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Kept: A Dark Stepbrother Romance
KEPT
A Dark Stepbrother Romance
by Ardis Thorne
Some people survive what breaks them.
Others become something worse.
Ashton never expected to be wanted.
Not like this.
Not by him.
Laith doesn’t love gently. He doesn’t offer comfort or safety or anything that resembles mercy. What he offers is control—unyielding, absolute, and impossible to escape. The kind that strips away choice until there’s nothing left but obedience.
And Ashton takes it.
Because what Laith gives him is certainty.
In a world that has taken everything from him—his family, his safety, his sense of control—Laith is the only constant that remains. The only thing that feels real.
But control comes with a cost.
When violence bleeds into every corner of their lives and the past refuses to stay buried, Ashton is forced to confront a truth he’s been avoiding from the
Laith isn’t protecting him.
He’s keeping him.
This is not a story about healing.
This is not a story about redemption.
This is a story about obsession, control, and the thin line between devotion and destruction.
Content
This book contains explicit material and dark themes, including violence, kidnapping, coercion, power imbalance, non-consensual and dubious-consent situations, and psychological trauma. Intended for mature readers only.
A Dark Stepbrother Romance
by Ardis Thorne
Some people survive what breaks them.
Others become something worse.
Ashton never expected to be wanted.
Not like this.
Not by him.
Laith doesn’t love gently. He doesn’t offer comfort or safety or anything that resembles mercy. What he offers is control—unyielding, absolute, and impossible to escape. The kind that strips away choice until there’s nothing left but obedience.
And Ashton takes it.
Because what Laith gives him is certainty.
In a world that has taken everything from him—his family, his safety, his sense of control—Laith is the only constant that remains. The only thing that feels real.
But control comes with a cost.
When violence bleeds into every corner of their lives and the past refuses to stay buried, Ashton is forced to confront a truth he’s been avoiding from the
Laith isn’t protecting him.
He’s keeping him.
This is not a story about healing.
This is not a story about redemption.
This is a story about obsession, control, and the thin line between devotion and destruction.
Content
This book contains explicit material and dark themes, including violence, kidnapping, coercion, power imbalance, non-consensual and dubious-consent situations, and psychological trauma. Intended for mature readers only.
- GenresDark Romance
396 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 24, 2026
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April 22, 2026
For 2 years I bullied my crush now I want him
Ash as grown up with just his mom and they struggled in many ways but it o my made them closer and grateful for the little treats in life .Laughter up with just his dad ur his childhood cold and lonely .laugh is captivated with Asher from the very first time he sees him . ash is beautiful and his choice brown eyes are kind and hopeful, Laiith turns I to a school yard bully and his buddies follow suit and treat ash the same way .Laugh has watched ash from a distance for long enough he takes ash by force to his remote cabin and the way things happen you are left thinking what the Hell! ,you can't imagine how this is going to turn out will you hate laith ?will you be ok ? When you recover from the extreme turn of events and are assuming you know what's going to happen next boom your wrong!! This story will show true loving relationships - torture - Happiness Sadness - abuse - Fear - kidnapping-Grief and Friendships that twist and turn . Laith is very dominant and likes to push ash to Be submissive to him but it will have you wondering if he is going to go to far . Will Asher ever say all of this is to much I can't take anymore?you will just have to read this spicy bully to lover story and find out - BUT check your triggers because its a TRUE DARK romance ,this story is not a fluffy cozy romance but if you like a twisted spicy book you have got the right one !!!
Ash as grown up with just his mom and they struggled in many ways but it o my made them closer and grateful for the little treats in life .Laughter up with just his dad ur his childhood cold and lonely .laugh is captivated with Asher from the very first time he sees him . ash is beautiful and his choice brown eyes are kind and hopeful, Laiith turns I to a school yard bully and his buddies follow suit and treat ash the same way .Laugh has watched ash from a distance for long enough he takes ash by force to his remote cabin and the way things happen you are left thinking what the Hell! ,you can't imagine how this is going to turn out will you hate laith ?will you be ok ? When you recover from the extreme turn of events and are assuming you know what's going to happen next boom your wrong!! This story will show true loving relationships - torture - Happiness Sadness - abuse - Fear - kidnapping-Grief and Friendships that twist and turn . Laith is very dominant and likes to push ash to Be submissive to him but it will have you wondering if he is going to go to far . Will Asher ever say all of this is to much I can't take anymore?you will just have to read this spicy bully to lover story and find out - BUT check your triggers because its a TRUE DARK romance ,this story is not a fluffy cozy romance but if you like a twisted spicy book you have got the right one !!!
April 9, 2026
I'm not crying you are.......love it
Kept is a dark, emotional read that stuck with me for days. Ardis Thore writes simply but so effectively—nothing flashy, just honest sentences that get under your skin. The story isn’t driven by big plot twists; it’s more about the small moments and how the main character carries pain and memory. That made it feel real and raw.
Kept is a dark, emotional read that stuck with me for days. Ardis Thore writes simply but so effectively—nothing flashy, just honest sentences that get under your skin. The story isn’t driven by big plot twists; it’s more about the small moments and how the main character carries pain and memory. That made it feel real and raw.
April 9, 2026
this book had me gripped. in its dark and twisted / forced relationship had you guessing what's going to happen next. I love the fact it ended happily after all the trauma they went through with looseing the first lot of parents to the last parents to even kidnaping and sa. if anyone wanted to delve into step brothers mm/ mm I would definitely recommend this book to them
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 30, 2026
This book was dark, and I fucking loved it
April 18, 2026
As much as I like dark taboo romances, this book just wasn’t for me.
The book starts and there’s a small time jump almost immediately, just a few weeks, but I think what happened during those few weeks was really important in shaping the relationship between Laith and Ashton - but that part gets ‘skipped’. Because of that, Ashton’s behavior towards Laith was a little confusing sometimes for me. He tried to evade Laith as much as possible for two whole years but is then very easily persuaded into starting a relationship with him - despite everything Laith supposedly did to him in those few weeks. It gave me a little bit of a Stockholm Syndrome vibe if I’m honest. They go from Laith being a mean bully and Ashton being afraid of him to basically boyfriends in the span of twenty pages or so. Because of that, the first part of the book felt a little bit rushed.
