Isla Rhys has lost her flat, her fiancé, and her faith in the possessive apostrophe—all in the span of twelve minutes.
When her Oxford academic fiancé dumps her via a text message that reads "Your to intense," Isla doesn't just mourn the relationship; she mourns the grammar. Needing an escape where syntax doesn't matter, she flees to her cousin’s chaotic home in Bracken Cove, Maine.
Her plan? Write her thesis, avoid human interaction, and maybe start a high-brow book club to bring some culture to the locals.
But Bracken Cove isn't the quiet refuge she expected. It’s a town run by a PTA president who weaponizes spreadsheets, a four-year-old who believes rocks have feelings, and Frank Hollis—a rugged, flannel-wearing mechanic who fixes boats and seemingly hates conversation.
Isla is ready to write Frank off as a grunt, until she discovers anonymous notes scribbled in the margins of the town’s library books. Brilliant, poetic, heartbreaking notes. As she falls for the mind of the mystery writer, she finds herself clashing with the mechanic who keeps challenging her worldview.
When the truth about the notes comes out, Isla has to Does she want the perfect life she thought she wrote for herself, or the messy, "ungrammatical" love she found in the margins?
The Bracken Cove Book Club by Livia Huntington -Jones. This was definitely a different kind of book than I usually read. I enjoyed it immensely! Much larger words than I usually use. But it was interesting how every chapter started with a definition and the way the word was used. The story and characters were wonderful!
Charming super light romance with laugh out loud moments (loved the new words that introduced each chapter once I got used to them). Downright funny in spots, not too much of anything else. The writing was terrific and fun, but there was no real obstacle to overcome, at least one that anyone took seriously. Also, the format of the chapter heads (words, moods, etc) should have been italics, had a space or something, anything to differentiate from the beginning of the real chapter.
Adored how each chapter began with a new term, definition, and use in a sentence. The attention to detail with the language was exceptional, without feeling pretentious. A great novella.
Refreshing a wonderful change from the usual storyline.
I really enjoyed the syntax of this story. Sophie is such a fun element, but I loved the "word of the day" at the beginning of each chapter. Truly delightfully refreshing!
The highly articulated, melodramatic descriptions cracked me up! Wholesome, fun, perfectly paced with a lot of depth for such a short read. The best 100 page book I’ve read so far.
When I tell you that I smiled throughout most of the book and my feet kept kicking — this book was absolutely everything I needed it to be. (I could have just highlighted the entire book.)
I feel like it might be very niche, though. If you are a literature or grammar enthusiast, you’ll love it.
This is about an Oxford literature professor who returns to the States after an eviction and a breakup. She starts a book club in a small town (Syntax Society — I’m giggling!!) and meets a mysterious mechanic who is perhaps more intellectual than he lets on. My husband is a mechanic, who is also intelligent, so this just hit all of the right feels for me.
This was quick, cute and actually kinda funny. I loved Isla's nerdy character.
With this being only 108 Kindle-Pages; there wasn't a lot fleshed out, but I just went with the flow and enjoyed the nerdy banter and learned some new words. No harm, no foul.
It took running this book through an AI detector ONE time to determine that there is an extremely high probability that this was primarily written by AI. But I didn't need the detector to tell me that, because I was noticing the patterns on my own very quickly. Some evidence to prove this theory:
1. Cleverness Density. There is a certain "cleverness" ratio that exists within the dialogue of this story that is distinctly un-human. This goes beyond speaking patterns being unrealistic for "real" people (which is a common occurrence in any kind of book, including human written ones.) This is something entirely different. When you read a well-written book that a human has spent time crafting, chances are that you will come across one or two really beautiful, clever, or "quotable" lines on every page. However, in books written or assisted by AI, you will often see a different pattern emerge. In these stories, every other line is "quirky" or "witty" or "clever" or "quoteable" and metaphors abound constantly. One could argue that this achieves the exact opposite of the intent because, if every line is quotable, then none of it is notable. The first 2 pages of this book contain such examples of this overly-polished style as: “faith in the contraction apostrophe” “naivety packing its bags and leaving via the fire escape” “nesting behavior for a very anxious rodent” “unicyclist with a fern” “quote something soothing from Rilke”
If only one or two of these examples had existed within these first couple pages, it would have been no cause for concern. However, when used so closely together, they become extremely suspect. The reality is that humans don't write this way. We write some sentences that are strictly functional, not every line we write will be poetic. And we often save our "best" sentences until we feel that they have been emotionally earned. AI does not do the same. Having read about 40% of the book, I can attest that this pattern certainly continued past the first pages.
