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Veil of Ash
She imprinted on five guardians who were never meant to have a mate.
Brielle Breslin spent twenty-one years believing she was human—until her magic ignited and branded her a monster.
Dragged into the unknown realm of Bryxton, she learns the she is a Soul Elemental. A Keystone. The rarest power in a world built on balance.
And somehow, impossibly, she has bonded to the Vestra—five lethal guardians sworn to protect their realm… and bound by prophecy to remain unbroken by a mate’s allure.
Two of them feel the imprint and are prepared to tear the world apart to keep her safe.
Three of them feel it—and treat her like a threat that must be contained.
Because the prophecy was their hearts would beat, but never feel. A mate was never part of their fate. If the Council discovers the bond, Brielle won’t survive the interrogation. If the prophecy has been altered, the consequences won’t stop with her.
Now she must train in secret, master powers she barely understands, and learn to shield her mind from those who would tear it apart—all while living under the same roof as the men divided over whether she is their salvation… or the beginning of their ruin.
In Bryxton, prophecy is law.
And Brielle may be the one thing they were never meant to have.
What to expect in Veil of Ash:
Slow-Burn Why Choose Romance (MFMMMMM)Fated Mates & Forced ProximityA "Split" Harem Dynamic (2 protectors vs. 3 enemies)Shadow & Elemental MagicPowerful, Morally Gray GuardiansA "Touch Her and Die" ObsessionEpic World-Building & Political IntrigueVeil of Ash is the first book in a high-stakes why-choose romantasy series featuring fated mates, political tension, elemental magic, monsters beyond the wards, and a slow-burn romance where devotion must be earned. It is intended for readers 18+ due to mature themes.
Brielle Breslin spent twenty-one years believing she was human—until her magic ignited and branded her a monster.
Dragged into the unknown realm of Bryxton, she learns the she is a Soul Elemental. A Keystone. The rarest power in a world built on balance.
And somehow, impossibly, she has bonded to the Vestra—five lethal guardians sworn to protect their realm… and bound by prophecy to remain unbroken by a mate’s allure.
Two of them feel the imprint and are prepared to tear the world apart to keep her safe.
Three of them feel it—and treat her like a threat that must be contained.
Because the prophecy was their hearts would beat, but never feel. A mate was never part of their fate. If the Council discovers the bond, Brielle won’t survive the interrogation. If the prophecy has been altered, the consequences won’t stop with her.
Now she must train in secret, master powers she barely understands, and learn to shield her mind from those who would tear it apart—all while living under the same roof as the men divided over whether she is their salvation… or the beginning of their ruin.
In Bryxton, prophecy is law.
And Brielle may be the one thing they were never meant to have.
What to expect in Veil of Ash:
Slow-Burn Why Choose Romance (MFMMMMM)Fated Mates & Forced ProximityA "Split" Harem Dynamic (2 protectors vs. 3 enemies)Shadow & Elemental MagicPowerful, Morally Gray GuardiansA "Touch Her and Die" ObsessionEpic World-Building & Political IntrigueVeil of Ash is the first book in a high-stakes why-choose romantasy series featuring fated mates, political tension, elemental magic, monsters beyond the wards, and a slow-burn romance where devotion must be earned. It is intended for readers 18+ due to mature themes.
579 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 12, 2026
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May 12, 2026
**Completed**
This book had the potential to be so good; instead, we're left with a FMC who drinks tea, soaks and allows everyone around her to control her, take advantage of her and decide everything about her.
She is weak, passive and unable to stand up for herself.
I have no idea why authors choose to write a story that contains a character that has been abused, tortured and defiled, yet the character suffers zero ill effects from that abuse. FMC allows everyone to touch her all the time, but says at the start that she hates being touched.
I wish this book had more action or hell, even more scenes that didn't involve food, tea, or soaking.
In my opinion, this shouldn't even be called a fantasy book: the world that the characters live in is too much like Earth.
And I can predict that the FMC will forgive Lochlan without any apology or grovel on his behalf. He is an asshole and so mean to her and SHE DOESN'T CARE. She is like a wounded puppy, constantly going to find him and talk to him even though she knows he will be cruel to her.
The timeline/pacing was way off as well. A lot of things didn't make sense in terms of the story.
Maybe one day we'll get an FMC who is strong, means what she says and chooses to fight against controlling and abusive mates. But alas, this isn't that story.
Dumbass nicknames:
Bri, Witchling, spitfire, little jailbird, my girl, bondmate, my dear, dear, little red, red, defunt, trouble, baby.
9% in
And of course, the FMC meets three of her mates and gets assigned a nickname. I mean, why help her reclaim her identity after a year of torture?
I'm so sick and tired of authors that write abused people and don't think about how they would react to the world around them. And that extends to the love interests to the abused. FMC was HEAVILY abused for a long time and yet EVERYONE touches her, puts their lips on her ears, grabs her and she only flinches ONCE.
The way she is acting and talking it's almost like none of that abuse happened.
At this point, some of the plot isn't making sense. People mentioned that her magic set off an alarm only a couple days ago, yet her first display of power was over a year ago. Why did no one come then? Will we get an answer to that question?
20% in -
Everyone keeps touching her. She's acquired more nicknames which she doesn't push back against.
One of her mates is a straight up asshole, and she's too weak to go against him.
In fact, that is her whole personality: weak, meek and defeated.
Her mates are hiding things from her, keeping literal chains on her but keep telling her that she can ask anything and she is free to go.
The FMC is written in such a way that she is just existing, no actual presence in this new life or willing to make herself known. She is allowing everyone to dictate everything about her to her.
76% in -
This entire book has been one large lore dump. Nothing in the plot has been advancing. All we read about is shielding and bonds.
FMC complains all the time about having lack of control as the MMC's control every ounce of her being and she NEVER EVER fights back.
Three of the MMC's hate her and everything that she stands for, yet she still talks to them, is nice to them and makes herself vulnerable to them. They are always around other women and she gets hurt all the time and they don't care.
At this point, I've started to skim the book because I just can't handle any more lore.
This book had the potential to be so good; instead, we're left with a FMC who drinks tea, soaks and allows everyone around her to control her, take advantage of her and decide everything about her.
She is weak, passive and unable to stand up for herself.
