Charlotte has been hiding in plain sight for seven years.
Online, she's Mars—a master gaming strategist ranked fifth in the country, respected by her all-male team and inseparable from her best friend, Jupiter. In real life, she's a socially anxious teenager who eats lunch alone and can barely speak to strangers. Her teammates have no idea she's a girl. Especially not Jupiter, the boy she definitely doesn't have feelings for.
When her family moves cross-country, Charlotte gets the chance to reinvent herself at a new school—until a collision with a charming football player turns her world upside down. Suddenly she's caught between two the online best friend who knows her soul but not her secret, and the real-life jock who sees the girl she's been too afraid to be.
With a major gaming tournament approaching and her double life unraveling, Charlotte must decide who she really is—the confident strategist behind the screen or the shy girl standing in front of it.
Some secrets can't stay hidden forever. Some hearts refuse to pick just one.
I have mixed feelings about this story. The idea is great and the writing is simple but easy to follow and good enough to keep you invested, however it seems a bit unrealistic the anxiety thing. For someone with social anxiety, Charlotte’s behaviour does seem a bit too forced. I think this story could be much better with a good editor. Nevertheless it was entertaining and fun
The basic plot has so much promise but almost everything else was disappointing. The characters were flat, the conversations read like they’d been written by someone who had never experienced a conversation in real life, and the descriptions of Charlotte’s day felt like they could’ve been copied directly from notes I wrote to friends during class in middle school. I felt compelled to finish it because I’d paid for it and wanted to get my money’s worth, but that just meant I wasted my time, as well as my money. At least it’s a short book.
Do yourself a favor and skip this one. Nothing used to advertise it is in the book, and I'm pretty sure it's either written by AI or a person who seriously needed someone to proofread it for them and actually add substance to the story itself. The FMC is either dumb or just plain naïve; she games all the time with these guys but doesn’t understand what they mean when they say it gets “hard” when they like someone. Girl, you're 17, you should know what that means. These characters describe the same events to each other but don’t understand they're talking about each other... nothing made sense.
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I give this book 3 starts because I don’t like to rate books super low. But this book lacked so much. The storyline had a lot of potential but everything in it lacked depth. The characters were flat and wasn’t much development there. It was a fast read, but in all, not as good as I had hoped. The FMC was either super dumb or naïve. It just lacked a whole lot and was left disappointed. But if you want a fast, easy, super simple, and fairly clean (not really any spice🌶️) read that lacks depth and complexity, then this book is for you.
This book had a lot of potential and if rewritten, could be a lot better.
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I truly enjoyed reading this story. While I have watched part of the vertical drama adaptation based on this work, the book was a significantly more enjoyable experience. The narrative depth and character development in written form far surpassed what was captured on screen.
Charlotte, TJ, and the rest of the cast felt incredibly well-fleshed out; they were truly the heart of the story and played a vital role in bringing this world to life. It was a pleasure to spend time with them, and I would highly recommend this book to anyone interested in a compelling, character-driven coming-of-age narrative.
I absolutely loved this book and couldn't put it down! The build up to the big secret, the meeting between all the characters, their development and the ending make it such a good read! For a girl not really into gaming it was easy enough to follow too and not too heavy on just the game side. A great read for anyone who loves a good romance and I completely connected with the MFC as I also struggle with social anxiety and felt her panic and understood her over thinking the small things!
Cute book for a young adult audience. I enjoyed the storyline and the writing was easy to follow. I think once the gamers met in person and won the tournament, that would have been an appropriate ending, after it just kind of drug on with no real purpose. I also felt like the level of naivety for Charolette was unrealistic…there’s just no way, but playing devils advocate I do believe in most of the parts that made me laugh was due to how unrealistically naive she was.
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I wished this book didn’t end and would’ve loved to have a sequel! I’ve always enjoyed books that have multiple prospects, so this book was immediately an attention grabber.
Only thing I wished to see what more details. Some things felt rushed and time jumped a little quickly. The book could’ve definitely been longer and I would’ve been happy.
I love how all the characters go from strangers to friends to family. I appreciate the humor and laughs as well a little bit of romance. It's not a spicy book but one can imagine what transpires. I love how Charlotte maintained her innocence throughout and was not pressured by anyone
It’s entertaining, very, very YA even though the characters talk about hooking up and getting drunk all the time The majority of the book the two main don’t realize what’s happening and after they do realize it’s really weird. It just didn’t gel. And some of the exact same phrases are used repeatedly, which makes me think AI
Inconsistencies in writing. Lots of random pages of how "do you like this so far, continue here?" In the middle of a complete book... I just found that unprofessional in editing. Some random parts of italic font like no one actually reread the script. The maturity of the characters are not there. Too much tell and not enough show. Feel childish.
This story was sweet, funny, and definitely touched my nerdy side and love for games. I was so happy to have it as a kindle book because I didn’t get to finish it on the app! So glad to read it I had to take a break on the other book I was trying to finish!
I love a fanfic turned novel, and this is no exception. It is well written, and genuinely made me laugh out loud on multiple occasions. Just has touching, sweet moments too. I would definitely recommend!
I have an unbearable weakness for falling for the same person twice. Absolutely delivers on that front. The prose is … grammatically correct? Which is something. Very linear plot, which is fine, but not super engaging.
Its a very fun story for the younger audience, even that there is insecurity, heartbreak and anxiety. I think a lot of young people can relate to the main characters and its easy to read