes he can secure his granddaughter’s happiness with one carefully constructed matrimonial design.
There is only one flaw in his plan.
Elizabeth does not love the gentleman he has chosen.
Fitzwilliam Darcy never intended to interfere in the earl’s arrangement. Yet from the moment he begins to understand Elizabeth’s quiet strength, her warmth, and the courage beneath her composure, walking away becomes far more difficult than honour would suggest.
As Lord Granfield’s scheme unfolds — well-intended, perfectly respectable, and entirely misguided — Elizabeth and Darcy must decide whether duty will govern their futures… or whether they will dare to choose for themselves.
Because when love enters the equation, even the most brilliant arrangement may prove most unsuitable of all.
Unfortunately for him, he forgot to consult her heart.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is not, in fact, a Bennet.
Orphaned young, she has been raised under the watchful eye of her grandfather — known in Meryton as Mr Grant, but in truth the powerful Earl of Granfield. A lifelong strategist who has arranged matters for ministers and monarchs alike, his lordship believes he can secure his granddaughter’s happiness with one carefully constructed matrimonial design.
There is only one flaw in his plan.
Elizabeth does not love the gentleman he has chosen.
Fitzwilliam Darcy never intended to interfere in the earl’s arrangement. Yet from the moment he begins to understand Elizabeth’s quiet strength, her warmth, and the courage beneath her composure, walking away becomes far more difficult than honour would suggest.
As Lord Granfield’s scheme unfolds — well-intended, perfectly respectable, and entirely misguided — Elizabeth and Darcy must decide whether duty will govern their futures… or whether they will dare to choose for themselves.
Because when love enters the equation, even the most brilliant arrangement may prove most unsuitable of all.
386 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 29, 2026
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April 21, 2026
The author's story description sets the stage very well.
Although we are told that Elizabeth is not a Bennet, she is born to "our" Mr. Bennet's brother. So she is, in fact a Bennet and cousin to Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. When her parents die, a very young Elizabeth is taken into the "other" Bennets' home and reared with her cousins. (Her grandfather travels in working for the government.)
Interesting thread: in that Bingley does lease Netherfield and seems to be courting Jane. However, Carolyn is much more of a problem here to her brother than in canon. And when he takes her back to London to settle her separately there, we read of his long absence from Hertfordshire. (We again have a disappointed Jane.)
So when grandfather, Mr. Grant, actually the Earl of Granfield and her actual guardian returns to his "cottage" in Meryton and decides he has the perfect prospect as a husband for Elizabeth, we readers are in for a surprise. (Not going to spoil that identity for you here.)
Wickham and Lady Catherine have their parts in this story but not quite as in canon. A case of mistaken identity plays a part also.
I did enjoy this story and recommend, but know that it is a long one.
Although we are told that Elizabeth is not a Bennet, she is born to "our" Mr. Bennet's brother. So she is, in fact a Bennet and cousin to Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. When her parents die, a very young Elizabeth is taken into the "other" Bennets' home and reared with her cousins. (Her grandfather travels in working for the government.)
Interesting thread: in that Bingley does lease Netherfield and seems to be courting Jane. However, Carolyn is much more of a problem here to her brother than in canon. And when he takes her back to London to settle her separately there, we read of his long absence from Hertfordshire. (We again have a disappointed Jane.)
So when grandfather, Mr. Grant, actually the Earl of Granfield and her actual guardian returns to his "cottage" in Meryton and decides he has the perfect prospect as a husband for Elizabeth, we readers are in for a surprise. (Not going to spoil that identity for you here.)
Wickham and Lady Catherine have their parts in this story but not quite as in canon. A case of mistaken identity plays a part also.
I did enjoy this story and recommend, but know that it is a long one.
April 5, 2026
WHY is the Earl’s (Elizabeth’s grandfather) identity a secret in Meryton???
WHY Elizabeth’s maternal relatives appear and disappear without any anchor to reality? Why some characters appear to have just read P&P, so they know a lot of details they shouldn’t really (as per this story)???
WHY is the Earl only focused on Elizabeth’s love life after he comes back to England after a looong career as a diplomat/spy??
You won’t find any answer to these questions in this book — sadly, the tale starts on shaky ground and goes on to pile on mistakes and incoherences more & more as the story moves forward…
Assuming that Mr Bennet’s younger brother married an Earl’s daughter (right!) and mysteriously acquired Netherfield, it becomes very strange how Elizabeth was left to be raised by the Bennets. The first excuse is that the Earl is going to the Americas to live his diplomat/spy life, so there’s no one to take care of Lizzy — but as the initial premise becomes more convoluted, there was the Earl’s heir + wife (said not to be able to have children) AND later it comes to light that the Earl’s sister was also a super active and respectable widow… yet no one of these relatives could have taken Lizzy in.
The story at first presents Elizabeth integrated to the Bennet family life in a cheery and loving way, but quickly the author changes her mind and starts depicting Mr. Bennet as distant, and progressively resentful of Elizabeth; the same for Mrs. Bennet and the younger Bennet girls, who after a few chapters have a personality transplant and start behaving as if Lizzy was always some sort of interloper, tolerated rather than loved.
Going back to the Earl’s family; all of them first mentioned as non existent or absent from Elizabeth’s life, auntil they pop up and are suddenly described as always been there (weird). This heir who was looking after the Earl’s property during his long absence, suddenly dies before the Earl’s return to England, but Elizabeth wasn’t ever informed of it (that her uncle died!), and neither she, nor the Earl manifest any grief of put on mourning for him. The heir’s wife who is mentioned earlier stops existing alongside her husband, because there is no mention of her at all. So weird !
