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Shadow of the Forgotten Flame
He thought it was a call for revenge.
The world answered with something far more worse.
When his parents were slaughtered before his eyes and his birthright as Shah was stolen, something far more dangerous than war vanished as well—a book that should never have been opened.
Zeke knew someone had been there—someone who should not have been.
Twelve years later, the whispers of his ancestors finally found him.
He thought it was only about revenge. About reclaiming what had been taken.
He was wrong.
Something far greater has awakened—and to stop it, Zeke must join forces with those he never expected.
If he fails, it will not be Rashad alone that falls—but the boundary between the human world and the shadow realm will shatter.
Trigger warning!
This book contains themes and scenes that may be disturbing to some readers, including violence, death, psychological manipulation, child abuse, dehumanization, and morally complex relationships. Reader discretion is advised.
The world answered with something far more worse.
When his parents were slaughtered before his eyes and his birthright as Shah was stolen, something far more dangerous than war vanished as well—a book that should never have been opened.
Zeke knew someone had been there—someone who should not have been.
Twelve years later, the whispers of his ancestors finally found him.
He thought it was only about revenge. About reclaiming what had been taken.
He was wrong.
Something far greater has awakened—and to stop it, Zeke must join forces with those he never expected.
If he fails, it will not be Rashad alone that falls—but the boundary between the human world and the shadow realm will shatter.
Trigger warning!
This book contains themes and scenes that may be disturbing to some readers, including violence, death, psychological manipulation, child abuse, dehumanization, and morally complex relationships. Reader discretion is advised.
419 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 21, 2026
About the author
S.N. Mouren
1 book4 followersS. N. Mouren, also known as Sadille Mouren, is a gothic enthusiast with a soft spot for quiet chaos and late-night thoughts.
When she's not writing, she spends her time reading, crafting, or working with clay as an amateur gothic-style artist, often drawn to dark, intricate designs. Somewhere beneath it all, she carries a soft heart that quietly contrasts the shadows she loves.
When she's not writing, she spends her time reading, crafting, or working with clay as an amateur gothic-style artist, often drawn to dark, intricate designs. Somewhere beneath it all, she carries a soft heart that quietly contrasts the shadows she loves.
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May 2, 2026
I’m not even going to lie the first 8 chapters had me STRUGGLING to push through. There’s a lot going on right out the gate, and I had a hard time keeping up with the world-building, the politics, and who was who. I definitely felt a little lost in the beginning.
BUT… once I got past that? It got so much better.
I’m not gonna lie this story was giving The Wheel of Time vibes in the way the story builds. Like that same “wait… what is going on?” feeling at first, and then things slowly start clicking into place the deeper you get into it.
The story really starts to come together, and I found myself getting pulled into the bigger picture with the ancient magic, the tension, the power struggles, and the characters. Just to let you know the romance isn’t heavy, but it’s there in that slow-burn, tension-filled way which is still perfect.
Zeke gives that strong, protective, slightly tortured energy (which I love), and the emotional undercurrent between characters adds just enough to keep me invested on the romance side too.
This isn’t a spice-forward read at all. So don’t go in expecting that but the tension and buildup is really good.
Overall, this is one of those books where you have to push through the beginning, but once it clicks, it clicks. And by the end, I was definitely curious to see where the series is going next.
BUT… once I got past that? It got so much better.
I’m not gonna lie this story was giving The Wheel of Time vibes in the way the story builds. Like that same “wait… what is going on?” feeling at first, and then things slowly start clicking into place the deeper you get into it.
The story really starts to come together, and I found myself getting pulled into the bigger picture with the ancient magic, the tension, the power struggles, and the characters. Just to let you know the romance isn’t heavy, but it’s there in that slow-burn, tension-filled way which is still perfect.
Zeke gives that strong, protective, slightly tortured energy (which I love), and the emotional undercurrent between characters adds just enough to keep me invested on the romance side too.
This isn’t a spice-forward read at all. So don’t go in expecting that but the tension and buildup is really good.
Overall, this is one of those books where you have to push through the beginning, but once it clicks, it clicks. And by the end, I was definitely curious to see where the series is going next.
June 10, 2026
Such mixed feelings for this one! The first few chapters were tough for me to get through but I'm glad I stuck with it because i was much more invested at 50%.