Even beyond that, their relationship kept giving me whiplash. Laith is… well, mean. And I didn’t think his ‘villain origin story’ was strong enough to fully explain his behavior. But he can be really sweet and protective too. As for Ashton, I had no idea if he actually wanted to be with Laith or not. He could also be sweet and initiate, but on the other hand he always seemed to be on edge and cautious around him.
Around 50% of the book something major happens and their world comes tumbling down, but it makes the relationship feel more like trauma bonding instead of actual love - for both of them but especially for Ashton.
On top of that, just when you think there’s character growth for Laith, he falls back into the same patterns as in the beginning of the book whenever things don’t go the way he wants - regardless of how it makes Ashton feel. This, again, makes it feel like whatever Laith feels for Ashton is more some sort of possessive obsession instead of love.
For a four hundred page book I expected a bit more… depth, maybe? Like I said, I felt like the relationship between the MMCs was a bit rushed and I had a hard time convincing myself that they actually loved each other.
That said, the writing itself is smooth and easy to read, and I can absolutely see why this would work for other readers - it just didn’t work for me personally.
The book starts and there’s a small time jump almost immediately, just a few weeks, but I think what happened during those few weeks was really important in shaping the relationship between Laith and Ashton - but that part gets ‘skipped’. Because of that, Ashton’s behavior towards Laith was a little confusing sometimes for me. He tried to evade Laith as much as possible for two whole years but is then very easily persuaded into starting a relationship with him - despite everything Laith supposedly did to him in those few weeks. It gave me a little bit of a Stockholm Syndrome vibe if I’m honest. They go from Laith being a mean bully and Ashton being afraid of him to basically boyfriends in the span of twenty pages or so. Because of that, the first part of the book felt a little bit rushed.
Even beyond that, their relationship kept giving me whiplash. Laith is… well, mean. And I didn’t think his ‘villain origin story’ was strong enough to fully explain his behavior. But he can be really sweet and protective too. As for Ashton, I had no idea if he actually wanted to be with Laith or not. He could also be sweet and initiate, but on the other hand he always seemed to be on edge and cautious around him.
Around 50% of the book something major happens and their world comes tumbling down, but it makes the relationship feel more like trauma bonding instead of actual love - for both of them but especially for Ashton.
On top of that, just when you think there’s character growth for Laith, he falls back into the same patterns as in the beginning of the book whenever things don’t go the way he wants - regardless of how it makes Ashton feel. This, again, makes it feel like whatever Laith feels for Ashton is more some sort of possessive obsession instead of love.
For a four hundred page book I expected a bit more… depth, maybe? Like I said, I felt like the relationship between the MMCs was a bit rushed and I had a hard time convincing myself that they actually loved each other.
That said, the writing itself is smooth and easy to read, and I can absolutely see why this would work for other readers - it just didn’t work for me personally.
May 30, 2026
I read an Advanced Reader Copy of Kept. All opinions are my own and freely given.
⚠️Please be sure to review the content warnings before you read this book⚠️
Ashton has spent his years at college avoiding Laith like the plague. Dangerous and domineering, somehow Laith seems to always be lurking in the shadows, watching. Waiting. When Laith finally catches him, Ashton is unprepared for the consequences. Because Laith demands control…and submission. And Ash isn't sure he wants to give up either. Laith doesn't really give him the choice. As Ash learns how to navigate his complicated relationship with Laith, his limits are pushed to the brink when his mother marries Laith's father. Now stepbrothers, they must keep their relationship secret. Then a series of tragedies tests their limits on control of their emotions and their grief. Left with only each other to rely on, and with an unknown adversary dogging their heels, Ash and Laith must figure out how to live their new normal. Ash knows his place is at Laith's side, and Laith is about to find out what he's willing to do to make sure Ash never leaves it.
I am not sure how I feel about this book. There were many good things about it. It was very well written. The plot twists kept me interested. I was emotionally invested and emotionally devastated in turn. I really liked Ashton's character and how sweet he was. He didn't deserve what happened to him, but I am glad he found a way to be happy no matter what. Most of the elements that I like in a book and rate a book on were good.
But this is not a romance. I guess the description doesn't exactly call it a romance either, only the title “stepbrother romance” does. But really there are very few romantic elements. Laith obviously cares for Ashton to some degree. He protects him, wants Ashton to be happy, is devastated when he thinks Ashton will leave him. And yet he does not have very many redeeming qualities. He does not care that he hurts Ashton. He does not care, ever, if Ashton does or does not want sex. There is no point where Laith was kind to another person or showed that he had a soft side except to give Ashton a false sense of security that if he only obeys, Laith will not hurt him. That isn't love. That is covetousness, control. They say the word “love” to each other, but I am not convinced there is any part of Laith that is loveable except for his obsession and devotion to Ash. He is not a good person and probably needs psychological help. Ashton was always, always afraid of him and his temper. That's not love.
Despite my dislike of him, Laith was well written. I was glad to see he would burn the world down to protect Ashton. But as a whole, this book was a bit too dark for my taste. If I am going to read a dark romance, I expect actual romance to be in it. Laith has no redeeming qualities in this book. He was selfish and unhealthily controlling. And Ash knew that at the beginning, but by the end he was so under Laith's thumb that he didn't even want to escape.
And I guess that part was well written too. And that's the problem. I loved the writing enough to want to read something else by this author, but the lack of consent between the MCs throughout the book was rather abhorrent. And I worry that might be a common theme in her books. There's nothing wrong with reading it in this fictional context, but I prefer a morally gray or even morally black character to at least be respectful of their partners. Burn the world, sure. Unalive anyone else, sure. But get consent – and respect that consent – from their lovers.
