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Modern Jane #4

Unromantic

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In a family of hopeless romantics and dreamers, Elinor is the sensible one. Her mom is an artist, her sister is a poet, and Elinor’s just doing her best to keep the family afloat.

After her father’s untimely death, she takes over his job managing Norland Park, a rustic family resort in Big Sur, California.

Elinor doesn’t mind unclogging toilets, smoking hornet nests, and dealing with grumpy guests as long as it means she can continue to live with her mom and sister in their beloved Bumble Cottage rent fee—a perk of being camp manager.

But when Norland Park gets a new owner, Elinor’s idyllic life is threatened.

She can’t deny her initial attraction to the new owner’s son, Edward. But neither his charming smile, dry sense of humor, nor their shared childhood memories, can make up for the fact that he’s working to destroy her beloved home by turning it into a luxury resort.

Book 4 in the Modern Jane Series, Unromantic is a contemporary retelling of Elinor’s story from Sense and Sensibility. It can be enjoyed on its own and read out of order, like all the books in the series. However, Unromantic should be read before Romantic, Marianne’s story from Sense and Sensibility–available fall 2026.

231 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 7, 2026

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Ruth Mitchell

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Ruth Mitchell strongly believes the world needs more happy endings. She aims to write “hospital waiting room” books, stories that cheer and distract readers when their world is crumbling, make them laugh and sigh, and finish with a little more hope. All of her books are love stories with plenty of banter, and sizzling chemistry, but no spice. (Just kissing.)
Ruth and her husband live in San Diego, where their four mostly-grown children visit often. She loves long rambling conversations, baking (she makes the best pie), hiking, and running (slowly) along the coasts and canyons of Southern California.
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562 reviews492 followers
June 3, 2026
🎉 currently FREE on Amazon 🎉


Are you kidding me? This was so romantic! 🥰🥰🥰


Elinor and Edward have a meet-cute, but she doesn’t date tourists, so she doesn’t agree to a date. Which she promptly regrets. As she should. Luckily, fate throws them back together a few months later, and it turns out that things are complicated—but also that they were each other’s childhood crushes, which was so adorable I couldn’t stop smiling.

I loved, loved, loved their chemistry. The accidental touches and almost-kisses, the teasing and banter, and the cutest letters they would leave for each other in a rusty, abandoned mailbox. Edward was the sweetest golden retriever of a man, and he was crazy about Elinor from the beginning, so basically my favorite type of hero. Elinor was a bit skittish at times, but she was very lovable, and I was rooting for both of them.

The only thing that didn’t work for me was the way everyone was constantly and very openly trying to match Edward and Elinor. J.J., especially, should have a chat with HR about what’s appropriate to say and what isn’t. But it’s a minor thing, and this book is my absolute favorite in the series.

I can’t wait for Annie and Brandon!


Thanks to the author for the ARC, all opinions are my own.
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1,667 reviews260 followers
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September 20, 2026
Dnf 10%.
I had high hopes because it's been a while since my last MF romance.
Don't like neither the FMC nor the MMC nor their families and the vibes they all give off. Obviously 10% is too early to judge the characters or story, but I'm setting this book aside for now.
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391 reviews13 followers
September 23, 2026
1.5 Rated G. Contemporary Romance

I have not read a book I disliked this much in a long time!
But look at the other reviews….. it gets high ratings and I hear how “sweet” it is….. I just don’t get it….. 🙄🤔

It takes place at a resort/campground in Big Sur, CA.
(I was excited because it is beautiful and I love it there)
A big company wants to buy it and make it a resort for the rich.
Edward - rich guy. And Elinor - nature loving camp host
Fall in like/love but have very different views.
Both act very immature and caused me to have major eye rolls. I didn’t like either one of them.
I thought the writing was poor and unrealistic.
( this author is on my list of DO NOT READ AGAIN)

Edward was:
A mamas boy
He lies
He thinks smiling and charm gets him anything
Like to show off his wealth
Did not break up with other girlfriend because it was hard and he is a self-proclaimed coward

I guarantee in 10 years we will be reading about him cheating in one of those books.

Do I recommend? Hell NO!
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1,551 reviews176 followers
September 23, 2026
I have yet to find any Austen fan fiction that comes even close to the vibe of the original books.

I got as far as page 39 in Unromantic where the heroine gushes: “My eyes drift to his toned forearms, and I have the strangest urge to touch his bare skin. Me, Elinor Greenwood – who, by the way, has always ranked touch as the last of my love languages and has never called a man ‘hot’ my entire life – is imagining myself running my fingers across this stranger’s forearms.”

