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The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk: A sci-fi cyberpunk novella
You can always sink into Sync.
In a world steeped in loneliness, Sync is the escape. A fully immersive virtual reality simulation that Funk is addicted to, Sync allows him to be everything he isn’t in real attractive, strong, wanted. He has lived there for months. He intends to stay forever.
Then he gets kicked out.
Back in the dreary disappointment of reality, he meets Maya, a former Sync insider with a warning. The company is about to launch a technology that blurs the boundaries between fact and fiction, forever. Maya believes it will end humanity's interest in being human. Funk doesn’t really care about humanity. But he realizes, to his amazement, that he cares about her.
The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk is a near-future novella about addiction, apathy, and what it costs to feel something real.
In a world steeped in loneliness, Sync is the escape. A fully immersive virtual reality simulation that Funk is addicted to, Sync allows him to be everything he isn’t in real attractive, strong, wanted. He has lived there for months. He intends to stay forever.
Then he gets kicked out.
Back in the dreary disappointment of reality, he meets Maya, a former Sync insider with a warning. The company is about to launch a technology that blurs the boundaries between fact and fiction, forever. Maya believes it will end humanity's interest in being human. Funk doesn’t really care about humanity. But he realizes, to his amazement, that he cares about her.
The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk is a near-future novella about addiction, apathy, and what it costs to feel something real.
58 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 15, 2026
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Nick Brewster
2 books1 followerNick Brewster is a writer who crafts mind-bending sci-fi and paranormal stories that leave readers unsettled.
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ARC provided by the author | 4.25 ⭐️
“It was a startling realization; he couldn’t remember the last time he cared that someone didn’t want to talk to him. Most of the times he was right there with them. But Maya - she was different. He couldn’t stand her silence. And the thought of her leaving was untenable.”
— Funk
“The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk” is a short but surprisingly immersive cyberpunk novella exploring virtual reality, emotional detachment, and the unsettling blur between simulation and reality.
At only around 40 pages, this is the kind of story that requires full immersion and attention from the reader. The writing is direct, atmospheric, and immediately pulls you into its near-future world, where Sync, a fully immersive virtual reality platform, has become an escape from loneliness and human disconnection.
What initially appears to be a straightforward dystopian sci-fi story slowly becomes something much more psychological and existential. Throughout the novella, the reader navigates alongside Funk through layers of uncertainty, never fully knowing what is real, simulated, manipulated, or emotionally authentic. And I think this is where the novella works best: not everything is meant to be taken at face value.
I especially appreciated how the story explores the idea of emotional authenticity inside a simulated environment. Funk’s growing attachment to Maya becomes the emotional core of the novella, even if their relationship remains subtle and restrained. The emotions are never dramatic or explicitly romantic, but instead feel subtle and deeply connected to the novella’s central question:
If an emotion is sincerely felt, does it become less real simply because it originated inside a simulation?
The final reveal changes the reader’s perception of the entire story in a way that feels more unsettling than shocking. Instead of invalidating the emotions experienced throughout the novella, it deepens them, especially through Funk’s final silence during the post-test feedback. To me, this moment carried an unexpected emotional weight, along with a sense of detachment and resolution.
The author Nick Brewster described his work as stories meant to leave readers unsettled, and I think this novella absolutely succeeds in doing so. Even after finishing it, the atmosphere and questions it raises still linger in my mind.
A very brief but thought-provoking sci-fi experience that feels immersive, strange, unsettling, and human.
The novella also reminded me of classic Twilight Zone episodes, through the unsettling feeling it leaves behind. More than simple entertainment, the story feels like an experience designed to linger in the reader’s mind long after the final page, blurring reality and simulation in the same way Funk himself experiences HyperSync.
I would love to see this story expand and I will definitely be following this author’s future work. Thank you so much to Nick Brewster for trusting me with his story and giving me the opportunity to share my honest review.
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(10 May 2025)
Finished this in one sitting and still thinking about it. An unexpectedly immersive and unsettling little sci-fi novella ➡️ full review to come closer to release day.
“It was a startling realization; he couldn’t remember the last time he cared that someone didn’t want to talk to him. Most of the times he was right there with them. But Maya - she was different. He couldn’t stand her silence. And the thought of her leaving was untenable.”
