Thank you Goodreads for giving me this book as a Giveaway winner. I was intrigued by the premise of the book, and I think it was a very good first draft. It reads as though it were the initial draft of what could be a great book, but needed more editing as it sometime seemed out of order (I read it on Kindle). It was hard to connect to the main characters and understand their decisionmaking, and then ended abruptly, so it felt like a first draft of a novel.