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Cadicle #1
Architects of Destiny
This is an alternate cover edition for ASIN: B00TT6OIFO
The people of Earth have no idea that their planet is a lost colony of the galaxy-spanning Taran empire. But with Taran civilization on the brink of war, salvation may come from the most unlikely of places...
Cris Sietinen, heir to the most influential Dynasty in the Taran empire, was born with rare telekinetic gifts--abilities he refuses to ignore, regardless of the governing Priesthood's decrees. Determined to be true to himself, and test the limits of his abilities, Cris escapes his stifled life of business and politics on Tararia to begin a new life exploring the stars.
When Cris unexpectedly receives an invitation to join the Tararian Selective Service (TSS), the only organization to offer an official telekinesis training program, a new future awaits. It's his dream opportunity to be among people like himself, free from the Priesthood and political objectives. Except, Cris' path was designed, and he's right where the Priesthood wants him.
Written in the style of classic sci-fi from the Golden Age, Architects of Destiny is the first installment in the Cadicle series, a new space opera epic with elements of "Dune", "Ender's Game", and "Star Wars". A fast-paced space adventure with intrigue, coming-of-age and romance, this short prequel is a prelude to the defining events in Tararia's history in the ensuing years.
The people of Earth have no idea that their planet is a lost colony of the galaxy-spanning Taran empire. But with Taran civilization on the brink of war, salvation may come from the most unlikely of places...
Cris Sietinen, heir to the most influential Dynasty in the Taran empire, was born with rare telekinetic gifts--abilities he refuses to ignore, regardless of the governing Priesthood's decrees. Determined to be true to himself, and test the limits of his abilities, Cris escapes his stifled life of business and politics on Tararia to begin a new life exploring the stars.
When Cris unexpectedly receives an invitation to join the Tararian Selective Service (TSS), the only organization to offer an official telekinesis training program, a new future awaits. It's his dream opportunity to be among people like himself, free from the Priesthood and political objectives. Except, Cris' path was designed, and he's right where the Priesthood wants him.
Written in the style of classic sci-fi from the Golden Age, Architects of Destiny is the first installment in the Cadicle series, a new space opera epic with elements of "Dune", "Ender's Game", and "Star Wars". A fast-paced space adventure with intrigue, coming-of-age and romance, this short prequel is a prelude to the defining events in Tararia's history in the ensuing years.
166 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 17, 2015
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Amy DuBoff
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I have always loved science fiction--books, movies, shows and games. If it involves outer space, even better!
Most of my writing is character-driven, which traces back to my time as a Psych major in college. I love to blend science and fantasy, especially when it comes to metaphysical abilities.
As a full-time author, I currently live in Portland, Oregon, with my husband. When I’m not writing, I enjoy travel, wine tasting, binge-watching TV series, and playing epic strategy board games.
I have always loved science fiction--books, movies, shows and games. If it involves outer space, even better!
Most of my writing is character-driven, which traces back to my time as a Psych major in college. I love to blend science and fantasy, especially when it comes to metaphysical abilities.
As a full-time author, I currently live in Portland, Oregon, with my husband. When I’m not writing, I enjoy travel, wine tasting, binge-watching TV series, and playing epic strategy board games.
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May 20, 2017
An enjoyable Space Opera series opener. Full review to follow after Hols 😀
January 11, 2016
It was a fun read not only because of the story itself but especially because of the author. She was like an angler using all baits at her disposal to lure the SciFi readers into her hook.
The way the writer approached the story and her character at the beginning gave me the impression of the book trying to be some Young Adult SciFi-fantasy salad, but once I picked up some clues I'd started putting thing together.
Her character, Cris, isn't trying to be the classic spoiled rebelling teenager you find in YA books, but a replica of Paul, from Herbert's Dune. They are both highly educated children of influential people, they both contain high expectation and are both trained into martial arts by personal instructors that are their only friend. While Paul is rebellious, he is restraining his temper through meditation and mannerism his mother taught him. On the other hand Cris lacked that psychological support he could have got from his mother and his emotions are explosively expressed in his mind (he often exclaim to himself "shite" "stars!" and such things expressing fear, doubt or anger).
Other connections with Dune I could find is the network of commercial corporations that also control the economic and political aspects of respective civilization, the religion trying to get the reins of that specific network, special inherited abilities and
There is also an interesting point of view about Earth.
The second part of the book adopted an Ender Game-like approach. There is a secluded location within which a group of people are training, studying, divided in well-structured groups, interacting with each other and bonding together just to become trained military professionals.
The third part of the book is, from my point of view, a romantic YA set whose purpose is to bond the last of the readers who weren't hooked yet and give a higher motivation to the main character. Of course the secondary purpose was to represent the cliffhanging of the story I'm not going to spoil. Even if this part seemed a bit too cheesy to fit into the plot, the ending managed to make this right.
What I really appreciate at debut writers is them having good models and trying to reproduce their style. Despite the fact that it might be a mash-up of different elements from different writers and some things felt awkward, it was a really great start that promises the author to find her own style. More than the plot itself, I'm rather interested in her development as a writer and I will continue to read this series as long as I see some new sort of improvement; it's like discovering another story (already got the second book).
While I do not know how good it will be, I do see some potential here and I do recommend reading this first part, especially considering is free on amazon right now. (and the second is 90%off or so).
The way the writer approached the story and her character at the beginning gave me the impression of the book trying to be some Young Adult SciFi-fantasy salad, but once I picked up some clues I'd started putting thing together.
Her character, Cris, isn't trying to be the classic spoiled rebelling teenager you find in YA books, but a replica of Paul, from Herbert's Dune. They are both highly educated children of influential people, they both contain high expectation and are both trained into martial arts by personal instructors that are their only friend. While Paul is rebellious, he is restraining his temper through meditation and mannerism his mother taught him. On the other hand Cris lacked that psychological support he could have got from his mother and his emotions are explosively expressed in his mind (he often exclaim to himself "shite" "stars!" and such things expressing fear, doubt or anger).
Other connections with Dune I could find is the network of commercial corporations that also control the economic and political aspects of respective civilization, the religion trying to get the reins of that specific network, special inherited abilities and
There is also an interesting point of view about Earth.
The second part of the book adopted an Ender Game-like approach. There is a secluded location within which a group of people are training, studying, divided in well-structured groups, interacting with each other and bonding together just to become trained military professionals.
The third part of the book is, from my point of view, a romantic YA set whose purpose is to bond the last of the readers who weren't hooked yet and give a higher motivation to the main character. Of course the secondary purpose was to represent the cliffhanging of the story I'm not going to spoil. Even if this part seemed a bit too cheesy to fit into the plot, the ending managed to make this right.
What I really appreciate at debut writers is them having good models and trying to reproduce their style. Despite the fact that it might be a mash-up of different elements from different writers and some things felt awkward, it was a really great start that promises the author to find her own style. More than the plot itself, I'm rather interested in her development as a writer and I will continue to read this series as long as I see some new sort of improvement; it's like discovering another story (already got the second book).
While I do not know how good it will be, I do see some potential here and I do recommend reading this first part, especially considering is free on amazon right now. (and the second is 90%off or so).
dnf
September 28, 2020I really tried but I don't think that this kind of stories can hold my interest for long. Too much technology descriptions and not enough character intrigue to keep me going...
September 24, 2016
Too much potential to fail
"Everyone deserves the chance to start a new life."
'Architects of Destiny' is the first volume in what promises to be classic space opera series. The feel of the book is Star Wars meets Dune, with the idea of ruling dynasties and psychic powers and the coming of the Cadicle who will be some kind of super-being.
Our young hero Cris is the scion and heir to one of the High Dynasties, each of which seem to specialise in providing some particular service to the civilised galaxy. In Cris' case his family do navigation.
But Cris stumbles in the shadow of a much favoured dead sibling and feels his parents have never really accepted him for who he is. His own dream is to learn how to use his psychic powers and join the TSS (Tararian Selective Service - think sort-of Jedi/Bene Gesserit) who will train him to do so.
So Cris runs away from home and the adventure begins.
“Sir, what is this ‘potential’ that keeps being brought up?
The book comes over as a young adult coming-of-age read, with the social insecurities, older mentors, peer friendships and fumbling romantic awkwardness, that one would expect. It is well written and the main character is very believable, his journey from rebellion to realisation covered well in a relatively short space.
On the down side for me, I found the description of the telekinetic training less than engaging and rather drawn out, but fully accept someone else might have enjoyed that kind of explanatory detail. Also the fact that it really did have such a young adult feel and focused more on that aspect when I would have preferred to be having more than brief glimpses behind the curtain at the grown-up world of politics and existential warfare that are hinted at in the story - and I want to know more about those 'Architects of Destiny' referenced in the title. However it only serves to give me high hopes for the rest of the series because those glimpses are a really intriguing come-on.
I thoroughly enjoyed the book and will be adding the rest of the Cadicle series to my 'Books To Read' shelf.
"Everyone deserves the chance to start a new life."
'Architects of Destiny' is the first volume in what promises to be classic space opera series. The feel of the book is Star Wars meets Dune, with the idea of ruling dynasties and psychic powers and the coming of the Cadicle who will be some kind of super-being.
