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Raiding Her Tomb #1
Desecration
Jackie Glen, a notorious explorer and tomb raider was on the verge of an ancient discovery. Amongst the jungles of Belize was a hidden Mayan temple of a long forgotten king. His tomb was rumored to contain an orb with the secrets of the universe. She soon finds herself fighting for her life, and in order to secure it she must give the king what he wants a son.
Warning this 4200 word story is for mature audiences only.
Warning this 4200 word story is for mature audiences only.
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First published December 2, 2014
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June 1, 2025
wtf? So weird.
June 30, 2015
Well that escalated quickly...
July 29, 2015
It's has minor errors but I'm a big fan of this book/franchise it's wonderful
July 6, 2025
A very nice piece of science fiction erotica a good story coupled with erotica coupled with Science Fiction following through to the promised end.
September 28, 2015
What I liked:
-Plot. The idea behind this series is pretty interesting, and I like that it appears that each book is a new story in the same series featuring the same character, not necessarily always a continuation off the last book. There’s a chance to see lots of new places and adventures.
What I disliked:
-Babies. I don’t know what the deal is with this author, but they add babies to their stories way too often and being a mother myself, it makes me feel very uncomfortable to read stories where children are abandoned, left for dead, or taken over by spirits and never allowed to have lives of their own. Completely unnecessary and alienating to probably a large portion of her readers.
-Quality. Her books feel very cheap and mass produced, like she just wants to write and publish as many as she can as fast as she can. There’s very little effort and quite a few editing errors that could have easily been caught with a quick proof read. They’re only about 5,000 words long—it would have taken ten minutes to go through and edit. Disappointing that she doesn’t seem to care about the quality of her work.
Overall, it wasn’t the worst book I’ve read by this author, but it wasn’t great and I’d definitely never pay for it or any of the sequels. I dislike the addition of children to these stories as it makes me feel uncomfortable. For free, it’s not a complete waste of time, but don’t pay for it. You won’t be missing anything. 1.5
-Plot. The idea behind this series is pretty interesting, and I like that it appears that each book is a new story in the same series featuring the same character, not necessarily always a continuation off the last book. There’s a chance to see lots of new places and adventures.
What I disliked:
-Babies. I don’t know what the deal is with this author, but they add babies to their stories way too often and being a mother myself, it makes me feel very uncomfortable to read stories where children are abandoned, left for dead, or taken over by spirits and never allowed to have lives of their own. Completely unnecessary and alienating to probably a large portion of her readers.
-Quality. Her books feel very cheap and mass produced, like she just wants to write and publish as many as she can as fast as she can. There’s very little effort and quite a few editing errors that could have easily been caught with a quick proof read. They’re only about 5,000 words long—it would have taken ten minutes to go through and edit. Disappointing that she doesn’t seem to care about the quality of her work.
Overall, it wasn’t the worst book I’ve read by this author, but it wasn’t great and I’d definitely never pay for it or any of the sequels. I dislike the addition of children to these stories as it makes me feel uncomfortable. For free, it’s not a complete waste of time, but don’t pay for it. You won’t be missing anything. 1.5
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