2. Sentence Rhythm. AI has a very distinct way of writing what it believes will pack an "emotional punch". The structure tends to look something like this: * Medium descriptive sentence * One word emotional fragment * Longer explanatory sentence * Shorter emotional declaration
This is what writers colloquially call "stacking." And, when done only a few times in a book, it does not raise suspicion and can be very effective. However, AI tends to use this method CONSTANTLY as an attempt to imitate the human "voice." But, when done constantly, it robs the device of any real "punchiness" or emotional gravity. A prime example of this book's usage of this is also in the first 2 pages when it reads: "I sat there, holding the receiver. Homeless. I was thirty years old… I needed Alexander. Alexander Sterling. My fiancé."
Another example of a repetitive pattern seen in AI and also in this book is a stacking device that follows the same pattern every. time. It tends to follow the rule of threes, naming 2 things that something ISN'T before saying what it IS. The pattern starts to look like this: *Vague Statement or Observation *It wasn't ______ *It wasn't ______ *It was ______
In this book, the "author" uses this device CONSTANTLY. As I've stated, human authors DO use this method, but it tends to be sparingly and done to deliver an emotional revelation of some kind whereas AI writing uses it more often than not. Once again, here is an example I found from the first two pages: "I opened the message. It wasn’t a quote from Rilke. It wasn’t an offer of housing. It read:"
3. Emotionally Void. Throughout this book, I kept finding myself feeling that none of the characters were reacting appropriately to events. While the descriptions of the events or the emotions were technically "correct," they did not feel lived-in or real in any tangible way. When the main character, Isla, is unceremoniously evicted from her apartment and broken up with within the same 5 minutes, her reaction is described in a way that feels generic and empty. We are only told that she is distraught, but her actions and her dialogue do not match this whatsoever. It's hard to connect with the characters because, at every chance, the tension of a scene is broken with an overly clever metaphor or joke. There is no raw feeling, no discomfort, no specificity. Instead every moment that could result in a real emotion is structured as such:
Set up -> Clever Line -> Relief.
You have no chance to FEEL for the characters enough to connect with them, because the characters themselves are not feeling. Because, say it with me, AI doesn't have feelings.
4. Dialogue. The dialogue in this story is maybe the biggest tell that this was not written by a real person (at least not completely.) The people in this story do not talk to each other in a way that is remotely natural. No one ever interrupts, no one ever asks for clarifications, and everyone ALWAYS understands the ultra-specific references made by the main character. There is no natural cadence to the speech in this story, and worst of all, the characters are constantly saying things that make absolutely no sense with no explanation ever provided. I can think of 2 particularly egregious examples of this off the top of my head. The second of which was the final straw that caused me to DNF this awful, awful book.
* At one point, Tom is talking to Isla and says that his wife, Mave, is going to serve her pasta that she will try to convince her is "politically-motivated." I have pondered this line for a week now and I am no closer to figuring out what he could possibly mean by that. It sounds vaguely clever and yet is completely and utterly meaningless. There is just no way a human wrote that. * The final straw. The straw that broke the camels back if you will. There is a moment when Isla is looking at plane tickets to fly back to Europe and Sophie (the four-year-old) is standing next to her and comments on how Isla can't leave. Now, first of all, I've worked with four year olds. I don't think any four year old that I've ever met would be able to discern what an airline website is. But that's neither here nor there, because then it gets worse. Sophie says something about wanting Isla to perform spells on her rocks to heal them or something (it's convoluted). And Isla says, "I work in syntax, not sorcery." To which Sophie (THE FOUR-YEAR-OLD) responds, "Same thing! Daddy says that spelling is called spelling because it's a spell. You create as you write." Or something very close to that. So you mean to tell me that this child knew not only what the words "syntax" and "sorcery" meant, but also knew the comparison between the two and the insinuation that the PhD level grammarian was commenting on? Please get out of my face. It is so comically ridiculous that I can't bring myself to talk about it anymore.
Anyway, in closing, I don't believe that this book is real. I think a computer wrote it, and I don't think we should be complimenting a computer for its ability to pretend to be human. Also, the book is just objectively not good. The end.
Short, free book on Apple. Since I like reading, English, and grammar I enjoyed the storyline. Fun characters and town. And of course the community coming together was perfect
A book above grammar, definitions, and words you have to take time to understand does not make a good romance novel. The story didn't really develop either. When I read a romance novel, I want passion and to not have to think about each word. I want to be able feel. This supposedly is a comedy too and I never once laughed. Definitely a book I wish I had skipped.
This was charming little romance. I liked the format it was written in. Each chapter starts with a word, followed by it's definition then used in a sentence and finally the story continues. I also laughed out loud at time and heart warming moments. I really liked this one!
Cute story but 75% thru, I still felt like this was the middle of a series of short stories and I could not get up to speed. Maybe just different writing style?
Not at all what I expected, but just fabulous. I really loved the character's progression through the book. (And I loved her interpreting for the rocks and using old English to 'spell' them better,)