Our young hero Cris is the scion and heir to one of the High Dynasties, each of which seem to specialise in providing some particular service to the civilised galaxy. In Cris' case his family do navigation.
But Cris stumbles in the shadow of a much favoured dead sibling and feels his parents have never really accepted him for who he is. His own dream is to learn how to use his psychic powers and join the TSS (Tararian Selective Service - think sort-of Jedi/Bene Gesserit) who will train him to do so.
So Cris runs away from home and the adventure begins.
“Sir, what is this ‘potential’ that keeps being brought up?
The book comes over as a young adult coming-of-age read, with the social insecurities, older mentors, peer friendships and fumbling romantic awkwardness, that one would expect. It is well written and the main character is very believable, his journey from rebellion to realisation covered well in a relatively short space.
On the down side for me, I found the description of the telekinetic training less than engaging and rather drawn out, but fully accept someone else might have enjoyed that kind of explanatory detail. Also the fact that it really did have such a young adult feel and focused more on that aspect when I would have preferred to be having more than brief glimpses behind the curtain at the grown-up world of politics and existential warfare that are hinted at in the story - and I want to know more about those 'Architects of Destiny' referenced in the title. However it only serves to give me high hopes for the rest of the series because those glimpses are a really intriguing come-on.
I thoroughly enjoyed the book and will be adding the rest of the Cadicle series to my 'Books To Read' shelf.
December 15, 2015
“Reads Like A Classic From The Masters.”
On Tararia, a young boy born into the powerful Sietinen High Dynasty wants to experience life instead of ruling a kingdom. At 16 he literally runs away from home – and Tararia. Finding a position on a cargo ship under an alias, he travels the stars visiting other worlds as a mere spaceman. But besides his parents, two other forces are searching for him. The Priesthood, and the Tararian Selective Service (TSS). He was born with telekinetic powers, and there are people that have plans for him. There are rumors of a mysterious Bakzen war in the far reaches of space, and this may be at the core of many problems.
While the cargo ship Exler is in dock, Cris Sietinen notices two strange men following him. He runs, but falls into more danger when an assassin attempts to kill him. The assassin is from the Priesthood. The strangers turn out to be TSS agents, and they recruit him. The TSS agents take Chris to their headquarters below the surface of Earth’s moon (Earth is known as the Lost Colony). TSS agents teach him to use his telekinetic abilities. Here he also meets Katrine Vaenetri, the daughter of a High Dynasty, and they fall in love. But has this all been arranged from behind the scenes?
As I read this story I was reminded of those early SF masters I read growing up, especially Robert A. Heinlein; remember his GLORY ROAD, STARSHIP TROOPERS, HAVE SPACESUIT - WILL TRAVEL, and so many others? The author captures those early masters, and more. It’s not often an author comes along who can take us back to those early years of the masters, yet bring their own distinctive voice to a thrilling tale of both space opera and nuts and bolts science fiction. Amy DuBoff has accomplished this very efficiently, and the result is a book the reader cannot put down until the last page. She has built her universe with care and much thought, and there are already two sequels. A full Glossary in the back of the book gives description and explanation to the universe. Highly recommended for SF fans, and lovers of a good yarn.
On Tararia, a young boy born into the powerful Sietinen High Dynasty wants to experience life instead of ruling a kingdom. At 16 he literally runs away from home – and Tararia. Finding a position on a cargo ship under an alias, he travels the stars visiting other worlds as a mere spaceman. But besides his parents, two other forces are searching for him. The Priesthood, and the Tararian Selective Service (TSS). He was born with telekinetic powers, and there are people that have plans for him. There are rumors of a mysterious Bakzen war in the far reaches of space, and this may be at the core of many problems.
While the cargo ship Exler is in dock, Cris Sietinen notices two strange men following him. He runs, but falls into more danger when an assassin attempts to kill him. The assassin is from the Priesthood. The strangers turn out to be TSS agents, and they recruit him. The TSS agents take Chris to their headquarters below the surface of Earth’s moon (Earth is known as the Lost Colony). TSS agents teach him to use his telekinetic abilities. Here he also meets Katrine Vaenetri, the daughter of a High Dynasty, and they fall in love. But has this all been arranged from behind the scenes?
As I read this story I was reminded of those early SF masters I read growing up, especially Robert A. Heinlein; remember his GLORY ROAD, STARSHIP TROOPERS, HAVE SPACESUIT - WILL TRAVEL, and so many others? The author captures those early masters, and more. It’s not often an author comes along who can take us back to those early years of the masters, yet bring their own distinctive voice to a thrilling tale of both space opera and nuts and bolts science fiction. Amy DuBoff has accomplished this very efficiently, and the result is a book the reader cannot put down until the last page. She has built her universe with care and much thought, and there are already two sequels. A full Glossary in the back of the book gives description and explanation to the universe. Highly recommended for SF fans, and lovers of a good yarn.
February 8, 2018
Good story. Not great, but good. The story reads more like a novela and actually poses more questions than answers.
The plot line wasn't terrible, though.
There were times I really hated the main character and times I liked him. He does have some growth, and proves to have character but he is still a spoiled brat.
There were some timeline inconsistencies that annoyed me as well as story basics.
Let's start with the idea that it only took him 5 minutes to get from a heavily guarded palace/mansion to a space port. It seems a little far-fetched. Why would the leader of a dynasty put himself and his family in harms way by being so close? You would think they would want to be farther away for security reasons.
Let's discuss one of the names. Tarans, or Tararians....um...why? Why? It's super close, but there is no reasoning as to why. Yes, the planet is Tararia, but two different names for the people? It's confusing. Pick one and stick with it, or give some indication as to why there are two identifiers.
Structurally, the grammar needs work. There are some poor sentence structures as well as misused punctuation. Semicolons are blatantly abused. Poor semicolons...
Anyway, it also bothered me that the author changed swear words just slightly enough that they hide from the search. Fok is still an f-bomb. And shite doesn't change the fact that it is still profanity.
For my clean readers:
Language (slightly adjusted for different languages, but still has an f-bomb equivalent). Light violence. Romance includes kissing and a slightly over-described hint of sexual activities.
The plot line wasn't terrible, though.
There were times I really hated the main character and times I liked him. He does have some growth, and proves to have character but he is still a spoiled brat.
There were some timeline inconsistencies that annoyed me as well as story basics.
Let's start with the idea that it only took him 5 minutes to get from a heavily guarded palace/mansion to a space port. It seems a little far-fetched. Why would the leader of a dynasty put himself and his family in harms way by being so close? You would think they would want to be farther away for security reasons.
Let's discuss one of the names. Tarans, or Tararians....um...why? Why? It's super close, but there is no reasoning as to why. Yes, the planet is Tararia, but two different names for the people? It's confusing. Pick one and stick with it, or give some indication as to why there are two identifiers.
Structurally, the grammar needs work. There are some poor sentence structures as well as misused punctuation. Semicolons are blatantly abused. Poor semicolons...
Anyway, it also bothered me that the author changed swear words just slightly enough that they hide from the search. Fok is still an f-bomb. And shite doesn't change the fact that it is still profanity.
For my clean readers:
Language (slightly adjusted for different languages, but still has an f-bomb equivalent). Light violence. Romance includes kissing and a slightly over-described hint of sexual activities.
July 6, 2015
Not my personal cup of tea but it might be yours.
While I understand that this novella serves as an introductory prequel of sorts, the beginning is bogged down in exposition and I will admit, I skimmed at times, waiting for the story to get to its inciting incident. The main character is presented in a way that makes him feel very much like a spoiled little rich boy. I have no reason to believe his (thought) outbursts of anger are founded, and as such, I do not like the character. If I don't like a character, it is hard for me to care about his story.
The dialog is often stilted and the frequency of main character's thoughts in the general text feel jumbled and are often distracting. It reads in a way that too often provides redundant information (often one character repeating what the previous speaker has just said).
The insertion of Cris' thoughts remove the reader from the character and the story itself. Everything feels completely distant, leaving little room to get caught up in the story. The main issue with the thoughts is that it feels like you're bouncing in and out of 1st and 3rd person POV which is distracting and the constant use of italics led me to skim more.
The words "a few" are used nearly 100 times, making the measurement redundant. [Correction: using the kindle search feature, this number is actually 73. Just so we're accurate.]
ETA (7/2/15): Author has informed me that she has fixed some of these issues I note in this review. I can only review the version I read.
While I understand that this novella serves as an introductory prequel of sorts, the beginning is bogged down in exposition and I will admit, I skimmed at times, waiting for the story to get to its inciting incident. The main character is presented in a way that makes him feel very much like a spoiled little rich boy. I have no reason to believe his (thought) outbursts of anger are founded, and as such, I do not like the character. If I don't like a character, it is hard for me to care about his story.
The dialog is often stilted and the frequency of main character's thoughts in the general text feel jumbled and are often distracting. It reads in a way that too often provides redundant information (often one character repeating what the previous speaker has just said).
The insertion of Cris' thoughts remove the reader from the character and the story itself. Everything feels completely distant, leaving little room to get caught up in the story. The main issue with the thoughts is that it feels like you're bouncing in and out of 1st and 3rd person POV which is distracting and the constant use of italics led me to skim more.