— Funk
“The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk” is a short but surprisingly immersive cyberpunk novella exploring virtual reality, emotional detachment, and the unsettling blur between simulation and reality.
At only around 40 pages, this is the kind of story that requires full immersion and attention from the reader. The writing is direct, atmospheric, and immediately pulls you into its near-future world, where Sync, a fully immersive virtual reality platform, has become an escape from loneliness and human disconnection.
What initially appears to be a straightforward dystopian sci-fi story slowly becomes something much more psychological and existential. Throughout the novella, the reader navigates alongside Funk through layers of uncertainty, never fully knowing what is real, simulated, manipulated, or emotionally authentic. And I think this is where the novella works best: not everything is meant to be taken at face value.
I especially appreciated how the story explores the idea of emotional authenticity inside a simulated environment. Funk’s growing attachment to Maya becomes the emotional core of the novella, even if their relationship remains subtle and restrained. The emotions are never dramatic or explicitly romantic, but instead feel subtle and deeply connected to the novella’s central question:
If an emotion is sincerely felt, does it become less real simply because it originated inside a simulation?
The final reveal changes the reader’s perception of the entire story in a way that feels more unsettling than shocking. Instead of invalidating the emotions experienced throughout the novella, it deepens them, especially through Funk’s final silence during the post-test feedback. To me, this moment carried an unexpected emotional weight, along with a sense of detachment and resolution.
The author Nick Brewster described his work as stories meant to leave readers unsettled, and I think this novella absolutely succeeds in doing so. Even after finishing it, the atmosphere and questions it raises still linger in my mind.
A very brief but thought-provoking sci-fi experience that feels immersive, strange, unsettling, and human.
The novella also reminded me of classic Twilight Zone episodes, through the unsettling feeling it leaves behind. More than simple entertainment, the story feels like an experience designed to linger in the reader’s mind long after the final page, blurring reality and simulation in the same way Funk himself experiences HyperSync.
I would love to see this story expand and I will definitely be following this author’s future work. Thank you so much to Nick Brewster for trusting me with his story and giving me the opportunity to share my honest review.
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(10 May 2025)
Finished this in one sitting and still thinking about it. An unexpectedly immersive and unsettling little sci-fi novella ➡️ full review to come closer to release day.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Don’t let the first few pages fool you. There is a lot more depth to Funk and this book than the initial meeting in an apocalyptic world. The author manages to pack quite a few story paths for Funk in this novella. Yet, the turns in the story weren’t jarring and flowed well. I recommend sticking with this book even if you’re unsure after the first few pages because you’ll be delighted to see where Funk’s story leads.
Sync is a fully immersive virtual reality simulation drawing in customers for months on end. Funk happens to be one of them. In this novella, we learn the not-so-great things that come along with a society enamored with a product like Sync. The job market favoring tech-savvy individuals makes sense in this sci-fi world but I also found it hits close to home. I’d be curious to see the role of artificial intelligence in this world a little more.
The contrast between Funk in his virtual world versus his real world is obvious. His confidence alone is completely different. Funk is not a tech-savvy person. He falls into the category of human services for his career. A career that’s not nearly as lucrative or revered as the tech jobs like people who get to work for Sync. He’d love to work there but instead, he escapes his disappointing life by using Sync. His perspective changes when he meets Maya in the real world, a former employee of Sync.
Maya was my favorite character in this novella. I also enjoyed Funk’s roommate Renny, who provided good comic relief. Honestly, I found these two characters more interesting and engaging than Funk. In contrast, he came off a bit boring. I’d read more of this content if Maya were the star. She was an intriguing character and I enjoyed her personality. The only disappointing part was that she was the side character.
It’s worth checking this novella out. The story leads you down an interesting journey that’s worth reading especially with a cool character like Maya. I do think this could’ve benefited from being longer to give us a little bit more of Funk. He took longer to understand than some other characters, he felt a bit more closed off. This would be a great Black Mirror episode. So, if you’re into that kind of genre of content you’ll enjoy this.
Sync is a fully immersive virtual reality simulation drawing in customers for months on end. Funk happens to be one of them. In this novella, we learn the not-so-great things that come along with a society enamored with a product like Sync. The job market favoring tech-savvy individuals makes sense in this sci-fi world but I also found it hits close to home. I’d be curious to see the role of artificial intelligence in this world a little more.