The word “hot” was never applied to any of Austen’s heroes before the advent of Colin Firth’s wet shirt scene in 1995 version of Pride and Prejudice (which never took place in the book, by the way). And it should never appear in any book that pretends to be based on an Austen novel.

I could not continue reading after this trite treatment of one of my favorite Austen characters, Elinor Dashwood. Her quiet suffering while trying to care for her flighty family, and her willingness to put aside her own wishes to provide for them deserves a better description than juvenile goosebumps.

Rant over.
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1,300 reviews176 followers
September 17, 2026
Just really sweet and satisfying. I appreciate that it’s *inspired by* Sense and Sensibility rather than trying to replicate the story moment for moment. This gives the characters and the story some space to blossom.
A fast and smooth read, perfect for when you need something kind and gentle. This is the story of the Elinor-like character. Can be read as a standalone, but I very much look forward to reading the next book, which will tell the Marianne story.
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Review of advance copy received from Author
June 6, 2026
Is there an Austen heroine more unromantic than Elinor Dashwood? Well, perhaps Charlotte Lucas, but we are talking Sense and Sensibility here. I always suspected that Elinor was just as romantic as her sister and mother, but suffered from being the responsible eldest daughter. And perhaps had some higher standards than Marianne.

I received an ARC of the first part of Ruth Mitchells Sense & Sensibility duology, Unromantic, focussing on the story of Elinor and Edward. S&S is tricky to modernise, but Ruth does it very convincingly.
In this book, the Greenwoods are not forced to leave their beloved Norland, but due to the death of its owner they are in uncertain waters: will Norland Park be sold and/or redeveloped, and will there be a place for them?
Norland Park takes the form of a very lovingly portrayed holiday parc/camp ground, which is so magical that even I (not a camper or hiker at all) would love to see it. Who can resist a beach perfect for treasure seeking, a whishing tree named Lady Whimple, and a café that has people coming in from hundreds of miles? It really is a character of its own.

Ellie is the general manager of NP, and Edward (Frechette in this re-imaging) is not only the grandson of the deceased owner, son of the present owner, but also their new landlord. Will he be able to sell adorable Bumble Cottage and evict the Greenwoods, or will he cave in and ‘fall for a Greenwood’ as his mother warned him not to?
We already had a sneak peek of Edward in Caroline Bingley’s story, Desperate, and I love the way the two stories are deftly woven together.
The mutual attraction between Ellie and Edward is clear from the start, but both struggle to keep the relationship professional. The alternating POVs show the effort both make to try to appear distant, while every other person in the book isn’t fooled at all.

Keep your eyes out for reincarnations of other beloved characters: Brandon, of course, mrs Jennings, Sir Middleton and Lucy Steele all have a part to play. Margaret is merged with the original Brandon ward to become Pepper, who is simply irrisistable.

It is going to be a long wait till September, when Romantic, the story of Marianne and Brandon is published!
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749 reviews10 followers
July 13, 2026
4.5*
I have yet to meet a Ruth Mitchell book that I haven't liked and this one is no exception. I can even say that I liked it more than the Persuasion adaptation (which for me is saying a lot since I have a bias towards any Persuasion adaptation).
I thoroughly loved Ellie (Elinor) and an Edward who, while conflict avoidant, was much more likeable than canon and had a dynamic that was believable and didn't have me rooting for a Elinor/Brandon pairing like I did from canon.
This was just well written, easy reading, dry humour and actually has me looking forward to Annie's story - which again is surprising because I didn't like Marianne from cannon very much.

I received a free copy of this book direct from the author (thank you!) and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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949 reviews
August 19, 2026
4.5 - This was fun. I don't remember a lot from the OG book or movie, so this was less of a retelling to me and more of just a fun book. I read most of it in one day and it was a lovely escape. I enjoyed the characters and pacing. Ruth Mitchell is SO good at writing in a way that I see it and imagine it as a movie. I can't wait for the next one!
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1,864 reviews10 followers
July 2, 2026
Here's the thing. Sense and Sensibility is a bottom-tier Jane Austen novel for me. I know so many people count it as their favorite, but I just can't get there at all with the story or the characters.

The fit that my brain pitched when it realized I was reading a Sense and Sensibility retelling should be studied. I do wonder if it would have even really picked up on the fact that it was a Sense and Sensibility retelling if I hadn't known that before diving into this book, though? Because, while the characters were similar, Unromantic was also it's own unique and wonderful story.

But my brain knew, and it fought me the entire way through this book, refusing to settle in as much as I would have liked.

I felt Elinor's struggles deeply as a fellow eldest daughter with entirely too much responsibility and pressure placed upon her from a young age. I loved her cautious, reasoned responses to her situations, but I also wanted to shake her out of her rationality, much as I regularly want to do to myself.

