Cas Nightbrook lives on a knife's edge, surviving by precision, cunning, and grit. A thief in the brutal City of Analon, his only goals are protecting his younger sister and avenging his parents' murder at the hands of the crown. So when Cas is invited to The Emberlight Trials-a deadly initiation run by a rebel order tied to a forbidden and hunted magical race-he doesn't hesitate. It may be his best chance at justice.
What he doesn't anticipate is Darion Thorne.
Charming, infuriating, and always one step ahead, Darion keeps showing up in places Cas doesn't expect. As the riddles and danger of the Trials intensify, Darion becomes a complication Cas never planned for: someone who sees through Cas's defences and tempts him to want something more than just survival. And that's exactly what terrifies him.
But Darion's secrets run deep. As the rebellion breaks into the streets and the city burns, Cas must choose between vengeance, his sister's life, and falling for a man whose hidden past could destroy everything Cas has built to survive.
I loved this book. Cas and Darion’s relationship was just 😚🤌 chefs kiss. I especially loved the way they described the intimate magic scenes, those had me blushing and giggling 🤭.
The only issues was some of the editing, I don’t know if it was just my edition or if the ARC itself has these issues but there were quite a few editing mistakes, specifically lines that repeated, and I don’t mean a word or two but like full speaking lines or paragraphs repeating word for word especially early on.
But regardless I loved it and I would like to thank NetGalley for providing me with this ARC 🫶💚💚
A kind thank you to Netgalley and the author for this ARC!
⭐ Rating: Lovable, wholesome main characters vs. one man’s lifelong quest to ruin everything (🌟🌟🌟🌟.25 stars ✨️)
(and if I had a penny for every time a man nicknamed “The Butcher” was the problem, I’d have two… which isn’t a lot, but it’s weird that it happened twice.)
(Yes, this is in fact a nod to All for the Game 👀)
This was such a fun, engaging read. The adventure was adventuring, the stakes were absolutely staking, and I was hooked pretty much the entire time. For a debut, this is seriously impressive, especially the pacing. It never dragged, never lost me, and had me firmly in “just one more chapter” territory for most of it.
The heart of this story is really its characters, Cass and his sister Elena. They’re soft, lovable, and genuinely easy to root for. The sibling dynamic added so much warmth, and the found family elements carried the emotional core beautifully. It’s one of those books where you just want everyone to be okay… which, unfortunately, the plot refuses to allow.
I also enjoyed the romance, even if it leaned a little more new adult in tone at times. That said, I fully approved of the love interest, Darion. He was so soft and genuinely caring toward Cass that it was impossible not to root for them.
On the critique side, some of the side characters felt a bit surface-level, which meant certain emotional beats didn’t land as strongly as they could have. There were moments clearly aiming to devastate, and while they worked, they didn’t quite hit.
The magic system was interesting, but at times felt a little too convenient in how neatly it resolved certain situations. It didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment, but it was noticeable.
There’s also a scene that said “let’s do a Catching Fire Cinna moment,” and I said “yes, please emotionally destroy me.” It did not, in fact, emotionally destroy me. Which feels like a missed opportunity. The setup was there, but without deeper character development, it didn’t land with the emotional weight it was aiming for.
Despite all that, this was a really strong debut. It didn’t quite reach that “this changed me” five-star level for me, but it’s comfortably above a four. I was entertained, invested, and genuinely anxious for the characters at multiple points.
And most importantly, I will absolutely be picking up book two.
Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for access to the e-ARC for review purposes!
All I can really say to start is: WOW!
This book was way better than I expected it to be. When I started it, I was enjoying it and eager to read more but about halfway through I literally could NOT put it down.
The magic system is really unique and interesting, which is really hard to pull off with how saturated the market is with fantasy novels. The world-building is fantastic as well. The plot moves forward in an exciting way the entire book. I think the author did a great job at building the world, giving some background to the magic system while also moving the plot forward at a satisfying pace. With NO SPOILERS, let me just say there is a twist in this book that made me *GASP* out loud. I had to apologize to the other people in the room because I just couldn't help it!
Now here comes the most important bit: CHARACTERS! I am a character-centered reader through and through and these characters are fantastic. I must love the characters (or at the very least be interested in them) to really enjoy a novel and let's just say I won't be forgetting any of these characters any time soon. I'm dying for more of them and will be looking out for the next novel!