Interesting, unique characters and concepts (like Roan- havent read anything like this story line before so that was cool!).. A lot of the characters needed more development for you to really have any type of feelings towards them. I absolutely HATED Jereon... The way it was easy to hate him should also be for the villains but there wasn't enough context to have the same emotional rise.
A list of characters and houses are definitely needed.. also could benefit from an explanation of the magic system. Chapter 14 starts the mentioning of magic with ancestral spirits. Some more delving into this topic would be nice in the coming books as no one explained it. Do the ancestors pick 1 person to channel through? Are they directly HIS ancestors? Just random dead people from his clan? Other than glowing, what powers does this magic give him? How did it help him win against the snakes?
After about 25% in, the book picked up momentum and I was hooked by 50% however, each chapter being one of MANY characters drew me away. Far too many POVs for my liking because each storyline is completely different so having to jump around so much takes away from the fluidness tbh. Lot of loose ends that im sure will tie together in the upcoming books but by the end of the book, it's been so long since reading Magnus' chapter that I dont even care about the politics or schemes anymore.
In the beginning, the writing style almost made me DNF which i hate to do with ARCs (and the likes) but i swear the writing style improved as the book progressed! My biggest gripe was having so many fragment sentences making for choppy reading that just doesn't flow well for me. The best way I can describe it is a staccato-like reading experience. I understand that this is a stylistic choice of emphasizing a thought but at this rate, it's just makes me skim the text and it takes away from an immersive experience.. (example: He remained where he was, eyes fixed on it. They could return. His ears twitched. Footsteps in the corridor. Something crashing. Wood struck hard. But he could not smell Una. Nor Igor.)
Overall I'm glad i stuck with it because the villians are doing things i havent read about before and that creativity is so rare with this genre.
Interesting, unique characters and concepts (like Roan- havent read anything like this story line before so that was cool!).. A lot of the characters needed more development for you to really have any type of feelings towards them. I absolutely HATED Jereon... The way it was easy to hate him should also be for the villains but there wasn't enough context to have the same emotional rise.
A list of characters and houses are definitely needed.. also could benefit from an explanation of the magic system. Chapter 14 starts the mentioning of magic with ancestral spirits. Some more delving into this topic would be nice in the coming books as no one explained it. Do the ancestors pick 1 person to channel through? Are they directly HIS ancestors? Just random dead people from his clan? Other than glowing, what powers does this magic give him? How did it help him win against the snakes?
After about 25% in, the book picked up momentum and I was hooked by 50% however, each chapter being one of MANY characters drew me away. Far too many POVs for my liking because each storyline is completely different so having to jump around so much takes away from the fluidness tbh. Lot of loose ends that im sure will tie together in the upcoming books but by the end of the book, it's been so long since reading Magnus' chapter that I dont even care about the politics or schemes anymore.
In the beginning, the writing style almost made me DNF which i hate to do with ARCs (and the likes) but i swear the writing style improved as the book progressed! My biggest gripe was having so many fragment sentences making for choppy reading that just doesn't flow well for me. The best way I can describe it is a staccato-like reading experience. I understand that this is a stylistic choice of emphasizing a thought but at this rate, it's just makes me skim the text and it takes away from an immersive experience.. (example: He remained where he was, eyes fixed on it. They could return. His ears twitched. Footsteps in the corridor. Something crashing. Wood struck hard. But he could not smell Una. Nor Igor.)
Overall I'm glad i stuck with it because the villians are doing things i havent read about before and that creativity is so rare with this genre.
July 30, 2026
4 ⭐️
Shadow of the Forgotten Flame is an ambitious dark fantasy debut that combines political intrigue, revenge, ancient magic, and a looming apocalyptic threat into a richly layered story.
The story follows Zeke, a deposed prince whose family was murdered and whose throne was stolen. Twelve years later, he is still haunted by that loss and driven by the desire for revenge. However, what begins as a personal quest quickly becomes something much bigger when a forbidden book and the secrets surrounding it threaten the boundary between the human world and the shadow realm.
One thing readers should know going in is that this is not a fast-paced fantasy from page one. The beginning is heavy with worldbuilding, multiple POVs, and a large cast of characters. It took some time to find my footing, and there were moments when the frequent perspective shifts felt overwhelming. However, once the story settles and the different plot threads begin connecting, the payoff is worth the patience.