Edward got a serious makeover in this book, but he was still such a wet noodle through most if it.

Colonel Brandon was a quiet force that I enjoyed immensely. I'm looking forward to getting to know him better in the next book.

Lucy Steele was absolutely dreadful. As she should be.

So, should you read this? Absolutely you should.

Will I read it again? Absolutely I will.

Will my feelings about Sense and Sensibility change? Absolutely not.
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927 reviews
June 5, 2026
"My mom and sister call me unromantic, but that isn't true. I am simply careful with my heart. Because I know just how easily I could lose it."

I am very picky about my Austen adaptations. In my experience, the best ones pay homage to and acknowledge her genius while putting their own creative spin on her timeless stories. Ruth Mitchell does both.

Mitchell has chosen to split Sense and Sensibility into two separate books, Unromantic and Romantic, told from each sister's point of view. Elinor, the practical older sister, has had to be the voice of sense and reason in her family since the death of her father while her mother and younger sister refuse to face reality. "My dad used to say, 'With Ellie everything is understatement, and with Annie everything's hyperbole.' " When Norland Park, her family's home and the site of the rustic resort she manages, is passed to new management and she encounters the new owner's son Edward--well, as the author assures the reader in a note at the beginning, this is a romance with a guaranteed happy ending but there's no escaping all of life's unpleasantness. However, the journey is an absolute delight.

As always, knowledge of Austen's work is not required to enjoy this book but the experience is SO much richer for Janeites! There is a quote from Sense and Sensibility at the beginning of each chapter (taken from the David M. Shapard annotated edition, my personal favorite) and if you know the story well there are many clever parallels in terms of character, dialogue, and situation.

Having read every book in the series, I think this one might be my favorite so far. I can't wait for Romantic.

I was thrilled to receive an ARC of this from the author in exchange for an honest review.
217 reviews
June 13, 2026
loved it!

I am loving the retellings of the best novels by Ruth Mitchell. She doesn’t force the story it’s just updated and flows so wonderfully!! What an adorable read. I couldn’t put it down and now I will be exhausted for tomorrow
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69 reviews
August 25, 2026
Loved this book so much! I want to go to Big Sur now! The author paints such a beautiful picture :)
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55 reviews1 follower
June 29, 2026
I loved this book! (It also has me hungry for a trip to Big Sur- the imagery that Ruth Mitchell paints in all of her books make me feel like I am there or want to be there!) This book is a great modern, fun take on sense and sensibility; but, being well versed in the original book is not a prerequisite to enjoy this one- It can stand on its own! The characters are cute, funny and the author managed to give them great depth without the book being overly fussy or too long- it’s just perfect!
I’m excited to read the next book in the series, I always fly through these! Recommend to everyone!
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59 reviews6 followers
July 15, 2026
“My mom and sister call me unromantic, but that isn’t true. I am simply careful with my heart. Because I know just how easily I could lose it.”

Sigh… @literally.ruth.mitchell books have become comfort reads for me. Books with familiar characters from Jane Austen novels finding love in the modern day… if you know me at all, you know these are right up my alley!

Unromantic is book 4 in Ruth Mitchell’s Modern Jane series and gives us a contemporary retelling of Elinor and Edward’s love story from Sense & Sensibility.

Elinor loves her home, Edward is there to kick her out. Brace yourself for lots of pining and longing, delightful love letters, and descriptions of Big Sur that will have you wanting to take a road trip!

Unromantic is sweet and charming and left me
anxiously awaiting Marianne & Brandon’s story due out in September!
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921 reviews11 followers
August 2, 2026
3.4 stars

A super cute and fun read that delivers on all the author promises. I do wish the drama could have been more complex, but then it wouldn’t be the fluffy read it is supposed to be.

This is squeaky clean with kisses that were close to a G rating. I would feel comfortable letting a teenager read this. I plan on reading more in the series ASAP.
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56 reviews
August 22, 2026
Such a cute book!! I love any book linked to Jane Austen’s work, but this book could easily stand on its own for people that haven’t read Sense and Sensibility. The setting of Norland Park is idyllic and I wish I could go visit there. Edward and Elinor have a sweet backstory and I loved seeing them overcome obstacles that actually seemed like realistic obstacles. I can’t wait to read Romantic!!
**I was given this book by the author for an unbiased review. The words are my own.**
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887 reviews23 followers
June 14, 2026
I received a complimentary e-copy of this book and was under no obligation to leave a positive review.

