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*Warning*The books in this series can NOT be read as a standalone!After spending years suffering abuse at the hands of her father and protecting her baby sister, Eden Blake takes a chance. She calls on the Angels Warriors MC asking for protection just months before her father is to be released from prison. She never expected that call would bring her face to face with her past.Jasper ‘Angel’ Hughes, President of the Angels Warriors MC, battled his way to the top. He fought his way through hell, cleaning up the mess that was once Satan’s Law MC. Wanting to serve a better purpose in life he took on the role of child protector. Protecting them from their hellish lives and getting them away from their abusers. When he gets the call to protect Eden, the first girl he ever loved, he vows to win her back and never let her go again. But when a new secret comes to light that Eden was hiding, will they get their Happily Ever After?**Please Note** This Author's books are NOT recommended for Safe Readers.

211 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 23, 2015

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Dawn Martens

57 books2,036 followers
Dawn Martens is a young, spunky Canadian Author. Being a wife to Colin, a mother to three beautiful little girls (Sarah (2007), Grace (2010), and Ava (2014)) and of course best friend to fellow author Glenna Maynard, hasn't stopped this Canadian Firecracker from pursuing her dreams of becoming a writer!
Dawn's number one passion in life is the written word, and she's extremely thankful that she has the ability to share the ramblings from the characters inside of her head with the rest of the world!
She also may or may not have the hugest girl crush on Author Kristen Ashley, who is her personal idol and helped inspire Dawn in the beginning of her Indie career.

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Profile Image for ★¸. • * ° * ༺*Blanka*༺*°°*•.¸. ♥★.
2,246 reviews328 followers
February 9, 2017
Seriously?
I'm supposed to believe Eden left her two small children with her best friend for five years so she can get beaten and raped by her father on a daily basis to save her small sister, that might not really even be her sister?
Hell, NO!
Foxy some MC wanna be whore gave birth to a child, dropped the child off with Eden's father, and Eden leaves her two small children with her best friend so she can be beaten for five years?!?!
What mother would abandon her kids like that?
Her best friend's Lily's dad is the best attorney in the state and so is her best friend Hilary she could have gotten some charges on her dad, but for me to believe she chose a small child over her own NO WAY!

So far fetched I barely made it!
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1,633 reviews174 followers
January 3, 2016
Omg secrets everywhere



Eden as such a shit life at only 25 she as gone through the mill her father is a total monster and bastard there is nothing that he asnt done to her but she alway looks on the bright side of life loads of things happen but once her father is out of the pic as in jail she can start getting her life back for her an her sister but when she hears he mite b out soon she needs protection she can't go back to the life s he had so she rings the Angel Warriors MC but she gets the shock of her life when she see Jasper or Angel as he goes by know he was her high school sweetheart an best friend they grow up together but she left him so he as a lot of question for her know she's back but he broke her heart so things wont b so easy the secrets they both have could cause more drama 4 there relationship



I luvd these characters Jasper/Angel is super hot he is the president of the Angel Warriors an a lot as changed but know Eden is back he isn't goin to let her go not after her bein away for so long no one knows what Eden as been through only her bff's Lilly an Hillary Jasper will do anything to get her back he as never stopped luvin her an he will wear her down she is sassy as ever an this just turns him on even more once he get his hands on her they can't stop anything from happening they have sex everything they can't seem to get enough of each other after not havin each other for so long they need each other more than anything



This was a good story I 've been left wanting so much more so I m hopin I find out more in the next 2 books but the story is really good it's heart breaking what these characters r goin through there is so many secrets goin with everyone nearly everyone as secrets once some of they come out they tear people apart an it will b hard to get them back together I have been left wondering how could it end that way with things still up in the air fingers crossed I get the answers but I did enjoy this an dyin to find out what happens with everyone



The book as a great storyline it super sexy with hot bikers what more could u want but is as a cliffy that's a killer but I would recommend it it's full of action xxx




Profile Image for Carol (StarAngel's Reviews) Allen.
1,692 reviews634 followers
July 16, 2015
4 Secrets only hurt Stars

When I first picked up this book, I thought the writing wasn't the best but I continued reading...then the drama just escalated and found myself rolling my eyes over and over again.

But by the time I got into the story, I couldn't put it down.

Then as soon as I read the last paragraph, I just HAD to get the next book in the series.

It's like a daytime soap opera that is so over the top but you just can't stop watching!