Regarding the story itself, the structure was very strange too >> the first half is Darcy questioning Lizzy’s background and then coming to see his own attraction as his cousin the Cnel is promoted by the Earl to court Elizabeth. Darcy and Elizabeth have a meeting of the minds exactly at the 50% mark, which is followed by a very long and totally bonkers segment about WICKHAM getting wind that there was an heiress around and mistakenly kidnapping Jane & Mary. The kidnapping portion is very long, absolutely irrelevant, and a serious disruption to the previous content, in the flow of the romance part, and the whole rythm by adding thrill/tension and action scenes which come out of a magician’s hat here (Bennet ignoring his daughters being kidnapped, a man hunt, a chase on horseback, stalkiing an inn, Wickham’s flop of a plan!)
Cnel Fitzwilliam falls for Jane and after much pressure gives in to receive as many monetary handouts he can so he can give up his commission and marry the girl !
WHY Elizabeth’s maternal relatives appear and disappear without any anchor to reality? Why some characters appear to have just read P&P, so they know a lot of details they shouldn’t really (as per this story)???
WHY is the Earl only focused on Elizabeth’s love life after he comes back to England after a looong career as a diplomat/spy??
You won’t find any answer to these questions in this book — sadly, the tale starts on shaky ground and goes on to pile on mistakes and incoherences more & more as the story moves forward…
Assuming that Mr Bennet’s younger brother married an Earl’s daughter (right!) and mysteriously acquired Netherfield, it becomes very strange how Elizabeth was left to be raised by the Bennets. The first excuse is that the Earl is going to the Americas to live his diplomat/spy life, so there’s no one to take care of Lizzy — but as the initial premise becomes more convoluted, there was the Earl’s heir + wife (said not to be able to have children) AND later it comes to light that the Earl’s sister was also a super active and respectable widow… yet no one of these relatives could have taken Lizzy in.
The story at first presents Elizabeth integrated to the Bennet family life in a cheery and loving way, but quickly the author changes her mind and starts depicting Mr. Bennet as distant, and progressively resentful of Elizabeth; the same for Mrs. Bennet and the younger Bennet girls, who after a few chapters have a personality transplant and start behaving as if Lizzy was always some sort of interloper, tolerated rather than loved.
Going back to the Earl’s family; all of them first mentioned as non existent or absent from Elizabeth’s life, auntil they pop up and are suddenly described as always been there (weird). This heir who was looking after the Earl’s property during his long absence, suddenly dies before the Earl’s return to England, but Elizabeth wasn’t ever informed of it (that her uncle died!), and neither she, nor the Earl manifest any grief of put on mourning for him. The heir’s wife who is mentioned earlier stops existing alongside her husband, because there is no mention of her at all. So weird !
Regarding the story itself, the structure was very strange too >> the first half is Darcy questioning Lizzy’s background and then coming to see his own attraction as his cousin the Cnel is promoted by the Earl to court Elizabeth. Darcy and Elizabeth have a meeting of the minds exactly at the 50% mark, which is followed by a very long and totally bonkers segment about WICKHAM getting wind that there was an heiress around and mistakenly kidnapping Jane & Mary. The kidnapping portion is very long, absolutely irrelevant, and a serious disruption to the previous content, in the flow of the romance part, and the whole rythm by adding thrill/tension and action scenes which come out of a magician’s hat here (Bennet ignoring his daughters being kidnapped, a man hunt, a chase on horseback, stalkiing an inn, Wickham’s flop of a plan!)
Cnel Fitzwilliam falls for Jane and after much pressure gives in to receive as many monetary handouts he can so he can give up his commission and marry the girl !
March 30, 2026
4.5* rounded up.
I loved this story, and I couldn't wait for it to be published. A wealthier and not-a-Bennet Elizabeth is one of my favourite tropes.
There's a certain portion of the P&P variation audience that is a proponent of a Colonel Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Bennet match. I am not one of those who support Colonel Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Bennet, and I am an avid ODCer, but this novel explores what happens if a character with authority makes such an arrangement.It was intriguing how the author made a comparison between the compatibility of personalities versus common interests in making for a successful relationship.
This book is a low-angst story with Darcy having to do all the work to atone for his assembly insult and achieve the HEA for himself.
I received a free ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I loved this story, and I couldn't wait for it to be published. A wealthier and not-a-Bennet Elizabeth is one of my favourite tropes.
There's a certain portion of the P&P variation audience that is a proponent of a Colonel Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Bennet match. I am not one of those who support Colonel Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Bennet, and I am an avid ODCer, but this novel explores what happens if a character with authority makes such an arrangement.It was intriguing how the author made a comparison between the compatibility of personalities versus common interests in making for a successful relationship.
This book is a low-angst story with Darcy having to do all the work to atone for his assembly insult and achieve the HEA for himself.
I received a free ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 11, 2026
4.5*
I really enjoyed this one. Unlike (at least from my broken memory retrieval unit) most of MA's stories, ODC starts out with the Meryton insult, but Elizabeth has some sage advice that she accepts and does her best to give Darcy a fair shake and it's lovely watching their relationship develop despite obstacles put in place by none other than her grandfather and Darcy's own honour. There were some subtly dry comments/observations that MA's sprinkled in that startled a laugh out me.
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I really enjoyed this one. Unlike (at least from my broken memory retrieval unit) most of MA's stories, ODC starts out with the Meryton insult, but Elizabeth has some sage advice that she accepts and does her best to give Darcy a fair shake and it's lovely watching their relationship develop despite obstacles put in place by none other than her grandfather and Darcy's own honour. There were some subtly dry comments/observations that MA's sprinkled in that startled a laugh out me.
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 26, 2026
DNF at 16% ... BORING!!!
At this point Lizzy's identity is still a secret. A secret that in my opinion is a bs. How come an entire town forgets that Longbourn second son married the daughter of an Earl? How come it never came up in Mr. Bennet's marriage?! Laughable.
Than I'm so tired of Caroline's arrogance and that no one put's her in her place! Imagine a granddaughter of an Earl, with supposed wit, just let someone of trade walk over her.
