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Alpha Queen
**THIS ISNT A STANDALONE. ITS BOOK ONE OF MY ACTION SHIFTER SERIES KING OF ALPHAS** Lexi Valentina Lyon knew she was different. Not only did she stand out for being the only blonde in a sea of black haired women in her clan, but because her grandmother had always told her she was special. What’s worse than being pointed out everywhere you go? Naturally, not knowing the real reason behind it. Suddenly, everything changes after Lexi meets Prince Raven Langston. They share a connection so powerful, her grandmother has no choice but to reveal an entire millennia worth of secrets. What Lexi learns about herself and her past can either make her the most powerful women in the world, or if those secrets fall in the hands of the wrong group, then she would become the world’s most valuable target. In this book of the series you'll find lion, wolf and bear shifters.
31 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 16, 2015
About the author
Krystal White
27 books27 followersMy name is Krystal and I love reading and writing! I doubt I could be without my kindle as I take it everywhere with me as every moment I can spear I spend it reading.
I have always thought of myself as quite inventive and I figured it was time to put my creativity and imagination to work! That's when I decided to buy a smaller laptop that I could easily carry with me and furiously write whenever possible!
That's how on January 2015 I began writing and publishing my novellas. I love it and I hope you enjoy reading my stories almost as much as I enjoyed writing them!
If you don't know where to start I'd suggest you pick up Unforeseen, Fortuitous and Alpha Queen, which are all free.
I have always thought of myself as quite inventive and I figured it was time to put my creativity and imagination to work! That's when I decided to buy a smaller laptop that I could easily carry with me and furiously write whenever possible!
That's how on January 2015 I began writing and publishing my novellas. I love it and I hope you enjoy reading my stories almost as much as I enjoyed writing them!
If you don't know where to start I'd suggest you pick up Unforeseen, Fortuitous and Alpha Queen, which are all free.
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September 16, 2015
Alpha Queen- Krystal White (5 Stars)
This was a short read , but it was packed full of Action, Emotion & Romance between unforgettable characters that will make you impatiently wait until the next book is released from this series.
This was a short read , but it was packed full of Action, Emotion & Romance between unforgettable characters that will make you impatiently wait until the next book is released from this series.
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February 18, 2016
I loved the start of this book! The story is flowing fabulously and then *poof* the story is over. I know it is a novella, but it feels as though the story line is just dropped. I am hoping the second book picks back up the action and adventure that the first one starts with.
I love that the story revolves around many kinds of shifter families. I also enjoyed how the Princess has a secret that seemingly no one knows but her grandmother.
Off to read the next in the series as my curiosity has been peaked.
June 28, 2016
Disappointment
Okay this was an interesting book but it's only like 20 pages and you don't even finish the story. Reading it..honesty it felt like a sample. Great read but unfinished
Okay this was an interesting book but it's only like 20 pages and you don't even finish the story. Reading it..honesty it felt like a sample. Great read but unfinished
June 22, 2019
Riveting Read
For all u new shifter reader's this is a nice send off, with a bit of Romance and intrigue as well a mystery, it has good starting lines and friendship.
It pulls you into the story with ease that you won't want to put it down.
Well that is all I'm off to find book two, chow, And happy Reading.
For all u new shifter reader's this is a nice send off, with a bit of Romance and intrigue as well a mystery, it has good starting lines and friendship.
It pulls you into the story with ease that you won't want to put it down.
Well that is all I'm off to find book two, chow, And happy Reading.
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July 4, 2023I hope the author didn’t write the promotional material. “an entire millennia”? “make her the most powerful women”?
If so, an author who, in the most public-facing portion of her work (the promo), can’t— well, “how singular” it isn’t (to borrow part of a joke), but it’s distressing. Command of their tools is not unreasonable to ask of an artist.
If so, an author who, in the most public-facing portion of her work (the promo), can’t— well, “how singular” it isn’t (to borrow part of a joke), but it’s distressing. Command of their tools is not unreasonable to ask of an artist.
October 21, 2018
Unique
Never be a shame of the color of your hair because difference are what will single you out. She never thought she will be love😭 but her knight with sparkling blue eyes promise to take her hand.