The words "a few" are used nearly 100 times, making the measurement redundant. [Correction: using the kindle search feature, this number is actually 73. Just so we're accurate.]
ETA (7/2/15): Author has informed me that she has fixed some of these issues I note in this review. I can only review the version I read.
August 8, 2018
Cadicle omnibus by Amy Duboff.
The lost colony of Earth has no idea that the galaxy-spanning Taran empire is on the brink of an interdimensional war...
When Cris leaves Tararia to pursue his telekinetic abilities, he thinks he's started a new life. Years later, he learns that freedom was always an illusion—he and his family are at the center of an elaborate galactic conspiracy. Written in the style of classic sci-fi from the Golden Age, the Cadicle series follows three generations of the Sietinen Dynasty as they discover their roles in a secret war. Torn by duty and morality, their decisions will change the course of the Taran civilization.
This omnibus is a collection of the first three volumes in the Cadicle space opera series: Volume 1 - Architects of Destiny, Volume 2 - Veil of Reality, and Volume 3 - Bonds of Resolve
Thiscis 3 books in one so a very long read. Took me a while.
This was a very enjoyable read with likeable characters. I loved Chris and Scott. I loved the part where Chris met Kate. 4*.
The lost colony of Earth has no idea that the galaxy-spanning Taran empire is on the brink of an interdimensional war...
When Cris leaves Tararia to pursue his telekinetic abilities, he thinks he's started a new life. Years later, he learns that freedom was always an illusion—he and his family are at the center of an elaborate galactic conspiracy. Written in the style of classic sci-fi from the Golden Age, the Cadicle series follows three generations of the Sietinen Dynasty as they discover their roles in a secret war. Torn by duty and morality, their decisions will change the course of the Taran civilization.
This omnibus is a collection of the first three volumes in the Cadicle space opera series: Volume 1 - Architects of Destiny, Volume 2 - Veil of Reality, and Volume 3 - Bonds of Resolve
Thiscis 3 books in one so a very long read. Took me a while.
This was a very enjoyable read with likeable characters. I loved Chris and Scott. I loved the part where Chris met Kate. 4*.
September 30, 2016
Goodreads Synopsis: This is an alternate cover edition for ASIN: B00TT6OIFO
Out of sight beyond Earth, the Taran empire spans the galaxy from its seat of power on Tararia.
Cris Sietinen was born with rare telekinetic gifts—abilities he refuses to ignore, regardless of the governing Priesthood's decrees. But, as heir to the most influential Dynasty on Tararia, only a stifled life of business and politics awaits him within the confines of his family's estate. Determined to be true to himself and explore the potential of his abilities, Cris leaves Tararia to begin a new life touring the stars. When Cris unexpectedly receives an invitation to join the Tararian Selective Service (TSS), the only organization to offer an official telekinesis training program, a new future awaits. It's his dream opportunity to be among people like himself, free from the Priesthood and political objectives. Except, Cris' path was designed, and he's right where the Priesthood wants him.
Architects of Destiny is the first installment in the Cadicle series. A fast-paced space adventure with intrigue, coming-of-age and romance, this short novel is a prelude to the defining events in Tararia’s history in the ensuing years.
Is it possible to change destiny? The Cadicle series follows three generations of the pivotal Sietinen Dynasty as each learns their part in an elaborately orchestrated galactic conflict. Torn by politics, love and war, the Cadicle and those he holds most dear must choose between duty and morality as the true nature of their purpose unfolds. Through their roles as Agents in the Tararian Selective Service, they will be on the front lines of space battles, but the political skirmishes they must face on Tararia could prove just as dangerous. The Cadicle holds the key to winning both, but at what cost?
My Review: First of all, I really liked the cover of this book. There wasn't any specific reason I chose to read it at this time, aside from it being the first book on my list in my reading app, but I'm glad I chose it. I wasn't too sure what I was getting into when it began, but basically it's about a boy named Cris, who has telepathic powers. His family is pretty much royalty, they're super rich and have a lot of control. But Cris is more than just a boy with telepathic powers. He has his own thoughts, and most of them are about how he feels like he's a replacement for his dead brother, and what he's going to do as the heir of his family. He has family troubles, is what I'm trying to get at. His world bans telepathy, and his father wants him to ignore his powers. So he runs away. And from there, his life just progressively becomes more and more interesting. The book goes through five years of his life, and lets just say lots of things happen in that time. I loved that not only were the main characters interesting, but the characters around them were too. The world seemed so lifelike for most of it being in space. I know Cris is young at the beginning of the book, but at 19 years old I found I could enjoy reading this book and almost everything in it. I'm glad he grew and changed as a person through the story, and has plans to change the world. The only things I didn't like about this book, were the parts where there were time jumps, like it moved a year or 3 forward. Although it helped progress the story along, it's hard to believe that nothing interesting happened during those periods of time. That's a long time to just space out for. I didn't like how Cris and Kate talked to each other at first, although it was formal it came off as awkward to me. Not that people aren't awkward, just strange. I don't understand the one letter change in the swears, but there were only a couple. That's about it, though. The rest of the book I fully enjoyed, and will be looking into the second book in the series. I definitely recommend you check it out if you want a breath of fresh air, and you're looking for something new to read. Thanks for reading!
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Out of sight beyond Earth, the Taran empire spans the galaxy from its seat of power on Tararia.
Cris Sietinen was born with rare telekinetic gifts—abilities he refuses to ignore, regardless of the governing Priesthood's decrees. But, as heir to the most influential Dynasty on Tararia, only a stifled life of business and politics awaits him within the confines of his family's estate. Determined to be true to himself and explore the potential of his abilities, Cris leaves Tararia to begin a new life touring the stars. When Cris unexpectedly receives an invitation to join the Tararian Selective Service (TSS), the only organization to offer an official telekinesis training program, a new future awaits. It's his dream opportunity to be among people like himself, free from the Priesthood and political objectives. Except, Cris' path was designed, and he's right where the Priesthood wants him.
Architects of Destiny is the first installment in the Cadicle series. A fast-paced space adventure with intrigue, coming-of-age and romance, this short novel is a prelude to the defining events in Tararia’s history in the ensuing years.
Is it possible to change destiny? The Cadicle series follows three generations of the pivotal Sietinen Dynasty as each learns their part in an elaborately orchestrated galactic conflict. Torn by politics, love and war, the Cadicle and those he holds most dear must choose between duty and morality as the true nature of their purpose unfolds. Through their roles as Agents in the Tararian Selective Service, they will be on the front lines of space battles, but the political skirmishes they must face on Tararia could prove just as dangerous. The Cadicle holds the key to winning both, but at what cost?
My Review: First of all, I really liked the cover of this book. There wasn't any specific reason I chose to read it at this time, aside from it being the first book on my list in my reading app, but I'm glad I chose it. I wasn't too sure what I was getting into when it began, but basically it's about a boy named Cris, who has telepathic powers. His family is pretty much royalty, they're super rich and have a lot of control. But Cris is more than just a boy with telepathic powers. He has his own thoughts, and most of them are about how he feels like he's a replacement for his dead brother, and what he's going to do as the heir of his family. He has family troubles, is what I'm trying to get at. His world bans telepathy, and his father wants him to ignore his powers. So he runs away. And from there, his life just progressively becomes more and more interesting. The book goes through five years of his life, and lets just say lots of things happen in that time. I loved that not only were the main characters interesting, but the characters around them were too. The world seemed so lifelike for most of it being in space. I know Cris is young at the beginning of the book, but at 19 years old I found I could enjoy reading this book and almost everything in it. I'm glad he grew and changed as a person through the story, and has plans to change the world. The only things I didn't like about this book, were the parts where there were time jumps, like it moved a year or 3 forward. Although it helped progress the story along, it's hard to believe that nothing interesting happened during those periods of time. That's a long time to just space out for. I didn't like how Cris and Kate talked to each other at first, although it was formal it came off as awkward to me. Not that people aren't awkward, just strange. I don't understand the one letter change in the swears, but there were only a couple. That's about it, though. The rest of the book I fully enjoyed, and will be looking into the second book in the series. I definitely recommend you check it out if you want a breath of fresh air, and you're looking for something new to read. Thanks for reading!
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June 30, 2020
An emerging Sci-Fi.
I wanted to check out this book before the TV Show.
I heard this series was being considered for television, so naturally, I began to check it out.
The audio book was done well, and the story was a lot of fun. There's a character, who you don't know too much about, other than the fact that he's on the run. He joins a spaceship, hides his past, and begins developing a relationship with the captain as they do jobs from planet to planet. My main regret on this was this relationship was too short-lived, and I would have loved to get to know the crew better. I think it would have been great for him to go back and see this captain or crew at a later point, but without a deeper connection here, I feel that if he did later in the series, I may miss it.
This is not a hard sci-fi. It's Space Opera. So, yay for Star Wars. It seems a broadening of the mind, and telekinesis are involved. It has a similar feel to Star Wars Episode I, where he is the "Chosen One". You rooted for him, but you also kind of wanted to see more of a struggle to fit in to his abilities. It was far more interesting when it followed a young girl who excelled, but still struggled when compared to him.
