I’m having a really hard time with my decision on a final rating for Adam. Part of me feels as though it should be bumped up to three stars. Then another part of me starts screaming, “Nooo!!! Don’t do it, Frankie!”
Here’s why . . .
To me, dialogue & character development are important pieces to the puzzles we call “stories”. Without good dialogue & character development, I find that it’s harder for me to become fully invested in a story. That was the case with Adam. Not only were the characters’ personalities iffy, but the dynamic & dialogue between them was cheesy as all hell. I found myself rolling my eyes on many occasions & thinking to myself, What? What is this? People don’t actually say things like this. ...do they? Basically, the dialogue felt overly exaggerated & under-developed.
While the character development & dialogue alone had me questioning the entire story, the writing in general didn’t help itself, either. It was a mess of sentences that didn’t really make sense... or sentences/paragraphs that I would have to re-read multiple times, very slowly, just to understand it. Things were oddly strewn together, & the wording was just... weird.
Now, you’re probably wondering why I would even consider bumping it up to three stars with all these problems I seem to have with the book. Well... the plot, of course. I really enjoyed the plot itself, the idea behind it all. It was executed quite well & I had no issues with it. I loved the stuntman & horse theme & how things played out in the end. If the characters, dialogue, & writing were as good as the plot, then this book would be a four or five star read.
So, after all that... getting my thoughts out on the screen... yeah, I think I’ll keep my two star rating. If you can deal with weird wording, silly dialogue, & cheesy characters... then you might like this one. But me? I couldn’t get past all that & it clearly reflects in my rating.
PS: This book is currently FREE on Amazon! If you think you can handle what I mentioned above & wanna give it a go, then head over there & download it now. :]