I don't think Ash was in love. I think he was under duress and just didn't know it. At least if Laith was controlling things, Ash didn't have to make decisions. But no one, not even fictional characters, should be that afraid of their partners all the time.
So for those reasons, I give it 4/5 🌟. The writing was fantastic. The plot twists were unpredictable and devastating. But the darkness was just irredeemable. Definitely read the content warnings before you read this book.
⚠️Please be sure to review the content warnings before you read this book⚠️
Ashton has spent his years at college avoiding Laith like the plague. Dangerous and domineering, somehow Laith seems to always be lurking in the shadows, watching. Waiting. When Laith finally catches him, Ashton is unprepared for the consequences. Because Laith demands control…and submission. And Ash isn't sure he wants to give up either. Laith doesn't really give him the choice. As Ash learns how to navigate his complicated relationship with Laith, his limits are pushed to the brink when his mother marries Laith's father. Now stepbrothers, they must keep their relationship secret. Then a series of tragedies tests their limits on control of their emotions and their grief. Left with only each other to rely on, and with an unknown adversary dogging their heels, Ash and Laith must figure out how to live their new normal. Ash knows his place is at Laith's side, and Laith is about to find out what he's willing to do to make sure Ash never leaves it.
I am not sure how I feel about this book. There were many good things about it. It was very well written. The plot twists kept me interested. I was emotionally invested and emotionally devastated in turn. I really liked Ashton's character and how sweet he was. He didn't deserve what happened to him, but I am glad he found a way to be happy no matter what. Most of the elements that I like in a book and rate a book on were good.
But this is not a romance. I guess the description doesn't exactly call it a romance either, only the title “stepbrother romance” does. But really there are very few romantic elements. Laith obviously cares for Ashton to some degree. He protects him, wants Ashton to be happy, is devastated when he thinks Ashton will leave him. And yet he does not have very many redeeming qualities. He does not care that he hurts Ashton. He does not care, ever, if Ashton does or does not want sex. There is no point where Laith was kind to another person or showed that he had a soft side except to give Ashton a false sense of security that if he only obeys, Laith will not hurt him. That isn't love. That is covetousness, control. They say the word “love” to each other, but I am not convinced there is any part of Laith that is loveable except for his obsession and devotion to Ash. He is not a good person and probably needs psychological help. Ashton was always, always afraid of him and his temper. That's not love.
Despite my dislike of him, Laith was well written. I was glad to see he would burn the world down to protect Ashton. But as a whole, this book was a bit too dark for my taste. If I am going to read a dark romance, I expect actual romance to be in it. Laith has no redeeming qualities in this book. He was selfish and unhealthily controlling. And Ash knew that at the beginning, but by the end he was so under Laith's thumb that he didn't even want to escape.
And I guess that part was well written too. And that's the problem. I loved the writing enough to want to read something else by this author, but the lack of consent between the MCs throughout the book was rather abhorrent. And I worry that might be a common theme in her books. There's nothing wrong with reading it in this fictional context, but I prefer a morally gray or even morally black character to at least be respectful of their partners. Burn the world, sure. Unalive anyone else, sure. But get consent – and respect that consent – from their lovers.
I don't think Ash was in love. I think he was under duress and just didn't know it. At least if Laith was controlling things, Ash didn't have to make decisions. But no one, not even fictional characters, should be that afraid of their partners all the time.
So for those reasons, I give it 4/5 🌟. The writing was fantastic. The plot twists were unpredictable and devastating. But the darkness was just irredeemable. Definitely read the content warnings before you read this book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 18, 2026
Kept by Ardis Thorne
Good afternoon squirrel-friends! Let’s talk about Kept.
Kept is a book where the content warnings are not decoration. If you're going in expecting a morally gray or your typical “dark romance”, check yourself. This is obsession, control, trauma, and codependency wrapped in a dark MM stepbrother romance.
The relationship between Laith and Ashton is uncomfortable by design. But I won’t give away too many secrets. You’ll have to read to find out why. The way this book is written has you loving them, hating them, and somehow rooting for them all in one.
The book opens with heavy spice, torture, and trauma, never losing tempo. Not even once. The spice does not overshadow the plot. The emotional devastation lands not in the taboo relationship. But in the grief, loss, and broken people that cling to each other, even when they shouldn’t be, when both of their worlds get ripped apart. The plot throws punch after punch. These poor characters never get a break. Which makes you want to hug them both. The plot and characters certainly linger and make you ask many questions. Long after you’ve thumbed the last page.
The tension is relentless, the emotions are raw, and the author never shies away from the ugly parts of mental health, love, grief, and obsession.
Overall, Kept is dark and emotionally brutal. It's about obsession, masquerading as love and the damage left behind. What really made this a five-star read for me was the emotional depth. The angst was immaculate. The pain was exquisite. And somehow, despite all the chaos, my heart ached for these characters every step of the way. If you enjoy toxic relationships, heavy emotional angst, and books that leave you questioning your morals, this one is for you.
Ardis Thorne, I’m officially a new fan. Congratulations on this beautiful creation and thank you for bringing this story to life.
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Good afternoon squirrel-friends! Let’s talk about Kept.
Kept is a book where the content warnings are not decoration. If you're going in expecting a morally gray or your typical “dark romance”, check yourself. This is obsession, control, trauma, and codependency wrapped in a dark MM stepbrother romance.
The relationship between Laith and Ashton is uncomfortable by design. But I won’t give away too many secrets. You’ll have to read to find out why. The way this book is written has you loving them, hating them, and somehow rooting for them all in one.
The book opens with heavy spice, torture, and trauma, never losing tempo. Not even once. The spice does not overshadow the plot. The emotional devastation lands not in the taboo relationship. But in the grief, loss, and broken people that cling to each other, even when they shouldn’t be, when both of their worlds get ripped apart. The plot throws punch after punch. These poor characters never get a break. Which makes you want to hug them both. The plot and characters certainly linger and make you ask many questions. Long after you’ve thumbed the last page.
The tension is relentless, the emotions are raw, and the author never shies away from the ugly parts of mental health, love, grief, and obsession.
