3 ✨and I have so many thoughts that, to be honest, are more confused than anything else. The Sword of Hadrian attempted to reach for the classic king/prince-sorcery fantasy but, to me, fell short in its execution. Enjoy this very confused review:
The early pages set the tone for how confused I would be overall. We’re jumping into Shaski’s world, and the prologue itself feels so frustratingly confusing. Ignoring all the confusion at the start, we see Shaski being her friend Celia’s personal helper, even though she was once a lady of the court. In an attempt to move the plot forward while also trying to explain the background, there are some flashbacks and plot details, but they fell short for me. These elements were never properly incorporated into the story, making the whole thing feel disjointed, jumping from chapter to chapter with no clear connection whatsoever.
Then there were the characters. I wanted to care about Shaski and Celia, but I couldn’t.
All of our characters, and I don’t take this lightly, were lacking depth, which made it incredibly difficult for me to connect with them. They felt incredibly shallow, and I had trouble connecting with them. The biggest red flag for me was how Shaski and Celia interacted with the prince. Shaski waits until the penultimate moment to (somewhat) reveal what’s really going on, and I just couldn’t understand why. The entire time, I was left wondering why such an obvious point was hidden for so long, if the prince was so taken with her that he would do anything for her as we claim every 4 paragraphs, and it only made me feel more disconnected from the characters.
This lack of depth in the characters made the whole story feel flat, especially when it came to the relationship between Shaski and Celia. They pretend to be the closest of friends while clearly harboring jealousy toward each other. This sort of miscommunication trope is something I dislike! It felt like the book tried to include multiple tropes without ensuring they were cohesive, and that made it incredibly hard to read.
Another thing I want to highlight, certain chapters that were WAY TOO HEAVY, with important deaths just thrown our way like no big deal and with no time to process them.
And then the end??? No explanations needed? All is well, even though we spent the entirety of the book with the characters hiding secrets, everything just magically resolves itself with no real explanation. Suddenly, everything is perfect, and the tension that had been building up is just gone. There’s no real confrontation for the characters' actions, and no acknowledgment of the lies or the things left unsaid. It felt rushed and unsatisfying, like the author just wanted to wrap things up.
In general, everything mentioned above detracted from what I initially thought would have been a very interesting plot! Not gonna lie, this entire book threw me off, and it was not my cup of tea.
Thank you to NetGalley and the Publisher for the ARC in exchange for a review.