Off to the next story of Lilly and Zippo....
Profile Image for Glenna Maynard.
Author 156 books1,518 followers
February 19, 2015
Unkiss me puts a fresh twist on motorcycle romance. Dawn Martens has written a unique tale woven and laced with romance and suspense. I loved it! Several times while reading I found myself shaking my kindle while I screamed at the characters.There are a few steam up the kindle screen moments that had me wondering where can I find my own Jasper. There were also some hilarious moments that had me laughing aloud...be ready for Mrs. Shepard that woman is a nut! I cannot wait to see what unfolds in the next books.
2,103 reviews24 followers
November 9, 2019
This is one of these stories where you grit your teeth at the female characters as she screeches her way throughout the story and actually needs to grow up!
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Author 60 books3,973 followers
February 19, 2015
I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS

But, Dawn's work makes you want to read the rest in the series! If a book has a cliff-hanger I don't bother getting, and if I read one that I didn't know had a cliff-hanger, I don't bother buying the rest. In this case, Dawn has left me intrigued enough to WANT to know everything. I love all her characters, great MC book!
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2,113 reviews62 followers
December 6, 2025
Jasper was Edie's first love. She moves away to protect herself as well as her sister.

She moves back and all hell breaks when secrets come out. Jasper isn't willing to forgive and that is not ok considering he has his own.

Danger is lurking.
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4,304 reviews642 followers
August 29, 2023
4 ⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Liked it!
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I liked this second reading better. The author always delivers the revenge that I love so much and exes and club whores have bloody and grotesque deaths, which makes my heart warm!

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Eu gosto muito desta autora e como eu odeio cliffhanger eu esperei sair os 3 livros para iniciar a leitura.
Nosso herói é um completo canalha, assim que a heroína sai da cidade ele se joga nas drogas e álcool e começa um relacionamento com uma das vadias que era inimiga da heroína. E este relacionamento dura até o momento que ele descobre que ela voltou pra cidade, então ele chuta a mulher e ainda diz que ela sabia que isso aconteceria.
Completo idiota e fraco de caráter. Babaca!
Nossa heroína não é muito esperta também... toma uma série de decisões que ferram com a vida dela cada vez mais. É um desastre e um drama atrás do outro.
Se você procura um "book boyfriend", não é aqui que vai achar.

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I really like this author and I hate cliffhanger, then I waited out the 3 books to start reading.
The hero is a complete bastard, so the heroine leaves the city he plays in the drugs and alcohol and begins a relationship with one of the bitches that was an enemy of the heroine. And this relationship lasts until the moment he finds out that she's back in town, so he kicks his girlfriend out and still says that she knew this would happen.
Complete idiot and weak character. Asshole!
Our heroine is not very smart too ... take a series of decisions that end up screwing her life more and more. Is a disaster and a tragedy after another.
If you're looking for a book boyfriend, is not here you're going to find.


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mumbling!!!!! still ...
What mother abandons her children and puts himself in a hostile environment to protect another child that's supposed to be your sister. It's an attitude too dumb to live.
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Blurb:
After spending years suffering abuse at the hands of her father and protecting her baby sister, Eden Blake takes a chance. She calls on the Angels Warriors MC asking for protection just months before her father is to be released from prison. She never expected that call would bring her face to face with her past.

Jasper ‘Angel’ Hughes, President of the Angels Warriors MC, battled his way to the top. He fought his way through hell, cleaning up the mess that was once Satan’s Law MC. Wanting to serve a better purpose in life he took on the role of child protector. Protecting them from their hellish lives and getting them away from their abusers. When he gets the call to protect Eden, the first girl he ever loved, he vows to win her back and never let her go again.

But when a new secret comes to light that Eden was hiding, will they get their Happily Ever After?
Profile Image for Cristina.
341 reviews334 followers
May 8, 2015
Warning: This book contains sexual situations between and adult and a minor so if you are easily offended by this then you might what to reconsider reading this book. The novel is also part of a 3 book serial so it ends with a cliffhanger.

I was really conflicted about rating this book because I kept going between 3 or 4 stars. I settled for 3 but truth be told it's a little bit above that.

Why did I struggle? Well because at times I really enjoyed it but there where parts I skipped ahead...and when those parts involve sex it means that the book has no 4 star potential for me. Good story and great sex should both be in a great romance book :D

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Here's what I liked :D

- Interesting story - for a biker book it had a pretty interesting story, filled with drama and suspense. Even if at times it was a little predictable it still kept me on my toes :D

- Hot biker :D Who doesn't love that? In my mind I was seeing Charlie :P

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- The new stile of MC in which they putt their "powers" to good use they don't pride themselves on being 1%

What I didn't like was the way the characters interacted and acted sometimes...it just made me what to straggle them. Not to mention the frustrating "misunderstandings" and refusal to "talk about the past".