Overall, Kept is dark and emotionally brutal. It's about obsession, masquerading as love and the damage left behind. What really made this a five-star read for me was the emotional depth. The angst was immaculate. The pain was exquisite. And somehow, despite all the chaos, my heart ached for these characters every step of the way. If you enjoy toxic relationships, heavy emotional angst, and books that leave you questioning your morals, this one is for you.
Ardis Thorne, I’m officially a new fan. Congratulations on this beautiful creation and thank you for bringing this story to life.
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
April 21, 2026
Kept is absolutely a dark stepbrother romance.
I go into books without regard to triggers and reviews. I go after tropes and keywords. I didn’t even read the “dark stepbrother romance” part of the title- I read this as an ARC when described as a dark heavy theme MM. That said, I did enjoy the book and all the unfolds. It wasn’t at all the college bully taboo dark romance that is out there.
It started with Ashton, the soft “cinnamon roll” MMC who is shy, introvert and a momma’s boy that tries like hell to stay away from the other MMC, Laith- the hard dom with daddy issues and an obsessive control complex.
Laith is a complex character- he was hardened thanks to his upbringing- his lack of emotions father after his mom passed. He couldn’t regulate his emotions and he only knew pain and control. He wasn’t ready to talk about emotions and feelings, he didn’t want to like his new stepmom when she did all the things a mother would do. He didn’t want to deal with the emotions when something happens and his world turns upside down and the one person he needs to lean on wants time and space on his own. Aston is his complete opposite: soft, he is open with emotions and tears flow as much as his mouth runs about his feelings. He is quiet, kept to himself but somehow manages to see the depth of Laith and becomes the comfort and tether Laith needs and will do anything to keep.
The twist of stepbrothers wasn’t seen right away, then it hits and you roll with it. So it’s not the typical step sibling taboo trope. There was extreme toxicity, trauma, twists and degradation, devastating twists and emotional trauma throughout. While the story develops, so does the relationship of the characters, then the dependency also grows.
I go into books without regard to triggers and reviews. I go after tropes and keywords. I didn’t even read the “dark stepbrother romance” part of the title- I read this as an ARC when described as a dark heavy theme MM. That said, I did enjoy the book and all the unfolds. It wasn’t at all the college bully taboo dark romance that is out there.
It started with Ashton, the soft “cinnamon roll” MMC who is shy, introvert and a momma’s boy that tries like hell to stay away from the other MMC, Laith- the hard dom with daddy issues and an obsessive control complex.
Laith is a complex character- he was hardened thanks to his upbringing- his lack of emotions father after his mom passed. He couldn’t regulate his emotions and he only knew pain and control. He wasn’t ready to talk about emotions and feelings, he didn’t want to like his new stepmom when she did all the things a mother would do. He didn’t want to deal with the emotions when something happens and his world turns upside down and the one person he needs to lean on wants time and space on his own. Aston is his complete opposite: soft, he is open with emotions and tears flow as much as his mouth runs about his feelings. He is quiet, kept to himself but somehow manages to see the depth of Laith and becomes the comfort and tether Laith needs and will do anything to keep.
The twist of stepbrothers wasn’t seen right away, then it hits and you roll with it. So it’s not the typical step sibling taboo trope. There was extreme toxicity, trauma, twists and degradation, devastating twists and emotional trauma throughout. While the story develops, so does the relationship of the characters, then the dependency also grows.
June 11, 2026
“Kept” is not a romance for readers looking for healthy relationships, redemption arcs or gentle emotional healing. It is exactly what it promises to be… it’s a dark exploration of obsession, control, dependency and the blurry line between fear and attachment. The author makes that clear from the start and the story never pretends to be anything else. Read your trigger warnings if you don’t usually read the more pitch black!
That out the way.. Ashton is so easy to sympathize with. He's quiet, emotionally vulnerable, deeply devoted to the people he loves and constantly trying to survive situations far beyond his control. In contrast, Laith is a fascinatingly unsettling character.. his possessive, intimidating and convinced that his obsession is a form of devotion.
Their dynamic is uncomfortable by design and whether it works for you will depend entirely on your tolerance for very dark themes.
What surprised me most was that beneath the shocking content, there are moments of genuine emotional depth! And I loved them.. they balance it well. Ashton and Laith are both shaped by grief, loneliness and trauma, which adds to their interactions beyond the obvious power imbalance. I found myself wanting to understand them even when I didn't agree with them… which was a lot, haha.
The pacing kept me turning pages and the dual perspectives helped me understand both characters without excusing their behavior. The book as emotionally intense but so difficult to put down.
If you're a fan of dark MM romance, obsessive antiheroes, forced proximity, psychological tension and stories that live in morally gray territory then Kept delivers exactly that. Again.. Just make sure to read the content warnings first.
That out the way.. Ashton is so easy to sympathize with. He's quiet, emotionally vulnerable, deeply devoted to the people he loves and constantly trying to survive situations far beyond his control. In contrast, Laith is a fascinatingly unsettling character.. his possessive, intimidating and convinced that his obsession is a form of devotion.
Their dynamic is uncomfortable by design and whether it works for you will depend entirely on your tolerance for very dark themes.
What surprised me most was that beneath the shocking content, there are moments of genuine emotional depth! And I loved them.. they balance it well. Ashton and Laith are both shaped by grief, loneliness and trauma, which adds to their interactions beyond the obvious power imbalance. I found myself wanting to understand them even when I didn't agree with them… which was a lot, haha.
The pacing kept me turning pages and the dual perspectives helped me understand both characters without excusing their behavior. The book as emotionally intense but so difficult to put down.
If you're a fan of dark MM romance, obsessive antiheroes, forced proximity, psychological tension and stories that live in morally gray territory then Kept delivers exactly that. Again.. Just make sure to read the content warnings first.
April 19, 2026
Review of _Kept_ by Ardis Thorne
My First impression
I expected the worst when I read the content warnings, and I was almost right. But when I tell you I was physically unable to put this book down — lord save my soul. This book is a piece of art.