Never be a shame of the color of your hair because difference are what will single you out. She never thought she will be love😭 but her knight with sparkling blue eyes promise to take her hand.
April 22, 2019
Very well written but for a younger audience
It was a nice story, though I wish it was longer. It is definitely for a younger age group though with the exaggerated explanations and sentences.
It was a nice story, though I wish it was longer. It is definitely for a younger age group though with the exaggerated explanations and sentences.
January 7, 2020
I am intrigued!
Ok, so this is a novella introducing the series.
I didn’t know what to expect but, I laughed out loud! I thoroughly enjoyed this and I’m heading to get the next in the series now!
Ok, so this is a novella introducing the series.
I didn’t know what to expect but, I laughed out loud! I thoroughly enjoyed this and I’m heading to get the next in the series now!
June 17, 2017
Not interesting. I can't even relate to the main character Lexi. I don't see myself Reading part 2. For it to be so short I still had to force myself to get through it.
November 2, 2017
Interesting Premise. I think the length, made some of the relationships feel forced--not long enough to develop naturally.
August 14, 2018
Good book
Though it was more a short story, I really did like it. What I liked best about it was it's steady flow.
Though it was more a short story, I really did like it. What I liked best about it was it's steady flow.
October 7, 2018
The writing and dialogue is awful but the storyline is interesting and has great potential.
November 14, 2018
Instead of reading a “book”, I feel like I’ve just read a “chapter”
Definitely wasn’t expecting it to end so soon
Definitely wasn’t expecting it to end so soon
December 23, 2018
Wow
I'm not one for reading these types of stories. Very short story, at that. Since it didn't take long to read, and the storyline intrigued me, on to the next!!!!
I'm not one for reading these types of stories. Very short story, at that. Since it didn't take long to read, and the storyline intrigued me, on to the next!!!!
January 11, 2019
Wtf
There’s are grammar issues, the characters were a little off, and then some those stuff about the book seems weird too.
There’s are grammar issues, the characters were a little off, and then some those stuff about the book seems weird too.
September 1, 2019
Not really my taste
Would recommend this for the 16-18 and group
Good story for the younger fantasy readers. Characters are likeable and well written
Would recommend this for the 16-18 and group
Good story for the younger fantasy readers. Characters are likeable and well written
February 7, 2020
This was boring and not exciting and only good part of this is how short it was
December 19, 2020
Great book
Amazing very short but it’s going to be a great series can’t wait to read book 2. You cannot miss this series
Amazing very short but it’s going to be a great series can’t wait to read book 2. You cannot miss this series
May 4, 2021
Great read!
So ready for the next book! Has me wanting more. I need to know the next part of this romance.
So ready for the next book! Has me wanting more. I need to know the next part of this romance.
May 6, 2021
LOve it
I really like this book with Raven and Valentina I can't wait to finish the series and find out how their Love story goes
I really like this book with Raven and Valentina I can't wait to finish the series and find out how their Love story goes
August 11, 2025
A very short story
Only 30 pages and really short. Just as you get the back ground it stops..
Buy another ... nope sorry
The tense is also annoying as in 1st person.
Only 30 pages and really short. Just as you get the back ground it stops..
Buy another ... nope sorry
The tense is also annoying as in 1st person.
November 24, 2018
Nice and quick read!
I enjoyed this nice and quick read. The characters are strong and the plot was great! I enjoyed Lexi and Raven.
I enjoyed this nice and quick read. The characters are strong and the plot was great! I enjoyed Lexi and Raven.
March 9, 2017
Good short preview
The very short preview to what the whole series is about starts out well. I hope to be able to read the whole series soon
The very short preview to what the whole series is about starts out well. I hope to be able to read the whole series soon
January 23, 2022
Not bad but not enough to make me read the next one.
December 27, 2016
Decent
It's a great but a bit short but it keeps you fully submerged in the storyline the full-time give it a read if you're just looking for a throughout their book
It's a great but a bit short but it keeps you fully submerged in the storyline the full-time give it a read if you're just looking for a throughout their book
March 9, 2016
Reviewed for SJ BOOK BLOG
Genre: paranormal romance (shifters)
What's it about: the story follows Lexi, a princess on the Lyon Island who's older sister Vanessa is about to participate in the coming of age celebration, the whole community is excited about the arrival of the swoon worthy Prince Raven, but when an unexpected chance encounter happens between Lexi and Raven it starts a chain of events that neither saw coming,
You will love this story if: you like paranormal shifter romances
The writing style of this author really draws you into the story, the story itself is original and a fantastic basis / foundation to a great story. This book is the first in a series and clearly sets up the characters and mythology.