They met, and sparks. A bit too fast, I wish it was drawn out here as well, but overall, the story was a fun, thrilling ride, and I look forward to the rest of the series.
I wanted to check out this book before the TV Show.
I heard this series was being considered for television, so naturally, I began to check it out.
The audio book was done well, and the story was a lot of fun. There's a character, who you don't know too much about, other than the fact that he's on the run. He joins a spaceship, hides his past, and begins developing a relationship with the captain as they do jobs from planet to planet. My main regret on this was this relationship was too short-lived, and I would have loved to get to know the crew better. I think it would have been great for him to go back and see this captain or crew at a later point, but without a deeper connection here, I feel that if he did later in the series, I may miss it.
This is not a hard sci-fi. It's Space Opera. So, yay for Star Wars. It seems a broadening of the mind, and telekinesis are involved. It has a similar feel to Star Wars Episode I, where he is the "Chosen One". You rooted for him, but you also kind of wanted to see more of a struggle to fit in to his abilities. It was far more interesting when it followed a young girl who excelled, but still struggled when compared to him.
They met, and sparks. A bit too fast, I wish it was drawn out here as well, but overall, the story was a fun, thrilling ride, and I look forward to the rest of the series.
March 2, 2016
This is a great introduction to what I’m sure will be a fantastic series. I’m a big fan of space based sci-fi, so it’s not a leap of faith that I’d like this. That being said, I would have enjoyed this even if it occurred in a different setting and space isn’t the main focus of the story.
I dislike reviews that summarize the book. In my opinion, if you want to know what a book is about, read the authors summary on their website or Goodreads, Amazon, etc. That being said, it’s the story of a man with non-so humble beginnings who goes out into the world (universe) to find himself. It reminded me a bit of Eddy Murphy in Coming to America.
How well did I like it: I finished reading this in 3 sittings, one for the introductory chapter (available on the authors website) before getting the full book, then one on the treadmill in the gym and finally the same evening after work. I didn’t want to put it down.
Pros:
• Great character development…that really summarizes it. There is a lot of room to work with in the main character going forward. I can easily see a whole series of books each on Christoph and Katrines families, as well as the TSS and Priesthood. Also, big thanks to the author who didn’t create the typical mysterious orphan with developing god-like powers trying to right a wrong to the family he/she never knew.
• The universe is unique and plausible, very easy for me to visualize as a natural progression of where we currently are as a species.
• I loved the different socio-economic views, e.g. a typical day of palace life, working class, the dark alleys of a space port, and school/student life.
Cons:
• It was too short :) Yes, I know this is like buying a comic book and complaining that there are too many pictures. I want to read more!
• The first chapter was semi-generic, e.g. it could have been the start of almost any sci-fi or fantasy series. This was my biggest concern with the preview but honestly, how many books hook a reader on the first chapter?
I dislike reviews that summarize the book. In my opinion, if you want to know what a book is about, read the authors summary on their website or Goodreads, Amazon, etc. That being said, it’s the story of a man with non-so humble beginnings who goes out into the world (universe) to find himself. It reminded me a bit of Eddy Murphy in Coming to America.
How well did I like it: I finished reading this in 3 sittings, one for the introductory chapter (available on the authors website) before getting the full book, then one on the treadmill in the gym and finally the same evening after work. I didn’t want to put it down.
Pros:
• Great character development…that really summarizes it. There is a lot of room to work with in the main character going forward. I can easily see a whole series of books each on Christoph and Katrines families, as well as the TSS and Priesthood. Also, big thanks to the author who didn’t create the typical mysterious orphan with developing god-like powers trying to right a wrong to the family he/she never knew.
• The universe is unique and plausible, very easy for me to visualize as a natural progression of where we currently are as a species.
• I loved the different socio-economic views, e.g. a typical day of palace life, working class, the dark alleys of a space port, and school/student life.
Cons:
• It was too short :) Yes, I know this is like buying a comic book and complaining that there are too many pictures. I want to read more!
• The first chapter was semi-generic, e.g. it could have been the start of almost any sci-fi or fantasy series. This was my biggest concern with the preview but honestly, how many books hook a reader on the first chapter?
October 27, 2015
I enjoyed this read but I found that the plot has a common theme. A teen feels unloved, out of place in his home, runs away to see the world and find himself. The setting is science fiction. The world that it takes place in: planets, space stations and supporting characters were all well thought out and described. This is only Part I so the story may develop more in the upcoming series.
Cris is a teen born to inherit a High Dynasty, however, he really wants no part of it. He feels that his parents were grooming his older brother that died for the part and Cris just doesn't meet their expectations. They don't want him to develop his special abilities which bothers Cris. Why can't he be who he is? Why should he hide part of himself? He plans to leave his home planet and learn more about the rest of the world before he has to take over his duties as his father's heir.
In Cris's world there are 6 High Dynasties. Each specialize in some kind of technology or need for people on other planets, ie: navigation technology, communication technology, clothing, food, etc. The Dynasties are supposed to rule and do whatever is beneficial for the people on other planets. The Priesthood is the silent ruler though and they have plans for Cris and his abilities.
As the story develops there is an undercurrent of secrets that does make it more intriguing. Amy Dubhoff does show promise as a writer and in reading Architects of Destiny the reader can tell that she enjoys this genre.
I received this book free from the author for review purposes. If you wish to learn more about Amy check out http://amyduboff.com/index.html
Cris is a teen born to inherit a High Dynasty, however, he really wants no part of it. He feels that his parents were grooming his older brother that died for the part and Cris just doesn't meet their expectations. They don't want him to develop his special abilities which bothers Cris. Why can't he be who he is? Why should he hide part of himself? He plans to leave his home planet and learn more about the rest of the world before he has to take over his duties as his father's heir.
In Cris's world there are 6 High Dynasties. Each specialize in some kind of technology or need for people on other planets, ie: navigation technology, communication technology, clothing, food, etc. The Dynasties are supposed to rule and do whatever is beneficial for the people on other planets. The Priesthood is the silent ruler though and they have plans for Cris and his abilities.
As the story develops there is an undercurrent of secrets that does make it more intriguing. Amy Dubhoff does show promise as a writer and in reading Architects of Destiny the reader can tell that she enjoys this genre.
I received this book free from the author for review purposes. If you wish to learn more about Amy check out http://amyduboff.com/index.html
April 19, 2015
Great First Book
Whenever I have been asked what super power I would choose if I could have one, it has always been telekinesis. Combine that with one of my favorite settings- space exploration and you pretty much have all the excitement that I get from reading this book.
It also hints at interstellar government control and secret organizations that have their hands in everything. It gives me hope that the heir to a powerful high dynasty is breaking free from the powerful mechanisms that indoctrinate those of his position and is coming to see the universe through the eyes off a commoner.
If I could change anything it would be to go more in depth into the telekinetic abilities, but I'm hopeful that this will come in subsequent volumes.
The book is fun, fast, and sets the stage for many more great books.
Whenever I have been asked what super power I would choose if I could have one, it has always been telekinesis. Combine that with one of my favorite settings- space exploration and you pretty much have all the excitement that I get from reading this book.
It also hints at interstellar government control and secret organizations that have their hands in everything. It gives me hope that the heir to a powerful high dynasty is breaking free from the powerful mechanisms that indoctrinate those of his position and is coming to see the universe through the eyes off a commoner.
If I could change anything it would be to go more in depth into the telekinetic abilities, but I'm hopeful that this will come in subsequent volumes.
The book is fun, fast, and sets the stage for many more great books.
June 20, 2015
Architects of Destiny is a fun fast-paced intro to a promising series. It can be difficult at times for sci-fi writers explain both the world the characters live in and the characters. Its a balancing act and I was clear that DuBoff had her hands full with establishing a world as complicated as this one. But she hit the nail on the head balance-wise. She has set up a good foundation for future stories and has left just enough mystery to keep people searching for her new books in stores. Architects of Destiny was a good read and I am looking forward to reading her next book. I'm glad she allowed me to read it for free in exchange for this honest review.
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April 1, 2016Architects of Destiny: Review
Amy DuBoff pulls the reader into a world filled with surprises and intrigue. Ride along with Cris as he ventures beyond the pampered life as a Dynastic heir to forge his own destiny. All the while, forces unknown are plotting to put his life back in line with the destiny they had in mind at his birth.
What I liked: The characters are well-developed and relatable, each with their own strengths and weaknesses.
What I didn't like: The danger to the main character seems to a nebulous idea, but not an imminent threat (yet).
A solid read! I look forward to continuing the journey.
Amy DuBoff pulls the reader into a world filled with surprises and intrigue. Ride along with Cris as he ventures beyond the pampered life as a Dynastic heir to forge his own destiny. All the while, forces unknown are plotting to put his life back in line with the destiny they had in mind at his birth.
What I liked: The characters are well-developed and relatable, each with their own strengths and weaknesses.
What I didn't like: The danger to the main character seems to a nebulous idea, but not an imminent threat (yet).
A solid read! I look forward to continuing the journey.