What the books about
"Kept" follows two male leads: one possessive, controlling Dom with daddy issues and a temper, and one ultra-soft cinnamon roll who really loves his mom. The bully becomes the hunter and the victim becomes the prey. This novel contains morally complex characters and relationships that do not, under any circumstances, reflect healthy real-world dynamics.
What worked / What didn’t
The tension cuts deep, both sexual and non-sexual. The emotional stakes are relentless and the chemistry is brutal in the best way. My main critique is character development. While the author does touch on it and our cinnamon roll has an epiphany, about two-thirds into the book the plot accelerates and overshadows the character arcs. The healing also feels slightly rushed. I would have liked more time with how our sub heals, both physically and emotionally, before being thrown into the next disaster.
Who would like it
If you like possessive/controlling Doms, forced proximity, heart-wrenching plot twists, and ‘hurt him and you die’ energy, then this book is for you.
Check warnings: kidnapping, dubious consent, threats of violence, death of family members (off-page), grief and trauma, harassment/intimidation ect.
My Rating
4/5 – Dark, addictive, and emotionally brutal in the best way. It took me 6 hours to read because it was so captivating.
Yours sincerely
Asha
My First impression
I expected the worst when I read the content warnings, and I was almost right. But when I tell you I was physically unable to put this book down — lord save my soul. This book is a piece of art.
What the books about
"Kept" follows two male leads: one possessive, controlling Dom with daddy issues and a temper, and one ultra-soft cinnamon roll who really loves his mom. The bully becomes the hunter and the victim becomes the prey. This novel contains morally complex characters and relationships that do not, under any circumstances, reflect healthy real-world dynamics.
What worked / What didn’t
The tension cuts deep, both sexual and non-sexual. The emotional stakes are relentless and the chemistry is brutal in the best way. My main critique is character development. While the author does touch on it and our cinnamon roll has an epiphany, about two-thirds into the book the plot accelerates and overshadows the character arcs. The healing also feels slightly rushed. I would have liked more time with how our sub heals, both physically and emotionally, before being thrown into the next disaster.
Who would like it
If you like possessive/controlling Doms, forced proximity, heart-wrenching plot twists, and ‘hurt him and you die’ energy, then this book is for you.
Check warnings: kidnapping, dubious consent, threats of violence, death of family members (off-page), grief and trauma, harassment/intimidation ect.
My Rating
4/5 – Dark, addictive, and emotionally brutal in the best way. It took me 6 hours to read because it was so captivating.
Yours sincerely
Asha
May 28, 2026
I received this as an ARC, and if you're picking this up expecting a romance with a few dark elements sprinkled on top, you're reading the wrong book. This is dark, not as in pitch black but more as in high bully with extra trauma, punishing of sorts. The warnings are there for a reason, and the story doesn't try to soften its edges or make its characters more palatable than they are.
What I enjoyed most was that the book commits fully to its premise. Laith isn't written as a misunderstood sweetheart pretending to be dangerous, and Ashton isn't magically equipped to fix everything. Their relationship is obsessive, messy, uncomfortable at times, and honestly that's what made it work for me. It constantly walks that line between devotion and destruction, and I found myself unable to look away.
I will say that some parts felt a little rushed, particularly early on when the story throws you straight into the chaos, but once I settled into the dynamic between the characters, I was hooked. There were several moments where I found myself thinking, "Well, this is completely unhealthy"... and then immediately turning the page anyway.
Overall, a strong 4.5★ from me. Dark, toxic, emotional, and absolutely not for everyone—but if morally questionable characters, obsession, and relationships that blur every line are your thing, this one delivers.
What I enjoyed most was that the book commits fully to its premise. Laith isn't written as a misunderstood sweetheart pretending to be dangerous, and Ashton isn't magically equipped to fix everything. Their relationship is obsessive, messy, uncomfortable at times, and honestly that's what made it work for me. It constantly walks that line between devotion and destruction, and I found myself unable to look away.
I will say that some parts felt a little rushed, particularly early on when the story throws you straight into the chaos, but once I settled into the dynamic between the characters, I was hooked. There were several moments where I found myself thinking, "Well, this is completely unhealthy"... and then immediately turning the page anyway.
Overall, a strong 4.5★ from me. Dark, toxic, emotional, and absolutely not for everyone—but if morally questionable characters, obsession, and relationships that blur every line are your thing, this one delivers.
July 11, 2026
This was such a good read! If you love dark, taboo romance, this one absolutely delivered. It has stepbrothers, grief, a possessive and slightly unhinged MMC, plenty of tension, and some really good spice. Definitely check the trigger warnings before picking this one up because it won't be for everyone.
Laith was honestly a little crazy... and I loved every second of it. 😂 His obsession and protectiveness made him such an entertaining character to read, while Ashton balanced him perfectly. I found myself rooting for them the entire time.
One thing I really appreciated was that this wasn't the typical stepbrother romance where you can predict every plot point from the beginning. It took the story in directions I wasn't expecting, and there was one twist that completely caught me off guard. My heart absolutely broke for these characters, and I ended up far more emotionally invested than I anticipated.
My only complaint is that I wanted more. The story felt a little rushed in the beginning, and I honestly would have happily read another 200 pages. I wanted more time with these characters, more emotional depth, and just... more of everything.
Overall, this was a solid 4 star read for me. Dark, emotional, taboo, and addictive, with characters I won't be forgetting anytime soon.
Laith was honestly a little crazy... and I loved every second of it. 😂 His obsession and protectiveness made him such an entertaining character to read, while Ashton balanced him perfectly. I found myself rooting for them the entire time.
One thing I really appreciated was that this wasn't the typical stepbrother romance where you can predict every plot point from the beginning. It took the story in directions I wasn't expecting, and there was one twist that completely caught me off guard. My heart absolutely broke for these characters, and I ended up far more emotionally invested than I anticipated.
My only complaint is that I wanted more. The story felt a little rushed in the beginning, and I honestly would have happily read another 200 pages. I wanted more time with these characters, more emotional depth, and just... more of everything.
