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The VIP
There was nothing Ophelia wanted better than to gouge Nikolai’s long-lashed, consuming blue eyes out with a butter knife and mail them to the rest of the Alvonich family. Too bad they were in a very public, very esteemed place – Mikhail’s wedding.
“You don’t think I’ll press the button?” Nikolai’s breath was warm and teasing in her ear.
Ophelia had no idea what possessed her to take up his challenge of a vibrating thong, except that it was too late to back out now. She turned to glance at the infuriating man beside her.
“Honestly, I don’t care. It won’t affect me.”
“Sweet Ophelia,” he whispered, surprising her by flicking his tongue into her ear.
Jumping, she glared at him, ignoring the important guests at her table, her father included.
Before she could curse at Nikolai, he pressed the button, the swearwords turning to soft moans under her breath. Gripping the edge of the table, Ophelia felt the attack on her cl!t like a burn to her skin. Her father shot her a concerned look from across the table and Nikolai’s voice was again in her ear.
“Before the end of the night, Ophelia, we will f**k,” he promised, releasing his finger from the remote control.
“Only this time, it will be my name you scream.”
“You don’t think I’ll press the button?” Nikolai’s breath was warm and teasing in her ear.
Ophelia had no idea what possessed her to take up his challenge of a vibrating thong, except that it was too late to back out now. She turned to glance at the infuriating man beside her.
“Honestly, I don’t care. It won’t affect me.”
“Sweet Ophelia,” he whispered, surprising her by flicking his tongue into her ear.
Jumping, she glared at him, ignoring the important guests at her table, her father included.
Before she could curse at Nikolai, he pressed the button, the swearwords turning to soft moans under her breath. Gripping the edge of the table, Ophelia felt the attack on her cl!t like a burn to her skin. Her father shot her a concerned look from across the table and Nikolai’s voice was again in her ear.
“Before the end of the night, Ophelia, we will f**k,” he promised, releasing his finger from the remote control.
“Only this time, it will be my name you scream.”
70 pages, ebook
First published December 9, 2013
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About the author
Kimber Lee
26 books511 followersKimber Lee comes from South Africa and commutes to class on an
elephant named Bill (not really). She started writing horror stories
as a child and now, she writes erotica as an adult. Her favorite kind
of hero is exotic and probably has a heavy accent. He’s weak when it
comes to the heroine and a total badass outside the bedroom.
If Kimber Lee could find a surgical way to be permanently joined to
her laptop, she would. But until then, she’ll continue to be a night
owl and write until dawn. When forced into daylight, she enjoys
reading scary stories, Indian food and EDM. She dreams of going to
Greece or Sweden because… accents. Oh, and the scenery.
elephant named Bill (not really). She started writing horror stories
as a child and now, she writes erotica as an adult. Her favorite kind
of hero is exotic and probably has a heavy accent. He’s weak when it
comes to the heroine and a total badass outside the bedroom.
If Kimber Lee could find a surgical way to be permanently joined to
her laptop, she would. But until then, she’ll continue to be a night
owl and write until dawn. When forced into daylight, she enjoys
reading scary stories, Indian food and EDM. She dreams of going to
Greece or Sweden because… accents. Oh, and the scenery.
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April 28, 2021
3.5 stars! This was a fun, short read. Ophelia was a bit annoying and not the most mature character but Nikolai really carried the story. At first I didn't have the greatest impression of him but as the story unfolded I slowly started falling for him. His capacity to love and care was really something else and I did not expect that he was actually in love with Ophelia all this time!
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March 21, 2019
So good as usual !
February 16, 2022
It was a tad weird to read Ophelia's story since she was a kid in The DILF but I got over it quickly.
This story is definitely a forbidden love and it was an enjoyable read!
This story is definitely a forbidden love and it was an enjoyable read!
September 19, 2025
kanyeinterruptedme had me in the most insane chokehold during the 2012-2017 wattpad era. i reread this book at LEAST 3 times.
September 12, 2016
I don't really like giving reviews for Kimber Lee's books since they're pretty short and there's not much to say about them. However, for this book, I think writing a review is a must.
I absolutely love Nikolai, and I don't know what it is about older men, but I tend to like them a lot ;). I just feel like they're more mature and understanding of women's emotions. Originally, I thought this was going to be an awkward story, seeing as Ophelia is Devin Shaw's daughter (from the DILF). Fortunately, it wasn't too bad. If anything, it made the story easier to sympathize with and it was of course very fun to see Devin act all fatherly.
As with all of Kimber Lee's other works, I wish there was less sex and perhaps more moving scenes. Don't get me wrong, she very much capable of incorporating moving scenarios in the stories but all the sex action is simply distracting. I feel like I've become immune to it simple from reading most of her works haha.
The VIP seems to be one of her better works... and now I feel like giving an overview review for all her works is better than separate, individual ones. It just seems better to compare them to one another since the stories are more or less going in the same direction with different elements (ex. older woman with younger guy, a girl cheating on her boyfriend with an ex, and so on). It all depends on whether your moral compass can accept it or not, because in the end, none of Kimber Lee's works are hate-able.
I absolutely love Nikolai, and I don't know what it is about older men, but I tend to like them a lot ;). I just feel like they're more mature and understanding of women's emotions. Originally, I thought this was going to be an awkward story, seeing as Ophelia is Devin Shaw's daughter (from the DILF). Fortunately, it wasn't too bad. If anything, it made the story easier to sympathize with and it was of course very fun to see Devin act all fatherly.