I have no idea why authors choose to write a story that contains a character that has been abused, tortured and defiled, yet the character suffers zero ill effects from that abuse. FMC allows everyone to touch her all the time, but says at the start that she hates being touched.
I wish this book had more action or hell, even more scenes that didn't involve food, tea, or soaking.
In my opinion, this shouldn't even be called a fantasy book: the world that the characters live in is too much like Earth.
And I can predict that the FMC will forgive Lochlan without any apology or grovel on his behalf. He is an asshole and so mean to her and SHE DOESN'T CARE. She is like a wounded puppy, constantly going to find him and talk to him even though she knows he will be cruel to her.
The timeline/pacing was way off as well. A lot of things didn't make sense in terms of the story.
Maybe one day we'll get an FMC who is strong, means what she says and chooses to fight against controlling and abusive mates. But alas, this isn't that story.
Dumbass nicknames:
Bri, Witchling, spitfire, little jailbird, my girl, bondmate, my dear, dear, little red, red, defunt, trouble, baby.
9% in
And of course, the FMC meets three of her mates and gets assigned a nickname. I mean, why help her reclaim her identity after a year of torture?
I'm so sick and tired of authors that write abused people and don't think about how they would react to the world around them. And that extends to the love interests to the abused. FMC was HEAVILY abused for a long time and yet EVERYONE touches her, puts their lips on her ears, grabs her and she only flinches ONCE.
The way she is acting and talking it's almost like none of that abuse happened.
At this point, some of the plot isn't making sense. People mentioned that her magic set off an alarm only a couple days ago, yet her first display of power was over a year ago. Why did no one come then? Will we get an answer to that question?
20% in -
Everyone keeps touching her. She's acquired more nicknames which she doesn't push back against.
One of her mates is a straight up asshole, and she's too weak to go against him.
In fact, that is her whole personality: weak, meek and defeated.
Her mates are hiding things from her, keeping literal chains on her but keep telling her that she can ask anything and she is free to go.
The FMC is written in such a way that she is just existing, no actual presence in this new life or willing to make herself known. She is allowing everyone to dictate everything about her to her.
76% in -
This entire book has been one large lore dump. Nothing in the plot has been advancing. All we read about is shielding and bonds.
FMC complains all the time about having lack of control as the MMC's control every ounce of her being and she NEVER EVER fights back.
Three of the MMC's hate her and everything that she stands for, yet she still talks to them, is nice to them and makes herself vulnerable to them. They are always around other women and she gets hurt all the time and they don't care.
At this point, I've started to skim the book because I just can't handle any more lore.
May 13, 2026
My honest opinion of Veil of Ash…is that I’m dying for the next book…I know I just finished but I need more!! Absolutely loved this storyline, great world building, great character arcs, there’s so many tropes in this one!! The slow burn that absolutely burns!! I can’t wait to see what happens next for Bri, I don’t want to spoil anything but I will say that the ending had my jaw drop to the floor and had me screaming!!
July 9, 2026
Not bad! Writing was dodgy at times (why were so many words/phrases crossed out? Is this fanfiction?), but overall I had fun and was entertained for my plane ride. Crazy cliffhanger, I’ll probably continue the series if I remember!
May 21, 2026
I hope Fallon sees my review and makes me an ARC reader for the second book of this series. Because I think I'm going to sleep until February 2027 and wake up to get it.
In this book we follow Brielle who is rescued from prison by a group of Elementals. She is to live with them to acclimate to the new world because apparently she is an Elemental too. The guys don't trust her not only because she seems to not be able to access her powers but also because she is their mate. But that's impossible because there is a prophecy that says that they will never get a mate.
So... this is the best reverse harem/why choose book I've read in MONTHS. If you follow me here or on tiktok you know I read tons of why choose books because it's my favorite genre. And that is the reason that I feel like there aren't any good ones left for me to read!
But, oh boy, this book....
Plot: Excellent balance between romance and action. Amazing pacing. I was watching the pages turning, getting me closer to the end and I DIDN'T WANT IT TO END.
Worldbuilding: Great! Extremely thought out and I instantly love an author that has created something structured and has spent time thinking details and stitching everything together.
FMC: YES! I LOVED HER!
MMCs: AMAZING. NEED MORE.
Side characters: Nothing crazy but still supportive and well written.
Villains: Need some more. I feel like this book is like a prologue to a great universe and a beautiful story, so we don't get to see a villain here and hope to meet them in the next book.
Overall: Yes! Please read ASAP! Fallon if you see this review please marry me and make me your ARC reader!
In this book we follow Brielle who is rescued from prison by a group of Elementals. She is to live with them to acclimate to the new world because apparently she is an Elemental too. The guys don't trust her not only because she seems to not be able to access her powers but also because she is their mate. But that's impossible because there is a prophecy that says that they will never get a mate.
So... this is the best reverse harem/why choose book I've read in MONTHS. If you follow me here or on tiktok you know I read tons of why choose books because it's my favorite genre. And that is the reason that I feel like there aren't any good ones left for me to read!
But, oh boy, this book....
Plot: Excellent balance between romance and action. Amazing pacing. I was watching the pages turning, getting me closer to the end and I DIDN'T WANT IT TO END.
Worldbuilding: Great! Extremely thought out and I instantly love an author that has created something structured and has spent time thinking details and stitching everything together.
FMC: YES! I LOVED HER!
MMCs: AMAZING. NEED MORE.
Side characters: Nothing crazy but still supportive and well written.
Villains: Need some more. I feel like this book is like a prologue to a great universe and a beautiful story, so we don't get to see a villain here and hope to meet them in the next book.
Overall: Yes! Please read ASAP! Fallon if you see this review please marry me and make me your ARC reader!
May 27, 2026
DNF 70%
This book had so much potential, but I felt like I was on a constant loop of shielding, soaking and choking down lore. It’s not going anywhere, and I’m bored AF. Disappointing.
This book had so much potential, but I felt like I was on a constant loop of shielding, soaking and choking down lore. It’s not going anywhere, and I’m bored AF. Disappointing.
July 23, 2026
5 🌟
I genuinely could NOT put this down. The world! The characters! The chemistry! The angst!!!!!!