This book had long internal nonsense monologues, repetitive mind you. When the Earl tells Darcy that he intends to call the Colonel to stay with him, inviting Elisabeth as his hostess than proceeding to telling him, that the Earl wishes to introduce the Colonel as a possible husband, I was like that's it! I'm done! The mare thought that an Earl well dowered, only granddaughter to be married of to a penniless Colonel, is absurd!
I wish people do some little research about how society worked back in the 1800's (even today, Henry marring Megan created a scandal) … badly done!
I have no more patience for badly written book.
P.S.
Lately it seems I DNF a lot of books, it might be me, but it seems the quality is declining.. also if any of you know a book where the arrogance of Caroline met the with of Lizzy in every turn (not just as platitude in the end) I would be thankful for recommendations.
At this point Lizzy's identity is still a secret. A secret that in my opinion is a bs. How come an entire town forgets that Longbourn second son married the daughter of an Earl? How come it never came up in Mr. Bennet's marriage?! Laughable.
Than I'm so tired of Caroline's arrogance and that no one put's her in her place! Imagine a granddaughter of an Earl, with supposed wit, just let someone of trade walk over her.
This book had long internal nonsense monologues, repetitive mind you. When the Earl tells Darcy that he intends to call the Colonel to stay with him, inviting Elisabeth as his hostess than proceeding to telling him, that the Earl wishes to introduce the Colonel as a possible husband, I was like that's it! I'm done! The mare thought that an Earl well dowered, only granddaughter to be married of to a penniless Colonel, is absurd!
I wish people do some little research about how society worked back in the 1800's (even today, Henry marring Megan created a scandal) … badly done!
I have no more patience for badly written book.
P.S.
Lately it seems I DNF a lot of books, it might be me, but it seems the quality is declining.. also if any of you know a book where the arrogance of Caroline met the with of Lizzy in every turn (not just as platitude in the end) I would be thankful for recommendations.
May 18, 2026
Elizabeth Bennet is a Bennet, but rather a Bennet cousin who is at the same social level as Fitzwilliam Darcy. He insults her at the assembly but his road to recovery is not easy, especially since she has a powerful supporter.
I loved the fact that he seemed to really see her and what she needed, even when others could not.
I loved the fact that he seemed to really see her and what she needed, even when others could not.
April 3, 2026
Decent
What I liked:
- A sweet Elizabeth is not a (Longbourn) Bennet story.
- I liked all the characters enough, with Darcy and Elizabeth being my favorites.
What I noticed:
- The story tends to drag in parts where nothing really happens to keep my interest. And the details I wanted further elaboration on were glossed over.
What I liked:
- A sweet Elizabeth is not a (Longbourn) Bennet story.
- I liked all the characters enough, with Darcy and Elizabeth being my favorites.
What I noticed:
- The story tends to drag in parts where nothing really happens to keep my interest. And the details I wanted further elaboration on were glossed over.
April 7, 2026
Because of the death of her parents Elizabeth is under the guardianship of her grandfather and lives with the family of her uncle at Longbourn. Her grandfather, known as Mr Grant, is in truth the Earl of Grantford. He is often away on diplomatic missions for the crown and known as a brilliant strategist. But his new strategy does not seem to work out as planned: he arranges the future of his granddaughter and intends to marry her to the son of an Earl. But Elizabeth does not love the chosen groom.
Darcy never intended to interfere with the Earl's marriage plans. But the more he gets to know of Elizabeth the more he is drawn to her. And she is likewise affected.
Will Darcy and Elizabeth oppose the Earl's plan and choose for themselves? What about the other suitor? And what will the Earl do when he discovers that Elizabeth does not plan to follow his direction?
The story was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I always enjoy her variations very much, especially as, in her variations, ODC tends to be together/in love/on a way to an understanding very early in her stories.
In this variation Elizabeth is not the daughter of Mr and Mrs Bennett but their niece. Her parents are dead and her grandfather is, due to his occupation, not very often able to care for her. And in addition Elizabeth likes living with her cousins. Therefore, in this variation, Elizabeth is not a Bennet in the strictest of sense but she lives with the Bennets and is therefore from her behaviour like a Bennet by birth and the Elizabeth from canon (only with a bit more sense because she learned some valuable lessons from her grandfather).
I really like the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They are both drawn to one another from the very beginning and there are no big misunderstandings between them. Darcy soon apologizes for his insult and then they move forward and spend much time in company and become to know each other very well. I like that they do not forsake their relationship despite the Earl's different plans for Elizabeth's future but that they instead fight for a life together.
Darcy does know the Earl's choice of groom very well. I like that the Earl's scheme does not interfere with Darcy's relationship to the other man and that it doesn't make them real rivals for Elizabeth's affection. I like that they both act like grown men and that the other suitor, as soon as he realises that Elizabeth doesn't favour him, accepts his defeat and does not interfere any more in Darcy's and Elizabeth's relationship.
The story is, regarding the relationship, not overly angry. Elizabeth is very sure of her feelings from very early on. Yes, there is the scheme of the earl that, for some time, hinders Darcy in expressing and showing his feelings, but his feelings are there nevertheless.
In the last part there are some dramatic scenes due to one of Wickham’s schemes. But fortunately all is resolved in the end.
A new character was Elizabeth's grandfather who is also her guardian. He is not always very present in her life because he is away on several missions but Elizabeth nevertheless has a very good relationship with him. I liked that very much. But, on the other hand, Elizabeth's grandfather has some ideas and arrangements I didn't really like. Yes, it is in his rights to select a marriage partner for his granddaughter in his role as her guardian but I didn't like his way of doing it. He selects a potential husband to repay a favour. In my opinion this is not a good foundation, especially as Elizabeth doesn't like his choice.
I also found that the grandfather was very rude to Darcy who, from the very beginning, would have made an equally good husband in regard to his fortune. And if the grandfather had chosen this arrangement there would have been affection from the start. I am glad that ODC nevertheless found their way to one another, despite the Earl's schemes.