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Would I recommend this book?

For a biker bitch like me yeah...it's a little different from your usual MC life but the story still holds some elements that you can usually find in a MC novel.

This is your first time reading a MC book? Then I don't recommend you start with this one.

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17 reviews16 followers
February 25, 2015
The only way I can sum up this book is...... I felt like I was reading the biker version of a Days of Our Lives script. Too much going on all at once, and apparently everyone has a "BIG SECRET" SHhh..

The story had so much potential and would have been excellent if she would have written full length novels on each couple alone. Too much of an intertwined story that just made the book a mess and on top of that it's a cliffhanger.

That being said, I will read the next book with hopes that it's a whole lot more clean and a bit longer so that you can really read the story and get into each individual couple by themselves.
Profile Image for Philomena Callan Cheekypee.
4,023 reviews434 followers
January 13, 2018
Talk about starting a series off with a bang-this was a fantastic start to the series.

Eden calls on the Angels Warriors MC for protection for herself and her little sister from her father. The Angels Warriors are known for protecting women and children. Eden didn't realise that the president of the MC is Jasper who broke her heart years ago.

I really loved this story. As secrets unfold between Eden and Jasper I was gripped. Great romantic suspense filled with drama. I loved it and can't wait for more of this series.
Profile Image for Marcia Lazdins Hendershot.
38 reviews
January 13, 2016
I had to return this book at the 63% mark it sucked that bad. Not one character was likable. After reading reviews of her other books I have added this author as one to stay the hell away from. I will not be reading her books her style is NOT anything close to romance, the author seems to think lying and cheating are romantic!
Profile Image for Christy Wilson.
520 reviews5 followers
February 23, 2015
This is the story of Jasper and Eden, who fell in love while growing up together. The gist of their story? Nothing more than a series of misunderstandings and lies through out - whether by minor characters, or the two main characters themselves - which causes continuing separation between the two. At one point they each say to each other "no more lies" while each of them KNOWS they are keeping a secret from the other. The reader knows his secret, but we aren't told what hers is - though I had it pretty much figured out (but I'll admit, not completely). All the lies by all the characters frustrated me as a reader, and made me not like much of anyone in the story at all.

The pacing of the story was also off a bit as well; it just didn't flow well. The emotions in scenes went from one extreme to the other. I also had a hard time keeping up with the supporting characters - there were two other males and two other females that the main couple grew up with, and they were all in relationships. All the men are now in an MC so you were told their real names, and their biker names - and I could never keep up with who was who. And which female was dating which male.

I wanted to like it but it just didn't work for me.
Profile Image for Kim.
838 reviews3 followers
February 8, 2015
I received a copy of UnKiss Me by Dawn Martens in exchange for an honest review. I have to say this book was fantastic. Dawn did a wonderful job with the storyline,the characters the flow of the book to the point it made it a real page turner. Never know what was going to happen next to Eden. To see Dawn bring Eden and all her friends back together after not speaking or seeing each other for years. For them to be back together is great only to find out each one of them has secrets of their own that can destroy each other. Does it? Can their friendships survive? Well one you have to read UnKiss Me to find out all the story and then I guess we have to stay tuned for book 2 cause there is more questions I know I have and I am sure will be answered. Dawn is an amazing author. This is one series I am dying for more and this is just the beginning.
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14 reviews40 followers
February 15, 2016
I had hard time rooting for the HEA for Jasper and Eden. It appeared that Jasper viewed Eden as his possession to claim rather than the love of his life. I am all for an alpha males but Jasper didn't fit that description for me. He seemed like a feeble minded, weak, cowardly fool who was easily manipulated by his father. I had a hard time believing that Jasper could run a lemonade stand let alone overthrow his father and efficiently change and lead a motorcycle club with hardened criminals.

Secondly, it is hard to believe that none of Eden's friends figured out or suspected she was being abused for years and did and said nothing. There are has too many lies, secrets and unbelievable plot twists for me to view the friendships and romantic relationships between all the characters as genuine, sustainable or believable.