AND THE SEQUEL NOT BEING OUT HAS ME LITERALLY PULLING OUT MY HAIR OMG?????
This book managed to do the tropes right without cringing me out. These felt like actual adult characters and not 18 year olds which has me grateful.
Some people might think there was too much ambiance or day to day life but I loved that. I think the pacing was perfect and I’m just upset that it ended.
Genuinely amazing. Not for everybody so please check trigger warnings!! But WOWOWOW cannot wait to read the next one.
I genuinely could NOT put this down. The world! The characters! The chemistry! The angst!!!!!!
AND THE SEQUEL NOT BEING OUT HAS ME LITERALLY PULLING OUT MY HAIR OMG?????
This book managed to do the tropes right without cringing me out. These felt like actual adult characters and not 18 year olds which has me grateful.
Some people might think there was too much ambiance or day to day life but I loved that. I think the pacing was perfect and I’m just upset that it ended.
Genuinely amazing. Not for everybody so please check trigger warnings!! But WOWOWOW cannot wait to read the next one.
June 4, 2026
This unfortunately fell very flat for me, which sucks because I was super excited to read this.
This felt very long and at the same time nothing really happened. It was the same things every chapter and it felt like a massive lore dump that just never got developed. It was the fmc drinking tea, soaking in a hot spring, “practicing” her powers, and getting walked on by the men in her life.
I also got really tired of the fmc just being the biggest doormat to ever doormat. I needed her to get a grip and grow a backbone.
This felt very long and at the same time nothing really happened. It was the same things every chapter and it felt like a massive lore dump that just never got developed. It was the fmc drinking tea, soaking in a hot spring, “practicing” her powers, and getting walked on by the men in her life.
I also got really tired of the fmc just being the biggest doormat to ever doormat. I needed her to get a grip and grow a backbone.
May 27, 2026
I seriously could’ve read 500 more pages of this book. it was THAT good. ✨
June 8, 2026
I guess I was expecting more than just drinking tea, soaking, and learning mental shielding in 579 pages. This book draagggeedddd, and some moments were just very confusing due to dialogue feeling clunky and stilted.
We are definitely missing something here cause, what about Everett's message? Are we ever going to find out what it is?
And it's very annoying when an MC that has a traumatic background suddenly gets over their trauma very quickly. I'm so tired of reading books like this when, in reality, people don't get over their past within a couple of chapters and only use the verbal defensiveness to avoid said trauma. Having verbal sparring matches is a defensive strategy, but I feel people just claim their character to have trauma just for them to have an attitude and talk back. And for Brielle, she is so insistent on having her own autonomy after being abused while in prison for nearly a year, but lets these guys dictate her life. I get it, she's been through a lot, but come. On! I do not care who you are, fated mates or not. If you do not feel comfortable with people touching you, you stop it and set boundaries.
Do something other than soak and drink tea all day!
Ten weeks of the same routine.
"Lief, too," I add.
She nods her agreement. "Did you see Everett's message?"
"Don't worry about me. Focus on your game." I feel surprisingly nostalgic being on this side of a sporting event.
We are definitely missing something here cause, what about Everett's message? Are we ever going to find out what it is?
And it's very annoying when an MC that has a traumatic background suddenly gets over their trauma very quickly. I'm so tired of reading books like this when, in reality, people don't get over their past within a couple of chapters and only use the verbal defensiveness to avoid said trauma. Having verbal sparring matches is a defensive strategy, but I feel people just claim their character to have trauma just for them to have an attitude and talk back. And for Brielle, she is so insistent on having her own autonomy after being abused while in prison for nearly a year, but lets these guys dictate her life. I get it, she's been through a lot, but come. On! I do not care who you are, fated mates or not. If you do not feel comfortable with people touching you, you stop it and set boundaries.
Do something other than soak and drink tea all day!
Ten weeks of the same routine.
June 25, 2026
4.5 stars
Holy fuck I really enjoyed this book. I need the next one right now. I loved all of the MMCs and the FMC. Honestly I liked how so many things were repeated, it made the book feel so real like it was actually happening. The ending has me shocked. Wdym that’s is Loch’s mom. Why choose and there wasn’t even any fucking. Honestly. Genius because when it happens it will be so good. But the spice that we did get was sooo good. I need the next book fr omg. Also I read this book so fast I could not put it downnnn.
Holy fuck I really enjoyed this book. I need the next one right now. I loved all of the MMCs and the FMC. Honestly I liked how so many things were repeated, it made the book feel so real like it was actually happening. The ending has me shocked. Wdym that’s is Loch’s mom. Why choose and there wasn’t even any fucking. Honestly. Genius because when it happens it will be so good. But the spice that we did get was sooo good. I need the next book fr omg. Also I read this book so fast I could not put it downnnn.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 4, 2026
I was lucky enough to be an e-arc reader, but these are my own unhinged thoughts and feelings.
This was so freaking GOOD!! The entire time I was reading it, I was dreading it ending, I just wanted to stay inside the story, so bad. This was the perfect mix of The Bonds That Tie and Shatter Me. I seriously would put it up there with Bonds as my new favorite why-choose, that’s how freaking good it is. The magic, the powers, the bonds, were just so intense and so cool, I really loved learning about their world and how their magic/power systems work. I loved Brielle, I loved her so much. She was such a relatable, strong FMC who has been through so much. She’s so strong, but also you get to see her emotions and vulnerability at play, and I truly enjoyed the balance.
Now let’s they to the guys because oh my gosh, they were so great. With more than one mate, sometimes a few fall short, but every single one of these guys are perfection. My favorite is Lochlan, hands freaking down.
I can’t believe this is the authors debut book! Her writing was so dang good, I was so engrossed in the characters and the world building! The descriptions were done amazingly.
Scarlet is the best BFF in the whole world and I was so glad Brielle had her by her side through all of the craziness of finding out she’s not human.
I thought that this was the absolute perfect why choose, dark fantasy book. I could not have asked for more nor would I want a thing to change. I’m already missing being inside this book and want to re-read so bad because I miss the story and characters so much. I can’t wait for book 2 because that freaking ending has the theories in my head going absolutely bananas!
If you loved The Bonds That Tie series, you’re going to absolutely love this, it’s seriously so freaking good.