The world itself is one of the book's strongest elements. There is a clear sense of history behind every kingdom, conflict, and piece of magic. The shadow realm mythology was particularly intriguing, and I enjoyed slowly uncovering how the larger threat connected to Zeke's personal journey.
While Zeke is at the heart of the story, some of the side characters were equally compelling. Una's storyline was especially memorable, and Roan's arc added an emotional layer that stood out among the political maneuvering and darker themes. The multiple perspectives ultimately helped expand the scope of the world and made the conflict feel much larger than a single revenge story.
I also appreciated the political intrigue woven throughout the narrative. Alliances, betrayals, and competing motivations kept the story interesting, while the slow-burn romantic elements added depth without overshadowing the main plot.
Be aware that this book explores several dark topics, including violence, psychological manipulation, and child abuse. These themes contribute to the overall tone and reinforce the harsh realities of the world Mouren has created.
Overall, Shadow of the Forgotten Flame is a promising start to what looks to be an epic fantasy series. Although the opening requires patience, readers who enjoy detailed worldbuilding, morally complex characters, political conflict, and dark fantasy will likely find plenty to enjoy here. The ending left me eager to see where the Ancient Flame Cycle goes next.
Thank you to the author for providing a copy for review. All opinions are my own.
Shadow of the Forgotten Flame is an ambitious dark fantasy debut that combines political intrigue, revenge, ancient magic, and a looming apocalyptic threat into a richly layered story.
The story follows Zeke, a deposed prince whose family was murdered and whose throne was stolen. Twelve years later, he is still haunted by that loss and driven by the desire for revenge. However, what begins as a personal quest quickly becomes something much bigger when a forbidden book and the secrets surrounding it threaten the boundary between the human world and the shadow realm.
One thing readers should know going in is that this is not a fast-paced fantasy from page one. The beginning is heavy with worldbuilding, multiple POVs, and a large cast of characters. It took some time to find my footing, and there were moments when the frequent perspective shifts felt overwhelming. However, once the story settles and the different plot threads begin connecting, the payoff is worth the patience.
The world itself is one of the book's strongest elements. There is a clear sense of history behind every kingdom, conflict, and piece of magic. The shadow realm mythology was particularly intriguing, and I enjoyed slowly uncovering how the larger threat connected to Zeke's personal journey.
While Zeke is at the heart of the story, some of the side characters were equally compelling. Una's storyline was especially memorable, and Roan's arc added an emotional layer that stood out among the political maneuvering and darker themes. The multiple perspectives ultimately helped expand the scope of the world and made the conflict feel much larger than a single revenge story.
I also appreciated the political intrigue woven throughout the narrative. Alliances, betrayals, and competing motivations kept the story interesting, while the slow-burn romantic elements added depth without overshadowing the main plot.
Be aware that this book explores several dark topics, including violence, psychological manipulation, and child abuse. These themes contribute to the overall tone and reinforce the harsh realities of the world Mouren has created.
Overall, Shadow of the Forgotten Flame is a promising start to what looks to be an epic fantasy series. Although the opening requires patience, readers who enjoy detailed worldbuilding, morally complex characters, political conflict, and dark fantasy will likely find plenty to enjoy here. The ending left me eager to see where the Ancient Flame Cycle goes next.
Thank you to the author for providing a copy for review. All opinions are my own.
May 11, 2026
A nearly perfect read!
This book contains versatile characters, evolvement, a rich story with world building where you can practically feel the cold or smell the manure of some of the scenes put forth by the author. I had to take my time getting through the book, as the story is intricate and has a lot of characters, but everything is so well put together.
The fact that this is the first book this author has published (as far as I know) is unbelievable, really.
It ends on what I feel are multiple cliffhangers, as there are several threads to this story, and I can't wait for the next book to come out! The chapters could have been given a character title rather than a number (or in addition) to make it easier to know who we are following, but we get to know who it is within a reasonable amount of time in each chapter.
The writing style is a bit on the "formal" side (not sure if that would be the proper term, but it's the closest I have come to describing it so far). It reminds me a bit of the way Alex Aster, Camilla Andrew and even John Gwynne and George R. R. Martin writes, if those could be put in the same category.
I only have one remark, and that is that there are some editorial issues where, for example, it seems like the author has made some alterations to the phrasing of sentences or paragraphs, and not managed to edit the entirety so that it makes sense. There are similar silly mistakes where words are missing letters, such as one instance where "pai" was on the page, but it was obviously meant to say "pain". As a Norwegian, my brain suddenly read "pie" and was confused for a second before I reread that sentence knowing that it definitely didn't suddenly describe food.
