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Two couples book a romantic getaway to Victoria's Island. Upon departure they all form an unjust bond after gaining telekinetic abilities from something on the island.
44 pages, Paperback
Published March 21, 2015
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March 28, 2015I really enjoyed this book. It was short but intriguing!
The setting was pretty cool. I would have liked a little more detail but over all it was pretty well developed.
The characters were very interesting. Sometimes it was hard to tell who's perspective the story was being told from but I thought they were interesting characters!
Overall it was a great easy read and the ending was great! I need the next book pronto!!
The setting was pretty cool. I would have liked a little more detail but over all it was pretty well developed.
The characters were very interesting. Sometimes it was hard to tell who's perspective the story was being told from but I thought they were interesting characters!
Overall it was a great easy read and the ending was great! I need the next book pronto!!
January 11, 2016
This book had a good plot, but I don't think the story itself was very good. There were no breaks in the pages, so when the story changed perspective, it was confusing. Also, as she has been told by her editors, there was a lot of telling not showing. However, it was a nice quick read and I hope Part 2 will be better! :)
January 29, 2016
Within is a short story about Amanda and Jonathan who go on vacation to Victoria Island. After arriving, they meet newlyweds Raymond and Kara, who also chose to vacation on the island. Both couples are in their early twenties and the only tourists on the island so, as you would expect, they end up doing things together.
However, things start to turn weird as they check into the only motel on the island and rapidly get weirder as the two couples have breakfast then meet again on the beach.
Sorry, but like the story, I’m going to leave you hanging because I don’t want to give anything away.
Within bit me by the middle of page two and by the time I got to “To be continued” I was totally hooked. Part I does an excellent job setting the stage for what I believe will be an intriguing supernatural story. I say supernatural but reserve the right to change my mind since I don’t know where Part II will take us! And, yes, I definitely plan to read Part II!
Edwards is an outstanding storyteller and this story will suck you in. Even though I don’t know where the plot is going it’s still great. The characters are perfectly developed and relatable and Edward’s writing skills are wonderful. Yes, I really like this story!
Definitely a must read that will have you reaching for Part II.
Robert Boze
However, things start to turn weird as they check into the only motel on the island and rapidly get weirder as the two couples have breakfast then meet again on the beach.
Sorry, but like the story, I’m going to leave you hanging because I don’t want to give anything away.
Within bit me by the middle of page two and by the time I got to “To be continued” I was totally hooked. Part I does an excellent job setting the stage for what I believe will be an intriguing supernatural story. I say supernatural but reserve the right to change my mind since I don’t know where Part II will take us! And, yes, I definitely plan to read Part II!
Edwards is an outstanding storyteller and this story will suck you in. Even though I don’t know where the plot is going it’s still great. The characters are perfectly developed and relatable and Edward’s writing skills are wonderful. Yes, I really like this story!
Definitely a must read that will have you reaching for Part II.
Robert Boze
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