I loved this so much that I immediately pre-ordered a signed copy from the author's website because this is a book I 100% need in my collection. Not only is the story fantastic but the cover is GORGEOUS!
It has been hard to give a spoiler free review, hence the shorter review. It is also sometimes hard for me to review books that I really love because a lot of times I just simply love them and don't have many critiques or praises because the love is just pure and based off vibes. With that being said the vibes are immaculate!
If you get anything from this review it should be this: CHECK OUT THIS BOOK! Request your local library order it, purchase a copy yourself, however you want to do it: just don't miss out on this fantastic story!
I was looking forward to loving this because I haven’t seen much M/M in fantasy. It was something new for me, and the premise was right up my alley. Cas is a thief who steals from those who do wrong. He specifically wants revenge on the person who killed his parents. While on an assignment, he finds himself face-to-face with another thief. They agree to part ways as long as Cas gives him what he wants, but after that, Cas can’t stop thinking about him. When he is invited by a secret group to join them after he completes assigned tasks, he keeps running into the thief he can’t stop thinking about. So, although it had its moments, it was average for me.
One of my issues was the writing. At times, the dialogue felt YA, while their actions were more NA. I didn’t like how confusing it was. Another thing I didn’t like was how convenient everything was. There was always a quick solution to a problem that seemed impossible. It’s fine if it happens a couple of times, but this happened consistently, which, when it comes to fantasy, I prefer a story with high stakes that has me guessing and on the edge of my seat.
And lastly, the romance. For someone who claims not to trust and let others in easily, he does the opposite when it comes to Darion. Usually, when a character says that, I want the love interest to EARN their trust, especially when the main character has experienced betrayal before. Cas immediately falls for a pretty face and suddenly can’t stop thinking about him without caring much about his motives. I mean, he does question them, but he easily brushes them off. He says he feels a connection with Darion, but it all seems surface-level. Not my cup of tea. But I will admit, they had some cute moments.
I also guessed Darion’s connection with a certain someone pretty quickly, so not much of a shocker there.
By the end, I had more questions than answers, so maybe I’ll try the next book? I’ll have to think about it.
Thank you NetGalley and Maelstrom Press for the ARC.
For starters, thank you NetGalley for giving me the chance to read the ARC and thank you to the author for writing this book.
From start to finish, this was an enjoyable book, and I'll be keeping an eye out for book 2.
The enjoyed all the relationships in the book. The interactions between Cas and his sister felt like how real siblings, who love each other, behave. It reminds me of my very own relationship with my sibling. The are kind, loving and trusting with the other, but they also make sure to tease them when possible. In some books, I find that the sibling interactions are unrealistic, but this book got it right. For the relationship between Cas and Darion, the romantic couple, it felt cute. Despite the presence of sexual scenes, or implied sexual scenes, their relationship felt like innocent teenage romance. They deeply care for one another, despite certain situations putting that trust to the test.
The world building is easy to follow and isn't extensive. In a way, it felt too simple, the story mainly stays within the same area without much change. The magical concept is simple as well, some people have powers and some don't. Some may have the same kind of power as another, but not all. Despite being an adult book, it felt more like a YA book with added spice.
By the end of the book, I have gathered multiple questions that have been unanswered, leaving me to wait for the release of the sequel. Despite enjoying the story through and through, I am not invested enough to be waiting for book 2 for the love of the story, but more so for wanting the answers to my questions.
I want to thank NetGalley for allowing me to read this masterpiece in its ARC form!
I absolutely LOVED this book and cannot wait for the second one to come out!
I adore how it delivers a sweeping epic adventure filled with magic, magical races, a rebel army, and a young adult striving to fulfill his mother’s dying wish while also craving revenge. The writing is so fluid that the world-building unfolds seamlessly—you don’t even realize how much you’re learning as the story progresses. It’s incredibly immersive, and I could vividly picture the world in my mind.
I also loved the inclusion of maps—they really help ground the story and show where everything is, especially key locations. The appendix is the icing on the cake, particularly the sections explaining the political structure, magic system, and embers. It makes everything so much easier to understand and adds depth without overwhelming the reader.