This was so freaking GOOD!! The entire time I was reading it, I was dreading it ending, I just wanted to stay inside the story, so bad. This was the perfect mix of The Bonds That Tie and Shatter Me. I seriously would put it up there with Bonds as my new favorite why-choose, that’s how freaking good it is. The magic, the powers, the bonds, were just so intense and so cool, I really loved learning about their world and how their magic/power systems work. I loved Brielle, I loved her so much. She was such a relatable, strong FMC who has been through so much. She’s so strong, but also you get to see her emotions and vulnerability at play, and I truly enjoyed the balance.
Now let’s they to the guys because oh my gosh, they were so great. With more than one mate, sometimes a few fall short, but every single one of these guys are perfection. My favorite is Lochlan, hands freaking down.
I can’t believe this is the authors debut book! Her writing was so dang good, I was so engrossed in the characters and the world building! The descriptions were done amazingly.
Scarlet is the best BFF in the whole world and I was so glad Brielle had her by her side through all of the craziness of finding out she’s not human.
I thought that this was the absolute perfect why choose, dark fantasy book. I could not have asked for more nor would I want a thing to change. I’m already missing being inside this book and want to re-read so bad because I miss the story and characters so much. I can’t wait for book 2 because that freaking ending has the theories in my head going absolutely bananas!
If you loved The Bonds That Tie series, you’re going to absolutely love this, it’s seriously so freaking good.
July 20, 2026
I’ve been burned by Booktok for this one. The mfc spent the entire book drinking teas, resting and learning a mental shield. There was no character development for her or the 5 mmcs. The ending was supposed to be a betrayal but we don’t know enough history about either character to care honestly.
June 23, 2026
Thank you to the author for the gifted e-copy.
“Bonding will increase your power. Some believe that’s why soul mates are so rare, a balance from the universe.”
I burned through this book so quickly. It has everything I like in a romantasy including where her mates have that enemies to lovers vibe. In this case, a good half of the mates are skeptical and the relationship building is a central element and really well developed, which I love!
Vibes: fated mates mixed with enemies to lovers
Tropes:
Why Choose
Mates
Training
Slow Burn
Touch Her and 💀
Skeptical Mates
Prophecy
“Bonding will increase your power. Some believe that’s why soul mates are so rare, a balance from the universe.”
I burned through this book so quickly. It has everything I like in a romantasy including where her mates have that enemies to lovers vibe. In this case, a good half of the mates are skeptical and the relationship building is a central element and really well developed, which I love!
Vibes: fated mates mixed with enemies to lovers
Tropes:
Why Choose
Mates
Training
Slow Burn
Touch Her and 💀
Skeptical Mates
Prophecy
May 26, 2026
if you like bonds that tie series, then this series is for you. It’s why choose with bonds that are being denied for various reason and secrets. It was a fun time - you really get to know the characters. The ending was a pretty mild cliffhanger, but I’m curious to see where it goes from here and what else is revealed.
May 28, 2026
MFMMM - major book hangover 🥹❤️😭
July 19, 2026
3.75 ⭐️/2 🌶️—This reminded me sort of the Bonds That Tie but if the genre was more high fantasy? The book needed an editor. The plot and prose could have been tightened up and there could be more emphasis on the unfolding of the relationships and the uniqueness of the MMCs. Overall, I was entertained and there is enough mystery (and a cliffhanger) that I’m looking forward to the next book.
April 15, 2026
ARC Review
Tropes
Why Choose
Fated Mates
Elemental Magic
Some Academic Setting
Cliffhanger
Mysterious Background
Overall 5/5
I was pleasantly surprised by how much I ended up loving this book—especially the slow-burn elements and the way the plot builds over time. It’s definitely more of a “grower” than a “show-er” 😅… although, the men in this story might actually be both, if you know what I mean.
I really enjoyed how Brielle’s story unfolds—or rather, the mystery surrounding the lack of her story and how that develops throughout the book. And that cliffhanger?? I’m OBSESSED!! I can't believe I have to wait until September for book 2!
Plot 4/5
It took a little time to get going, in my opinion, but it was engaging enough to keep my attention—and I'm glad I stuck with it! There were a few high-intensity (non-sexual) moments that felt a bit abrupt and left me slightly confused, but they didn’t take away from the overall story, especially since there weren’t many of them.
The mystery behind Brielle's background and the political aspects have me super interested to see where book 2 takes us, especially after that fricking cliffhanger!
Characters 5/5
I love the men in this book. Daire, Griffin, Lochlan, Kai, and Holden... delicious. yum. yes. Daire and Griffin are the golden retrievers, and the other three are giving us the slow burn, yearning, tension that we crave.
I also love Scarlet as the female bff.
We could go deeper on the relationships, and I'm hopeful we will in the coming books!
World 3/5
Bryxton is interesting, but I don't feel like I've got any deep ties to the world yet.
Tropes
Why Choose
Fated Mates
Elemental Magic
Some Academic Setting
Cliffhanger
Mysterious Background
Overall 5/5
I was pleasantly surprised by how much I ended up loving this book—especially the slow-burn elements and the way the plot builds over time. It’s definitely more of a “grower” than a “show-er” 😅… although, the men in this story might actually be both, if you know what I mean.
I really enjoyed how Brielle’s story unfolds—or rather, the mystery surrounding the lack of her story and how that develops throughout the book. And that cliffhanger?? I’m OBSESSED!! I can't believe I have to wait until September for book 2!
Plot 4/5
It took a little time to get going, in my opinion, but it was engaging enough to keep my attention—and I'm glad I stuck with it! There were a few high-intensity (non-sexual) moments that felt a bit abrupt and left me slightly confused, but they didn’t take away from the overall story, especially since there weren’t many of them.
The mystery behind Brielle's background and the political aspects have me super interested to see where book 2 takes us, especially after that fricking cliffhanger!
Characters 5/5
I love the men in this book. Daire, Griffin, Lochlan, Kai, and Holden... delicious. yum. yes. Daire and Griffin are the golden retrievers, and the other three are giving us the slow burn, yearning, tension that we crave.
I also love Scarlet as the female bff.
We could go deeper on the relationships, and I'm hopeful we will in the coming books!
World 3/5
Bryxton is interesting, but I don't feel like I've got any deep ties to the world yet.