George Wickham is part of the story but fortunately for ODC, in this variation, he is not overly clever and therefore his attempts to harm Darcy only harm himself.
Caroline Bingley also tries to interfere but she is also not successful either. Her brother tries to rein her in but he is not strong enough and determined to do it. Because of the spinlessness I didn't particularly like Bingley in this variation. I'm glad that *spoiler* Jane doesn't end up with him.
If you like to know if Elizabeth will interfere with her grandfather's scheme to arrange her future you should definitely read this excellent book.
I received a free copy of the book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Darcy never intended to interfere with the Earl's marriage plans. But the more he gets to know of Elizabeth the more he is drawn to her. And she is likewise affected.
Will Darcy and Elizabeth oppose the Earl's plan and choose for themselves? What about the other suitor? And what will the Earl do when he discovers that Elizabeth does not plan to follow his direction?
The story was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I always enjoy her variations very much, especially as, in her variations, ODC tends to be together/in love/on a way to an understanding very early in her stories.
In this variation Elizabeth is not the daughter of Mr and Mrs Bennett but their niece. Her parents are dead and her grandfather is, due to his occupation, not very often able to care for her. And in addition Elizabeth likes living with her cousins. Therefore, in this variation, Elizabeth is not a Bennet in the strictest of sense but she lives with the Bennets and is therefore from her behaviour like a Bennet by birth and the Elizabeth from canon (only with a bit more sense because she learned some valuable lessons from her grandfather).
I really like the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They are both drawn to one another from the very beginning and there are no big misunderstandings between them. Darcy soon apologizes for his insult and then they move forward and spend much time in company and become to know each other very well. I like that they do not forsake their relationship despite the Earl's different plans for Elizabeth's future but that they instead fight for a life together.
Darcy does know the Earl's choice of groom very well. I like that the Earl's scheme does not interfere with Darcy's relationship to the other man and that it doesn't make them real rivals for Elizabeth's affection. I like that they both act like grown men and that the other suitor, as soon as he realises that Elizabeth doesn't favour him, accepts his defeat and does not interfere any more in Darcy's and Elizabeth's relationship.
The story is, regarding the relationship, not overly angry. Elizabeth is very sure of her feelings from very early on. Yes, there is the scheme of the earl that, for some time, hinders Darcy in expressing and showing his feelings, but his feelings are there nevertheless.
In the last part there are some dramatic scenes due to one of Wickham’s schemes. But fortunately all is resolved in the end.
A new character was Elizabeth's grandfather who is also her guardian. He is not always very present in her life because he is away on several missions but Elizabeth nevertheless has a very good relationship with him. I liked that very much. But, on the other hand, Elizabeth's grandfather has some ideas and arrangements I didn't really like. Yes, it is in his rights to select a marriage partner for his granddaughter in his role as her guardian but I didn't like his way of doing it. He selects a potential husband to repay a favour. In my opinion this is not a good foundation, especially as Elizabeth doesn't like his choice.
I also found that the grandfather was very rude to Darcy who, from the very beginning, would have made an equally good husband in regard to his fortune. And if the grandfather had chosen this arrangement there would have been affection from the start. I am glad that ODC nevertheless found their way to one another, despite the Earl's schemes.
George Wickham is part of the story but fortunately for ODC, in this variation, he is not overly clever and therefore his attempts to harm Darcy only harm himself.
Caroline Bingley also tries to interfere but she is also not successful either. Her brother tries to rein her in but he is not strong enough and determined to do it. Because of the spinlessness I didn't particularly like Bingley in this variation. I'm glad that *spoiler* Jane doesn't end up with him.
If you like to know if Elizabeth will interfere with her grandfather's scheme to arrange her future you should definitely read this excellent book.
I received a free copy of the book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Review of advance copy received from Author
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This was a very enjoyable variation on Pride and Prejudice. Elizabeth is a Bennet — just not a Longbourn Bennet. She is the daughter of Mr Bennet’s younger brother who married the daughter of an Earl, therefore her grandfather is an Earl. In this story Elizabeth loses her parents at a young age. Her grandfather, the Earl, is an agent of the crown and spends much time out of the country. When he is gone Elizabeth lives with her uncle and aunt Bennet and her cousins Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Much of the relationships become blurred over time by the families near Meryton and the fact that Elizabeth is the granddaughter of an Earl is either unknown or forgotten. Even Mrs Bennet is unaware. The Earl is known in the area as merely Mr Grant.
The story begins with the assembly in Meryton after Bingley’s leases Netherfield. Darcy makes his usual insult, although he begins to regret his impulsive bad manners nearly immediately. However, he does not make his apologies to Elizabeth. In the meantime Elizabeth learns from her grandfather that Darcy is really a good man and so she (grudgingly) reserves judgment. When the Earl arrives in Hertfordshire to see Elizabeth he gives Darcy a dressing down and also informs him that he has invited Darcy’s cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, to visit with the intention of matching him with Elizabeth.
Darcy realizes how great his mistake has been and tries to hold back his admiration for Elizabeth while showing her his better nature. When Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives it is clear that he has taken the Earl’s suggestion that he match with Elizabeth for granted and comes off too strongly, making a bad impression on Elizabeth. In the meantime Elizabeth has begun to have tender feelings for Darcy, but it is clear that the Earl is not looking favorably on a match between Darcy and Elizabeth.
Darcy has some competition in the person of his dearest cousin. How will the two of them reconcile this situation and how much influence does the Earl have over Elizabeth’s choice in a marriage partner? The story contains other roadblocks in the path to a happy ending by several of our favorite villains: Wickham, Caroline Bingley, Collins and, of course, Lady Catherine de Bourgh. Each one is dealt with in a satisfying manner. This is a fun and romantic story and I highly recommend it.