June 15, 2015
This is a great start at the series, I look forward to the next book.
May 24, 2020
Cris Sietinen is a young man who is heir to the Tararia High Dynasty, one of the ruling Dynasties that control the galaxy, along with a rather secretive organisation called the Priesthood. To speak out against the Priesthood is basically a death sentence.
Cris does not want to be heir though, he wants to live his own life, and part of that life includes exploring the telekinetic abilities that he has, but is not allowed to understand due to the Priesthood, which strictly forbids them. He has been able to develop some simple Telepathy, but this is it. He knows that he can do more.
There is an organisation, the Tararian Selective Services or TSS that could help him, but Cris isn’t sure this is the correct path either. His older brother was killed before he was born, and his parents have never gotten over it, Cris was basically conceived as a substitute Heir to the Dynasty, not because his parents wanted him, and his Father just sees him as a tool for the future, and his Mother has no love or interest, still lost in her grief.
As such, Cris runs away from the Dynasty grounds, and fortunately for him, stumbles across a Freighter Captain who happens to need a Navigator. Cris’s family business is Navigation, so he has been trained from a young age in Navigating the stars, as well as the Navigation Systems, as this is what they make and sell to amass their fortune.
DuBoff gives us a fascinating look into both the galaxy she has created, as well as the character of Cris during this period, and we get to see a bit of the Character of Tom, who is a fun minor character.
Eventually though, Cris’ past catches up with him, and the TSS come for him, and he decides to join their ranks.
Again, this part of the story is descriptive, a ‘coming of age’ part of the story, in which we not only get to learn more about Cris, the power that he contains and the possible future that he has, but we also start to see the background of this story unfolding before us. Architects is almost a backstory to the main story of Cadicle, and it is clear in these early stages of the story, why this is the case, as again, DuBoff takes the time to not only give us background into the characters of Cris, and eventually a woman he meets, Kate Vaenetri, but it allows DuBoff to also fill in various back story for the future, and do some impressive world building in the Cadicle Universe.
She has created an amazing universe full of brilliant characters, an in-depth hierarchical political system, with multiple facets, and set the scene with numerous plot lines that are teased out in this first book.
One of the really clever bits of writing, something that is a good hook for Sci-Fi fans, is not only the shadowy organisation of the TSS, but the entire concept of the psychic powers in this Universe. The actual powers they can use, the levels, how they are measured etc. There are hints at what all of this is, and it is obvious that Cris is one of the most powerful to have ever been born, but we also learn that there will be another.
Overall, this is a clever, creative, fascinating story, with exceptional character work, that makes for not only a fun and enjoyable read, but it is utterly enthralling, once you start, you find you can’t put it down.
There are a lot of different elements to this story, and any Sci-fi fans will love this story, I suggest if you love a good Sci-Fi read, just jump in, it is well worth it!!
The Narration by Joshua Bloomberg is brilliant. He speaks with such a wonderful clear voice, he is so easy to understand, with good pronunciation of words. The Narrator does great character voices, both male and female, he creates a really great dynamic between the male and female characters, giving them very distinctive voices so you can easily recognise which character is speaking, allowing you to just enjoy the story, without having to constantly struggle to try and work out which character is speaking. Bloomberg also brings a lot of emotion to his characters so you can clearly understand what is going on with the story, if the characters are unhappy, joyful, excited, distressed.
One aspect that Bloomberg did really well with this story is that there is a lot of inner monologue from the Main Character, and he provided a slightly different tone between the Main Characters speaking voice, and Monologue voice, it was very clever, and for us listening, it allowed us to know when he was thinking and when he was speaking, it was exceptional Narration.
Bloomberg is outstanding, I will be adding him to my ‘Must Listen To’ List of Narrators.
Cris does not want to be heir though, he wants to live his own life, and part of that life includes exploring the telekinetic abilities that he has, but is not allowed to understand due to the Priesthood, which strictly forbids them. He has been able to develop some simple Telepathy, but this is it. He knows that he can do more.
There is an organisation, the Tararian Selective Services or TSS that could help him, but Cris isn’t sure this is the correct path either. His older brother was killed before he was born, and his parents have never gotten over it, Cris was basically conceived as a substitute Heir to the Dynasty, not because his parents wanted him, and his Father just sees him as a tool for the future, and his Mother has no love or interest, still lost in her grief.
As such, Cris runs away from the Dynasty grounds, and fortunately for him, stumbles across a Freighter Captain who happens to need a Navigator. Cris’s family business is Navigation, so he has been trained from a young age in Navigating the stars, as well as the Navigation Systems, as this is what they make and sell to amass their fortune.
DuBoff gives us a fascinating look into both the galaxy she has created, as well as the character of Cris during this period, and we get to see a bit of the Character of Tom, who is a fun minor character.
Eventually though, Cris’ past catches up with him, and the TSS come for him, and he decides to join their ranks.
Again, this part of the story is descriptive, a ‘coming of age’ part of the story, in which we not only get to learn more about Cris, the power that he contains and the possible future that he has, but we also start to see the background of this story unfolding before us. Architects is almost a backstory to the main story of Cadicle, and it is clear in these early stages of the story, why this is the case, as again, DuBoff takes the time to not only give us background into the characters of Cris, and eventually a woman he meets, Kate Vaenetri, but it allows DuBoff to also fill in various back story for the future, and do some impressive world building in the Cadicle Universe.
She has created an amazing universe full of brilliant characters, an in-depth hierarchical political system, with multiple facets, and set the scene with numerous plot lines that are teased out in this first book.
One of the really clever bits of writing, something that is a good hook for Sci-Fi fans, is not only the shadowy organisation of the TSS, but the entire concept of the psychic powers in this Universe. The actual powers they can use, the levels, how they are measured etc. There are hints at what all of this is, and it is obvious that Cris is one of the most powerful to have ever been born, but we also learn that there will be another.
Overall, this is a clever, creative, fascinating story, with exceptional character work, that makes for not only a fun and enjoyable read, but it is utterly enthralling, once you start, you find you can’t put it down.
There are a lot of different elements to this story, and any Sci-fi fans will love this story, I suggest if you love a good Sci-Fi read, just jump in, it is well worth it!!
The Narration by Joshua Bloomberg is brilliant. He speaks with such a wonderful clear voice, he is so easy to understand, with good pronunciation of words. The Narrator does great character voices, both male and female, he creates a really great dynamic between the male and female characters, giving them very distinctive voices so you can easily recognise which character is speaking, allowing you to just enjoy the story, without having to constantly struggle to try and work out which character is speaking. Bloomberg also brings a lot of emotion to his characters so you can clearly understand what is going on with the story, if the characters are unhappy, joyful, excited, distressed.
One aspect that Bloomberg did really well with this story is that there is a lot of inner monologue from the Main Character, and he provided a slightly different tone between the Main Characters speaking voice, and Monologue voice, it was very clever, and for us listening, it allowed us to know when he was thinking and when he was speaking, it was exceptional Narration.
Bloomberg is outstanding, I will be adding him to my ‘Must Listen To’ List of Narrators.
June 20, 2017
Worthwhile reading, this book sits on the edge of YA, and is Science-Fiction that reminds me of older Heinlen and Asimov.
My "Cons" list for this book (and series) is longer than you would probably expect from a 4 star review - so I won't go into everything. Suffice to say that the Author grows from one novel to the next, with the high point likely being book 5 (of 7).
If there was one big negative trait to the series, it's that the characters (other than the bad guys) are too reasonable. They quickly evaluate emotional hang-ups that would stump most adults and act in mostly appropriate ways. They give in, or change their minds, too easily - more so than I would ever expect anyone to in real life. These emotional changes should take more time, and more self reflection - usually that self reflection is one or two lines of thought as they process their emotions and come, almost universally, to an appropriate response. Being that this is a book (series) that feels primarily YA oriented, this sort of emotional trite-ness doesn't feel too out of place.
Certain illogicalisms (I made that word up) spring up in conversations and character thoughts throughout the novels. Usually these are idioms and slang that don't seem appropriate to the characters saying/thinking them. Cursing and colourful adjectives are used sparingly (at least in English) and the swearing that is used fits the mood and structure of the series, it's also usually consistent. It's not perfect though (again, illogicalisms sometimes.)
This space-opera series is multi-generational, and features some strong male and female leads throughout.
Our first protagonist (who we will follow for several novels in the series) is a rich-kid on the run, ditching his life of comfort and privilege to see the world (or galaxy, as the case may be). After some space-tourism, we get to follow him to school/training. Kind of a mash-up of Ender's Game and Harry Potter, the school setting works well and moves the story along in a measured way. As I mentioned at the outset, this books sits on the edge of YA (some would call it completely YA) and as such, we're going to need some Romance - cue the mood music! Never graphic, the complexities of a physical and emotional relationship aren't left out of this book, or the following novels. We don't see any of the darker side of romance here, and this feels appropriate. However, I feel that those complexities are softened somewhat to make for easier reading.
On the horizon we have a couple of antagonistic entities, all waiting to be unveiled and given their time in the spotlight. The Bakzen are a warlike alien race, and "The Priesthood" seems to be manipulating the world in nefarious ways.