The contrast between Funk in his virtual world versus his real world is obvious. His confidence alone is completely different. Funk is not a tech-savvy person. He falls into the category of human services for his career. A career that’s not nearly as lucrative or revered as the tech jobs like people who get to work for Sync. He’d love to work there but instead, he escapes his disappointing life by using Sync. His perspective changes when he meets Maya in the real world, a former employee of Sync.
Maya was my favorite character in this novella. I also enjoyed Funk’s roommate Renny, who provided good comic relief. Honestly, I found these two characters more interesting and engaging than Funk. In contrast, he came off a bit boring. I’d read more of this content if Maya were the star. She was an intriguing character and I enjoyed her personality. The only disappointing part was that she was the side character.
It’s worth checking this novella out. The story leads you down an interesting journey that’s worth reading especially with a cool character like Maya. I do think this could’ve benefited from being longer to give us a little bit more of Funk. He took longer to understand than some other characters, he felt a bit more closed off. This would be a great Black Mirror episode. So, if you’re into that kind of genre of content you’ll enjoy this.
June 19, 2026
The Awkward Out of Sync Half-Life of Funk by Nick Brewster is a novella that drops the reader into a world where human interaction lacks genuine intimacy and empathy, where simple communication is more like a transaction than a conversation. We meet Funk in the middle of the action, escaping his everyday life through virtual reality experiences provided by the massive corporation Sync.
Sync allows its customers to leave their lives behind, even for months at a time, and immerse themselves in the reality of their choosing. Funk is a devoted consumer, as long as his money holds out. In his preferred simulation, he is strong, capable, and confident. But when he is booted out of his zombie apocalypse sim, he returns to his reality as a struggling human relations worker sharing a run-down apartment with his stoner roommate, Remmy. Things become even more interesting when Funk finds that Remmy has sublet his room to Maya, a woman facing troubles of her own.
As Maya and Funk get closer, he learns that she once worked for Sync and eagerly questions her about the company he admires so much. What Maya reveals to him shatters his view of Sync. As she relates the story of how she lost her job and what is really going on behind closed doors at Sync, Funk decides to help her fight back.
While I would have enjoyed spending more time with the characters, especially Remmy, the story packs an impressive amount of complexity into its novella length. The plot takes several unexpected turns, including one twist that genuinely caught me by surprise. Even more intriguing is the truth behind Sync, which unfolds in ways I did not anticipate.
The Awkward Out of Sync Half-Life of Funk is an adept blend of science fiction, social commentary, and mystery. Brewster raises thought-provoking questions about technology, connection, and escapism while delivering an enjoyable story with memorable twists. Readers who enjoy speculative fiction with a touch of dystopian intrigue will likely find plenty to appreciate in this unique novella.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. The opinions expressed in this review are my own. Many thanks to the author, Nick Brewster, for allowing me to read this ARC.
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Sync allows its customers to leave their lives behind, even for months at a time, and immerse themselves in the reality of their choosing. Funk is a devoted consumer, as long as his money holds out. In his preferred simulation, he is strong, capable, and confident. But when he is booted out of his zombie apocalypse sim, he returns to his reality as a struggling human relations worker sharing a run-down apartment with his stoner roommate, Remmy. Things become even more interesting when Funk finds that Remmy has sublet his room to Maya, a woman facing troubles of her own.
As Maya and Funk get closer, he learns that she once worked for Sync and eagerly questions her about the company he admires so much. What Maya reveals to him shatters his view of Sync. As she relates the story of how she lost her job and what is really going on behind closed doors at Sync, Funk decides to help her fight back.
While I would have enjoyed spending more time with the characters, especially Remmy, the story packs an impressive amount of complexity into its novella length. The plot takes several unexpected turns, including one twist that genuinely caught me by surprise. Even more intriguing is the truth behind Sync, which unfolds in ways I did not anticipate.
The Awkward Out of Sync Half-Life of Funk is an adept blend of science fiction, social commentary, and mystery. Brewster raises thought-provoking questions about technology, connection, and escapism while delivering an enjoyable story with memorable twists. Readers who enjoy speculative fiction with a touch of dystopian intrigue will likely find plenty to appreciate in this unique novella.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. The opinions expressed in this review are my own. Many thanks to the author, Nick Brewster, for allowing me to read this ARC.