Overall, this was a solid 4 star read for me. Dark, emotional, taboo, and addictive, with characters I won't be forgetting anytime soon.
June 5, 2026
First let start off by saying...CHECK YOUR TRIGGERS LADIES AND GENTS... this story isn't for the weak at heart and will have your emotions all over the place. Now lets get into it...
To say Ashton and Laith relationship is toxic and unhealthy is putting it lightly. They both definitely need therapy, one more than the other (cough cough) Laith. Ash comes off as sweet, shy and very much someone who doesn't mind going unnoticed. Unfortunately for him he also has a sweet doe eyes and soft features that Laith can't resist. 2 years is a long time to linger in the background ground openly stalking you prey, and that is something Laith excels at. Laith personality screams I might be a psychopath and i'm not 100% sure he knows the difference between love and obsession. Either way its clear that Ash and Laith are co dependent when it comes to each other, and while Laith is a walking RED FLAG...Ash seems to know how to thame him to an extent.
I'd like to see how they turn out 5 years after college, i think that would be interesting. I would like to think by then Ash would figure out what makes Laith tick. Highly recommend this book but again I can not express enough that this story can be triggering. So do your research before you dive in, this story goes from 0 to 10 real quick!
To say Ashton and Laith relationship is toxic and unhealthy is putting it lightly. They both definitely need therapy, one more than the other (cough cough) Laith. Ash comes off as sweet, shy and very much someone who doesn't mind going unnoticed. Unfortunately for him he also has a sweet doe eyes and soft features that Laith can't resist. 2 years is a long time to linger in the background ground openly stalking you prey, and that is something Laith excels at. Laith personality screams I might be a psychopath and i'm not 100% sure he knows the difference between love and obsession. Either way its clear that Ash and Laith are co dependent when it comes to each other, and while Laith is a walking RED FLAG...Ash seems to know how to thame him to an extent.
I'd like to see how they turn out 5 years after college, i think that would be interesting. I would like to think by then Ash would figure out what makes Laith tick. Highly recommend this book but again I can not express enough that this story can be triggering. So do your research before you dive in, this story goes from 0 to 10 real quick!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 30, 2026
I don't feel saying I loved this book is appropriate given that parts of this book is dark and uncomfortable but this book made me feel a wide range of emotions but ultimately despite the darkness of Laith I was still wanting him and Ashton to be together.
Laith struggled with his feelings. He could not regulate his anger and he did not know how to properly show he cared. He is a Dom through and through and Ashton is a sub however there were no safe word practices as once Laith lost his temper he very rarely could be brought back.
Laith loved Ashton the best he can and he also loved Ashton's mum the best he could. If you try and see the relationship through each character's eyes you will understand the depth of this books writing as the writing of this book really makes you feel it.
I would recommend you check the trigger warnings and also don't go in expecting this to be a regular romance I am sure you will enjoy the feeling this book gives you and see what Laith and Ashton are together.
** I received my copy of this as an ARC and I’m happily leaving my review voluntarily **
Laith struggled with his feelings. He could not regulate his anger and he did not know how to properly show he cared. He is a Dom through and through and Ashton is a sub however there were no safe word practices as once Laith lost his temper he very rarely could be brought back.
Laith loved Ashton the best he can and he also loved Ashton's mum the best he could. If you try and see the relationship through each character's eyes you will understand the depth of this books writing as the writing of this book really makes you feel it.
I would recommend you check the trigger warnings and also don't go in expecting this to be a regular romance I am sure you will enjoy the feeling this book gives you and see what Laith and Ashton are together.
** I received my copy of this as an ARC and I’m happily leaving my review voluntarily **
April 8, 2026
It not the darkest book I have read but it was really good.
Ashton has been avoid Laith like the plague, Laith is obsessed with Ashton to the point he kidnaps him so he can break him into being with him. I would have loved to have learned a little more about why Ashton was avoiding Laith but I would also have loved a little more to why Laith was obsessed with Ashton.
I loved the close relationship between Ashton and his mum Holly. I did get why Laith seemed standoffish with his dad Darak with they way he spoke about what it was like after his mum died. But I loved that Holly wasn't put off by him and was determined to try and fix things.
Was their tears in my eyes when the boys got the news from France yes, yes I did. More so when Ashton seemed to abandon Laith the way Laith dad did with his mum.
It is a good story just remember to read those triggers as Laith likes to take more than Ashton is willing to give at times. But at the same time Laith dom side to Ashton sub side works.
Ashton has been avoid Laith like the plague, Laith is obsessed with Ashton to the point he kidnaps him so he can break him into being with him. I would have loved to have learned a little more about why Ashton was avoiding Laith but I would also have loved a little more to why Laith was obsessed with Ashton.
I loved the close relationship between Ashton and his mum Holly. I did get why Laith seemed standoffish with his dad Darak with they way he spoke about what it was like after his mum died. But I loved that Holly wasn't put off by him and was determined to try and fix things.
Was their tears in my eyes when the boys got the news from France yes, yes I did. More so when Ashton seemed to abandon Laith the way Laith dad did with his mum.
It is a good story just remember to read those triggers as Laith likes to take more than Ashton is willing to give at times. But at the same time Laith dom side to Ashton sub side works.
April 28, 2026
If you love dark romance, forced proximity, bully, enemies to lovers then this book will be right up your alley! However, I strongly encourage you to check your triggers before proceeding. This book tore at my heartstrings. We have one very strong emotions MMC and one Golden Retriever MMC. Two complete opposites. Laith must have complete control, extremely dominating, obsessive, can be cruel, protective, but has a small place in his heart for love. We also have another MMC Ashton that is submissive, gentle, loving, cares and loves very deeply for who he loves. But when they come together opposites attract. Both men have been through hell and have lost their loved ones. They have endured a lot of deep pain.
I really liked this book. At the same time, it was an emotional read for me. I struggled with Laith, and his cruelness and abuse at times. My heart went out to Ashton. I felt it hard to like him. I do have strong feelings that Ashton is the one that can break down Laith’s very strong walls! But since I don’t think their story is over I will be for sure picking up the next one!
