I liked the idea of the story, but I think it would benefit from a bit more editing and tidying up. Some scenes involving West and Declan seem to describe the same events, yet they read as though they are different scenarios, which was a little confusing. About halfway through the book, I found it harder to follow because certain scenes appeared to be repeated multiple times from different perspectives. While I understand the intention, it sometimes made the story feel a bit disjointed and difficult to keep track of. Overall, the story had an interesting concept and strong potential, but I think additional editing could help improve the flow and clarity.