”’ I thought that Mr. Clutter was a very nice gentleman. I thought so right up to the moment I cut his throat.- In Cold Blood”
Synopsis:
A wannabe Nancy Drew detective takes it upon herself to bungle up the investigation of what will become the inspiration for Truman Capote’s legendary book, In Cold Blood.
Biblio-Babble
My Masterpiece Destroyed: Let me just preface this by saying that I have never read the book that was the inspiration for this, In Cold Blood. However, I do know that out of all the movies, plays, and books that Capote wrote, he considered this one his masterpiece. He and Harper Lee busted a gut to write this book, which took six years to write. It was basically created a whole new genre of book and entertainment, true crime. So I think it’s fair to say that if he read this tribute, homage, and reimagining of his original book, he would probably be displeased. And I’m sad to report that he would’ve been right. Retellings and reimaginings have to walk a very fine line between honoring the original source material while keeping an original voice. And apart from having the same players be involved, the author made this book entirely her own. Too much her own, as readers of the original novel will probably find this book unrecognizable.
LOOK AT ME, I’M SANDRA DEE: There were several drawbacks for this novel, but none were as major as Carly Fleming. Carly Fleming is the fictional daughter of Arthur Fleming, the man who would later go on to defend the two men who murdered the Clutter family. They recently moved to Holcomb, Kansas from New York City, making her a city kid in a town of so-called country bumpkins. She tutored Nancy Clutter in geometry and became close to her in private, so when Nancy, her brother, and parents are brutally murdered, Carly obviously wants to get to the bottom of it. However, Carly has got to be one of the most infuriating, conceited, arrogant, gullible and downright annoying protagonists I have read about this year. For one thing, her “investigation” into her “friends” murder (more about that later), was a bumbling mess. It felt more like a kids detective show than an actual teenager trying to find the killers who carried out a brutal attack. I was just waiting for corny music to come on and Carly to shout “LOOK! A CLUE!” every time she found something. But the most annoying quality that Carly has is that throughout the entire novel, it seemed like she wasn’t so much trying to find justice for her friend than keep the attention entirely on herself. Every time she found a clue and someone would say that a person found said clue in the investigation, she damn made sure that person knew that
she
found the clue. When Truman and Harper come to town to do research for their book, Carly is front and center in wanting to talk to them and when they studiously ignore her, she’s miffed. And when Truman and Nelle finally do talk to her, she’s mad that they don’t ask her more about herself. AN ENTIRE FAMILY WAS MURDERED, INCLUDING YOUR SUPPOSED BEST FRIEND! IT’S NOT ABOUT YOU!!!! She’s like that person who if something bad happens, is the first person to talk to the news cameras, making sure not that there’s justice for the family, but that they get their 15 seconds of fame. And that really, REALLY didn’t sit well with me.
Character Assassination: Like I said earlier, I have not read Capote’s book, where he describes the crime and the family involved. So therefore, I don’t know what Nancy Clutter was really like. From the online reading that I did, she was the perfect model daughter and all-around American girl, apple pie and all. Her one rebellion was dating Bobby Rapp despite her parent’s objections, but other than that she was a pretty good kid. The author characterizes Nancy Clutter as perfect on the inside, but actually kind of terrible on the inside. From lying about her parents to her geometry grade to not acknowledging Carly Fleming as her friend because, ya know, popularity, I actually found her portrayal to be kind of disturbing. It’s one thing to reimagine a character for a retelling of a story. That issue can get a little thorny when that person is based in reality. And frankly, I think the author didn’t reimagine Nancy Clutter so much as assassinate her character. I just hope none of the remaining Clutter family members are alive to read this book, because I don’t think they would have liked this portrayal of Nancy, whether it be a fictional reimagining or not. Perfection can indeed hide imperfections in character, but if that simply isn’t the case, then it dishonors the memory of the fallen then trying to bring something new to the table.
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As Capote himself once said, “You can’t blame a writer for what the characters say.” However, I think he would make an exception to his own rule if he read this reimagining of his self-proclaimed magnum opus. In attempting to retell the horrific Clutter murders of Holcomb, Kansas, Amy Brashear creates an exceedingly unlikable main character, destroys the memory of one of the victims, and creates a book that Capote himself would not want any association with. He probably wouldn’t even like the fact that he was mentioned in the acknowledgments. Retellings can be difficult, and I am fully aware that this wasn’t supposed to be an exact retelling of Capote’s masterpiece. However, since so much was made out of the fact that In Cold Blood was the inspiration for this “reimagining”, it should bear some resemblance to the plot. But apart from the inclusion of most of the real life players, there is none. Just a jumbled, garbled mess.