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Naughty Menage #1
Dominated by Two
When Michael asked me what I wanted for my birthday, I decided to throw it all out there. I wanted the smoking hot fireman from down the road, and I wanted him in our bed.
I couldn’t believe it when he agreed. Even more, I never imagined how much I’d enjoy having two men take complete control of me.
I couldn’t believe it when he agreed. Even more, I never imagined how much I’d enjoy having two men take complete control of me.
29 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 13, 2015
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July 21, 2017
3.75 Happy Birthday Stars!
A hot quickie read, the story could have been longer, but it was just the appetizer to a continuing story, however the delicious MFM sex scene was
Scorching HOT!
Not bad for a freebie.
May continue the series at a later date...
MFM
A hot quickie read, the story could have been longer, but it was just the appetizer to a continuing story, however the delicious MFM sex scene was
Scorching HOT!
Not bad for a freebie.
May continue the series at a later date...
MFM
August 28, 2015
This is my own fault!Always that I need to read something short, I always end up grabbing whatever tittle I find amusing.
This one doesn't have a real plot it's more like : oh yeah ? you wanna get some action? I'll give you some action!, that's pretty much it...
The sex scenes were good, nothing remarkable there. The dirty talk?.. yeah like it.
The boyfriend?.. happy as any other guy in his situation just as the guest... and the female character? I'm still trying to digest my opnion about her. come on ! two guys that you' re sexually attracted to, and besides you wanna spice your sex life a little bit ? okay ! that I totally understand. Now a bunch of guys, a whole squad? that you haven't eve met before? and you aren't even asked if you want to do so( 'cause they asked your boyfriend) and even so, you still feel good about it??... aroused? yes...excitement aside... I don't feel good about it, and she rather be a ... see? I'm trying to digest it!. Maybe she's a lucky girl or she's just a closet slut.
There I said it.
This one doesn't have a real plot it's more like : oh yeah ? you wanna get some action? I'll give you some action!, that's pretty much it...
The sex scenes were good, nothing remarkable there. The dirty talk?.. yeah like it.
The boyfriend?.. happy as any other guy in his situation just as the guest... and the female character? I'm still trying to digest my opnion about her. come on ! two guys that you' re sexually attracted to, and besides you wanna spice your sex life a little bit ? okay ! that I totally understand. Now a bunch of guys, a whole squad? that you haven't eve met before? and you aren't even asked if you want to do so( 'cause they asked your boyfriend) and even so, you still feel good about it??... aroused? yes...excitement aside... I don't feel good about it, and she rather be a ... see? I'm trying to digest it!. Maybe she's a lucky girl or she's just a closet slut.
There I said it.
August 26, 2018
Short MFM fiction, not really domination
This is a short, erotic tale of a woman dreaming of those three little words, "sexy man sandwich". Ahhh, the romance. Happy to oblige, her husband gives her a memorable birthday gift - a threesome with their hot fireman neighbor. This is already a series, with a teaser from the next story at the end of this one.
Perhaps my standards for dominating are skewed, but the sex seemed fairly vanilla other than the fireman and his talented hose added to the frisky couple. For an erotic tale, it read more like a Penthouse letter than a story I could really get into.
The story is short, written in somewhat factual language, and could use a touch better editing. (It's not a snob thing, glaring errors jar me out of the narrative when I have to go back and re-read to see what was actually meant). An example of the writing:
"Luke grunted and then groaned as he slapped against me once more before coming. His piece of dynamite did indeed explode within me, setting off and sending out a shockwave of euphoria."
This is a short, erotic tale of a woman dreaming of those three little words, "sexy man sandwich". Ahhh, the romance. Happy to oblige, her husband gives her a memorable birthday gift - a threesome with their hot fireman neighbor. This is already a series, with a teaser from the next story at the end of this one.
Perhaps my standards for dominating are skewed, but the sex seemed fairly vanilla other than the fireman and his talented hose added to the frisky couple. For an erotic tale, it read more like a Penthouse letter than a story I could really get into.
The story is short, written in somewhat factual language, and could use a touch better editing. (It's not a snob thing, glaring errors jar me out of the narrative when I have to go back and re-read to see what was actually meant). An example of the writing:
"Luke grunted and then groaned as he slapped against me once more before coming. His piece of dynamite did indeed explode within me, setting off and sending out a shockwave of euphoria."
March 15, 2020
Hot but to short
I was just getting into the story and then it was over. They really are way to short but a nice story. Thank God I got it free or I would have been upset to pay for such a short story.
I was just getting into the story and then it was over. They really are way to short but a nice story. Thank God I got it free or I would have been upset to pay for such a short story.
December 5, 2016
The first book of a three-book series, Dominated by Two, is free allowing a reader to taste the series before going further. NOTE THIS IS A MFM NOT MMF AS LISTED IN THE TITLE (lost a star for false advertising).
No plot here, more like a diary entry of "I asked my boyfriend (BF) for a three-some and he agreed. I got f*ck'd lots." Strictly p*rn - no character development, no backstory (other than the woman being bored with the BF monogamy), no tension, no scene description, no emotional impact, no description about the difference between the men other than the size of their male parts and one being rougher than the other.