This was a very enjoyable variation on Pride and Prejudice. Elizabeth is a Bennet — just not a Longbourn Bennet. She is the daughter of Mr Bennet’s younger brother who married the daughter of an Earl, therefore her grandfather is an Earl. In this story Elizabeth loses her parents at a young age. Her grandfather, the Earl, is an agent of the crown and spends much time out of the country. When he is gone Elizabeth lives with her uncle and aunt Bennet and her cousins Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Much of the relationships become blurred over time by the families near Meryton and the fact that Elizabeth is the granddaughter of an Earl is either unknown or forgotten. Even Mrs Bennet is unaware. The Earl is known in the area as merely Mr Grant.
The story begins with the assembly in Meryton after Bingley’s leases Netherfield. Darcy makes his usual insult, although he begins to regret his impulsive bad manners nearly immediately. However, he does not make his apologies to Elizabeth. In the meantime Elizabeth learns from her grandfather that Darcy is really a good man and so she (grudgingly) reserves judgment. When the Earl arrives in Hertfordshire to see Elizabeth he gives Darcy a dressing down and also informs him that he has invited Darcy’s cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, to visit with the intention of matching him with Elizabeth.
Darcy realizes how great his mistake has been and tries to hold back his admiration for Elizabeth while showing her his better nature. When Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives it is clear that he has taken the Earl’s suggestion that he match with Elizabeth for granted and comes off too strongly, making a bad impression on Elizabeth. In the meantime Elizabeth has begun to have tender feelings for Darcy, but it is clear that the Earl is not looking favorably on a match between Darcy and Elizabeth.
Darcy has some competition in the person of his dearest cousin. How will the two of them reconcile this situation and how much influence does the Earl have over Elizabeth’s choice in a marriage partner? The story contains other roadblocks in the path to a happy ending by several of our favorite villains: Wickham, Caroline Bingley, Collins and, of course, Lady Catherine de Bourgh. Each one is dealt with in a satisfying manner. This is a fun and romantic story and I highly recommend it.
April 9, 2026
This variation with thorough and well-thought out scenarios brings in a new and influential character that is Elizabeth Bennet’s grandfather, who happens to be an Earl. As a consequence Elizabeth is altered as well as Darcy’s immediate reaction to his mistake at the assembly.
Darcy realizes early on his blunder having made rude statements towards Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton assembly and found himself admiring Elizabeth as the author clearly describes. He does not mince words when making a stand, towards Bingley, the latter’s sister and others he encounters in Hertfordshire. He is more vocally honest, which makes him more honorable and admirable.
Elizabeth is more controlled in speech and regulated in her emotions. More discerning and intelligent, well-educated, accomplished, and guided by the new character, her grandfather, who she respects above all because she blossoms in his attention and tutelage.
Arrangements had been made by her grandfather, to pair her off with Colonel Fitzwilliam, Darcy’s cousin, but will Darcy stand for it? How will Elizabeth take such arrangement? Will she choose Darcy or Colonel Fitzwilliam? And what does the dastardly Wickham do to further his sinister intentions?
Mostly presented in Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s points-of-view, this combination of troupes namely Elizabeth-is-not-a-Longbourne-Bennet with higher connections and considerable wealth, slow-burn between Darcy and Elizabeth, and the what-if that many readers would think of if Elizabeth was well-off and had better connections or a high station in London society.
It has everything a good variation ought to possess. The author’s detailed descriptions help the readers navigate the complex emotions of the characters, especially that of Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
The star deduction is due to the focus taken away from the romance between the beloved couple. This reader hoped for more exchanges between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet all throughout the novel. However, it cannot be denied that the author should be commended for the originality created because of the new characters, regardless of whether the focus was on the couple.
Darcy realizes early on his blunder having made rude statements towards Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton assembly and found himself admiring Elizabeth as the author clearly describes. He does not mince words when making a stand, towards Bingley, the latter’s sister and others he encounters in Hertfordshire. He is more vocally honest, which makes him more honorable and admirable.
Elizabeth is more controlled in speech and regulated in her emotions. More discerning and intelligent, well-educated, accomplished, and guided by the new character, her grandfather, who she respects above all because she blossoms in his attention and tutelage.
Arrangements had been made by her grandfather, to pair her off with Colonel Fitzwilliam, Darcy’s cousin, but will Darcy stand for it? How will Elizabeth take such arrangement? Will she choose Darcy or Colonel Fitzwilliam? And what does the dastardly Wickham do to further his sinister intentions?
Mostly presented in Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s points-of-view, this combination of troupes namely Elizabeth-is-not-a-Longbourne-Bennet with higher connections and considerable wealth, slow-burn between Darcy and Elizabeth, and the what-if that many readers would think of if Elizabeth was well-off and had better connections or a high station in London society.
It has everything a good variation ought to possess. The author’s detailed descriptions help the readers navigate the complex emotions of the characters, especially that of Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
The star deduction is due to the focus taken away from the romance between the beloved couple. This reader hoped for more exchanges between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet all throughout the novel. However, it cannot be denied that the author should be commended for the originality created because of the new characters, regardless of whether the focus was on the couple.
April 13, 2026
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘An Heiress in Hertfordshire: A Pride & Prejudice Collection’ series. All books are standalone reads and can be read in any order. Elizabeth’s grandfather has arranged her future; unfortunately for him, he neglected to consult her heart.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is not, in fact, a Bennet. Orphaned young, she has been raised under the watchful eye of her grandfather, known in Meryton as Mr Grant, but in truth the powerful Earl of Granfield. A lifelong strategist who has arranged matters for ministers and monarchs alike, his lordship believes he can secure his granddaughter’s happiness with one carefully constructed matrimonial design.
There is only one flaw in his plan, Elizabeth does not love the gentleman he has chosen.