A couple of places I also found it difficult to know who "he" was when two males were having a conversation, but that is always something which can get mixed up when not using names/titles for all of the lines of dialogue.
Still, I absolutely loved this book and can't recommend it enough!
This book contains versatile characters, evolvement, a rich story with world building where you can practically feel the cold or smell the manure of some of the scenes put forth by the author. I had to take my time getting through the book, as the story is intricate and has a lot of characters, but everything is so well put together.
The fact that this is the first book this author has published (as far as I know) is unbelievable, really.
It ends on what I feel are multiple cliffhangers, as there are several threads to this story, and I can't wait for the next book to come out! The chapters could have been given a character title rather than a number (or in addition) to make it easier to know who we are following, but we get to know who it is within a reasonable amount of time in each chapter.
The writing style is a bit on the "formal" side (not sure if that would be the proper term, but it's the closest I have come to describing it so far). It reminds me a bit of the way Alex Aster, Camilla Andrew and even John Gwynne and George R. R. Martin writes, if those could be put in the same category.
I only have one remark, and that is that there are some editorial issues where, for example, it seems like the author has made some alterations to the phrasing of sentences or paragraphs, and not managed to edit the entirety so that it makes sense. There are similar silly mistakes where words are missing letters, such as one instance where "pai" was on the page, but it was obviously meant to say "pain". As a Norwegian, my brain suddenly read "pie" and was confused for a second before I reread that sentence knowing that it definitely didn't suddenly describe food.
A couple of places I also found it difficult to know who "he" was when two males were having a conversation, but that is always something which can get mixed up when not using names/titles for all of the lines of dialogue.
Still, I absolutely loved this book and can't recommend it enough!
May 18, 2026
I want to thank S.N. Mouren for sending me a copy of this book. Shadow of the Forgotten Flame is the first installment in her series, and I’m genuinely excited to see where the story goes next.
Fantasy is not my usual genre, but this completely pulled me in. Mouren created a cast of dynamic and engaging characters that I became deeply invested in watching navigate this world and the challenges thrown at them. There were several moments where certain characters absolutely broke my heart as they faced setback after setback, and the villain was written in a way that felt genuinely chilling.
One of the things I appreciated most was the pacing. The story moved steadily without ever feeling rushed, but I also never felt stuck waiting for things to happen. As someone who prefers stories that continue progressing rather than lingering too long in one place, I really appreciated the shorter chapters and consistent momentum throughout the book.
I also thought the multiple POV structure was handled very well. Each perspective felt distinct enough that I was never confused about whose voice I was following, which can sometimes happen in fantasy with larger casts.
If I had one critique, it would be that I would have liked a little more development in some of the character dynamics and relationships. There were moments where certain decisions or emotional reactions may have landed even stronger with a bit more buildup beforehand. I also occasionally found myself wanting more explanation surrounding parts of the magic system or the reasoning behind certain elements of the world. That may partially come from me being a more occasional fantasy reader, but there were a few moments where I wanted a little more grounding or clarity.
Overall though, I had a great time reading this and found it incredibly hard to put down. The characters, pacing, and emotional moments kept me fully invested from beginning to end, and I’m very interested to see where the series goes from here.
Pagesinthewild.books
Fantasy is not my usual genre, but this completely pulled me in. Mouren created a cast of dynamic and engaging characters that I became deeply invested in watching navigate this world and the challenges thrown at them. There were several moments where certain characters absolutely broke my heart as they faced setback after setback, and the villain was written in a way that felt genuinely chilling.
One of the things I appreciated most was the pacing. The story moved steadily without ever feeling rushed, but I also never felt stuck waiting for things to happen. As someone who prefers stories that continue progressing rather than lingering too long in one place, I really appreciated the shorter chapters and consistent momentum throughout the book.
I also thought the multiple POV structure was handled very well. Each perspective felt distinct enough that I was never confused about whose voice I was following, which can sometimes happen in fantasy with larger casts.
If I had one critique, it would be that I would have liked a little more development in some of the character dynamics and relationships. There were moments where certain decisions or emotional reactions may have landed even stronger with a bit more buildup beforehand. I also occasionally found myself wanting more explanation surrounding parts of the magic system or the reasoning behind certain elements of the world. That may partially come from me being a more occasional fantasy reader, but there were a few moments where I wanted a little more grounding or clarity.
