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The Darkling Chronicles #1
White Mountain
Amongst our modern world lies another, an archaic and hidden world of tradition, sorcery and magic.
As dark demons awaken from our past, the last remaining wizards are being hunted and murdered by a changeling of terrifying strength.
Attacked and drained of most of his powers, a dying sorcerer must race against time to save himself, and the fate of all, from an enemy intent on cleansing the planet of humanity...
Darkness spreads as friendships, betrayals and horrifying truths await...
As dark demons awaken from our past, the last remaining wizards are being hunted and murdered by a changeling of terrifying strength.
Attacked and drained of most of his powers, a dying sorcerer must race against time to save himself, and the fate of all, from an enemy intent on cleansing the planet of humanity...
Darkness spreads as friendships, betrayals and horrifying truths await...
432 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 1, 2014
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Sophie E. Tallis
8 books40 followersI am a published author and illustrator and full member of The Society of Authors.
I currently live in the Cotswolds with my family, my four enormous white wolves and about a dozen wild ducks! I was a full-time teacher for 16 years and now have a dream job, working in a library surrounded by books all day! My first passion has always been for writing stories and poetry, which I have done since I was a child. A painter and artist, I divide my time between writing and my artwork. I adore travelling when I get the chance, and have a profound love of landscapes, particularly those of New Zealand (where I spent four glorious months travelling) and Dartmoor, which I find very inspiring. My tastes are wildly eclectic in all things but I particularly love fantasy, science-fiction and literary fiction. I enjoy stargazing, playing chess, watching films and buying yet more bookcases for my growing library! I’d describe myself as a lover of wild places and the written word and am a bit of a self-confessed nerd! When asked what my interests are, I usually smile and reply, “EVERYTHING!”
I currently live in the Cotswolds with my family, my four enormous white wolves and about a dozen wild ducks! I was a full-time teacher for 16 years and now have a dream job, working in a library surrounded by books all day! My first passion has always been for writing stories and poetry, which I have done since I was a child. A painter and artist, I divide my time between writing and my artwork. I adore travelling when I get the chance, and have a profound love of landscapes, particularly those of New Zealand (where I spent four glorious months travelling) and Dartmoor, which I find very inspiring. My tastes are wildly eclectic in all things but I particularly love fantasy, science-fiction and literary fiction. I enjoy stargazing, playing chess, watching films and buying yet more bookcases for my growing library! I’d describe myself as a lover of wild places and the written word and am a bit of a self-confessed nerd! When asked what my interests are, I usually smile and reply, “EVERYTHING!”
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March 14, 2015
A magical world, as rich as a Tolkien novel, an intrepid band of brave souls as they battle against ultimate evil. Sounds heavy but this one was almost as much fun as a Harry Potter book!
January 18, 2015
I understand this book has been updated, re editing and republished from its original launch, this time by Grimbold Publishing/Kristell Ink. I have been working through some of their books in their catalogue and find them to be fascinating reads, some exceptional stories. This book White Mountain continues this standard and surpassed my expectations.
I have found it enthralling, even believable, here the main characters for good, wizard, Mr. Marval Agyck, his lifelong friend the green dragon with orange bejewelled belly, Gralen, and young for a witch, Wendya, are all endearing characters. They live in a world alongside the human world, yet hidden from human eyes. The reader travels the quests and trials with these characters through thick and thin. They have wrung all emotions out of me, and I have been both child and adult on this journey of theirs
Then there are evil characters, with one main one, he is power hungry and will take what he wants in pursuit of his aim, regardless of costs, pain, life and/ or death and destruction. Sophie Tallis has created an evil changeling that to be honest attains the worst of traits I have read or that can be compared to in a long while.
The White Witch in the Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe is not quite in this league. Closer might be Lord Saul in Tolkien's stories. Yet, this story telling, and world she has created stand shoulder to shoulder with other classical story quests where good v evil is fought for in mythological or make believe worlds, worlds as mentioned, but I think this is on a par maybe even better than such as Alan Garner's, The Weirdstone of Brisingamen, or modern examples like, The Flight of the Griffin by C.M. Gray and I adore these books and others previously mentioned.