I received the first novel for free from a "10 science fiction e-books) offer, and liked this novel enough to continue. I purchased the omnibus edition of the first 3 books from Amazon, and followed that up with 4 more full price purchases to complete the series. At 4.99 (CAD, at the time of this review) the followup novels are priced appropriately for digital consumption. They are a bit short though, so I wouldn't mind seeing them just a bit cheaper, or another omnibus edition at a medium price-point (13.99?) that finished the last 4 books of the series.
If you like Science Fiction, and if you grew up on the lighter side of it, back when there was no distinction between YA and regular Sci-Fi, I think you could get into this series. Compartmentalize and ignore the bits of triteness and occasional speech illogicalisms (3 times, it's a real word now right?) and enjoy the over-arching story. There is quite a bit of social depth here, and a well constructed world for the characters to play in. I think you'll be happy with it, overall, by the time you reach the end.
My "Cons" list for this book (and series) is longer than you would probably expect from a 4 star review - so I won't go into everything. Suffice to say that the Author grows from one novel to the next, with the high point likely being book 5 (of 7).
If there was one big negative trait to the series, it's that the characters (other than the bad guys) are too reasonable. They quickly evaluate emotional hang-ups that would stump most adults and act in mostly appropriate ways. They give in, or change their minds, too easily - more so than I would ever expect anyone to in real life. These emotional changes should take more time, and more self reflection - usually that self reflection is one or two lines of thought as they process their emotions and come, almost universally, to an appropriate response. Being that this is a book (series) that feels primarily YA oriented, this sort of emotional trite-ness doesn't feel too out of place.
Certain illogicalisms (I made that word up) spring up in conversations and character thoughts throughout the novels. Usually these are idioms and slang that don't seem appropriate to the characters saying/thinking them. Cursing and colourful adjectives are used sparingly (at least in English) and the swearing that is used fits the mood and structure of the series, it's also usually consistent. It's not perfect though (again, illogicalisms sometimes.)
This space-opera series is multi-generational, and features some strong male and female leads throughout.
Our first protagonist (who we will follow for several novels in the series) is a rich-kid on the run, ditching his life of comfort and privilege to see the world (or galaxy, as the case may be). After some space-tourism, we get to follow him to school/training. Kind of a mash-up of Ender's Game and Harry Potter, the school setting works well and moves the story along in a measured way. As I mentioned at the outset, this books sits on the edge of YA (some would call it completely YA) and as such, we're going to need some Romance - cue the mood music! Never graphic, the complexities of a physical and emotional relationship aren't left out of this book, or the following novels. We don't see any of the darker side of romance here, and this feels appropriate. However, I feel that those complexities are softened somewhat to make for easier reading.
On the horizon we have a couple of antagonistic entities, all waiting to be unveiled and given their time in the spotlight. The Bakzen are a warlike alien race, and "The Priesthood" seems to be manipulating the world in nefarious ways.
I received the first novel for free from a "10 science fiction e-books) offer, and liked this novel enough to continue. I purchased the omnibus edition of the first 3 books from Amazon, and followed that up with 4 more full price purchases to complete the series. At 4.99 (CAD, at the time of this review) the followup novels are priced appropriately for digital consumption. They are a bit short though, so I wouldn't mind seeing them just a bit cheaper, or another omnibus edition at a medium price-point (13.99?) that finished the last 4 books of the series.
If you like Science Fiction, and if you grew up on the lighter side of it, back when there was no distinction between YA and regular Sci-Fi, I think you could get into this series. Compartmentalize and ignore the bits of triteness and occasional speech illogicalisms (3 times, it's a real word now right?) and enjoy the over-arching story. There is quite a bit of social depth here, and a well constructed world for the characters to play in. I think you'll be happy with it, overall, by the time you reach the end.
February 28, 2020
Cris Sietinen is a young man who is heir to the Tararia High Dynasty, one of the ruling Dynasties that control the galaxy, along with a rather secretive organisation called the Priesthood. To speak out against the Priesthood is basically a death sentence.
Cris does not want to be heir though, he wants to live his own life, and part of that life includes exploring the telekinetic abilities that he has, but is not allowed to understand due to the Priesthood, which strictly forbids them. He has been able to develop some simple Telepathy, but this is it. He knows that he can do more.
There is an organisation, the Tararian Selective Services or TSS that could help him, but Cris isn’t sure this is the correct path either. His older brother was killed before he was born, and his parents have never gotten over it, Cris was basically conceived as a substitute Heir to the Dynasty, not because his parents wanted him, and his Father just sees him as a tool for the future, and his Mother has no love or interest, still lost in her grief.
As such, Cris runs away from the Dynasty grounds, and fortunately for him, stumbles across a Freighter Captain who happens to need a Navigator. Cris’s family business is Navigation, so he has been trained from a young age in Navigating the stars, as well as the Navigation Systems, as this is what they make and sell to amass their fortune.
DuBoff gives us a fascinating look into both the galaxy she has created, as well as the character of Cris during this period, and we get to see a bit of the Character of Tom, who is a fun minor character.
Eventually though, Cris’ past catches up with him, and the TSS come for him, and he decides to join their ranks.
Again, this part of the story is descriptive, a ‘coming of age’ part of the story, in which we not only get to learn more about Cris, the power that he contains and the possible future that he has, but we also start to see the background of this story unfolding before us. Architects is almost a backstory to the main story of Cadicle, and it is clear in these early stages of the story, why this is the case, as again, DuBoff takes the time to not only give us background into the characters of Cris, and eventually a woman he meets, Kate Vaenetri, but it allows DuBoff to also fill in various back story for the future, and do some impressive world building in the Cadicle Universe.
She has created an amazing universe full of brilliant characters, an in-depth hierarchical political system, with multiple facets, and set the scene with numerous plot lines that are teased out in this first book.
One of the really clever bits of writing, something that is a good hook for Sci-Fi fans, is not only the shadowy organisation of the TSS, but the entire concept of the psychic powers in this Universe. The actual powers they can use, the levels, how they are measured etc. There are hints at what all of this is, and it is obvious that Cris is one of the most powerful to have ever been born, but we also learn that there will be another.
Overall, this is a clever, creative, fascinating story, with exceptional character work, that makes for not only a fun and enjoyable read, but it is utterly enthralling, once you start, you find you can’t put it down.
There are a lot of different elements to this story, and any Sci-fi fans will love this story, I suggest if you love a good Sci-Fi read, just jump in, it is well worth it!!
Cris does not want to be heir though, he wants to live his own life, and part of that life includes exploring the telekinetic abilities that he has, but is not allowed to understand due to the Priesthood, which strictly forbids them. He has been able to develop some simple Telepathy, but this is it. He knows that he can do more.
There is an organisation, the Tararian Selective Services or TSS that could help him, but Cris isn’t sure this is the correct path either. His older brother was killed before he was born, and his parents have never gotten over it, Cris was basically conceived as a substitute Heir to the Dynasty, not because his parents wanted him, and his Father just sees him as a tool for the future, and his Mother has no love or interest, still lost in her grief.
As such, Cris runs away from the Dynasty grounds, and fortunately for him, stumbles across a Freighter Captain who happens to need a Navigator. Cris’s family business is Navigation, so he has been trained from a young age in Navigating the stars, as well as the Navigation Systems, as this is what they make and sell to amass their fortune.
DuBoff gives us a fascinating look into both the galaxy she has created, as well as the character of Cris during this period, and we get to see a bit of the Character of Tom, who is a fun minor character.
Eventually though, Cris’ past catches up with him, and the TSS come for him, and he decides to join their ranks.
Again, this part of the story is descriptive, a ‘coming of age’ part of the story, in which we not only get to learn more about Cris, the power that he contains and the possible future that he has, but we also start to see the background of this story unfolding before us. Architects is almost a backstory to the main story of Cadicle, and it is clear in these early stages of the story, why this is the case, as again, DuBoff takes the time to not only give us background into the characters of Cris, and eventually a woman he meets, Kate Vaenetri, but it allows DuBoff to also fill in various back story for the future, and do some impressive world building in the Cadicle Universe.
She has created an amazing universe full of brilliant characters, an in-depth hierarchical political system, with multiple facets, and set the scene with numerous plot lines that are teased out in this first book.
One of the really clever bits of writing, something that is a good hook for Sci-Fi fans, is not only the shadowy organisation of the TSS, but the entire concept of the psychic powers in this Universe. The actual powers they can use, the levels, how they are measured etc. There are hints at what all of this is, and it is obvious that Cris is one of the most powerful to have ever been born, but we also learn that there will be another.
Overall, this is a clever, creative, fascinating story, with exceptional character work, that makes for not only a fun and enjoyable read, but it is utterly enthralling, once you start, you find you can’t put it down.
There are a lot of different elements to this story, and any Sci-fi fans will love this story, I suggest if you love a good Sci-Fi read, just jump in, it is well worth it!!
June 7, 2017
This novella started off strong for me but fizzled out towards the end.