The manuscript is strictly a scene of sex from the first person female point-of-view. If you would like to read vanilla three-some sex with only one (prolong) incident, this may float your boat for the 32 pages. No noticeable proofreading errors and the timeline does flow logically.
The next books of the series cost money and have the characters involved in large group sex. Why the female character wants to leap from a three-some to a dozen men at a time eludes me and I am not emotionally invested in the story enough to see if the next story explains her interest. Based on the lack of details in this manuscript, I doubt any character development will happen in the other books.
No plot here, more like a diary entry of "I asked my boyfriend (BF) for a three-some and he agreed. I got f*ck'd lots." Strictly p*rn - no character development, no backstory (other than the woman being bored with the BF monogamy), no tension, no scene description, no emotional impact, no description about the difference between the men other than the size of their male parts and one being rougher than the other.
The manuscript is strictly a scene of sex from the first person female point-of-view. If you would like to read vanilla three-some sex with only one (prolong) incident, this may float your boat for the 32 pages. No noticeable proofreading errors and the timeline does flow logically.
The next books of the series cost money and have the characters involved in large group sex. Why the female character wants to leap from a three-some to a dozen men at a time eludes me and I am not emotionally invested in the story enough to see if the next story explains her interest. Based on the lack of details in this manuscript, I doubt any character development will happen in the other books.
July 26, 2016
If you are looking for a quick hot and steamy book to read, then look no further. This one will have you hot and bothered after the first page, wondering where it will go and just how far. It's Sarah's birthday, and her long-term boyfriend Michael wants to get her something special. The only question is....will she get what she asks for? Even though she loves Michael, there's something about the guy that runs past their place every day like clockwork that turns her on. Even if Michael would agree to her fantasy, would the hunk agree?
An awesome quickie if you like menage. Looking forward to part two.
An awesome quickie if you like menage. Looking forward to part two.
February 2, 2016
This was a sexy, but yet completely plotless story. Sure for a short story the single sex scene was fun and quick to read. But in all honesty, beyond that the story was severely lacking.
November 3, 2019
Complaint: This is Not an MMF story.
DOMINATED BY TWO AN MMF THREESOME is not an MMF story at all. This is an MFM story. MMF requires sexual contact between the men as well as the woman. In this short story there is absolutely no contact between Michael and Luke.
I was also found it very irresponsible of the three people involved to not use condoms or to even bother discussing condom use or birth control or getting tested for disease. The author could have dropped in a quick sentence stating that Luke had been tested so Michael was ok with no condom use if Sarah was ok with it. I think at least mentioning that Michael cared about keeping Sarah safe would have been nice.
This is a very brief short story and the sex is sexy.
I was misled by the false advertising of the book title which states this is an MMF threesome, when this is only an MFM threesome.
This story loses one star for advertising this as MMF when it is not and this story loses one star for allowing Luke to not bother using a condom without explaining why unprotected sex with a stranger is safe to do.
DOMINATED BY TWO AN MMF THREESOME is not an MMF story at all. This is an MFM story. MMF requires sexual contact between the men as well as the woman. In this short story there is absolutely no contact between Michael and Luke.
I was also found it very irresponsible of the three people involved to not use condoms or to even bother discussing condom use or birth control or getting tested for disease. The author could have dropped in a quick sentence stating that Luke had been tested so Michael was ok with no condom use if Sarah was ok with it. I think at least mentioning that Michael cared about keeping Sarah safe would have been nice.
This is a very brief short story and the sex is sexy.
I was misled by the false advertising of the book title which states this is an MMF threesome, when this is only an MFM threesome.
This story loses one star for advertising this as MMF when it is not and this story loses one star for allowing Luke to not bother using a condom without explaining why unprotected sex with a stranger is safe to do.
February 15, 2019
Ok, for this short short story, I was into it. It was a quick set up and I wished I could have seen the conversation with Michael and Luke, but I was there for it. The guys were very comfortable with each other in the room, which is really unrealistic but this was like a hot fantasy one might have. And maybe if it was actually only a fantasy in her mind I might have bought it more. I was not so into the "pounding" her stuff because it seemed counter intuitive to the whole idea of this being her fantasy, that seems more like the guys fantasy. I of course would have loved if the guys got into each other even just a little bit. I am tempted to read the next part where she gets with all the guys at the firehouse but I don't want to pay for it. BTW I don't think condoms were used in this story which seems suspect and stupid.
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June 1, 2020This book is about a woman who tells her boyfriend that she wants the guy down the street for her birthday. Unexpectedly for her she gets exactly what she asked for.
This book was fun it's a threesome between a couple and a neighbor. The sex was hot but the story was short I wished there had been more story. The neighbor who is a firefighter asks if she'd like to have sex with more guys for example his friends from the fire station and she agrees with the permission of her boyfriend. That's how the book ends short and sweet.
I would recommend this book if you want a short read that involves a sexy threesome. I'm hoping we get more in the next book!