I absolutely loved Unromantic by Ruth Mitchell. I have enjoyed every book in the Modern Jane series, and this one was no exception. Even though these books are connected, they work wonderfully as standalones, and I always look forward to seeing how the author reimagines classic Jane Austen stories in a modern setting.

Elinor was such an easy character to root for. She carries so much responsibility on her shoulders as she works to keep her family’s life together after her father’s death. I loved her practical nature and determination, but I also appreciated the glimpses of vulnerability beneath her strong exterior. The setting of Norland Park in Big Sur was charming and immersive, and I could easily picture Bumble Cottage and the resort grounds.

The romance between Elinor and Edward was delightful. Their shared history added depth to their relationship, and I enjoyed watching them navigate their conflicting goals and growing feelings. The tension surrounding the future of Norland Park kept me invested from beginning to end.

One of my favorite things about this series is how naturally the Austen inspiration blends into contemporary life. Fans of Sense and Sensibility will recognize familiar elements, but the story still feels fresh and unique.

A quick note for readers who prefer completely clean language: there are a few mild curse words throughout the book.

If you enjoy contemporary romance, Jane Austen retellings, memorable characters, and stories with plenty of heart, I highly recommend Unromantic. This was another wonderful addition to a series that has yet to disappoint me, and I cannot wait to read Marianne’s story in Romantic. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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149 reviews15 followers
September 4, 2026
This was such a unique modern day Sense & Sensibility retelling! ✨ Set in Big Sur, California at a rustic family resort called Norland Park, this story was chockfull of vibrant, picturesque settings and fun, quirky characters that made it so easy to be transported into this world! Following a family of hopeless romantics, Elinor feels it’s her duty to stay level-headed and logical in her decisions as manager of the resort — which has suddenly had a change in ownership that could upend their life completely.

Although this story was largely insta-love, a trope that usually doesn’t work for me, it fit the story of Elinor and Edward accurately, so I was able to let that go fairly quickly! Edward was so charming and easy to love, especially after their adorable meet-cute ☺️💕 . It was easy to start rooting for their relationship! One of the strengths of this story was certainly the prose - it was beautiful and well thought-out, with passage after passage of quotes that hit pretty deeply. I also loved learning about what made this resort so special (their traditions were the cutest) 🥰. It had such a warm, cozy feel that’ll be sure to make you smile 💕. Not to mention Edward and Elinor were in their late twenties! It was so refreshing to read a story about two adults who are very established in their jobs and know, (for the most part) who they are. However, I did find myself getting slightly aggravated at some of the tension in the book, especially on Edward’s side. It felt a little unnecessary and pulled me out of the story at times. But I also understand the point of it in order to follow one of the main story beats in Sense & Sensibility.


I have to say, I’m SUPER invested in Annie and Brandon’s story! 😍 I can’t lie though, I’m a huge fan of Colonel Brandon and Marianne; not to mention the yearning that makes up much of their story! I’m ALL about that yearn and slow burn, and let me tell you, I was feeling that sizzling heat and tension haha. I loved all their interactions and cannot wait to read their book coming out this month! 😍 I have a feeling I might like it more!

If you love Sense & Sensibility retellings, but want a modern twist set in rustic family resort in Big Sur, pick up this one!!💕

💕: kisses only
🤬: minimal cursing
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594 reviews27 followers
August 25, 2026

I love a retelling/ reimagining but the ones that mean the most to me are the ones that understand what was at the heart of the original. Jane Austen
understood people so incredibly well…the things we feel but don’t say, the ways society shapes our choices, and how easily we can mistake restraint for a lack of feeling. The pining is wonderful, of course, but there is always something much more human underneath it.

That’s what I appreciated so much about Unromantic, Ruth Mitchell’s contemporary reimagining of Sense and Sensibility. Elinor and Edward have always felt like such a beautiful example of two people who love deeply but carry those feelings carefully. Their restraint never means they feel less, and I loved that this story understood that about them.

There’s also a nod to Austen and her words at the beginning of every chapter, with a quote from Sense and Sensibility. I loved those little reminders of the story I already know and love while getting to experience Elinor and Edward in a completely different way. This time at Norland Park in Big Sur, with Elinor trying to protect the home she loves and Edward caught on the other side of it. There was so much heart in this reimagining, and between the banter, the charm, and all that pining, I completely fell for this version of their story too.

There was something about this quote that felt so profoundly Elinor to me…the tenderness of loving so much while being so careful with what you let yourself hope for:

“My mom and sister call me unromantic, but that isn’t true. I am simply careful with my heart. Because I know just how easily I could lose it.”

“I am simply careful with my heart.” I loved that.