Fitzwilliam Darcy never intended to interfere in the earl’s arrangement, yet from the moment he begins to understand Elizabeth’s quiet strength, her warmth, and the courage beneath her composure, walking away becomes far more difficult than honour would suggest. As Lord Granfield’s scheme unfolds, well-intended, perfectly respectable, and entirely misguided, Elizabeth and Darcy must decide whether duty will govern their futures, or whether they will dare to choose for themselves; because when love enters the equation, even the most brilliant arrangement may prove most unsuitable of all. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
P.S. Don’t forget to download the extended scene at the end. You won’t be disappointed.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘An Heiress in Hertfordshire: A Pride & Prejudice Collection’ series. All books are standalone reads and can be read in any order. Elizabeth’s grandfather has arranged her future; unfortunately for him, he neglected to consult her heart.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is not, in fact, a Bennet. Orphaned young, she has been raised under the watchful eye of her grandfather, known in Meryton as Mr Grant, but in truth the powerful Earl of Granfield. A lifelong strategist who has arranged matters for ministers and monarchs alike, his lordship believes he can secure his granddaughter’s happiness with one carefully constructed matrimonial design.
There is only one flaw in his plan, Elizabeth does not love the gentleman he has chosen.
Fitzwilliam Darcy never intended to interfere in the earl’s arrangement, yet from the moment he begins to understand Elizabeth’s quiet strength, her warmth, and the courage beneath her composure, walking away becomes far more difficult than honour would suggest. As Lord Granfield’s scheme unfolds, well-intended, perfectly respectable, and entirely misguided, Elizabeth and Darcy must decide whether duty will govern their futures, or whether they will dare to choose for themselves; because when love enters the equation, even the most brilliant arrangement may prove most unsuitable of all. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
P.S. Don’t forget to download the extended scene at the end. You won’t be disappointed.
April 9, 2026
This was a thoroughly enjoyable Pride and Prejudice variation with a fresh twist on Elizabeth’s background. Here, she is the orphaned granddaughter of an Earl—clever, wealthy, and still very much the Elizabeth we love—while most of Meryton assumes she is a poor Bennet relation. Her grandfather’s attempts to arrange her future set the central conflict in motion, especially when he pushes Colonel Fitzwilliam as a match.
Darcy begins with his familiar assembly misstep, but he quickly regrets it and spends the rest of the story proving himself. I loved how early and naturally Darcy and Elizabeth connect in this variation: no major misunderstandings, plenty of page time together, and a steady, mutual affection that grows despite the Earl’s interference. Darcy truly does the work here, and Elizabeth is sure of her feelings from the start.
The secondary characters add color—Wickham is wicked but witless, Caroline Bingley is delightfully unhinged, and Bingley’s lack of backbone is explored more deeply than in canon. Colonel Fitzwilliam behaves with maturity once he realizes Elizabeth’s heart lies elsewhere.
There are a few small inconsistencies around the Earl’s family background, but they don’t detract from the fun, romantic, low‑angst journey. Melissa Anne once again brings a unique perspective to Austen’s world, and the result is a warm, compelling story with a swoon‑worthy HEA.
I received an ARC and am voluntarily leaving this review. I highly recommend the book.
Darcy begins with his familiar assembly misstep, but he quickly regrets it and spends the rest of the story proving himself. I loved how early and naturally Darcy and Elizabeth connect in this variation: no major misunderstandings, plenty of page time together, and a steady, mutual affection that grows despite the Earl’s interference. Darcy truly does the work here, and Elizabeth is sure of her feelings from the start.
The secondary characters add color—Wickham is wicked but witless, Caroline Bingley is delightfully unhinged, and Bingley’s lack of backbone is explored more deeply than in canon. Colonel Fitzwilliam behaves with maturity once he realizes Elizabeth’s heart lies elsewhere.
There are a few small inconsistencies around the Earl’s family background, but they don’t detract from the fun, romantic, low‑angst journey. Melissa Anne once again brings a unique perspective to Austen’s world, and the result is a warm, compelling story with a swoon‑worthy HEA.
I received an ARC and am voluntarily leaving this review. I highly recommend the book.
April 4, 2026
Excellent and Compelling
Elizabeth, orphaned at a young age, has lived with her aunt and uncle Bennet since. That her grandfather is an Earl and travels extensively is largely unknown. The story opens as she reflects on the insult she received from Mr. Darcy during that evening’s assembly. She has some vague knowledge of him and his family’s trials over the summer from her grandfather’s letters. She follows her grandfather’s long-established guidance to consider carefully before giving in to anger and sinking Mr. Darcy’s own consequence after his horrible remarks.
The novel generally follows cannon until Jane and Elizbeth’s stay at Netherfield. Miss Bingley is even more of a trial for Darcy than usual, and she treats Eizabeth with almost open distain. Darcy comes to know that Elizabeth heard his insult and wants to apologize, but it isn’t until Elizabeth’s grandfather arrives and takes him to task for his insult that he realizes how hopeless his situation has become.
This story is well written, flows well, and is compelling at times. Darcy is in an awkward position with little hope of redemption. Collins, Lady Catherine, and Wickham all have their parts to play.
Melissa Anne has done an admirable job of crafting circumstances that put a new spin on one of our favorite stories. Highly recommended. I received an advanced reader copy.
Elizabeth, orphaned at a young age, has lived with her aunt and uncle Bennet since. That her grandfather is an Earl and travels extensively is largely unknown. The story opens as she reflects on the insult she received from Mr. Darcy during that evening’s assembly. She has some vague knowledge of him and his family’s trials over the summer from her grandfather’s letters. She follows her grandfather’s long-established guidance to consider carefully before giving in to anger and sinking Mr. Darcy’s own consequence after his horrible remarks.
The novel generally follows cannon until Jane and Elizbeth’s stay at Netherfield. Miss Bingley is even more of a trial for Darcy than usual, and she treats Eizabeth with almost open distain. Darcy comes to know that Elizabeth heard his insult and wants to apologize, but it isn’t until Elizabeth’s grandfather arrives and takes him to task for his insult that he realizes how hopeless his situation has become.