This book was fun it's a threesome between a couple and a neighbor. The sex was hot but the story was short I wished there had been more story. The neighbor who is a firefighter asks if she'd like to have sex with more guys for example his friends from the fire station and she agrees with the permission of her boyfriend. That's how the book ends short and sweet.
I would recommend this book if you want a short read that involves a sexy threesome. I'm hoping we get more in the next book!
October 22, 2019
Liked this short, hot and super sexy story! Mostly told thru Sarah's point of view. She's been with her boyfriend, Michael for 5yrs. She tells him she wants to have sex with the guy she sees out jogging every morning. Luke is a fireman and he's all for it and together with Michael, they give her a wild night for her birthday.
November 5, 2017
Super hot!!
Super short but is super hot!!! Its about a girl who asks for the guy down the street to be her birthday present as a joke to her boyfriend but when her boyfriend actually gets the guy to come over. All her dreams come true!
Super short but is super hot!!! Its about a girl who asks for the guy down the street to be her birthday present as a joke to her boyfriend but when her boyfriend actually gets the guy to come over. All her dreams come true!
April 2, 2019
What a birthday present
Michael asked her what she wanted for her birthday. She said the hot jogger. The day of her birthday she thought the spa treatment was it. But oh the surprise was so much better and two fold. Sexy fireman. Now even more sexy firemen. How lucky was she.
Michael asked her what she wanted for her birthday. She said the hot jogger. The day of her birthday she thought the spa treatment was it. But oh the surprise was so much better and two fold. Sexy fireman. Now even more sexy firemen. How lucky was she.
April 2, 2019
Fantasy lived
This is a very very short book where one birthday girl lives out her fantasy with the neighborhood fireman and it is a gift from her boyfriend. A quickie read in a quickie pace.
This is a very very short book where one birthday girl lives out her fantasy with the neighborhood fireman and it is a gift from her boyfriend. A quickie read in a quickie pace.
April 15, 2019
Short and dirty
This short story gets to the point. Her boyfriend gets her another man to join them and they both have fun. Ends with the promise of a whole firehouse of men going at her
This short story gets to the point. Her boyfriend gets her another man to join them and they both have fun. Ends with the promise of a whole firehouse of men going at her
November 14, 2019
Dominated by Two
A short but very good book. I really enjoyed the back story and the love behind this storyline. Everyone needs a live like this. The sex is hot and the three just make it hotter.
A short but very good book. I really enjoyed the back story and the love behind this storyline. Everyone needs a live like this. The sex is hot and the three just make it hotter.
May 6, 2022
Sarah, Micheal, and Luke
So hot! I love how possessive Micheal was without being jealous! Sarah is a strong, confident and sexual woman (and proud of it). I like that she's not ashamed or embarrassed, she was nervous but not a shy wallflower! Soo good!
So hot! I love how possessive Micheal was without being jealous! Sarah is a strong, confident and sexual woman (and proud of it). I like that she's not ashamed or embarrassed, she was nervous but not a shy wallflower! Soo good!
December 26, 2016
GREAT
Wonderful read must read,this book will have you wanting to read more really fast, and the second one also. GREAT READ
Wonderful read must read,this book will have you wanting to read more really fast, and the second one also. GREAT READ
July 12, 2017
Hot and steamy short, a great read for getting you hot under the collar. If you enjoy a steamy sexy menage short then this id for you but it is MFM not MMF just so you know.
July 21, 2018
Too hot to be so short.
Loved the story, hot sexy guys and hot sex. Just too short. Just as you really start to enjoy the read then it is gone.
Loved the story, hot sexy guys and hot sex. Just too short. Just as you really start to enjoy the read then it is gone.
July 26, 2018
This is a quick, hot read!! She never dreamed that her boyfriend would give her what she asked for for her birthday, but when her birthday arrived, Michael delivered exactly what she wanted.
August 18, 2018
Dominated by Two by Kenzie Haven. Very story story with hot sex scenes. Not much of a story and not very believable.
December 27, 2018
Dominated by Two
A very good book. I would recommend this book. Good story line kept your interest and attention making it hard to put down.
A very good book. I would recommend this book. Good story line kept your interest and attention making it hard to put down.
April 25, 2019
Meh. Know why it was free. Not an awful read, but nothing I'm going to remember in a couple days.
May 19, 2019
Nope
Got a few pages in and I had to stop. I felt like I was reading a dear penthouse letter, just wasn't my style.
Got a few pages in and I had to stop. I felt like I was reading a dear penthouse letter, just wasn't my style.
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July 4, 2019Horrible!
August 7, 2019
Hot
Great beginning short story off incomplete would have love to read more. Great for a quick workup. Enjoy yourself. ☺
Great beginning short story off incomplete would have love to read more. Great for a quick workup. Enjoy yourself. ☺
January 2, 2020
Juvenile sex scenes so if you're into that....
March 18, 2020
Good book. not the last I read of Kenzie
September 24, 2020
I love smutty stories
This was one smutty story about sex with more than one man. Love menage stories but this one was really great.
This was one smutty story about sex with more than one man. Love menage stories but this one was really great.
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