Here's where I think this failed for me
1) It was too short. I initially started reading a bundled version of books 1-3 and had no real sense of the story's length. The pace of the story was good, if not a bit quick, for what I would assume to be the first 20-30% of a normal length novel. However, once Cris the pace picked up a bit and at a specific point there was too much skipping around. A lot of character development was lost when time skipped years at a time (5 in total) and certain things would be teased to the reader but never fully explored . So while this was just a teaser for the other books, a lot of opportunities were lost here. It felt like the author reached a checkpoint and started to really thin out the other plot details.
2) No way to gauge Cris's telekinesis abilities. It is impossible to tell how strong Cris is, or as everyone else says, what his potential is. Though certain things are mentioned such as it being difficult for Agents to do what Cris once did accidentally or Cris speeding through training at a record setting pace, we have little to compare that with. If Cris had a normal training experience, the reader could experience Cris's superiority in that regard instead of being told by offhanded exposition from his peers. Cris himself doesn't even really know (maybe this is intended, of course) how different he is. I expected more of an astonished reaction from others to at least have some sort of build up and cathartic release of tension from peers. Some sort of test to prove himself. There is none of that.
3) There isn't any real conflict; this is literally just backstory. While written very well, enough to keep me engaged until the love potential was introduced (will lose interest in story 10/10 times), there was only one moment that can be considered climactic in any way, and that is followed up by calm and safety and no consequences. No, the only other conflicts are purely familial spats and behind the scenes plotting that has no effect on the first book.
So here is where I stand. I was totally ready to jump into a new space epic but I was turned off by the 20 year gap between books 1 & 2 (more lost character growth and backstory and other epic tales), the addition of Cris's progeny and his status (stealing the limelight from the main character already?), and the lack of any incentive to read more other than conspiracies from the first book (the hype for the bad guy really sucks/is practically nonexistent). So no thank you.
Here's where I think this failed for me
1) It was too short. I initially started reading a bundled version of books 1-3 and had no real sense of the story's length. The pace of the story was good, if not a bit quick, for what I would assume to be the first 20-30% of a normal length novel. However, once Cris the pace picked up a bit and at a specific point there was too much skipping around. A lot of character development was lost when time skipped years at a time (5 in total) and certain things would be teased to the reader but never fully explored . So while this was just a teaser for the other books, a lot of opportunities were lost here. It felt like the author reached a checkpoint and started to really thin out the other plot details.
2) No way to gauge Cris's telekinesis abilities. It is impossible to tell how strong Cris is, or as everyone else says, what his potential is. Though certain things are mentioned such as it being difficult for Agents to do what Cris once did accidentally or Cris speeding through training at a record setting pace, we have little to compare that with. If Cris had a normal training experience, the reader could experience Cris's superiority in that regard instead of being told by offhanded exposition from his peers. Cris himself doesn't even really know (maybe this is intended, of course) how different he is. I expected more of an astonished reaction from others to at least have some sort of build up and cathartic release of tension from peers. Some sort of test to prove himself. There is none of that.
3) There isn't any real conflict; this is literally just backstory. While written very well, enough to keep me engaged until the love potential was introduced (will lose interest in story 10/10 times), there was only one moment that can be considered climactic in any way, and that is followed up by calm and safety and no consequences. No, the only other conflicts are purely familial spats and behind the scenes plotting that has no effect on the first book.
So here is where I stand. I was totally ready to jump into a new space epic but I was turned off by the 20 year gap between books 1 & 2 (more lost character growth and backstory and other epic tales), the addition of Cris's progeny and his status (stealing the limelight from the main character already?), and the lack of any incentive to read more other than conspiracies from the first book (the hype for the bad guy really sucks/is practically nonexistent). So no thank you.
September 12, 2019
So we've got:
• dynasties of Noble houses that rule the Galaxy by monopolizing each their own trade
• a centuries old secret breeding program intended to produce some sort of super-being, being organized by a priesthood that really seems more political than religious
There's other small similarities, but that should be enough to show a link between this and Frank Hebert's Dune series. But it's a classic after all, so why wouldn't people pay homage to it? I guess there's nothing wrong with it, but in this case it doesn't feel like it's done well.
To be fair, it's not a complete clone. The basic plot is (mostly) different from Hebert's, and there are a lot of very original nuances too. The fact that Earth is kept in the dark about the empire smacks of conspiracy theory fodder (actually, there's a prequel that does literally tie it to Roswell). The training academy feels closer to Ender's Game or maybe a SciFi Harry Potter. But there's the problem. Everything in the book feels borrowed from somewhere else, none of it seems original. This feels to me as if the story had been made up by the 14 year old who later became our current author, then gathered complexity as the author aged but still kept the same basic plot, and now it's this huge series that means a lot more to the author than just a story because she's carried it around with her for years now and it just had to get written. That may or may not be what actually happened, but truly the copycatting is over the top on this one.
Of course, if you've never read Dune or any of the other stories that fathered this one then maybe you could enjoy this series. The writing is good enough. There is a small problem that characters' motivations don't always seem sensible. But overall very readable and flows well.
In fact the writing is good enough that I expect the author's next series will be good enough to recommend, but this one is a pass for me.
Anyway, the breakdown:
Characters - 3 star, just okay
Story/plot - 1 star, mostly borrowed
Writing - 4 star, mostly good
Setting/worldbuilding - 3.5 star, fair but could be better
Weighted average..... 3 stars overall
I did enjoy the book, but still can't recommend it.
• dynasties of Noble houses that rule the Galaxy by monopolizing each their own trade
• a centuries old secret breeding program intended to produce some sort of super-being, being organized by a priesthood that really seems more political than religious
There's other small similarities, but that should be enough to show a link between this and Frank Hebert's Dune series. But it's a classic after all, so why wouldn't people pay homage to it? I guess there's nothing wrong with it, but in this case it doesn't feel like it's done well.
To be fair, it's not a complete clone. The basic plot is (mostly) different from Hebert's, and there are a lot of very original nuances too. The fact that Earth is kept in the dark about the empire smacks of conspiracy theory fodder (actually, there's a prequel that does literally tie it to Roswell). The training academy feels closer to Ender's Game or maybe a SciFi Harry Potter. But there's the problem. Everything in the book feels borrowed from somewhere else, none of it seems original. This feels to me as if the story had been made up by the 14 year old who later became our current author, then gathered complexity as the author aged but still kept the same basic plot, and now it's this huge series that means a lot more to the author than just a story because she's carried it around with her for years now and it just had to get written. That may or may not be what actually happened, but truly the copycatting is over the top on this one.
Of course, if you've never read Dune or any of the other stories that fathered this one then maybe you could enjoy this series. The writing is good enough. There is a small problem that characters' motivations don't always seem sensible. But overall very readable and flows well.
In fact the writing is good enough that I expect the author's next series will be good enough to recommend, but this one is a pass for me.
Anyway, the breakdown:
Characters - 3 star, just okay
Story/plot - 1 star, mostly borrowed
Writing - 4 star, mostly good
Setting/worldbuilding - 3.5 star, fair but could be better
Weighted average..... 3 stars overall
I did enjoy the book, but still can't recommend it.
September 13, 2019
So we've got:
• dynasties of Noble houses that rule the Galaxy by monopolizing each their own trade
• a centuries old secret breeding program intended to produce some sort of super-being, being organized by a priesthood that really seems more political than religious
There's other small similarities, but that should be enough to show a link between this and Frank Hebert's Dune series. But it's a classic after all, so why wouldn't people pay homage to it? I guess there's nothing wrong with it, but in this case it doesn't feel like it's done well.
To be fair, it's not a complete clone. The basic plot is (mostly) different from Hebert's, and there are a lot of very original nuances too. The fact that Earth is kept in the dark about the empire smacks of conspiracy theory fodder (actually, there's a prequel that does literally tie it to Roswell). The training academy feels closer to Ender's Game or maybe a SciFi Harry Potter. But there's the problem. Everything in the book feels borrowed from somewhere else, none of it seems original. This feels to me as if the story had been made up by the 14 year old who later became our current author, then gathered complexity as the author aged but still kept the same basic plot, and now it's this huge series that means a lot more to the author than just a story because she's carried it around with her for years now and it just had to get written. That may or may not be what actually happened, but truly the copycatting is over the top on this one.
Of course, if you've never read Dune or any of the other stories that fathered this one then maybe you could enjoy this series. The writing is good enough. There is a small problem that characters' motivations don't always seem sensible. But overall very readable and flows well.
In fact the writing is good enough that I expect the author's next series will be good enough to recommend, but this one is a pass for me.
Anyway, the breakdown:
Characters - 3 star, just okay
Story/plot - 1 star, mostly borrowed
Writing - 4 star, mostly good
Setting/worldbuilding - 3.5 star, fair but could be better
Weighted average..... 3 stars overall
I did enjoy the book, but still can't recommend it.
• dynasties of Noble houses that rule the Galaxy by monopolizing each their own trade
• a centuries old secret breeding program intended to produce some sort of super-being, being organized by a priesthood that really seems more political than religious
There's other small similarities, but that should be enough to show a link between this and Frank Hebert's Dune series. But it's a classic after all, so why wouldn't people pay homage to it? I guess there's nothing wrong with it, but in this case it doesn't feel like it's done well.
