1.5
I knew by the cover the artwork might be a problem. As soon as I opened the cover there was the little mutant alien thing that wasn't pleasing to look at. The characters were quite hideous. I didn't enjoy looking at any of the monsters, and the humans kids weren't much better.
I liked the haunted house and all of the silhouettes of different creatures in the windows. That was a really nice touch. I also liked the pumpkins on top of the stone columns, with a starry sky behind. I was kind of irritated to find this went to the theme of the night before Christmas, because I've already found two Halloween books set to Christmas poems. The zombies were cool walking in the yard, seen through a space in the boards of the house. The clock didn't make sense, it had Halloween at 12, Christmas at 3, Easter at 6 and 4th of July at 9. It would have been better if it was represented in a diff way, because the holidays don't fall on hours, so they can't be found on a clock.
The ugly little alien things were called creepies. Never heard of them and they were just weird. The parlor idea was cool, with the ghost playing piano off key and the soup of the day, as well as the ravens sounding when they saw the trick or treaters. The lights surrounding the turret of the house were nice. The skeleton key made out of a bone was a nice touch.
The frogs and bug on a stake was absolutely awful. I can't stand to see live animals staked like that and children shouldn't see that and it's made worse by the sad expressions on the frogs' faces. The only cute character was the mouse.
The kids run away at the sight of all of the monsters and the gross things they're eating. The noises they made were weird, like heep and yeep. I don't think people actually say that.
All of the creatures decide to enjoy Halloween without any guests. I'm not sure what the witch was doing but it looked like she was giving birth. She was down on her back on the floor, with her legs up and lifting her skirt. If she was dancing it didn't look like it. Because of the angle it looked like she was lying down. I never saw a zombie again after they awoke in the yard. At the end all of the monsters leave with food, and I was wondering whose house it was if everyone was leaving.
I didn't like the rhyming; there was a terrible choice of words. To make the brew smelly, the witch threw in a shoe. The creepies put 4 crunchy legs, a handful of grubs and 8 rotten eggs into each treat bag. It was weird ideas like this that kept me from enjoying it. At times the Night Before Christmas was barely evident. I don't think this story should have sounded off to this Christmas poem. It should have just had its own thing going on, especially since it was so gruesome and had no magic to it at all.