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Review of advance copy received from Author
While trying to escape from reality, a variety of confrontations arise in The Awkward Out of Sync Half Life of Funk by Nick Brewster.
To read this, and other book reviews, visit my website: http://makinggoodstories.wordpress.com/.
Preferring to spend time in simulations, Funk escapes the reality of his life for alternative ones crafted by Sync; however, his credit has run out so he’s abruptly ejected back into the harsh and lonely real world, where he finds that someone else is sleeping in his bed as he tries to find refuge there. Having rented his room while he was away, Maya previously worked at Sync and isn’t a big fan, cautiously warning that the company is soon to launch boundary-blurring technology, which she has concerns about and wants to prevent coming to fruition to help preserve what remains of humanity. Surprised to find himself aiding Maya in her endeavor, Funk’s experience will prove to be rather informative.
In a short story that progresses quickly and layers multiple scenarios in measured doses to pique interest and reorient focus, while maintaining a strong sci-fi basis, into the narrative thread, reality is rapidly called into question with what should or could be believed, fostering deeper thought on the implications of virtual worlds and the tech that drives them; the concept raised with the to-be-launched augmented reality and it blurring the line such that it would be too difficult to parse the augmented from the real is a frightening, but not too far-fetched, possibility to consider. Funk’s apathetic nature is conveyed well, especially when fueled by the depiction of his lethargy while coming out of Sync, but when confronted with the enigma that Maya presents as she’s not initially very forthcoming with sharing information, his character becomes more engaged and invested in taking action, though Maya arguably has more interesting things going on with and for her as possibilities to explore.
*I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
To read this, and other book reviews, visit my website: http://makinggoodstories.wordpress.com/.
Preferring to spend time in simulations, Funk escapes the reality of his life for alternative ones crafted by Sync; however, his credit has run out so he’s abruptly ejected back into the harsh and lonely real world, where he finds that someone else is sleeping in his bed as he tries to find refuge there. Having rented his room while he was away, Maya previously worked at Sync and isn’t a big fan, cautiously warning that the company is soon to launch boundary-blurring technology, which she has concerns about and wants to prevent coming to fruition to help preserve what remains of humanity. Surprised to find himself aiding Maya in her endeavor, Funk’s experience will prove to be rather informative.
In a short story that progresses quickly and layers multiple scenarios in measured doses to pique interest and reorient focus, while maintaining a strong sci-fi basis, into the narrative thread, reality is rapidly called into question with what should or could be believed, fostering deeper thought on the implications of virtual worlds and the tech that drives them; the concept raised with the to-be-launched augmented reality and it blurring the line such that it would be too difficult to parse the augmented from the real is a frightening, but not too far-fetched, possibility to consider. Funk’s apathetic nature is conveyed well, especially when fueled by the depiction of his lethargy while coming out of Sync, but when confronted with the enigma that Maya presents as she’s not initially very forthcoming with sharing information, his character becomes more engaged and invested in taking action, though Maya arguably has more interesting things going on with and for her as possibilities to explore.
*I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Let’s get it straight from the start; this is not a book about zombies. I say this to clear up any possible misunderstandings caused by a 20-page introductory chapter that is pure zombie. This generation’s version of, “then he woke up and it was all a dream.” Misleading introduction is a source of many bad reviews. So, be warned.
And this book is more complex than a standard zombie gore-fest. It’s a Dystopian Virtual Reality story from the unusual point of view of the programmers, who realize the danger of their product to the human race and try belatedly to put the genie back in the bottle.
It’s a good topic for a novelette, handled deftly except for some flaws in the writing that a good edit would fix.
The long sequence of backstory in Chapter 5 is a risk. The author is counting on the connection we have developed with the main character to keep us involved and it works, but it’s a close call.
There is the usual evidence of poor editing: misuse of “lay” and “laid.” And I hate to be picky, but if you’re sitting with your back to the sunset, it’s rather hard to be wakened the next morning by sunlight pouring in through the same window.
On the plus side, it’s a tidy, almost-straightforward plot. There is no room in a book this size for more than a couple of important characters, and both of them are portrayed in sympathetic three dimensions.