Profile Image for Louise Ramsey.
695 reviews25 followers
November 12, 2015
This book was slightly ridiculous

Too much backwards and forwards through time, flashbacks constantly that neither enhanced or contributed towards the story

Unbelievable storylines, all in all it was pretty poor

Which is a shame as I usually love a good biker story- but this one wasn''t for me.....just felt like the author had watched a bit too much sons of anarchy and decided they could write a book
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3,749 reviews489 followers
July 20, 2015
High drama within the MC....

Eden Blake and Jasper Hughes have known each other for forever it seems. Part of a circle of friends that grew up together, they have loved each other since they were teenagers. How is it possible that it is almost ten years since they had even seen other?

This is the first book in a trilogy that follows Eden and Jasper (now known as Angel) in their rocky road that started when they were children. Eden and her sister are frightened and rightfully so. Seeking out the help of a motorcycle club seems crazy but they were known to help women and children in trouble. Little did Eden know what that phone call would be the catalyst for...

Right away, I could feel the emotion jumping off the pages as Eden and Angel reunite in a scenario that neither of them could have ever predicted. Their past, including how they lost touch with each other, would need to be dealt with if they were ever to have a future together.

Intertwined through it all are the friends that have stuck by each of them through it all. They've all changed over the years, so much has happened to each of them and there is a lot to catch up on. Many sub-plots and secondary characters are introduced that you really do need a scorecard to keep up. Keeping Eden and Angel at the center of it all, though, grounds the story and keeps the plot moving at a fast clip throughout.

I loved Eden and how she persevered through a childhood that seemed a miracle she actually survived. Her attitude though is so ably reflected through her sister, Glenna, who shines here as a positive light amidst much chaos. Angel is a bit harder to embrace given the past and some choices made but I'm willing to go on a little faith to see how things pan out.

There are misunderstandings, betrayals and threats still to be revealed fully that fill this story with drama and heartache. A bit too much drama at times. A shattering cliffhanger though has me not simply wanting, but NEEDING, the next story in the series! ~ Diane, 4 stars
Profile Image for Michele.
533 reviews48 followers
March 7, 2015
Unkiss Me was a story full of hot sexy bikers, suspense, and a second chance at love. I was unable to put this book down until I finished, even then I just sat there staring at my Kindle. I can’t wait to see what happens next in this series!

First we meet Eden, she’s had one hell of a childhood. Things have definitely not been easy for her, and may just start to get worse. After being gone for years, she ran home to stay with her overly abusive father to protect her litter sister from the danger and destruction he brings. My heart just breaks for Eden with everything she has to go through. However, though she may think she’s weak, she may just be one of the strongest women out there.

After a night that almost ended deadly, Eden calls for the help of the Angels Warriors MC. They’re her only hope to stay safe, but she never would have asked for their help if she knew who would show up on her door step. This is when we get to meet the sexy Jasper (aka Angel). The one boy from Eden’s past she can never forget.

Jasper has always had feelings for Eden. When she left without a word, he almost lost himself in the life of the MC. There weren’t enough drugs, booze or women to numb the pain that he felt. But now that Eden’s back, he will do ANYTHING to get her back. If only he knew the secrets she’s keeping………

With danger walking around the edges of safety, Eden and Jasper spend more and more time with each other. Once the attraction becomes almost painful, they both finally give in and the pages catch on fire! Happiness however is short lived. Secrets are revealed and the trust that was and faith in a person was completely crushed.

This ending killed me! I have to know, no NEED TO know what happens next with Eden and Jasper. I can’t wait to see what happens next with this series! I will definitely have my one click finger at the ready when the next book is released!


**ARC was provided in exchange for a honest review**
Profile Image for Beth.
771 reviews123 followers
February 22, 2015
4 Nice Guys Stars



Somethings go together really well. Like dark chocolate and red wine. Or spring and baseball pants. Or sexy guys and...well anything. But what does not usually go together are Motorcycle Clubs and Nice Guys. Like really nice guys. Not the "deep down there is a heart of gold" kind of guy. But the kind that everyone thinks is nice.

The Angels Warriors MC Club have turned their reputation around. Jasper took over his dad's club, changed the name and the purpose. Now he is a protector. Not a perpetrator.

Eden left town years ago. And then came back when she didn't have a choice. Now she is afraid of what will happen when her father gets out of prison. She needs help protecting herself and her sister. So she turns to the Angels Warriors. If only they had a Facebook page. She would have seen that Jasper is now an Angel. The same Jasper she left town to get away from.

She's not leaving me again. She is mine.

