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On timeline: during The Morning Star, CONFLICT
Spoilers for: enormous spoilers for The Morning Star
Warnings: none to speak of
This is actually a segment of The Morning Star that I didn't end up using. For some reason, in the outline, I had it switching to Jeremy's point of view long enough to get him out of the hospital, and I wrote it that way before realizing that that was just dumb. None of the rest of the book was done from Jeremy's point of view, after all. Plus, if I wrote that part from Simon's point of view, it would actually be better.
And so I rewrote it. I was right. It was better from Simon's point of view, and that's what's in The Morning Star right now. However, I kept the discarded bit, because I liked parts of it.
Please note that the events are in a slightly different order than they are in The Morning Star, but that does not make them any less true.
1000 words
Spoilers for: enormous spoilers for The Morning Star
Warnings: none to speak of
This is actually a segment of The Morning Star that I didn't end up using. For some reason, in the outline, I had it switching to Jeremy's point of view long enough to get him out of the hospital, and I wrote it that way before realizing that that was just dumb. None of the rest of the book was done from Jeremy's point of view, after all. Plus, if I wrote that part from Simon's point of view, it would actually be better.
And so I rewrote it. I was right. It was better from Simon's point of view, and that's what's in The Morning Star right now. However, I kept the discarded bit, because I liked parts of it.
Please note that the events are in a slightly different order than they are in The Morning Star, but that does not make them any less true.
1000 words
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M. Chandler
52 books220 followersM. Chandler is a lady of a certain age, currently wandering around the Seattle area. Whenever she manages to make her way home, she writes action-oriented fiction that tends to be heavy on the gay themes.
She has a website with lots of free fiction, a Facebook fan page, and, God help us, a Twitter.
She has a website with lots of free fiction, a Facebook fan page, and, God help us, a Twitter.
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March 3, 2022
The hospital scene from The Morning Star from Jeremy POV. I enjoyed this a lot. Plus we got to “meet” Annabelle!
November 11, 2017
Loved this look at what Jeremy went through, breaking out of the hospital, right under Simon's nose.
November 7, 2024
Interesting POV change.
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