There are both closed-door and open-door spice scenes—consider yourself warned! LOL
* The first spice scene between Cas and Darion… OMG. The time play was something else. IYKYK. * The reveal of Darion’s parentage left me speechless—even though I was piecing clues together like a detective. I have a feeling Cas and Elena’s heritage will be just as shocking, if not more, especially with those subtle hints in the final chapters.
I truly can’t say this enough: this book is incredibly well written, and I loved it. I will absolutely be recommending it to others when it’s published in June!
3,5 (rounded up to 4 because the world needs more gay fantasy stories!)
Cas Nightbrook is the main character we follow in this book. He is a well-known thief in the brutal city of Analon, striving to protect his younger sister while seeking justice after the death of his parents at the hands of the the King’s men.
This gains the attention of a secret rebel order, with links to a forbidden and hunted magical race, who invite Cas for The Emberlight Trials. These trials, however, are only the beginning of a journey filled with fast-paced action, plot twists, and a romance with the charming yet mysterious Darion Thorne.
Overall, I found this a difficult book to review. I was entertained throughout and flew through it, but I was left wanting more. The characters and world building are intriguing, but everything was too superficial to my liking. Some plot points are too convenient (with Cas even acknowledging how easy things seem) and the magic system isn’t consistent enough.
The intimate scenes take this book from YA territory to a more (new?) adult space. They are actually handled really well and never take over the story. The queer romance aspect of this novel blends seamlessly with everything else.
While I wasn’t totally convinced by this first installment, I will definitely continue the series. There is a lot of potential in both the characters and the world, so I’m curious to see where this goes.
I was so hesitant to read this arc, as I didn't want to get into another fantasy series, but I am so happy I did. I loved this way more than I expected to.
There is a really cool magic system in this world. The way the author revealed bits of and the world was really well done and moved the story along at a strong pace. At then end of every chapter, I just wanted to keep going to find out what happens next. The story is addicting.
The characters is where this book shines. Cas and Darion have so much chemistry. They made me so happy to read about. I also loved Cas's relationship with his sister Elena. He's the older brother trying to protect her, but he isn't stifling her either. Even the side characters feel like they're real people no matter how short a time they are on page.
My only "critique" would be that although this is a fantasy story with very high stakes, it almost read like a cozy fantasy because of how easily resolved some of the plot points were. It didn't detract from my enjoyment of the book at all, but I was surprised to get those vibes.
Overall, I can't recommend this enough. I loved the writing, the world, the characters. I cannot wait for the next book to come out. And in the meantime, I will be checking out the author's other work.
**Thank you Netgalley and Maelstrom Press for providing this ebook. All opinions are my own.**
After dystopian and paranormal, Paul Michael Winters delves into Fantasy with the Embers of Analon!
If you have read the author before, you know that the swoony chemistry between the main couple is one of his most recognisable story traits, and this book won't disappoint you either.
Cas is a herb merchant by day, cat burglar at night in the city of Analon, where he ended up with his sister after the brutal murder of their parents a decade ago. He keeps his secrets close to his heart, which is a locked box for everyone apart from Helena...until he meets Darion, who manages to effortlessly slip past his guard.
The magic system and secrets of the world unravel pretty quickly, with Cas jumping through hoops bringing him closer to a secret society, to Darion and to a never-ending cat and mouse game with the king and his ruthless enforcer.
The story is enjoyable and flows quickly, it never gets dull or tiring. Its only shortcoming is that it's sometimes too quickly, tasks described as borderline impossible succeed each other, locations swap, protagonists and adversaries make breakthroughs at extremely convenient moments.
The end of the book is not the end of the story and cannot wait for the next installment!
I was provided an ARC via NetGalley in return for an honest review. I've been looking forward to this one since I saw it as a giveaway on Goodreads, but I got lucky enough to get an ARC through NetGalley first.
I give Embers of Analon 4 stars as a solid queer romantasy story within a unique world that has room for exciting growth in the rest of the series.
Cas, Darion, and Elena were fun characters to read about, and each stood out in their own way that was both satisfying but also has me interested in seeing more of what's to come. Cas and Darion's romance was sweet and the twist was handled in a way that was satisfying and reasonable to me. I'm looking forward to finding out more about Elena and Kael as well, but I know we'll get more answers in book 2.
I enjoyed the world of Analon/Velmorra and the Embers are an interesting take on some familiar fantasy aspects. As this is the first book, it did a good job of establishing the foundation of the world and the magic with room left for growth and discovery in the future. The story moves quick but it matches well with the nature of the story, and keeps your focus on what will come next.