At first, I thought this was an older children's or YA's book, but as events unfolded I realised that this is one of those exceptional and magical books that is for any and all ages from 10-11 to 100. To me it has all the elements of a quest, fantasy world classic. It has a dark side that is definitely for adults to ponder over.
There is travel throughout the quest, to other magical kingdoms across the globe, Sophie's use of description had me there in the Amazon, in ancient Russian/Siberian forests, in Africa and the Himalayas...her knowledge of geography enriches this story for us the readers.
The linking in of the state of the human world and the human lot as it stands now also made me think. Not always a good place...it added to the feeling of authenticity that such a world really exists.
For countless generations people have talked of dragons, wizards, witches, elves, dwarfs and so on. You will find them all in this wonderful story, though names at times differ, old names like fyrren are used, but Ms Tallis ensures we know that dragons are the same.
It started as if a children's adventure but ends in a very adult place, an apocalyptic battle, aspects of which had tears streaming down my face. Neither is all resolved at the end. The resolution is right for that time and place, but is left open for further adventures that I hope will be written and take place in future works in this created world.
If you like any of the books I mentioned within this review you will also love this too. I have no hesitation but give this 5 stars+, and this is a story I will read over and over again. I highly recommend it.
I have found it enthralling, even believable, here the main characters for good, wizard, Mr. Marval Agyck, his lifelong friend the green dragon with orange bejewelled belly, Gralen, and young for a witch, Wendya, are all endearing characters. They live in a world alongside the human world, yet hidden from human eyes. The reader travels the quests and trials with these characters through thick and thin. They have wrung all emotions out of me, and I have been both child and adult on this journey of theirs
Then there are evil characters, with one main one, he is power hungry and will take what he wants in pursuit of his aim, regardless of costs, pain, life and/ or death and destruction. Sophie Tallis has created an evil changeling that to be honest attains the worst of traits I have read or that can be compared to in a long while.
The White Witch in the Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe is not quite in this league. Closer might be Lord Saul in Tolkien's stories. Yet, this story telling, and world she has created stand shoulder to shoulder with other classical story quests where good v evil is fought for in mythological or make believe worlds, worlds as mentioned, but I think this is on a par maybe even better than such as Alan Garner's, The Weirdstone of Brisingamen, or modern examples like, The Flight of the Griffin by C.M. Gray and I adore these books and others previously mentioned.
At first, I thought this was an older children's or YA's book, but as events unfolded I realised that this is one of those exceptional and magical books that is for any and all ages from 10-11 to 100. To me it has all the elements of a quest, fantasy world classic. It has a dark side that is definitely for adults to ponder over.
There is travel throughout the quest, to other magical kingdoms across the globe, Sophie's use of description had me there in the Amazon, in ancient Russian/Siberian forests, in Africa and the Himalayas...her knowledge of geography enriches this story for us the readers.
The linking in of the state of the human world and the human lot as it stands now also made me think. Not always a good place...it added to the feeling of authenticity that such a world really exists.
For countless generations people have talked of dragons, wizards, witches, elves, dwarfs and so on. You will find them all in this wonderful story, though names at times differ, old names like fyrren are used, but Ms Tallis ensures we know that dragons are the same.
It started as if a children's adventure but ends in a very adult place, an apocalyptic battle, aspects of which had tears streaming down my face. Neither is all resolved at the end. The resolution is right for that time and place, but is left open for further adventures that I hope will be written and take place in future works in this created world.
If you like any of the books I mentioned within this review you will also love this too. I have no hesitation but give this 5 stars+, and this is a story I will read over and over again. I highly recommend it.
January 15, 2015
White Mountain chronicles the journey of an aged wizard and his entourage as they seek to destroy a powerful enemy. The wizard, Mr. Agyk, brings with him a loyal dragon named Gralen and Wendya, a young witch.
