Note: A copy of this book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
The premise of this book definitely caught my attention. It possessed elements I was interested in—doing it one’s own way to become a success, a father’s love for his daughter, fall vs. redemption …things that should be guaranteed tear jerkers, heart stoppers, and hip hip hoorays.
Did this author achieve his goal? Let me give everyone the pros and the cons, along with my conclusion and I’ll let the reader be the judge.
Pros
Balance of new characters and back story
There are some authors who have a difficult time with this feat. Either a new character is introduced with practically no backstory, or a new character is introduced with so much backstory that it slows the pace of the narrative. However, I must say that the author did a fantastic job with balance—even with the story adopting a poky speed.
Very descriptive of the facilities’ atmosphere
The author took the time to describe the ambiance of not only the location but of the rehabilitation facility itself. It made me feel as if I was enjoying the sun and the food.
The sprinkling of heart wrenching scenes
Along the way, there were sequences that brought out emotion. The most pronounced one for me was the very first one—where there was a misfortune that happened with a dog: one who was beloved by almost everyone at the rehabilitation facility. Another was the scene where Travis was looking upon his daughter from afar and the memories he had involving his time with her.
Clean Presentation
CLUB MEDicine, from a syntax standpoint, was to a decent standard. Errors were rather miniscule, and that was a definite plus.
Cons
Found some of the characters too stereotypical
There were some characters that struck me as copy cats of the stereotypical, like the chef at the rehabilitation facility buy specifically Dallas, one of the residents. I’m uncertain whether the author did it to target a specific audience, or whether he was doing research of what fits the darkness of American culture and thought Dallas’ depiction was perfect. Either way, there was nothing that stood out about him. On top of that, Dallas’ actions were very predictable.
Very repetitive in some spots
In my opinion, Travis’ frown worthy habit, along with his fits of indecision, were quite drawn out—to the point where it extended CLUB MEDicine unnecessarily. How many times must one be reminded of what’s at stake, or that he’s doing the wrong thing but can’t seem to stop himself?
Supporting cast lacked complexity
I would have loved for the supporting cast, besides the antagonist, to have more complexity to make me invested in their welfare. For me, there was nothing to really distinguish Sarah the business manager from Helen the well-meaning therapist. Both women served as supporters for Travis, despite his choices leading him in the wrong direction. In addition, since I didn’t care much for Travis (and I’m unsure if that’s necessarily a con—for I believe it could have been what the author was going for), a character to root behind would have been nice.
Verdict: 4 Stars
CLUB MEDicine has all of the makings of a good read, and I’m sure it will be satisfactory for most readers. For me, I like less filler, more character development—with the main and supporting characters—and more unpredictability, which is where this read lost points for me.