Overall though, I had a great time reading this and found it incredibly hard to put down. The characters, pacing, and emotional moments kept me fully invested from beginning to end, and I’m very interested to see where the series goes from here.
Pagesinthewild.books
July 6, 2026
I really enjoyed Shadow of the Forgotten Flame and thought it was a strong debut from S.N. Mouren.
One of my favorite things about this book was how invested I became in the characters. The story has a unique premise, and there was enough mystery surrounding both the world and its people to keep me turning the pages. I genuinely wanted to know what would happen next, which is always a good sign.
The only reason this wasn’t quite a five-star read for me is that it felt very much like the opening act of a much larger story. By the end, I was left with quite a few unanswered questions, and while I understand that’s often the nature of the first book in a fantasy series, I personally would have liked a little more payoff before reaching the final page. It almost read like a prequel to an already established series, spending its time carefully setting the stage rather than delivering major plot developments.
That isn’t necessarily a criticism—I actually think the foundation that’s been built here is incredibly promising. I’m hoping many of those lingering questions will be answered in the next installment.
Overall, I had a great time with this one. It’s imaginative, easy to get invested in, and left me genuinely curious about what’s coming next. I’ll definitely be picking up book two.
One of my favorite things about this book was how invested I became in the characters. The story has a unique premise, and there was enough mystery surrounding both the world and its people to keep me turning the pages. I genuinely wanted to know what would happen next, which is always a good sign.
The only reason this wasn’t quite a five-star read for me is that it felt very much like the opening act of a much larger story. By the end, I was left with quite a few unanswered questions, and while I understand that’s often the nature of the first book in a fantasy series, I personally would have liked a little more payoff before reaching the final page. It almost read like a prequel to an already established series, spending its time carefully setting the stage rather than delivering major plot developments.
That isn’t necessarily a criticism—I actually think the foundation that’s been built here is incredibly promising. I’m hoping many of those lingering questions will be answered in the next installment.
Overall, I had a great time with this one. It’s imaginative, easy to get invested in, and left me genuinely curious about what’s coming next. I’ll definitely be picking up book two.
April 25, 2026
*no spoilers
First of all WOW. From the prologue i was hooked and it created such a “omg what happened, omg what happens next” effect.
The character building and relationship building is next level. While reading this i truly felt immersed into their world and did not want to come back to reality. I felt very involved in what they were feeling as well as feeling my own as if i was with them.
I really enjoyed that the world had magical and karmic/fate elements and you really get (again) drawn in.
The story line is steady and maintains attention throughout.
The world building and descriptiveness is also wonderful and really helps you to feel present. I believe this is the reason i felt so “in the world”.
Even the characters themselves will pull you through love/hate emotions depending on the chapter. The ending has a great “set up” for book 2 that provides excitement and eagerness to jump right in.
I tend to be pretty stingy with my 5 star reviews but this absolutely deserved it. I really enjoyed this book, the characters, the immersive world, and cannot WAIT for book 2.
First of all WOW. From the prologue i was hooked and it created such a “omg what happened, omg what happens next” effect.
The character building and relationship building is next level. While reading this i truly felt immersed into their world and did not want to come back to reality. I felt very involved in what they were feeling as well as feeling my own as if i was with them.
I really enjoyed that the world had magical and karmic/fate elements and you really get (again) drawn in.
The story line is steady and maintains attention throughout.
The world building and descriptiveness is also wonderful and really helps you to feel present. I believe this is the reason i felt so “in the world”.
Even the characters themselves will pull you through love/hate emotions depending on the chapter. The ending has a great “set up” for book 2 that provides excitement and eagerness to jump right in.
I tend to be pretty stingy with my 5 star reviews but this absolutely deserved it. I really enjoyed this book, the characters, the immersive world, and cannot WAIT for book 2.
July 6, 2026
World- An interesting world, the character and place names really help signify what belongs to “The Empire” vs Rashad. It was easy to understand and picture.
Magic- The magic system is based on runes or characters for most and hearing the “whispers of the ancestors”. I find some of the magic so interesting (beast binding) and am looking forward to reading more in the next book
Characters- I appreciate that the characters are relateable, and don’t show all of their cards immediately. I really enjoyed Una and Roan, and their friendship. I want to see more of Ellie, I think she seems interesting and quick.
