Gets off to a great start. Really gripping and makes you want to read on and find out exactly what kind of mess Layla is caught up in.
It's very easy reading, was free, and for a romance, it actually does have a decent plot behind the obvious. Those are the good points, now the stuff I had issues with:
I felt like some of it fell into caricature (for example, the smack addicted mother and the situation with Layla's back - I mean really, wtf? Who would write that on their own back, let alone a child's, ditto to the tattoo "artist" who did it). And other bits like Ray just moving in. And the father in prison.
Plus Layla being far too young for Ben, and he her doctor. Even though he's a good guy, I felt like he was a bit of a douche too. There was a bit of an ick factor.
I also didn't like him getting blind drunk on their first date - I couldn't buy that for a second. I could see Layla being nervous and drinking too much as a young girl, but not a supposedly sophisticated doctor who knows full well he is meant to be driving. It added nothing to the plot, either, so I didn't see the point of that. Maybe it was to show Ben is flawed. Well, we already know that, he's gawping at a 17 year olds boobs during a medical examination. Not exactly the stuff of fantasies.
I have been doing a lot of travelling this week and finally going through the many freebie books I have downloaded. Many I read a chapter of and just deleted. This I read in a day and it did keep me entertained, so hopefully my ragging doesn't put anyone off. It has issues, but as a romance, if you enjoy that genre, I would recommend this one as something free or cheap to download.