To be fair, it's not a complete clone. The basic plot is (mostly) different from Hebert's, and there are a lot of very original nuances too. The fact that Earth is kept in the dark about the empire smacks of conspiracy theory fodder (actually, there's a prequel that does literally tie it to Roswell). The training academy feels closer to Ender's Game or maybe a SciFi Harry Potter. But there's the problem. Everything in the book feels borrowed from somewhere else, none of it seems original. This feels to me as if the story had been made up by the 14 year old who later became our current author, then gathered complexity as the author aged but still kept the same basic plot, and now it's this huge series that means a lot more to the author than just a story because she's carried it around with her for years now and it just had to get written. That may or may not be what actually happened, but truly the copycatting is over the top on this one.
Of course, if you've never read Dune or any of the other stories that fathered this one then maybe you could enjoy this series. The writing is good enough. There is a small problem that characters' motivations don't always seem sensible. But overall very readable and flows well.
In fact the writing is good enough that I expect the author's next series will be good enough to recommend, but this one is a pass for me.
Anyway, the breakdown:
Characters - 3 star, just okay
Story/plot - 1 star, mostly borrowed
Writing - 4 star, mostly good
Setting/worldbuilding - 3.5 star, fair but could be better
Weighted average..... 3 stars overall
I did enjoy the book, but still can't recommend it.
August 30, 2017
Good Beginning of an epic saga.
I liked the character development of Chris, the young teen main character, and his new friends/co-students. Although it did have the teenage angst of Chris (and I liked the thought inclusion of his and other characters'), the competition that usually occurs in teen relationships seemed to be missing. The reactions of fellow trainees to Chris' abilities seemed to be more an awe which I think would tend to isolate him more rather than draw them to him. However, that magnetism might be a byproduct of the telekinetic power in and between the gifted.
I also wondered about the fact that Chris was repeatedly told to block his mind from others, yet no training seemed to be done for this. It is interesting that he has such abilities, yet cannot and did not attempt to question the High Commander. Of course, this would be consistent with an emotionally abandoned child who finds (is taken in) by an apparently benevolent father figure. He could not 'see' what he subconsciously did not want to see.
This is an easy read that is very captivating and well-written.
I look forward to the sequels.
I liked the character development of Chris, the young teen main character, and his new friends/co-students. Although it did have the teenage angst of Chris (and I liked the thought inclusion of his and other characters'), the competition that usually occurs in teen relationships seemed to be missing. The reactions of fellow trainees to Chris' abilities seemed to be more an awe which I think would tend to isolate him more rather than draw them to him. However, that magnetism might be a byproduct of the telekinetic power in and between the gifted.
I also wondered about the fact that Chris was repeatedly told to block his mind from others, yet no training seemed to be done for this. It is interesting that he has such abilities, yet cannot and did not attempt to question the High Commander. Of course, this would be consistent with an emotionally abandoned child who finds (is taken in) by an apparently benevolent father figure. He could not 'see' what he subconsciously did not want to see.
This is an easy read that is very captivating and well-written.
I look forward to the sequels.
December 31, 2017
An enjoyable beginning to what is evidently a much bigger story. In some of the reviews I've read, they've referenced other classic sci-fi literature, none of which I've read, (*shock* *horror*), and so for me what I was reminded of most might seem a bit weird to some, but I kept thinking of Firefly and Serenity. I mean, it's not actually like them, in so many ways, but it's what I kept seeing in my mind's eye.
The MC began as a not very likeable young chap in some ways, because he seemed to only be thinking about himself. But I can relate to where he was at emotionally and how that can cloud your view and impair your ability to make good decisions. I mean, it's not that unheard of for a 16 yr old to be unable to see beyond the end of their own nose and to lack maturity. That's kind of the essence of being 16 for a lot of people. Anyway, I was a bit disappointed at times by the time jumps that occurred and the fact that we lost small moments to see the character growing into himself and who he is as a person, as well as his abilities. Otherwise, I enjoyed this book.
The MC began as a not very likeable young chap in some ways, because he seemed to only be thinking about himself. But I can relate to where he was at emotionally and how that can cloud your view and impair your ability to make good decisions. I mean, it's not that unheard of for a 16 yr old to be unable to see beyond the end of their own nose and to lack maturity. That's kind of the essence of being 16 for a lot of people. Anyway, I was a bit disappointed at times by the time jumps that occurred and the fact that we lost small moments to see the character growing into himself and who he is as a person, as well as his abilities. Otherwise, I enjoyed this book.
May 23, 2017
This gets off to an unpromising start, with mention of electric sabres and a mystic preisthood. Basically, it reads like Star Wars fan fiction but they're pretending it's not Star Wars by changing the details a bit. Then there is the annoying space swearing. It just doesn't ring true that people would curse "stars". Later on, the author seems to forget that they tried to develop space swearing (not a bad idea in itself) and uses "shite".
Now, in the middle section the book does pick up a bit, but I admit that by then I was only reading because I don't like to quit a book I've started. Then however it takes a dive. Not as far down as the beginning but still pretty lame. The main character falls for a woman, whom he thinks is a bit special - indeed she is, she's the only decent female character. Which is odd, as this is written by a woman.
Anyway, you might like this if you like all things sci-fi, but not one for the discerning reader.
Now, in the middle section the book does pick up a bit, but I admit that by then I was only reading because I don't like to quit a book I've started. Then however it takes a dive. Not as far down as the beginning but still pretty lame. The main character falls for a woman, whom he thinks is a bit special - indeed she is, she's the only decent female character. Which is odd, as this is written by a woman.
Anyway, you might like this if you like all things sci-fi, but not one for the discerning reader.
June 15, 2017
This book was alright. It did not blow me away, but the story telling was solid and while the characters were not fascinating they were interesting. I am interested to see what happens with the characters in future books. I pondered whether to give this three or four stars. There were a few things that did bother me. The story is told in the third person, but the main character is constantly talking to himself which gives it the feel of going back and forth between first person and third person constantly. Perhaps it would have been a little less jarring had the book been written in the first person. In the end this wasn't enough for me to lower it to three stars. I did enjoy the main characters enough to want to see where we go from here.
December 10, 2017
Architects of Destiny was a fun and exciting story for me to read. I really liked how well it was written and the style the author used when conveying the characters inner thoughts. At first glance the story seems like it will be a simple straight forward tale but soon you realize there is quite a bit of intrigue with conspiracies laced in the background that the man characters have no clue about. The best part is, even as the reader we only get snippets...just enough to know there is far more going on than we realize but not so much that it's all spoiled ahead of time. It creates a wonderful plot for the book and the series as a whole and one thing I really enjoy is plot. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
September 9, 2020
This book had a lot going for it (and started off in interesting), but every time I began to enjoy the story, there was a time jump that skipped all the good parts. After all the training, I wanted to see the main character in action on his first assignment, but instead there is a huge focus on the romance, which is fine but boring.
The last straw is when I realized this is a generational series (the next book skips ahead 20 years with a focus on the main characters kid). Personally, I almost never enjoy generational stories, so put the book down immediately. Just not my cup of tea - should have avoided entirely.
The last straw is when I realized this is a generational series (the next book skips ahead 20 years with a focus on the main characters kid). Personally, I almost never enjoy generational stories, so put the book down immediately. Just not my cup of tea - should have avoided entirely.
May 27, 2025
What started out as a great novel, takes a turn to dive into a much bigger mystery. Unfortunately, I would've enjoyed the novel that began more than the novel that we received. The story begins with Chris, the heir to a dynasty that does not want his inheritance. He is blessed with mind reading and telekinesis, and takes his power and ambition on the road. This would've been a more interesting and enjoyable story than the one we received. Instead, Chris enlists in what would be comparable to the FBI or CIA in space. We learn that there is more to this story as many people seek to use Chris as a pawn in their centuries old struggles.
It was a good, but superficial story.
It was a good, but superficial story.
June 14, 2024
Nem számitottam rá, hogy csak négy órás az első könyv.
Bár a hangulata nagyon tetszik, abszolút gördülékeny és a narrátor is top tier, de kevés volt nekem. Tölthettünk volna több időt a felkészülésükkel, meg a kezdő ügynök korukkal, mielőtt a második generációra ugrunk.
Igy sajnos a karakterek csak papirfigurák lettek, annak ellenére hogy a lehetőség ott volt.
Illetve felettébb idióta húzásnak tartottam, hogy a csaj megsértődött azon, hogy a csávó nem mondta el az igazi nevét.
Bruh.
A politikai intrikákból is szerettem volna látni többet, de hát ez még csak az első rész, és folytatni fogom
Bár a hangulata nagyon tetszik, abszolút gördülékeny és a narrátor is top tier, de kevés volt nekem. Tölthettünk volna több időt a felkészülésükkel, meg a kezdő ügynök korukkal, mielőtt a második generációra ugrunk.
Igy sajnos a karakterek csak papirfigurák lettek, annak ellenére hogy a lehetőség ott volt.
Illetve felettébb idióta húzásnak tartottam, hogy a csaj megsértődött azon, hogy a csávó nem mondta el az igazi nevét.
Bruh.
A politikai intrikákból is szerettem volna látni többet, de hát ez még csak az első rész, és folytatni fogom
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