The social and physical setting is sketched in neatly without wasting words, using off-hand comments and short vignettes that stimulate our imaginations.
A tidy little novelette. If you don’t mind a few rough spots, you’ll enjoy it.
And this book is more complex than a standard zombie gore-fest. It’s a Dystopian Virtual Reality story from the unusual point of view of the programmers, who realize the danger of their product to the human race and try belatedly to put the genie back in the bottle.
It’s a good topic for a novelette, handled deftly except for some flaws in the writing that a good edit would fix.
The long sequence of backstory in Chapter 5 is a risk. The author is counting on the connection we have developed with the main character to keep us involved and it works, but it’s a close call.
There is the usual evidence of poor editing: misuse of “lay” and “laid.” And I hate to be picky, but if you’re sitting with your back to the sunset, it’s rather hard to be wakened the next morning by sunlight pouring in through the same window.
On the plus side, it’s a tidy, almost-straightforward plot. There is no room in a book this size for more than a couple of important characters, and both of them are portrayed in sympathetic three dimensions.
The social and physical setting is sketched in neatly without wasting words, using off-hand comments and short vignettes that stimulate our imaginations.
A tidy little novelette. If you don’t mind a few rough spots, you’ll enjoy it.
May 18, 2026
The Sync is a fully immersive virtual reality simulation that Funk and many other people are addicted to. Sync allows people to be everything they aren’t: stunningly attractive, super strong, and deeply loved. Funk wants to stay inside forever, but his money says otherwise. Back in the real world, he meets Maya, a former Sync employee who warns him of the dangers of the latest upgrade. He joins her on her crusade not because it will change humanity forever, but because he cares about her.
Nick Brewster creates a novella about human's addiction to AI, looking at the themes of apathy and the idea that humans can feel something real from manmade. This has always been true since humans have been making up stories for fun, but this particular story also looks at the dangers of not knowing the truth from fiction. In the current day, I can turn off The Punisher: One Last Kill and know a dog really didn’t die. But as we know, as this story warns, our brains won’t always be able to distinguish that.
While the story is interesting, it’s not the best written. And as it turns out, there is a reason for most of this. But I didn’t catch on to this until Funk’s motivation felt rushed. I just couldn’t understand why he gave a crap putting a wrench in Sync’s plan. The man was addicted to Sync. There had to be a twist. And there was, and it’s a pretty cool. The only thing the twist never answered for me was Maya and why Funk was so enamored by her. But maybe I missed something in my reading, maybe I missed how desperate Funk was for a connect. Because who in this world isn’t?
I received a copy from the author; all opinions are my own.
Nick Brewster creates a novella about human's addiction to AI, looking at the themes of apathy and the idea that humans can feel something real from manmade. This has always been true since humans have been making up stories for fun, but this particular story also looks at the dangers of not knowing the truth from fiction. In the current day, I can turn off The Punisher: One Last Kill and know a dog really didn’t die. But as we know, as this story warns, our brains won’t always be able to distinguish that.
While the story is interesting, it’s not the best written. And as it turns out, there is a reason for most of this. But I didn’t catch on to this until Funk’s motivation felt rushed. I just couldn’t understand why he gave a crap putting a wrench in Sync’s plan. The man was addicted to Sync. There had to be a twist. And there was, and it’s a pretty cool. The only thing the twist never answered for me was Maya and why Funk was so enamored by her. But maybe I missed something in my reading, maybe I missed how desperate Funk was for a connect. Because who in this world isn’t?
I received a copy from the author; all opinions are my own.
June 28, 2026
The Awkward Out of Sync Half-Life of Funk took a little time to find its footing with me, but once everything clicked, I was completely invested.
Nick Brewster delivers an intelligent cyberpunk novella with believable characters, accessible technology, and an ending that rewards patient readers with one satisfying revelation after another.
The exploration of addiction, identity, and emotional disconnection gives this story far more depth than its page count suggests.
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Gina Rae Mitchell • Championing Indie Authors & Stories Worth Discovering
Nick Brewster delivers an intelligent cyberpunk novella with believable characters, accessible technology, and an ending that rewards patient readers with one satisfying revelation after another.