The book however lacked details and was very short. It took me a few chapters to even realise Lexi was a princess living in a castle which drastically changes the images is built up in my head about how her home looked.
There is a lack of description of the settings and this is left mostly to the readers imagination. This can be seen as both a good thing and a bad thing.
The book seems to be more a novella but sets a great premise for the rest of the story. A fantastic interesting read I would highly recommend.
Genre: paranormal romance (shifters)
What's it about: the story follows Lexi, a princess on the Lyon Island who's older sister Vanessa is about to participate in the coming of age celebration, the whole community is excited about the arrival of the swoon worthy Prince Raven, but when an unexpected chance encounter happens between Lexi and Raven it starts a chain of events that neither saw coming,
You will love this story if: you like paranormal shifter romances
The writing style of this author really draws you into the story, the story itself is original and a fantastic basis / foundation to a great story. This book is the first in a series and clearly sets up the characters and mythology.
The book however lacked details and was very short. It took me a few chapters to even realise Lexi was a princess living in a castle which drastically changes the images is built up in my head about how her home looked.
There is a lack of description of the settings and this is left mostly to the readers imagination. This can be seen as both a good thing and a bad thing.
The book seems to be more a novella but sets a great premise for the rest of the story. A fantastic interesting read I would highly recommend.
February 21, 2016
I would just like to say something to you Ms White. Speech, thoughts and first person narration should sound natural. When you write, think "Do I speak like this? Do I pepper my conversations with words like 'therefore' and 'furthermore'? Do I avoid contractions at all costs?" If telling your friends a story, do you really feel the need to explain the reasoning behind every last little detail, like a) it matters and b) your audience are morons? When your other half asks how your day was, do you detail every step in chronological order or just give the significant parts?
On a lesser note, random comma placement and question marks after phrases that are not questions are annoying, as are Special Snowflake heroines who fall in instalove and cite Twilight as an influence.
I'm not trying to be harsh. If you're determined to keep writing, then I sincerely hope thinking about this will help you.
On a lesser note, random comma placement and question marks after phrases that are not questions are annoying, as are Special Snowflake heroines who fall in instalove and cite Twilight as an influence.
I'm not trying to be harsh. If you're determined to keep writing, then I sincerely hope thinking about this will help you.
June 23, 2015
Alpha Queen is the first book by Krystal White I have read. The book is not a standalone but a novella which does a great job in introducing and laying the ground work for each character. At the heart of the story is Lexi, a blonde shifter, who has always felt like an outcast with only two friends, Alaina and Michael. Having a mean sister, like Vanessa, doesn't help Lexi's social status either. But when Lexi meets Raven, everyone's world is turned upside down. Secrets are revealed but I think more are coming in subsequent installments. I've read a lot of shifter stories and this one has a different twist on the species. Something is off about Vanessa but the author doesn't say what exactly. The book isn't a cliffhanger but I was glad to have the second installment loaded on my Kindle ready to go.
August 15, 2015
I received a copy from the author for an honest review.
I'm not a big fan of shifter books but I will say I enjoyed this one. It is well written and laid out, the characters are very interesting, and I love the take on a classic fairy tail romance.
Alpha Queen is the perfect set up for the next book in the series and it had me wanting more all around. Lexi is a brilliant character and I just couldn't get enough of Raven. The only problem I had with the book was I needed more.
I wish there was more world building because I want to know more. I NEED to know more about this place, and the characters.
I'm not a big fan of shifter books but I will say I enjoyed this one. It is well written and laid out, the characters are very interesting, and I love the take on a classic fairy tail romance.
Alpha Queen is the perfect set up for the next book in the series and it had me wanting more all around. Lexi is a brilliant character and I just couldn't get enough of Raven. The only problem I had with the book was I needed more.
I wish there was more world building because I want to know more. I NEED to know more about this place, and the characters.
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