I really liked this book. At the same time, it was an emotional read for me. I struggled with Laith, and his cruelness and abuse at times. My heart went out to Ashton. I felt it hard to like him. I do have strong feelings that Ashton is the one that can break down Laith’s very strong walls! But since I don’t think their story is over I will be for sure picking up the next one!
April 16, 2026
I went into Kept by Ardis Thorne wanting to enjoy it, but ultimately, it just wasn’t for me. The relationship between Laith and Ashton felt confusing and rushed. It seemed to shift quckly from abusive to romantic, which made the dynamic hard to fully understand or believe.
Throughout the story, I struggled to tell whether Ashton genuinely wanted to be with Laith. He often came across as tense and cautious, which made the relationship feel uncertain rather than emotionally grounded. After a later tragic event, the connection between them seemed to lean heavily on shared trauma, which made it even harder for me to genuinely see their bond.
I really wanted to like Laith because there were moments where he showed a softer, more protective side, but those were often overshadowed by possessive and abusive behavior that made it difficult to root for him.
This was not a terrible book, it just didn’t quite work for me personally.
Throughout the story, I struggled to tell whether Ashton genuinely wanted to be with Laith. He often came across as tense and cautious, which made the relationship feel uncertain rather than emotionally grounded. After a later tragic event, the connection between them seemed to lean heavily on shared trauma, which made it even harder for me to genuinely see their bond.
I really wanted to like Laith because there were moments where he showed a softer, more protective side, but those were often overshadowed by possessive and abusive behavior that made it difficult to root for him.
This was not a terrible book, it just didn’t quite work for me personally.
May 27, 2026
I’ll say it plainly: I devoured this book. It’s dark, disturbing, and incredibly good. I had a hard time putting it down long enough to work or get through daily chores. I honestly wished there were an audiobook version so I could stay immersed in it all day.
This is a dark psychological romance centered around school enemies turned stepbrothers, both carrying heavy emotional baggage. The two MMCs are twisted in their own strangely endearing ways, each navigating trauma and the tragedies life throws at them. Reading this felt like being on a roller coaster — I never knew what was coming next. The pacing, tone, emotional depth… everything worked perfectly for me.
Definitely check the trigger warnings at the beginning, because this book dives into some heavy material. But if you’re comfortable with darker themes, it’s absolutely worth jumping into.
This is a dark psychological romance centered around school enemies turned stepbrothers, both carrying heavy emotional baggage. The two MMCs are twisted in their own strangely endearing ways, each navigating trauma and the tragedies life throws at them. Reading this felt like being on a roller coaster — I never knew what was coming next. The pacing, tone, emotional depth… everything worked perfectly for me.
Definitely check the trigger warnings at the beginning, because this book dives into some heavy material. But if you’re comfortable with darker themes, it’s absolutely worth jumping into.
March 31, 2026
Kept by Ardis Thorne
This book had me on the edge. At first I thought this was hazing at its finest but no. It goes so much deeper than that! The action starts right away in the first few chapters which had me hooked and made it difficult to put down! There were twists I didn’t see coming. I found myself cursing the author, “No, you didn’t!”
This is a story about violence, control, grief, and love but not all in the best ways. Definitely worth the read. Ardis Thorne writes in a believable relatable way that can leave you feeling devastated yet fulfilled.
I received a copy of Kept as an ARC reader. This is my independent and voluntary review. I’d like to thank Ardis Thorne for allowing me to come along on the journey. It’s been quite a ride!
This book had me on the edge. At first I thought this was hazing at its finest but no. It goes so much deeper than that! The action starts right away in the first few chapters which had me hooked and made it difficult to put down! There were twists I didn’t see coming. I found myself cursing the author, “No, you didn’t!”
This is a story about violence, control, grief, and love but not all in the best ways. Definitely worth the read. Ardis Thorne writes in a believable relatable way that can leave you feeling devastated yet fulfilled.
I received a copy of Kept as an ARC reader. This is my independent and voluntary review. I’d like to thank Ardis Thorne for allowing me to come along on the journey. It’s been quite a ride!
April 5, 2026
Talk about a book that has you captivated by the first page. Reading the synopsis i was under the impression this was a college hazing story, but Ardis took that thought and ran the opposite direction with it.
Laith is all Alpha male, dominating, assertive, and protective. Ashton is the pleaser, docile, and submissive. Together they find their own path and they don't care who or what gets in their way.
This book had me all in my feels, I think Ardis was able to extract every one of them from me. The ability to connect with the characters was so well done and twists and turns leave you questioning what you've read while leaving you begging for more.
Although I am all for this type of literature if you have triggers please review the trigger warnings before reading.
Laith is all Alpha male, dominating, assertive, and protective. Ashton is the pleaser, docile, and submissive. Together they find their own path and they don't care who or what gets in their way.
This book had me all in my feels, I think Ardis was able to extract every one of them from me. The ability to connect with the characters was so well done and twists and turns leave you questioning what you've read while leaving you begging for more.
Although I am all for this type of literature if you have triggers please review the trigger warnings before reading.
June 1, 2026
This was an incredibly dark book. I had to put it down several times because of the subject matter and pick back up. From the start it brings the reader into the terror felt by Ashton as he was literally hunted by his soon to be stepbrother and raped. Then later as he’s abused by some of the other guys he goes to school with. It takes the reader on a journey through the mind of someone who falls in love with their abuser and this time it works out. Laith loves Ashton, he just doesn’t know how to express himself or how to handle any emotions. He takes his emotions out on Ashton because he’s there and because he loves him back .. the old cliche we always hurt the ones we love.
It’s a good read
It’s a good read
June 5, 2026
This book hits the ground running from the very first page and never really lets up. The tension and dynamic between the MM characters, Laith and Ashton, are anything but ordinary, making for a story that constantly keeps you on edge. Definitely check the trigger warnings before diving in, because this one goes to some dark places. If those topics don’t bother you, you’re in for a wild ride.