Romance-The spice is mostly implied, but the emotional bonds are there. I didn’t miss the spicy scenes- there was enough going on in the book, it just didn’t “need” it.
Story- I wasn’t sure in the first 10 chapters- having so many POVs (the first 4 chapters are all different POVs) was a little confusing, but the story ended up tying together well. At first I wasn’t sure how it would come together, but I think the way it was written could not have been better. Bring on the next book!
Magic- The magic system is based on runes or characters for most and hearing the “whispers of the ancestors”. I find some of the magic so interesting (beast binding) and am looking forward to reading more in the next book
Characters- I appreciate that the characters are relateable, and don’t show all of their cards immediately. I really enjoyed Una and Roan, and their friendship. I want to see more of Ellie, I think she seems interesting and quick.
Romance-The spice is mostly implied, but the emotional bonds are there. I didn’t miss the spicy scenes- there was enough going on in the book, it just didn’t “need” it.
Story- I wasn’t sure in the first 10 chapters- having so many POVs (the first 4 chapters are all different POVs) was a little confusing, but the story ended up tying together well. At first I wasn’t sure how it would come together, but I think the way it was written could not have been better. Bring on the next book!
May 11, 2026
The author reached out to me; it is her first novel.
I knew it was a multi POV, that it was fantasy, but apart from that, nothing much. I went into the book pretty blind.
I was pleasantly surprised. While the multi-POV can be a bit strange at first (like, 6 people? you wonder who is who), you get used to it after a while.
The story mostly revolves around Zeke, and through each POV, you start to see pieces of the big picture, that it’s much bigger than just a matter of revenge.
It feels like some strategy board game, where you see each piece moving, each story unfolding, each line being traced, and slowly, little by little, they all seem to converge towards one focal point.
You follow each character, wondering when they are going to meet the others, where they are in the world, and what will happen to them.
I would have liked a map (the world is huge) and maybe a list of characters and their relationships charts? Apart from that, it’s the first book in a trilogy, and I want book 2 already!
I knew it was a multi POV, that it was fantasy, but apart from that, nothing much. I went into the book pretty blind.
I was pleasantly surprised. While the multi-POV can be a bit strange at first (like, 6 people? you wonder who is who), you get used to it after a while.
The story mostly revolves around Zeke, and through each POV, you start to see pieces of the big picture, that it’s much bigger than just a matter of revenge.
It feels like some strategy board game, where you see each piece moving, each story unfolding, each line being traced, and slowly, little by little, they all seem to converge towards one focal point.
You follow each character, wondering when they are going to meet the others, where they are in the world, and what will happen to them.
I would have liked a map (the world is huge) and maybe a list of characters and their relationships charts? Apart from that, it’s the first book in a trilogy, and I want book 2 already!
June 5, 2026
3.5 ⭐️ I received this book from the author and her’s my honest review.
This one had a really interesting premise: a fallen prince, political power struggles, forbidden experiments, hidden secrets, and a mysterious sacred book. There’s definitely a lot going on, and I liked the overall concept of the world but the pacing was a little slow at times for me. I tried to figure out how everything was going to connect with all the different plot threads and story lines. There were a lot of characters introduced, which made it a little difficult to keep track of although I did like the individual stories between each of the characters.
I felt myself really invested in some parts of the story and not so much in others. In the end, the character storyline starts to come together and you can see that there’s definitely a bigger story here which I’m hoping will come together in the next book. There are so many pieces which had me trying to figure out where everyone fit in!! Definitely a puzzle worth trying to piece together.
This one had a really interesting premise: a fallen prince, political power struggles, forbidden experiments, hidden secrets, and a mysterious sacred book. There’s definitely a lot going on, and I liked the overall concept of the world but the pacing was a little slow at times for me. I tried to figure out how everything was going to connect with all the different plot threads and story lines. There were a lot of characters introduced, which made it a little difficult to keep track of although I did like the individual stories between each of the characters.
I felt myself really invested in some parts of the story and not so much in others. In the end, the character storyline starts to come together and you can see that there’s definitely a bigger story here which I’m hoping will come together in the next book. There are so many pieces which had me trying to figure out where everyone fit in!! Definitely a puzzle worth trying to piece together.
May 14, 2026
The author reached out to me and asked me to read this book in exchange for review. Thank you for this opportunity!