As with all of Kimber Lee's other works, I wish there was less sex and perhaps more moving scenes. Don't get me wrong, she very much capable of incorporating moving scenarios in the stories but all the sex action is simply distracting. I feel like I've become immune to it simple from reading most of her works haha.
The VIP seems to be one of her better works... and now I feel like giving an overview review for all her works is better than separate, individual ones. It just seems better to compare them to one another since the stories are more or less going in the same direction with different elements (ex. older woman with younger guy, a girl cheating on her boyfriend with an ex, and so on). It all depends on whether your moral compass can accept it or not, because in the end, none of Kimber Lee's works are hate-able.
October 18, 2020
The reason I got hooked on wattpad and on you Ms. Kimber Lee. Prince Nikolai and Jake will always be two of my favorite book bf💜
March 22, 2017
i thought the book was a good read. she made you think. Nikolai was awesome. very different love story from normal ones on Wattpad.
June 13, 2018
One of my all time wattpad hottest read.
March 18, 2020
Everytime I read this book, my heart lets out a sigh of relief. I love kolya more than words can explain. I love love love him. Love him.
June 15, 2021
Kim, you never fail to disappoint.
This is the second time I'm reading The VIP this month and, once again, I am completely, utterly mindblown.
I don't know how you came up with half of the scenes in this book - whether from personal experience or your imagination - but you definitely wrote it perfectly. The sex scenes in this book are better then half of the ones I've read in bestsellers. You are singlehandedly carrying Wattpad, trust me. I love your content so much. Great job. 5/5, I would definitely recommend this to everyone.
This is the second time I'm reading The VIP this month and, once again, I am completely, utterly mindblown.
I don't know how you came up with half of the scenes in this book - whether from personal experience or your imagination - but you definitely wrote it perfectly. The sex scenes in this book are better then half of the ones I've read in bestsellers. You are singlehandedly carrying Wattpad, trust me. I love your content so much. Great job. 5/5, I would definitely recommend this to everyone.
March 16, 2018
I am so in love with all her books! This one was amazing, Nikolai sets my standards way to high lol. I loved the chemistry and Kim's writing, as usual, is absolutely flawless!
April 20, 2020
4.5 stars
June 2, 2021
The story is short, but I really like the solid plot. I want to read another story written by the author.
August 26, 2021
The fact that this book is on Ophelia(Devin’s daughter, from the dilf) made me slightly uncomfortable.
September 1, 2021
Short but well written! For some reason, Nikolai reminds me of Nik from Shadow & Bone. Lol.
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December 27, 2021FOR NOSTALGIA OK….
November 13, 2022
First chapter I was already dying
December 22, 2022
I really loved this book .
October 17, 2023
One of my favourite books, reread so many times and each time I still get hooked! Spice is 🔥
August 18, 2024
Amazing
January 31, 2023
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May 22, 2020
update on 22/05/2020
As I'm revamping and updating my whole Goodreads account, I can't help change some rankings around. There are many books I loved that I think I wouldn't love if I read them as adults. There are books I think I'd hate if I read them now. I don't think I'd hate this one, but certainly not love it the way I did. At the same time I feel I'd be untrue to a book, if I changed its rating now. Why? Cause books, like people, come into our lives at a certain moment, at the right moment in which reading them would make a change within us. I really believe in that. Therefore, I feel like at that point in my life I needed to read this and it happened that I really enjoyed it. I'd be untrue to deny it and I'd be a total jerk to my younger self to consider her opinions irrelevant or uncultured.
I feel different towards books. It's natural, of course. But I don't want to feel bad about the younger me.
also, do not tell my mom at what age i read this... i am not proud.
As I'm revamping and updating my whole Goodreads account, I can't help change some rankings around. There are many books I loved that I think I wouldn't love if I read them as adults. There are books I think I'd hate if I read them now. I don't think I'd hate this one, but certainly not love it the way I did. At the same time I feel I'd be untrue to a book, if I changed its rating now. Why? Cause books, like people, come into our lives at a certain moment, at the right moment in which reading them would make a change within us. I really believe in that. Therefore, I feel like at that point in my life I needed to read this and it happened that I really enjoyed it. I'd be untrue to deny it and I'd be a total jerk to my younger self to consider her opinions irrelevant or uncultured.
I feel different towards books. It's natural, of course. But I don't want to feel bad about the younger me.
also, do not tell my mom at what age i read this... i am not proud.
June 2, 2021
short but i like it
January 22, 2019
Absolutely Amazing! Like all of Kim's other stories... This is one of those stories that you can't just put down. I keep coming back to read this beautifully written erotic novel and I can't help myself anymore. All of the men in the author's books are just--I don't even know how to put it! My heart starts beating fast when I read about them is one way to say it.
I would like to finish by saying I love Nikolai!
I would like to finish by saying I love Nikolai!
July 7, 2025
3.5 stars
Used to be a 5 star, now I find some plot points more problematic than I did in my teens and don't love the nickname he uses for her. Overall, it's just a little too corny for my liking, but still one of the few smut novellas I'd chose to reread.
Used to be a 5 star, now I find some plot points more problematic than I did in my teens and don't love the nickname he uses for her. Overall, it's just a little too corny for my liking, but still one of the few smut novellas I'd chose to reread.
July 1, 2025
I definitely wish this story had been a little longer, which is the only reason it’s 4 stars. But I still loved it. To tell Ophelia’s story was an amazing idea. I also love how risqué it is. I can’t say much more without spoiling, but it’s absolutely fantastic. 😌
July 30, 2016
This was quite good except it had too much sex -.-
July 19, 2020
It gets better everytime i read it
December 15, 2020
Never get enough of this!
February 17, 2021
This book is awesome.
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