The relationship between the main characters wasn’t entirely my cup of tea, but it didn’t take away from the story itself. The plot is packed with twists and turns, including some major surprises I never saw coming. Every time I thought I had things figured out, something new happened that kept me turning the pages to see what would happen next.
The relationship between the main characters wasn’t entirely my cup of tea, but it didn’t take away from the story itself. The plot is packed with twists and turns, including some major surprises I never saw coming. Every time I thought I had things figured out, something new happened that kept me turning the pages to see what would happen next.
April 21, 2026
"He is a nightmare, but he's my nightmare"
4.5 stars! ⭐
1st person POV Dual
MM
Plot 4/5😲😳😭😅
Spice 3.5/5🔥
Non con
Dub con
Abuse
Manipulation
Death of Parents
What a freaking ride! My goodness! I didn't know what to expect going into this book but let me tell you it wasn't that! The emotions this story takes you on is a damn roller coaster of toxicity, manipulation and possessiveness! And just when I think Laith will have some big change of heart or redeeming quality come out, something else happens!
My only "issue" would be that I wish there was more backstory at the beginning of this book, you really jump starting into the drama and it doesn't stop!
4.5 stars! ⭐
1st person POV Dual
MM
Plot 4/5😲😳😭😅
Spice 3.5/5🔥
Non con
Dub con
Abuse
Manipulation
Death of Parents
What a freaking ride! My goodness! I didn't know what to expect going into this book but let me tell you it wasn't that! The emotions this story takes you on is a damn roller coaster of toxicity, manipulation and possessiveness! And just when I think Laith will have some big change of heart or redeeming quality come out, something else happens!
My only "issue" would be that I wish there was more backstory at the beginning of this book, you really jump starting into the drama and it doesn't stop!
May 24, 2026
I knew going into this that it would be a dark read. I’ll admit that, in the beginning, a lot of the scenes felt very violent and uncomfortable to read — particularly the non-con at the start.
That said, I have to give Ms. Thorne credit for the character development. The characters didn’t feel like they were there purely for smut value; they had genuine growth and emotional depth.
I did find Ash a little weak in places, and I struggled to like Laith at first, but both improved for me as the story went on.
All in all, four stars.
I received this as an advanced copy from the author.
That said, I have to give Ms. Thorne credit for the character development. The characters didn’t feel like they were there purely for smut value; they had genuine growth and emotional depth.
I did find Ash a little weak in places, and I struggled to like Laith at first, but both improved for me as the story went on.
All in all, four stars.
I received this as an advanced copy from the author.
April 7, 2026
Dark romance for sure
So well written but definitely dark. What starts out as a bullying situation becomes an uncomfortable relationship between two guys. Ashton is in it out of fear while Laith is severely dominant over Ashton. As the story progresses a lot happens to our main men which morphs their relationship to one where they both love and need one another. Unfortunately, someone is out to hurt them. This was a great book with lots of passion, lots of pain, lots of spice.
So well written but definitely dark. What starts out as a bullying situation becomes an uncomfortable relationship between two guys. Ashton is in it out of fear while Laith is severely dominant over Ashton. As the story progresses a lot happens to our main men which morphs their relationship to one where they both love and need one another. Unfortunately, someone is out to hurt them. This was a great book with lots of passion, lots of pain, lots of spice.
May 29, 2026
Be prepared. This author doesn’t play and it gets dark in a hurry. I was biting my nails only minutes in. It does level out a bit in the middle then drags you back down. Full of actions, moments that will bring tears to your eyes and even a few that will have you saying awe. This is technically a step brother romance but it more of an after the fact. Does this fact take away from the story? No it’s a really good dark read that had me hanging on every page but it doesn’t come with the typical step brother vibe. Highly recommend this is you love a dark and dirty read.
June 1, 2026
I did not like the beginning of this book. I feel like the r@pe scenes, could’ve been something completely different. It lowkey seems like Stockholm Syndrome. I’m sure several will disagree and that’s totally fine. The idea of this book without those first sexual scenes, is great! I love a good stepbrother romance/dark romance. The deaths rolling up like that though, WOW. Did not see that coming. That was just heartbreaking. 💔 And Ashton realizing Laith truly did care he just didn’t know how to express it in a way “normal” people do. 😭😭😭
June 16, 2026
Good read but dark!
Multiple triggers so readers need to be wary and sure they can handle it.
I found the story interesting and flowed nicely, which was easy to read. Some good twists along the way. I felt the story jumped straight in to it so there was no "building up" which I liked - some stories take a few chapters but not this one!
However I did feel details were missing in some sections and had to re-read a couple of paragraphs to make connections.
I would definitely recommend to other readers who wouldn't be affected by the triggers.
Multiple triggers so readers need to be wary and sure they can handle it.
I found the story interesting and flowed nicely, which was easy to read. Some good twists along the way. I felt the story jumped straight in to it so there was no "building up" which I liked - some stories take a few chapters but not this one!
However I did feel details were missing in some sections and had to re-read a couple of paragraphs to make connections.
I would definitely recommend to other readers who wouldn't be affected by the triggers.
April 3, 2026
Kept is unlike most dark romance I’ve read previously. Ash the sweet lovable pushover falls prey to bullies. Somewhere in there one of his bullies Laith really falls head over heels for Ash but in his brooding controlling way. Ash experiences violence and loss, all while trying to navigate his relationship with Laith, who ends up becoming his stepbrother and secret lover. This taboo relationship has its twists and the book is phenomenal.
April 25, 2026
ARC REVIEW. This book was dark and I immensely enjoyed it. Do I think it should have been a romance? Probably not, maybe more of an erotic horror, BUT I enjoy darker and sadder themes so I personally would not deduct stars for thag. It made me cry and parts took me by surprise. I really appreciate getting this as an ARC. I do which there was an epilogue set a few years into the future simply because I wanted more of the MMC’s. Highly recommend if you enjoy a morally grey/black mmc!
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