The exploration of addiction, identity, and emotional disconnection gives this story far more depth than its page count suggests.
Read more of my book reviews at
Gina Rae Mitchell • Championing Indie Authors & Stories Worth Discovering
Review of advance copy received from Author
Oh, this is one hella addictive and mind-altering novella 🤯
Consumed in a single sitting—as soon as I sunk into the plot, got a taste of where things were going and was smacked with the reality of it all, I was plugged IN. Also, was ultimately destroyed by that ending (I won't spoil it) and seriously had a blast going into the Sync experience with Funk, Renny and Maya! Strong characters, great writing and a mind-melting rabbithole you'll have fun falling down 🙌
Massive thank you to Nick Brewster himself for the advanced copy read in exchange for my honest feedback.
Consumed in a single sitting—as soon as I sunk into the plot, got a taste of where things were going and was smacked with the reality of it all, I was plugged IN. Also, was ultimately destroyed by that ending (I won't spoil it) and seriously had a blast going into the Sync experience with Funk, Renny and Maya! Strong characters, great writing and a mind-melting rabbithole you'll have fun falling down 🙌
Massive thank you to Nick Brewster himself for the advanced copy read in exchange for my honest feedback.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I almost DNF'd this.
Not officially. Just mentally. I was 30 pages in, and it was just fine. It's a story. Words are happening. Nothing offensive. Nothing thrilling. Just vibes that don't quite vibe with me.
It was how I felt through most of it.
And then. The last three chapters.
THE LAST. THREE. CHAPTERS 😱
I am not going to spoil anything. But the audacity of this book to lull me into thinking I knew what I was reading, then completely flip the entire plot on its head.
Let me back up.
The premise. Funk is addicted to Sync, a fully immersive VR where he gets to be everything he isn't: hot, wanted, powerful. He lives there. He intends to die there until he gets kicked out and meets Maya, a coder for Syncm, the very thing he is obsessed with.
It's a near-future novella about addiction. About apathy. About what it costs to feel something real when feeling nothing has become the whole personality.
For most of the read, I was bored. I'll say it. At 59 pages, there's no room for real worldbuilding, and what's here feels familiar: VR escapism, dystopian undertones, the lonely guy who finds The Girl. We've all come across reads like this. But I think that was more of a me problem than the book's problem. The writing is genuinely good for a novella, the prose has shape and rhythm, but nothing was really grabbing me.
The characters are interesting. Funk is a type I don't usually root for (even in this, I couldn't really root for him). Maya is sharp without being a manic pixie info dump. There's restraint here that I respected even when I wasn't fully invested in the storyline.
And then the ending.
I am being vague on purpose. Just know if you think you know where it's going, I don't think you do.
Thank you to the author for providing me a copy to read and review
Not officially. Just mentally. I was 30 pages in, and it was just fine. It's a story. Words are happening. Nothing offensive. Nothing thrilling. Just vibes that don't quite vibe with me.
It was how I felt through most of it.
And then. The last three chapters.
THE LAST. THREE. CHAPTERS 😱
I am not going to spoil anything. But the audacity of this book to lull me into thinking I knew what I was reading, then completely flip the entire plot on its head.
Let me back up.
The premise. Funk is addicted to Sync, a fully immersive VR where he gets to be everything he isn't: hot, wanted, powerful. He lives there. He intends to die there until he gets kicked out and meets Maya, a coder for Syncm, the very thing he is obsessed with.
It's a near-future novella about addiction. About apathy. About what it costs to feel something real when feeling nothing has become the whole personality.
For most of the read, I was bored. I'll say it. At 59 pages, there's no room for real worldbuilding, and what's here feels familiar: VR escapism, dystopian undertones, the lonely guy who finds The Girl. We've all come across reads like this. But I think that was more of a me problem than the book's problem. The writing is genuinely good for a novella, the prose has shape and rhythm, but nothing was really grabbing me.
The characters are interesting. Funk is a type I don't usually root for (even in this, I couldn't really root for him). Maya is sharp without being a manic pixie info dump. There's restraint here that I respected even when I wasn't fully invested in the storyline.
And then the ending.
I am being vague on purpose. Just know if you think you know where it's going, I don't think you do.
Thank you to the author for providing me a copy to read and review
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