I’m already so ready for Romantic and Marianne and Brandon’s story. I enjoyed this one so much that I went straight to the Modern Jane series and ordered Persuasion. That story will always be my favorite Austen!
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84 reviews2 followers
August 31, 2026
This has become one of my favorite books that I will always recommend! 🥰💕
From the very first chapter I had to pause to grab my annotation tabs for this one!
The way they meet (as adults) is so cute & kind of mysterious! The history with them being childhood friends mixed with their current attraction, & the fact that he is supposed to essentially evict her & her family from their home…. It created a dynamic that I didn’t want to put down! So swoony, with layers of depth, wonder, & laughable moments. I adored both of the MC’s for different reasons. ♥️
Also, her sister’s storyline & possible love interest! 🤭 I was just as invested in their storyline!
Now dying to read the next book & really anything Ruth writes is on my tbr! 😍
If you enjoy friends to lovers this is a must! 🙂

-Witty Banter 😆
- Artist FMC 🎨
- Class differences
- Childhood friends to lovers 💞
- Small Town 🏡
- Workplace Romance 😍
- Dual POV ✨
- Meddling Family 🤭
- Big Sur setting 🌊
- Letters back & forth 💌

Thank you to the author for a gifted copy of this book. All thoughts are my own.
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872 reviews
September 5, 2026
Unromantic is anything but that!

I loved every minute of reading and editing this book—such a blast! Ruth Mitchell has paid beautiful homage to the original story and characters, making them feel believable while still staying true to the spirit of Sense & Sensibility. I especially enjoyed what she does with the Elinor/Edward/Lucy Steele drama—and the setting! Can we all take a trip to Big Sur, please?

Even better, she’s working on a companion novel featuring Marianne (Annie) and Brandon as central characters. You get a glimpse of them in this book—and trust me, you’ll like this Brandon. 😊

I’m speaking as someone who loves the original novel, the 1995 and 2008 adaptations, and is also excited for the new film. If you fall into any of those categories, I think you’ll have a lot of fun with this one.
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1,665 reviews13 followers
September 14, 2026
I adored this! It was sweet and engaging and immediately captured my heart and attention. Elinor and Edward were sensible, cautious, and wanted to do the right thing but their feelings were big and messy. Add in family expectations and a picturesque location and it is a romance that had me rooting for Elinor and Edward. Elinor’s family was a delight and I want to visit Norland Park and eat at the cafe and become friends with them. Brandon and Pepper add so much to the story and I want more of them!

This is part of the Modern Jane series and is a contemporary retelling of Elinor’s story from Sense and Sensibility and I highly recommend it!

Thanks to the author and Great Reads for the free, gifted copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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413 reviews70 followers
October 4, 2026
I have Sense & Sensibility on the brain! With my recent reread of Jane Austen's classic and the new movie coming out, I have been thinking all things Sense & Sensibility!

Unromantic is a retelling of this story but focuses on Elinor and Edward. This is a contemporary setting in which Elinor manages a rustic family resort in California. Unfortunately for her, a childhood friend turns up with a handsome smile and news of his new ownership of their family home.

Love story stays true to the classic but with fun new details. I love the outdoors feel and the fun family shenanigans. The romance was sweet and adorable. I love the letters 🥰

I really want to read "Marianne's" story now! Thank you @literally.ruth.mitchell for my copy!
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655 reviews
July 10, 2026
I haven’t read a Ruth Mitchell book that I haven’t liked! This is part of her Modern Jane series and is a modern day story reminiscent of Sense and Sensibility. I can’t wait to read the next book to find out where Annie and Brandon’s story leads. Brain candy!!
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41 reviews
September 7, 2026
Unromantic was such a great modern twist on Sense and Sensibility! Elinor and Edward’s story was so enjoyable, and I loved seeing this classic romance reimagined in a fresh way. I can’t wait to see Brandon and Marianne’s story next! 💕📚
45 reviews
October 16, 2026
I loved this. It was a cute, quick read while I was on vacation. I felt like the main character portrayals stayed pretty true to their originals, but with more modern surroundings and issues. I'd read it again
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787 reviews2 followers
June 14, 2026
It’s a simple story that draws you in and captivates, fun read when you want to get away from everything
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717 reviews5 followers
June 27, 2026
This was cute. I think it got resolved a bit too easily, though. 3.5 stars rounded up.
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35 reviews
July 2, 2026
This book was adorable! I loved it so much, and couldn’t put it down. I enjoyed the witty banter and the flirting.
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1,074 reviews7 followers
July 21, 2026
fast nice hallmark story
she us running an old inn, the owner dies and leaves it to his grandson. will they tear it down and build a luxury hotel?
the characters were sweet
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