September 26, 2026
This first real conversation with any form of substance between the FMC and an MMC only happened once well past the halfway mark. I love a slow burn but I need some depth to the characters I’m supposed to root for and there needs to be moments of emotional connection not just them just existing in the same space. It all felt so emotionless and detached. The last half i started to see a bit more life in the story and a spark between the FMC and some MMCs but there was little of it and thrown in. I hope Bri doesn’t just accept them all when they decide they want her and makes them grovel a bit for how they’ve treated her. I’m scared it won’t happen though because she didn’t expect it at any point in this book. Except for the one time when she called out one of the MMCs for the double standards when it came to other men/women.
This was a long book packed with a lot of history and rules about the magic system and this world, with mundane nothingness mixed in between. This makes it sound like a hated the book, I didn’t. I actually liked it and will be reading the next one. It just took me so long to finished because at times it was a very dry book and had long sequences that didn’t progress the story in any way. As I said, it started to pick up a bit in the end so I’m hopeful for the next one!
This was a long book packed with a lot of history and rules about the magic system and this world, with mundane nothingness mixed in between. This makes it sound like a hated the book, I didn’t. I actually liked it and will be reading the next one. It just took me so long to finished because at times it was a very dry book and had long sequences that didn’t progress the story in any way. As I said, it started to pick up a bit in the end so I’m hopeful for the next one!
September 3, 2026
The overall plot was good and I was entertained. But Bri just went along with everything and let people make decisions for her. The pacing was so weird and I didn't feel like much happened in this. All she did was soak and drink tea. I can't help but feel like this was some HP fanfic with the university/castle, the 'shielding' that's occulting, the 'runes' or spells. There's no grovel in this considering how they treated her and yet she allows them to build a relationship with her. Overall a decent read and a little interested to see what happens next.
June 25, 2026
This definitely didn’t have to be almost 600 (!) pages considering that nothing major actually happened. Throughout basically the entire book, Bri is preparing to be interrogated by the Council and it’s made out to be extremely high stakes but then the actual interrogation was kind of underwhelming? Why then was this made out to be such a big deal?
Still, I enjoyed this book! The slow-burn was actually taking its time and the story, despite it really being rather mundane, kept me engaged.
I’ll give this a solid 3.5 stars. I’m not sure if I will be reading the second book coming out next year though, especially if it’s another 600ish pages.
Still, I enjoyed this book! The slow-burn was actually taking its time and the story, despite it really being rather mundane, kept me engaged.
I’ll give this a solid 3.5 stars. I’m not sure if I will be reading the second book coming out next year though, especially if it’s another 600ish pages.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 28, 2026
book 2 on feb 2027 next time just stab meeeeee
April 12, 2026
4.5
I really enjoyed the world-building in this one and how much groundwork was laid for what’s to come. The why choose dynamic? Absolutely delectable.
Griffin and Daire had me hooked right away. Lochan is definitely the most closed off, but I have a feeling he’s going to end up being a favorite. Holden’s academic side was such a fun touch, and Kai gives off big kid energy in the best way.
Brielle is still coming into herself, trying to understand everything around her, but you can already tell she’s going to be powerful and not someone to mess with. There’s a lot of anger tied to her past, and I’m excited to see how that shapes her.
There’s also a lot of magic still to uncover, along with a mystery element that really pulls you in and keeps you wanting more.
Scarlet was such a breath of fresh air as her best friend, and Gwen added such a fun, grounding presence to the house. The found family that’s building here is strong, and I can’t wait to continue this series.
I really enjoyed the world-building in this one and how much groundwork was laid for what’s to come. The why choose dynamic? Absolutely delectable.
Griffin and Daire had me hooked right away. Lochan is definitely the most closed off, but I have a feeling he’s going to end up being a favorite. Holden’s academic side was such a fun touch, and Kai gives off big kid energy in the best way.
Brielle is still coming into herself, trying to understand everything around her, but you can already tell she’s going to be powerful and not someone to mess with. There’s a lot of anger tied to her past, and I’m excited to see how that shapes her.
There’s also a lot of magic still to uncover, along with a mystery element that really pulls you in and keeps you wanting more.
Scarlet was such a breath of fresh air as her best friend, and Gwen added such a fun, grounding presence to the house. The found family that’s building here is strong, and I can’t wait to continue this series.
May 29, 2026
This is a tough one to rate because so much of it dragged and there was a lot of repetition as the FMC learned about her new world and developed her powers.
But at the same time, there's a ton of potential here. On page, we have an FMC who was raised as a human, by humans, and was sent to prison for crimes caused by her magic bursting out.
But I get the sense that it's not that simple. That maybe this isn't the first time she's invented memories to distract others from learning the truth about her past. That maybe she's not even aware that it isn't the first time. That she did such a good job that she believes her own lies. I'm so intrigued by the possibilities in this series.
As for the romance plot, the FMCs connection with the two guys who chose her comes across as superficial and based on sex. Meanwhile, she has much deeper connections with the three guys who opted out. After all the months of training, they seem two know her in ways that her "boyfriends" do not. I want more of that tension.
But at the same time, there's a ton of potential here. On page, we have an FMC who was raised as a human, by humans, and was sent to prison for crimes caused by her magic bursting out.
But I get the sense that it's not that simple. That maybe this isn't the first time she's invented memories to distract others from learning the truth about her past. That maybe she's not even aware that it isn't the first time. That she did such a good job that she believes her own lies. I'm so intrigued by the possibilities in this series.
As for the romance plot, the FMCs connection with the two guys who chose her comes across as superficial and based on sex. Meanwhile, she has much deeper connections with the three guys who opted out. After all the months of training, they seem two know her in ways that her "boyfriends" do not. I want more of that tension.
August 30, 2026
This book is long.
By chapter 2 you just know it'll be too damn long.
Plot:
No Nos
❌ the h (who's supposed to be a 20something with extraordinary powers) is always drained, aching, or dropping off to sleep in pools like a sad narcoleptic. Girly just luuuuuuvs her cups of tea and soaking in the hot springs like someones granny
❌ the h's 'mates' infantilize her and she's mentally deficient enough to go along with it
❌ the two men who supposedly want to be fully bonded to the h aren't her allies. They are either superficially kind to her for most of the book, or they’re neutral. They watch all the shit and shenanigans their 'brothers' pull with the h and never step in. Useless.