This story is well written, flows well, and is compelling at times. Darcy is in an awkward position with little hope of redemption. Collins, Lady Catherine, and Wickham all have their parts to play.
Melissa Anne has done an admirable job of crafting circumstances that put a new spin on one of our favorite stories. Highly recommended. I received an advanced reader copy.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I got this as an ARC reader and really enjoyed this variation! There was a realism to the character’s thought processes that was really enjoyable.
I enjoyed that Elizabeth was still a Bennet, even if not quite the Bennet we’re used to. It makes her living at Longbourn make sense without super convoluted reasoning. Although those can be fun too, it does make her presence more realistic.
I liked the way having a different adult in her life had not changed the essentials of Lizzy’s character but altered her choices ever so slightly - again this was very realistically done.
Darcy took the time to really KNOW this Elizabeth, and it made a lovely contrast to other characters who made so many assumptions about her, even well meaning ones.
And I won’t say too much but I LOVED the way she reacted to Darcy’s rival.
Seeing Wickham’s thought process was also super interesting, and although I did kind of want to see Collins’ storyline further, I enjoyed Lady Catherine’s role in this!
All in all, would recommend!
I enjoyed that Elizabeth was still a Bennet, even if not quite the Bennet we’re used to. It makes her living at Longbourn make sense without super convoluted reasoning. Although those can be fun too, it does make her presence more realistic.
I liked the way having a different adult in her life had not changed the essentials of Lizzy’s character but altered her choices ever so slightly - again this was very realistically done.
Darcy took the time to really KNOW this Elizabeth, and it made a lovely contrast to other characters who made so many assumptions about her, even well meaning ones.
And I won’t say too much but I LOVED the way she reacted to Darcy’s rival.
Seeing Wickham’s thought process was also super interesting, and although I did kind of want to see Collins’ storyline further, I enjoyed Lady Catherine’s role in this!
All in all, would recommend!
May 25, 2026
I've always found the premise of MelissaAnne's story to be right up my alley, especially its critical take on Mr. Bennet's laziness—I was really looking forward to this book. But when I actually started reading it, I found it hard to finish.
The plotline is something I enjoy, but the writing feels odd... annoying is the only word I can use. The characters' actions and dialogue seem detached from the story; they constantly feel like they're summarizing, analyzing, or reflecting on things, piling up flowery language over strange details. There are excessive adjectives and descriptive phrases for every character's movement. I'm not sure if you understand what I mean, but this story spells out everything the reader could possibly need to comprehend—reading it feels like doing a comprehension exercise, with an overwhelming sense of rigidity. I found it strange that the sentence structure "Not...but…" appeared so many times.
The plotline is something I enjoy, but the writing feels odd... annoying is the only word I can use. The characters' actions and dialogue seem detached from the story; they constantly feel like they're summarizing, analyzing, or reflecting on things, piling up flowery language over strange details. There are excessive adjectives and descriptive phrases for every character's movement. I'm not sure if you understand what I mean, but this story spells out everything the reader could possibly need to comprehend—reading it feels like doing a comprehension exercise, with an overwhelming sense of rigidity. I found it strange that the sentence structure "Not...but…" appeared so many times.
March 30, 2026
Can’t put down
Melissa Anne did it again! She always has unique view of the P&P characters. I enjoyed the progress of the courtship of Elizabeth and Darcy, despite the interference of her Grandfather and Miss Bingley’s machinations.
The author looks at the weekness of some of the characters, if stretched beyond how Jane Austen portrayed.
Charles Bingley in the Jane Austen manuscript is convinced to leave Hertfordshire then convinced of his error and returned. Melissa Anne portrays a Charles with no backbone who tries to be of strong character but fails over and over again. And his sister Caroline has lost her grip on reality. She lives in a world she orders.
With the interesting secondary characters and the enjoyable story, with lots of romance, this is a great read.
Melissa Anne did it again! She always has unique view of the P&P characters. I enjoyed the progress of the courtship of Elizabeth and Darcy, despite the interference of her Grandfather and Miss Bingley’s machinations.
The author looks at the weekness of some of the characters, if stretched beyond how Jane Austen portrayed.
Charles Bingley in the Jane Austen manuscript is convinced to leave Hertfordshire then convinced of his error and returned. Melissa Anne portrays a Charles with no backbone who tries to be of strong character but fails over and over again. And his sister Caroline has lost her grip on reality. She lives in a world she orders.
With the interesting secondary characters and the enjoyable story, with lots of romance, this is a great read.
April 8, 2026
I truly loved this story. Elizabeth is a Bennett, but with a different background than usual. She is an orphan who have lived with her uncle's family most of the time. Most people in Meryton have forgotten her background and believe her to be poor. She is not poor at all!
Darcy starts on quite stupid, but changes and they start to get to know each other rather well. This is a story with a clever, stubborn, rich and nice Elizabeth. Darcy soon comes along as understanding, patient and true gentleman who supports Elizabeth all along. Elizabeth's grandfather have a different idea of what is best for her, but that turns out to be a wrong path.
I also loved all the page-time Elizabeth and Darcy had in this story.
I got an ARC of this story and I am leaving this review freely and most willing. I totally recommend to read the whole story!
Darcy starts on quite stupid, but changes and they start to get to know each other rather well. This is a story with a clever, stubborn, rich and nice Elizabeth. Darcy soon comes along as understanding, patient and true gentleman who supports Elizabeth all along. Elizabeth's grandfather have a different idea of what is best for her, but that turns out to be a wrong path.
I also loved all the page-time Elizabeth and Darcy had in this story.
I got an ARC of this story and I am leaving this review freely and most willing. I totally recommend to read the whole story!
Review of advance copy received from Author
I received an ARC copy of this story, along with following it on Substack as a WIP. The book it absolutely wonderful. More excellent than a bowl full of exemplary potatoes! Once you read it you will want to buy it.