———- ⭐️⭐️⭐️.75 - ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The first half of the book was difficult to get into. The chapters felt too long in my opinion (most of them being around 20 pages and some being 40), and the storyline felt to be dragging on which made me feel disinterested. This meant that at times I’d feel confused with plot lines and what was going on but once I was able to figure out everything it was a nice read!
I found the ideas and themes mentioned to be quite interesting and complex which I enjoyed. The writing style was quite formal which I understand is due to the genre and type of book, however this formal writing was what made it hard to me to get into the world and story in the beginning.
Overall, this was a great book and left me curious for more! Congratulations to the author, this was a great read :)
———- ⭐️⭐️⭐️.75 - ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The first half of the book was difficult to get into. The chapters felt too long in my opinion (most of them being around 20 pages and some being 40), and the storyline felt to be dragging on which made me feel disinterested. This meant that at times I’d feel confused with plot lines and what was going on but once I was able to figure out everything it was a nice read!
I found the ideas and themes mentioned to be quite interesting and complex which I enjoyed. The writing style was quite formal which I understand is due to the genre and type of book, however this formal writing was what made it hard to me to get into the world and story in the beginning.
Overall, this was a great book and left me curious for more! Congratulations to the author, this was a great read :)
May 21, 2026
Great Premise
I really enjoyed this overall, and I’m hoping the next book ties up a lot of the loose threads this one left hanging. I’m going to stay intentionally vague because I don’t want to spoil anything, but there were definitely several moments that left me wanting more answers by the end.
The constant switching between characters every chapter made it a little difficult for me to stay fully engaged at times. While every character clearly had a purpose, it wasn’t always obvious how they connected until much later when their paths finally started crossing. I think that structure made the story feel a bit harder to follow for me personally.
That said, I really do love the premise of the story and the writing itself was strong enough to keep me invested. Honestly, the layout/style may just not completely click with my brain, which could very well be more of a me problem than a book problem lol.
I really enjoyed this overall, and I’m hoping the next book ties up a lot of the loose threads this one left hanging. I’m going to stay intentionally vague because I don’t want to spoil anything, but there were definitely several moments that left me wanting more answers by the end.
The constant switching between characters every chapter made it a little difficult for me to stay fully engaged at times. While every character clearly had a purpose, it wasn’t always obvious how they connected until much later when their paths finally started crossing. I think that structure made the story feel a bit harder to follow for me personally.
That said, I really do love the premise of the story and the writing itself was strong enough to keep me invested. Honestly, the layout/style may just not completely click with my brain, which could very well be more of a me problem than a book problem lol.
June 15, 2026
⭐⭐⭐⭐✨ 4.5/5
What an impressive debut fantasy.
This book completely pulled me into its world. The multiple POVs took a little time to settle into, but once I did, I was hooked. Watching all of the characters’ stories slowly connect felt like piecing together a giant puzzle, and I couldn’t wait to see how everything would unfold.
The worldbuilding was immersive, the characters were memorable, and the magical elements added so much depth to the story. I found myself constantly wanting “just one more chapter.”
My only reason for not giving it a full 5 stars is that I would have loved a character guide or map to help navigate such a large world and cast. A few minor editing issues also stood out.
Overall, this is an ambitious fantasy with an ending that has me eagerly waiting for book two. If you love multi-POV fantasy, rich worldbuilding, and stories where every thread matters, definitely add this one to your TBR.
What an impressive debut fantasy.
This book completely pulled me into its world. The multiple POVs took a little time to settle into, but once I did, I was hooked. Watching all of the characters’ stories slowly connect felt like piecing together a giant puzzle, and I couldn’t wait to see how everything would unfold.
The worldbuilding was immersive, the characters were memorable, and the magical elements added so much depth to the story. I found myself constantly wanting “just one more chapter.”
My only reason for not giving it a full 5 stars is that I would have loved a character guide or map to help navigate such a large world and cast. A few minor editing issues also stood out.
Overall, this is an ambitious fantasy with an ending that has me eagerly waiting for book two. If you love multi-POV fantasy, rich worldbuilding, and stories where every thread matters, definitely add this one to your TBR.
May 26, 2026
It was a rough start for me. Different POVs for every chapter at the beginning. I couldn't keep up with who was who or who did what. It was slow going.
After that, though, I really got into it. The characters each have their own distinctive personalities, their own motives and their own ways of achieving them. The setting is described in so much detail that you feel like you are there.