❌ I give PNR a certain amount of leeway when it comes to the concept of 'mental shielding' and 'thought manipulation', but give us a goddamn break the mind is not a computer, people can’t just pluck memories, move them around, or live in them in technicolour. I know his book is supernatural but it really pushes the boundaries of what I can believe
❌ the burn was WAAAAAAAAY too SLOOOOOOOOOW for the amount of plot offered. Like, if an author writes action, strategy, a variety of locations and characters with imperatives, or even just writes a ton of fun witty conversation, then a slow burn is a joy. But this book was just hundreds of pages of stalling.
❌ the limited sex
❌ some of the irrational philosophical conversations in this book like “power vs strength” felt AI assisted
❌ the chapter titles are also useless and AI ish. Why bother naming chapters if they don't build curiosity or give small spoilers, ffs just use numbers
❌ the writing is weird. It’s easy enough to understand, but leaves out the anticipation. I don’t know how else to phrase it, it's long stretches of boringness then BAM! a crisis out of nowhere
By chapter 2 you just know it'll be too damn long.
Plot:
No Nos
❌ the h (who's supposed to be a 20something with extraordinary powers) is always drained, aching, or dropping off to sleep in pools like a sad narcoleptic. Girly just luuuuuuvs her cups of tea and soaking in the hot springs like someones granny
❌ the h's 'mates' infantilize her and she's mentally deficient enough to go along with it
❌ the two men who supposedly want to be fully bonded to the h aren't her allies. They are either superficially kind to her for most of the book, or they’re neutral. They watch all the shit and shenanigans their 'brothers' pull with the h and never step in. Useless.
❌ I give PNR a certain amount of leeway when it comes to the concept of 'mental shielding' and 'thought manipulation', but give us a goddamn break the mind is not a computer, people can’t just pluck memories, move them around, or live in them in technicolour. I know his book is supernatural but it really pushes the boundaries of what I can believe
❌ the burn was WAAAAAAAAY too SLOOOOOOOOOW for the amount of plot offered. Like, if an author writes action, strategy, a variety of locations and characters with imperatives, or even just writes a ton of fun witty conversation, then a slow burn is a joy. But this book was just hundreds of pages of stalling.
❌ the limited sex
❌ some of the irrational philosophical conversations in this book like “power vs strength” felt AI assisted
❌ the chapter titles are also useless and AI ish. Why bother naming chapters if they don't build curiosity or give small spoilers, ffs just use numbers
❌ the writing is weird. It’s easy enough to understand, but leaves out the anticipation. I don’t know how else to phrase it, it's long stretches of boringness then BAM! a crisis out of nowhere
June 19, 2026
OMG. This book had me in an absolute chokehold.
Veil of Ash is easily one of my favorite reads of the year, and honestly, I knew it was headed in that direction pretty early on. Fallon Hendrix delivered everything I love in a romantasy: fascinating world-building, compelling characters, high stakes, political intrigue, fated mates, and a slow-burn romance that had me completely obsessed.
The story follows Brielle, who has spent her entire life believing she's human. Then everything changes when she is taken from Prison (which is a whole fascinating story in itself that gets explored throughout the book) and brought to the realm of Bryxton. There she discovers that she is a rare Soul Elemental and somehow connected to a Vestra of five powerful guardians who were never supposed to have mates.
The catch? She has imprinted on them as their mate.
Which would be great... except these five men are part of a prophecy that says their hearts will beat but never feel. A mate was never supposed to be part of their future.
And yet, here comes Bri.
To make matters even more complicated, the vestra is completely divided when it comes to Bri. Two of the guardians are immediately protective and ready to burn the world down for her. The other three? Not so much. They want nothing to do with the bond, Bri, or the complications she brings into their lives. The push and pull between them was absolutely delicious, and I was completely invested in every single interaction.
What I loved most was how attached I became to all of the characters. Bri is incredibly easy to root for. She is thrown into a world she doesn't understand, surrounded by people who don't know whether to protect her or fear her, and I was cheering for her every step of the way.
And the bondmates? I ate it up.
Every time Bri was paired with a different guardian, I was locked in. I wanted all the conversations, all the tension, all the reluctant moments, all the soft moments, and all the arguments. Fallon did such a great job making each of the five guardians feel distinct that I found myself looking forward to every new interaction.
This book somehow gave me everything I wanted: fated mates, forced proximity, political intrigue, magical training, high stakes, emotional tension, and a slow-burn romance that actually felt earned. The world felt rich and layered without becoming overwhelming, and there were so many mysteries unfolding that I never wanted to stop reading.
Honestly, this book was just so deliciously addictive. The kind of book where you tell yourself you'll read one more chapter and suddenly it's two hours later.
If you love why choose romantasy, fated mates, protective heroes, complicated prophecies, and tension-filled relationships, I cannot recommend this one enough.
Now please excuse me while I impatiently wait for book two because I need it immediately.
Veil of Ash is easily one of my favorite reads of the year, and honestly, I knew it was headed in that direction pretty early on. Fallon Hendrix delivered everything I love in a romantasy: fascinating world-building, compelling characters, high stakes, political intrigue, fated mates, and a slow-burn romance that had me completely obsessed.
The story follows Brielle, who has spent her entire life believing she's human. Then everything changes when she is taken from Prison (which is a whole fascinating story in itself that gets explored throughout the book) and brought to the realm of Bryxton. There she discovers that she is a rare Soul Elemental and somehow connected to a Vestra of five powerful guardians who were never supposed to have mates.
The catch? She has imprinted on them as their mate.
Which would be great... except these five men are part of a prophecy that says their hearts will beat but never feel. A mate was never supposed to be part of their future.
And yet, here comes Bri.
To make matters even more complicated, the vestra is completely divided when it comes to Bri. Two of the guardians are immediately protective and ready to burn the world down for her. The other three? Not so much. They want nothing to do with the bond, Bri, or the complications she brings into their lives. The push and pull between them was absolutely delicious, and I was completely invested in every single interaction.