It begins rather typically, Darcy insults Elizabeth, not knowing she heard him. He promptly becomes entranced. From there it varies from canon. Elizabeth is the granddaughter of an earl, but no one seems aware (except herself).
From there poor Darcy must submit to the decrees of her grandfather no matter the personal pain.
The story includes an especially wicked, yet witless Wickham. A delusional Lady Catherine. Some twists with Anne and the Colonel. (Not a spoiler) And eventually a romantic swoon worthy HEA.
It begins rather typically, Darcy insults Elizabeth, not knowing she heard him. He promptly becomes entranced. From there it varies from canon. Elizabeth is the granddaughter of an earl, but no one seems aware (except herself).
From there poor Darcy must submit to the decrees of her grandfather no matter the personal pain.
The story includes an especially wicked, yet witless Wickham. A delusional Lady Catherine. Some twists with Anne and the Colonel. (Not a spoiler) And eventually a romantic swoon worthy HEA.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Great story. Elizabeth is a Bennet, just not to Fanny and Thomas. She was the child of the brother of Thomas. Sadly, her parents died and her grandfather makes sure the Bennet's take care of her. Her grandfather also tries to set her up with someone. LOL, and of course we know how Elizabeth is. Not going to work out, as her grandfather desires.
We still have a bad Wickham and a persistent Lady C. Oh and don't forget meddlesome Caroline. I received an arc and voluntarily leaving a review. Great love story as all I have read of Melissa Anne's.
We still have a bad Wickham and a persistent Lady C. Oh and don't forget meddlesome Caroline. I received an arc and voluntarily leaving a review. Great love story as all I have read of Melissa Anne's.
Review of advance copy received from Author
THE book for low-angst-lovers
I got a copy in advance and the story reminded me of a pond with a rather quiet surface. There were some ripples because of a gust of wind now and then and some water creatures appeared which made you laugh or unsettled your nerves a bit, but all in all a pleasant, tranquil and nerves-sparing tale.
The book is diligently written – as always with this authoress – and so no shocking or even terrifying creatures there – I am a low-angst lover!
I got a copy in advance and the story reminded me of a pond with a rather quiet surface. There were some ripples because of a gust of wind now and then and some water creatures appeared which made you laugh or unsettled your nerves a bit, but all in all a pleasant, tranquil and nerves-sparing tale.
The book is diligently written – as always with this authoress – and so no shocking or even terrifying creatures there – I am a low-angst lover!
April 8, 2026
Although this story was a clean romance and had nothing at all objectionable in it, I was hard pressed to keep an interest in the contents of the book. I did enjoy the carriage chase and the ending where Miss Bingley was put in her place, but the rest of the story had too much minutiae of details and dialogue. I received an ARC copy and this is my review.
April 9, 2026
3.5⭐️
A creditable addition to the ranks of P&P variations. I liked the courtship and the small amount of intrigue presented by Wickham. As usual Caroline was over the top blind to all things propriety and had her head up in the clouds of delusion. A great Lizzy is not a Bennet but still a Bennet trope.
A creditable addition to the ranks of P&P variations. I liked the courtship and the small amount of intrigue presented by Wickham. As usual Caroline was over the top blind to all things propriety and had her head up in the clouds of delusion. A great Lizzy is not a Bennet but still a Bennet trope.
April 10, 2026
A heartwarming love develops between Elizabeth and Darcy despite her grandfather's wish that she marry Colonel Fitzwilliam. A well-written original story that has enough angst, villains, and love to keep the reader turning the pages nonstop. This story will find a place in your heart and in your library. Highly recommend this eBook to every JAFF fan.
Review of advance copy received from Author
An interesting deviation from canon, where Elizabeth is not a Longbourn Bennet, but has been reared there. I liked her mind and independence, and I enjoyed all her interactions with Mr. Darcy. Interesting original characters and unexpected resolutions to some of the usual conundrums.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I am a big fan of Melissa Anne, and this book is now one of my favorites! She blends new characters seamlessly with the well established Pride and Prejudice characters to craft an exciting and thought-provoking book that I couldn't put down. Well done, Melissa Anne!
March 30, 2026
Wonderful New Story
I love P&P variations that offer a truly new view instead of the old tired story lines. I highly recommend this book because it is fresh, well written, and hard to put down. Enjoyed.
I love P&P variations that offer a truly new view instead of the old tired story lines. I highly recommend this book because it is fresh, well written, and hard to put down. Enjoyed.
March 31, 2026
Loved it!
Plenty of romance and wit, spiced up with a little danger from Wickham, and all our favorite characters muddling the plot when they are able. Elizabeth is a cousin with a non-canon noble grandparent, which stirs things up a little more. Very nice writing and dialogue.
Plenty of romance and wit, spiced up with a little danger from Wickham, and all our favorite characters muddling the plot when they are able. Elizabeth is a cousin with a non-canon noble grandparent, which stirs things up a little more. Very nice writing and dialogue.
April 7, 2026
😍
This was such a good variation. Elizabeth is definitely a Bennet… just not belonging to Thomas and Frances. She is a cousin. As the cousin, she has a different lineage that provides such a fun chain of events. The epilogue was beautifully written!
This was such a good variation. Elizabeth is definitely a Bennet… just not belonging to Thomas and Frances. She is a cousin. As the cousin, she has a different lineage that provides such a fun chain of events. The epilogue was beautifully written!
April 10, 2026
Another great tale of literatures most famous couple. Love the Elizabeth is not a Bennet trope.
And anytime Caroline Bingley gets whatfor top marks from this reader.
But no spoilers for the rest of the cast.
And anytime Caroline Bingley gets whatfor top marks from this reader.
But no spoilers for the rest of the cast.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Well written and entertaining read. Really enjoy how the storyline was developed. I follow this author who always writes enjoyable books.
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