I recommend Embers of Analon to anyone looking for a book with queer love, swordfighting, thievery, magic, and a hint of destiny. I for one am looking forward to the next book in this series.
A kind thank you to Netgalley and the author for this ARC!
Embers of Analon has so many things I enjoy in a fantasy, which resulted in me being unable to put it down. The worldbuilding and exploration of the magic system was by far my favorite elements, how it unfolds in a way that makes it easy to understand, while building intrigue and stoking the desire to know more as we explore unchartered territory with the main character, Cas, who's one purpose in life is to protect his sister at all costs as darkness nips at their heels.
Enter Darion, who slips into Cas's life with a thief's disconcerting amount of ease despite the walls Cas has built around himself. We see Cas wrestle with his instincts versus his heart throughout the story and while I enjoy Cas as a character, when it came to the romance I wished for a bit more build up to it. It was rather instant, and I didn't feel invested in his relationship with Darion throughout as I expected. By the end, though, I was pleasantly surprised that I found that changing.
Speaking of end, dust! I wasn't prepared. I have so many questions, and can't wait for the next book in the series. Fast paced, a constantly evolving magical story, and with interesting supporting characters, this was a treat to spend time with.
ARC Review Cas is a orphan street thief who is trying to find safety for him and his sister. Set in a fantasy land where the king and his guards rule with a iron fist arresting and killing magical users. Quickly Cas is caught up in a set of trials to join the elusive Order of Ember to help save the city but nothing is simple and everything is dangerous.
The world building in the story was very interesting and had depth that kept me going. Loved the magic structure and descriptions were great felt like each magic type had a signature. The danger though out the book felt huge but it was hard to really feel the city wide impact from Cas's perspective. Cas and his relationship with Darion has layers and doesn't feel to simple interesting to see how things develop.
Overall I enjoyed the world and the story but it sometimes felt a bit predictable and even though the danger felt real I was always sure Cas would be fine. Wish there was more over all development for the overall plot, the trials are interesting but also extremely dangerous and causes more problems than it helps.
Not sure if I will pick up the next instalment but I am interested to see when things go the cliff-hangers do hand my interest.
A perfect blend of queer story telling and world-building fantasy. For those who loved "Lord of the Rings" and "His Dark Materials" but wished to see a more central queer story versus oft times hidden themes, this is the book for you! A romantic fantasy that focuses most on actually creating the fantasy and telling the story to drive the plot. Cas, the magical protagonist, remains true to his purpose even in the face of an entire kingdom set against him. Together with his sister, Elena, and his love interest, Darion, long-buried secrets will be revealed to dangerous and devastating effect. A masterful creation and I cannot wait until book 2!!!
Thanks to Netgallery for chance to ARC for this amazing book. From the moment I saw the two detailed maps in the beginning of the book, I knew I would like it. The magic system was cool, the world was fun and easy to visualize, and the side characters actually had depth to them. This was definitely a book that was well thought out and I appreciate that greatly in this age of many authors just pumping out stories as fast as possible. Cas and Darion were great, if not a little predictable, but I won't hold that against the book. All in all it was a solid fantasy novel with a fun romantic plot that didn't detract from the story I am definitely looking forward to the sequel.
This was so good! The world building and magic system so interesting. So much happened, so many twists and turns that kept me gripped. Cas Nightbrook is a thief in the brutal city of Analon, his only goals are protecting his younger sister and avenging his parents’ murder at the hands of the crown. Darion Thorne keeps showing up in places Cas doesn’t expect. Cas and Darion are so sweet, I enjoyed how their relationship developed and its pacing. So sweet.....1st, no 2nd kiss 🫶. Can't wait until the next book.
Thank you to NetGalley and the author for giving me this ARC!
4.25⭐️ 2.5🌶️ Wow, I genuinely can’t believe this author isn’t more popular. This is the first book I’ve read from a NetGalley ARC, and honestly, I was anxious about it. But Embers of Analon blew me away. The world building is so immersive yet done in a way that didn’t bore me to death, the love was palpable and the plot was addictive. If you haven’t heard of this author, I highly recommend adding this to your TBR for when it releases. That cliffhanger though!!!! I already can’t wait for book 2.