What I loved most was how attached I became to all of the characters. Bri is incredibly easy to root for. She is thrown into a world she doesn't understand, surrounded by people who don't know whether to protect her or fear her, and I was cheering for her every step of the way.
And the bondmates? I ate it up.
Every time Bri was paired with a different guardian, I was locked in. I wanted all the conversations, all the tension, all the reluctant moments, all the soft moments, and all the arguments. Fallon did such a great job making each of the five guardians feel distinct that I found myself looking forward to every new interaction.
This book somehow gave me everything I wanted: fated mates, forced proximity, political intrigue, magical training, high stakes, emotional tension, and a slow-burn romance that actually felt earned. The world felt rich and layered without becoming overwhelming, and there were so many mysteries unfolding that I never wanted to stop reading.
Honestly, this book was just so deliciously addictive. The kind of book where you tell yourself you'll read one more chapter and suddenly it's two hours later.
If you love why choose romantasy, fated mates, protective heroes, complicated prophecies, and tension-filled relationships, I cannot recommend this one enough.
Now please excuse me while I impatiently wait for book two because I need it immediately.
May 23, 2026
Full review
⭐⭐⭐⭐
🌶️🌶️🌶️
Veil of Ash absolutely consumed me.
If you love why choose romantasy with academy settings, fated mates, morally grey MMCs, insane tension, and emotional relationship development that actually feels believable, this book is a MUST read.
What completely sold this story for me was the character dynamics. With a larger cast, it’s so easy for relationships to feel rushed or underdeveloped, but every single connection in this book felt intentional. The chemistry between the characters is incredible, and watching the relationships slowly evolve was honestly one of the best parts of the story.
Some of the MMCs fall first, hard, while others start out suspicious, guarded, and very enemies-to-lovers coded — which creates SUCH good tension throughout the book. The emotional progression feels natural the entire way through, from reluctant alliances and curiosity to trust, obsession, friendship, and eventually love.
And the fated mates trope? SO well done. Normally insta-love/fated mates can feel repetitive or overly cliché, but this book balances it perfectly with emotional depth, tension, skepticism, and character growth. The bonds feel powerful without replacing the actual relationship development.
The premise was also so addictive. Our FMC starts in the human world where she’s imprisoned and experimented on after accidentally revealing her powers. Meanwhile, in another dimension, her mates can actually feel her existence through their magic — despite believing for years they would never have a mate. So when they finally find and rescue her, there’s immediately this mix of protectiveness, distrust, fascination, and tension that keeps the entire story insanely engaging.
The writing was really fantastic, especially when it came to emotions, dialogue, and the evolving relationships between the characters. Every interaction felt charged with meaning, and the tension had me completely hooked from start to finish.
If you loved Her Vicious Beasts, Bonds That Tie or darker academy romantasy with emotionally intense relationships, you need to add Veil of Ash to your TBR immediately.
⭐⭐⭐⭐
🌶️🌶️🌶️
Veil of Ash absolutely consumed me.
If you love why choose romantasy with academy settings, fated mates, morally grey MMCs, insane tension, and emotional relationship development that actually feels believable, this book is a MUST read.
What completely sold this story for me was the character dynamics. With a larger cast, it’s so easy for relationships to feel rushed or underdeveloped, but every single connection in this book felt intentional. The chemistry between the characters is incredible, and watching the relationships slowly evolve was honestly one of the best parts of the story.
Some of the MMCs fall first, hard, while others start out suspicious, guarded, and very enemies-to-lovers coded — which creates SUCH good tension throughout the book. The emotional progression feels natural the entire way through, from reluctant alliances and curiosity to trust, obsession, friendship, and eventually love.
And the fated mates trope? SO well done. Normally insta-love/fated mates can feel repetitive or overly cliché, but this book balances it perfectly with emotional depth, tension, skepticism, and character growth. The bonds feel powerful without replacing the actual relationship development.
The premise was also so addictive. Our FMC starts in the human world where she’s imprisoned and experimented on after accidentally revealing her powers. Meanwhile, in another dimension, her mates can actually feel her existence through their magic — despite believing for years they would never have a mate. So when they finally find and rescue her, there’s immediately this mix of protectiveness, distrust, fascination, and tension that keeps the entire story insanely engaging.
The writing was really fantastic, especially when it came to emotions, dialogue, and the evolving relationships between the characters. Every interaction felt charged with meaning, and the tension had me completely hooked from start to finish.
If you loved Her Vicious Beasts, Bonds That Tie or darker academy romantasy with emotionally intense relationships, you need to add Veil of Ash to your TBR immediately.
August 27, 2026
5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ♾️
"My throat tightens—not fear, not panic, but a familiar, aching anger. The kind that comes from watching power dress cruelty up as procedure."
I was not prepared for the emotional depth of this! I cried so often. Brielle's story is not easy and the reception, the handling, when she gets to Bryxton is not...ideal for someone with her history.
And honestly, these guys lack the emotional and rational intelligence to comprehend how difficult the adjustment is for her. How to talk to her and treat her. In some aspects they have a valid reason for some of their actions, but mostly it is just plain stupidity and lack of foresight and basic understanding of emotions.
Still I liked everyone's character arc and I look forward more!
I missed some of the guys POVs but I do actually think this works better. To cement the confusing state she is in, to let us learn alongside her, reveal stuff in her time. Also to not have a false sense of them through another lens. Only her lens, her interpretations. It works.
And shout out to the best bestie, Scarlet! Without her, and Gwen and Lief, I can't even comprehend where Bri would be mentally and emotionally...
Fallon handles ptsd and Bri's journey with such care and honesty. It's raw, beautiful, emotional, difficult, and full of strength and resilience. Bri is amazing.
The magic system is elemental based but still manages to feel unique. It includes herbs, runes, minerals, and there is a 5th element that is so cool and full of possibilities—and dangers.
Holy shit... That ending.
I am scared and excited for book 2. Hopefully it will live up to my now high expectations and continue on with the story and depth like this one did.
"My throat tightens—not fear, not panic, but a familiar, aching anger. The kind that comes from watching power dress cruelty up as procedure."
I was not prepared for the emotional depth of this! I cried so often. Brielle's story is not easy and the reception, the handling, when she gets to Bryxton is not...ideal for someone with her history.