I enjoyed the writing style. It seemed to fit the period in which the book was set.
Overall, aside from the slow start, it was a great read. I do feel like a second read would be worth it, now that I know all of the characters and can tell them apart. Reading from different POVs at the beginning will make more sense during the second read, I'm sure.
After that, though, I really got into it. The characters each have their own distinctive personalities, their own motives and their own ways of achieving them. The setting is described in so much detail that you feel like you are there.
I enjoyed the writing style. It seemed to fit the period in which the book was set.
Overall, aside from the slow start, it was a great read. I do feel like a second read would be worth it, now that I know all of the characters and can tell them apart. Reading from different POVs at the beginning will make more sense during the second read, I'm sure.
April 25, 2026
The world building is incredible. The characters are loveable and definitely hateable. You'll know who I mean when you read it.
You journey through this book with the characters. Like you're a part of the journey itself. You root for each character and mourn with them all the same.
My breath has stilled in moments and a love for the friendships grew strong alongside the characters throughout the telling of their story.
The magic system is very different to what I've seen recycled many times before.
I cannot wait to read more of the characters stories and how they may possibly develop.
I also cannot wait for book 2. I look forward to reading it.
You journey through this book with the characters. Like you're a part of the journey itself. You root for each character and mourn with them all the same.
My breath has stilled in moments and a love for the friendships grew strong alongside the characters throughout the telling of their story.
The magic system is very different to what I've seen recycled many times before.
I cannot wait to read more of the characters stories and how they may possibly develop.
I also cannot wait for book 2. I look forward to reading it.
May 28, 2026
what an interesting tale
The beginning is very heavy with world building and POV jumps. However, if you stick with it the story opens up and the connections between the characters build upon each other immensely.
The characters have depth and you can understand their choices. There are some plot points that are kept secret from the reader, which I believe will be revealed in subsequent novels.
I have so many questions. The are so many characters and power up for grabs. There is a lot of political intrigue, a slow burn romantic subplot, and a whole cast of side characters that drive overarching plot forward.
The beginning is very heavy with world building and POV jumps. However, if you stick with it the story opens up and the connections between the characters build upon each other immensely.
The characters have depth and you can understand their choices. There are some plot points that are kept secret from the reader, which I believe will be revealed in subsequent novels.
I have so many questions. The are so many characters and power up for grabs. There is a lot of political intrigue, a slow burn romantic subplot, and a whole cast of side characters that drive overarching plot forward.
June 24, 2026
Enjoyed the plot and all the different characters. Each chapter is from a different POV which at times made the story hard to follow for me. I am looking forward to getting answers in the next book to the parts left unfinished.
With all the world building in the first several chapters it was a very slow start, not always a bad thing but did leave me a tad confused as to what all was going on until later on in the story.
With all the world building in the first several chapters it was a very slow start, not always a bad thing but did leave me a tad confused as to what all was going on until later on in the story.
May 3, 2026
Ok… omg! Wow!! A real page turner. This book keeps you hooked the whole way through and it keeps its secrets for just the right moment before they reveal themselves. Amazing storytelling and cannot wait for the next instalment in this series. I fell for a few characters and already have my favourites who I’m cheering for. But really… chefs kiss and definitely recommend
June 4, 2026
Overall I did enjoy this book. It is quite difficult to follow as there are a lot of POVs and world building, but towards the end some of the threads are starting to link up. There are a lot of threads left to be pulled together however, and I'm looking forward to the next book to see where they all go!
May 7, 2026
I finished reading this book today, the story is Very good. If you're heavily into annotations and note taking, this book is great for that. With immersive characters, compelling subplots to the overarching one. There are a lot of characters and stories to follow. Roan IS my favorite.
April 20, 2026
page turner
I can’t wait for book two! The story itself is intriguing, the characters are varied. The world building is impressive.
I can’t wait for book two! The story itself is intriguing, the characters are varied. The world building is impressive.
June 17, 2026
A puzzle of an adventure
Through the eyes of many you will experience adventures of magic, rescue, learning, friendship, and something more!
While it may take a little bit to get into because all the characters, once you find your footing it will be well worth the early struggle.
Through the eyes of many you will experience adventures of magic, rescue, learning, friendship, and something more!
While it may take a little bit to get into because all the characters, once you find your footing it will be well worth the early struggle.
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