Jasper loved her back then and is ready to do whatever he needs to in order to protect her now. He and his MC brothers will make sure she is safe. That's not easy because Eden seems to attract chaos.

You can definitely tell Eden's here now. Shit is getting crazy. That girl was always in the middle of something.

There are hidden dangers and even deeper hidden secrets. How will Jasper react when all of Eden's secrets come out? Will he continue to be the nice guy doing the right thing? Or are some secrets so hurtful that not even time can heal them? And those dangers to Eden, they are still there.

I love Dawn Martens' books. This is a new series and I will be reading the next one. This one ends in a cliffhanger of sorts. It ends will you wanting more. Much more.

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397 reviews23 followers
July 21, 2015
Just no! From the writing to the characters, it was all off for me. I didn't like how often the author went right into a memory, it felt like every other page. I didn't like that the characters seem to always be shouting at each other. I didn't like how women were treated by the men. This list could go on forever. I tried to like it, really I did!


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The guy is a jerk and frankly he's also an idiot. Eden and her mother disappear for years and when she comes back suddenly asking for help, you find out her father beat her and her sister and that she "supposedly" witnessed something horrific and you don't immediately put two and two together? And let's not forget the girlfriend he just gets rid of once his dream girl is back with no care for her feelings or anything, I don't care if he made it clear the whole time, he was flat out cold towards a woman he was with FOR YEARS while the other one was gone. And that's just the beginning! I won't even try to get into Eden and the rest of the book. It's a mess! Sadly I don't think I'll pick up another book by this author.
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Profile Image for Ansu.
950 reviews19 followers
September 6, 2015
What a ridiculous read !!!!!!. We are supposed to believe that Eden just left her two children with her best friend yet she sacrificed so much to help her sister - unbelievable !!!!.

There was just too much wrong with this book that I just could not like any part of it. No one with half a brain would willingly walk back into an abusive situation. Eden was old enough to be smarter than the choices she made in order to help her sister.

I also could not get over the fact that her sister who is 4 years old had the voice of a 20 year old.

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3,437 reviews2 followers
June 18, 2015
I loved this book, from beginning to end...
And then I got to the ending and I wanted to throw my ipad against the wall...

NOOOOOOO Not like that... I can't wait for the next book! Dawn Martens you are evil to end like that!
Profile Image for Lana.
845 reviews
May 28, 2016
I just hate how everything was so fast-paced and still ended abruptly without anything answered.
GAHHH
i dont want the next books written about the other couples' story. :(
Profile Image for Chelsea.
367 reviews21 followers
April 30, 2015
There's really only one way to sum this up...



This book was so wrong on so many levels I don't even know where to start....This rant oops I mean review contains spoilers
Profile Image for Lisa Petty (Book Bangers Blog).
2,312 reviews20 followers
February 9, 2015
Where do I begin? Hmmm well of course MC books are my favorite and I always have characters that I love more than others and that is true with Eden and Jasper. Two young loves who meant everything together, but when Eden leaves without a trace and Jasper picks up the pieces what is anyone to do? Jasper a.k.a. Angel who is the President of the Angel Warriors turned his club around for the good and not the evil. When Eden comes back not only will hell break loose, but secrets will be reveal that will tear the entire town apart. But of course it's full of love, some steamy sex, screaming, crying, and a whole lot of wanting to bitch slap people. I so loved this book I can not wait for you all to read it.
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Author 102 books6,392 followers
February 21, 2015
Emotional, suspenseful read that leaves you on the edge...literally. Jasper AKA Angel is a sexy alpha male who isn't afraid to go after what he wants. What he wants is Eden. Lies kept them apart and fear brings them back together. Packed with suspense and a whole lot of romance you will be hooked from page one. I cannot wait to see what Dawn has in store for us with the rest of the series. May cannot come soon enough.
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300 reviews1 follower
May 23, 2015
very fast and very unbelivable stroy...... sorry for the spoiler but seriously

this could be a good biker story if the author just stopped and took a little more time to evolve the story...
Profile Image for Tate.
690 reviews52 followers
March 9, 2015
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I will definitely think before I will continue read this series... but since I'm curious by nature and it ended with cliffy, well.. do I have a choice?!

but I mean come on!!! lies lies lies!!!
Profile Image for Lricard.
13 reviews
March 3, 2015
Absolute crap, everyone has a secrete and then they come out and that results in a shit storm. there is so much betrayal and misunderstandings in a short book that it ends on a cliffhanger. The book reminded me of stereotypic high school drama
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