And honestly, these guys lack the emotional and rational intelligence to comprehend how difficult the adjustment is for her. How to talk to her and treat her. In some aspects they have a valid reason for some of their actions, but mostly it is just plain stupidity and lack of foresight and basic understanding of emotions.
Still I liked everyone's character arc and I look forward more!
I missed some of the guys POVs but I do actually think this works better. To cement the confusing state she is in, to let us learn alongside her, reveal stuff in her time. Also to not have a false sense of them through another lens. Only her lens, her interpretations. It works.
And shout out to the best bestie, Scarlet! Without her, and Gwen and Lief, I can't even comprehend where Bri would be mentally and emotionally...
Fallon handles ptsd and Bri's journey with such care and honesty. It's raw, beautiful, emotional, difficult, and full of strength and resilience. Bri is amazing.
The magic system is elemental based but still manages to feel unique. It includes herbs, runes, minerals, and there is a 5th element that is so cool and full of possibilities—and dangers.
Holy shit... That ending.
I am scared and excited for book 2. Hopefully it will live up to my now high expectations and continue on with the story and depth like this one did.
May 30, 2026
For fans of:
Political intrigue
Why choose (x5)
Dark academia
Elemental magic
Found family
Touch her and die
Slow burn
Monsters & magic
Fated mates
Thank you to the author for sending me a free ARC in exchange for my honest review.
This is the first book in the series, so there’s definitely a lot of worldbuilding and information to take in. It starts a little slower because of that, but honestly I didn’t mind because I found the world fascinating.
Brielle was such a lovable FMC. Imagine finding out you’re not actually human and getting dragged into a completely different realm full of monsters, magic, and five mates you never asked for. Her reactions were honestly so relatable and sometimes hilarious.
What I loved most was that all five relationships felt different. None of the MMCs blended together, which can sometimes happen in why choose romances. The tension, especially with the more skeptical and broody men, kept me hooked.
The world itself was my favorite part. The elemental magic, academy setting, political drama, monsters beyond the wards, shapeshifters, and found family vibes all came together so well. It felt immersive without being overwhelming.
I genuinely can’t believe this is a debut novel. The writing was engaging, the characters were memorable, and that ending has me already wanting book two.
If you enjoyed the Demonica series by Larissa Ione, I think you’ll have a great time with this one.
Political intrigue
Why choose (x5)
Dark academia
Elemental magic
Found family
Touch her and die
Slow burn
Monsters & magic
Fated mates
Thank you to the author for sending me a free ARC in exchange for my honest review.
This is the first book in the series, so there’s definitely a lot of worldbuilding and information to take in. It starts a little slower because of that, but honestly I didn’t mind because I found the world fascinating.
Brielle was such a lovable FMC. Imagine finding out you’re not actually human and getting dragged into a completely different realm full of monsters, magic, and five mates you never asked for. Her reactions were honestly so relatable and sometimes hilarious.
What I loved most was that all five relationships felt different. None of the MMCs blended together, which can sometimes happen in why choose romances. The tension, especially with the more skeptical and broody men, kept me hooked.
The world itself was my favorite part. The elemental magic, academy setting, political drama, monsters beyond the wards, shapeshifters, and found family vibes all came together so well. It felt immersive without being overwhelming.
I genuinely can’t believe this is a debut novel. The writing was engaging, the characters were memorable, and that ending has me already wanting book two.
If you enjoyed the Demonica series by Larissa Ione, I think you’ll have a great time with this one.
September 18, 2026
3,75 ⭐️ Não é ruim, mas poderia ser MUITO melhor.
É o primeiro de uma série e acho que poderia ter deixado a gente muito mais ansiosa pelo próximo. A protagonista está em um mundo novo, mas passa boa parte do livro só tomando chá e treinando com os parceiros que não confiam nela. Só fica mais interessante quando ela vai para as aulas.
Queria muito mais interação com os 3 mocinhos que não a querem como parceira. (Interações além dos treinos e deles vigiarem ela). Isso acontece mais para o final, mas fica difícil entender se é ciúme, medo ou só obrigação. Os outros 2, que já gostavam dela, também se afastam em alguns momentos sem fazer muito sentido.
A escrita é boa e diferente, principalmente pela divisão dos capítulos. Os últimos 60% foram ótimos. Tinha MUITO mais potencial, mas se eu lembrar, vou ler os próximos.
É o primeiro de uma série e acho que poderia ter deixado a gente muito mais ansiosa pelo próximo. A protagonista está em um mundo novo, mas passa boa parte do livro só tomando chá e treinando com os parceiros que não confiam nela. Só fica mais interessante quando ela vai para as aulas.
Queria muito mais interação com os 3 mocinhos que não a querem como parceira. (Interações além dos treinos e deles vigiarem ela). Isso acontece mais para o final, mas fica difícil entender se é ciúme, medo ou só obrigação. Os outros 2, que já gostavam dela, também se afastam em alguns momentos sem fazer muito sentido.
A escrita é boa e diferente, principalmente pela divisão dos capítulos. Os últimos 60% foram ótimos. Tinha MUITO mais potencial, mas se eu lembrar, vou ler os próximos.
August 20, 2026
GIMME BOOK 2 NOW.
That ending was beyond rude. How absolutely dare you make me feel feels of shock and confusion. Integue.
Seriously, this was one of the better reverse harem/why choose novels I've read and I really hope the momentum keeps up for the rest of the series. I'm beyond excited.
Brielle deserves answers about her past and present. All of the guys really grew on me. I'm so curious about where this is going.
I will agree there was a loooot of shielding and soaking, but I can look past it. I do wish there was a little more focus on the monsters and council/Brielle's storyline. I tend to rate RH on a bit of a sliding scale, though and this was one of the better starts.
That ending was beyond rude. How absolutely dare you make me feel feels of shock and confusion. Integue.
Seriously, this was one of the better reverse harem/why choose novels I've read and I really hope the momentum keeps up for the rest of the series. I'm beyond excited.
Brielle deserves answers about her past and present. All of the guys really grew on me. I'm so curious about where this is going.
I will agree there was a loooot of shielding and soaking, but I can look past it. I do wish there was a little more focus on the monsters and council/Brielle's storyline. I tend to rate RH on a bit of a sliding scale, though and this was one of the better starts.
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