The characters in this book were well-formed and likable. Mr. Agyk’s dilemma is the catalyst for story, so we are introduced to him first. He’s a mix between Gandalf and Dumbledore, a wise, kindly old man most readers will enjoy and root for. Gralen, the loyal but sometimes impulsive dragon, vows to help Mr. Agyk whether he likes it or not. Gralen brings childlike wonder and bold bravery to the tale. Wendya, the young witch, is a character the female readers will identify with. She’s experienced great loss in her life, but is willing to sacrifice everything she has for the greater good. Our villian, Morreck, threatens not only the world of Wizards, mages, and dragons, but the world as a whole.
Tallis has created a world within our world, a world inhabited by the bravest of warriors and the foulest of creatures. From the mountains to the jungle to underground caverns, the fast-paced story takes us places we can envision so clearly we feel as if we could step into the scenery. Every scene is detailed to perfection. Every sense is engaged.
In a way, this is a typical high-fantasy quest story, but that’s where ‘typical’ ends. This is probably the best fantasy tale I’ve read in a long time. It truly exceeded my expectations, and trust me, my expectations are high when it comes to fantasy. I really think this book (and series) has a ton of potential and widespread appeal if non-fantasy readers will give it a chance. It’s easier to read than LOTR with characters as ‘fun’ and engaging as those in Harry Potter. The stakes are high and I was breathless with anticipation several times during this story. I wish I could share the ending with you because it was so unexpected and incredible, but I’m afraid Gralen might come after me. So, you’ll have to read it for yourself.
The characters in this book were well-formed and likable. Mr. Agyk’s dilemma is the catalyst for story, so we are introduced to him first. He’s a mix between Gandalf and Dumbledore, a wise, kindly old man most readers will enjoy and root for. Gralen, the loyal but sometimes impulsive dragon, vows to help Mr. Agyk whether he likes it or not. Gralen brings childlike wonder and bold bravery to the tale. Wendya, the young witch, is a character the female readers will identify with. She’s experienced great loss in her life, but is willing to sacrifice everything she has for the greater good. Our villian, Morreck, threatens not only the world of Wizards, mages, and dragons, but the world as a whole.
Tallis has created a world within our world, a world inhabited by the bravest of warriors and the foulest of creatures. From the mountains to the jungle to underground caverns, the fast-paced story takes us places we can envision so clearly we feel as if we could step into the scenery. Every scene is detailed to perfection. Every sense is engaged.
In a way, this is a typical high-fantasy quest story, but that’s where ‘typical’ ends. This is probably the best fantasy tale I’ve read in a long time. It truly exceeded my expectations, and trust me, my expectations are high when it comes to fantasy. I really think this book (and series) has a ton of potential and widespread appeal if non-fantasy readers will give it a chance. It’s easier to read than LOTR with characters as ‘fun’ and engaging as those in Harry Potter. The stakes are high and I was breathless with anticipation several times during this story. I wish I could share the ending with you because it was so unexpected and incredible, but I’m afraid Gralen might come after me. So, you’ll have to read it for yourself.
October 4, 2015
White Mountain Review.
White Mountain, by Sophie E. Tallis is a traditional fantasy story about the fight between good and evil. It is a story suitable for the young and the more seasoned.
The start and middle of this story takes the reader on an interesting journey to a number of magical places. The world building is reminiscent of Tolkien with the detail of names, places and history, but written in and easy to read and simple style. This is not an easy thing, so well done Ellis.
The characters are really enjoyable to read about. Mr A. Marval, a wizard who takes the main role in the story, is well developed and unique enough to not be too comparable to other wizards in other well known stories. I loved Garlen, how could I not, he’s courageous and loyal, and a dragon.
I did not feel any strong emotional connection to the characters, however, until the end. For me, it was hard to do anything more than sympathise for the plight of their journey. I prefer the next level of really having empathy for them, but I guess that can’t be helped as it’s a very individual thing.
There were times the story dragged a little and perhaps it could have been condensed a little, but that, again, is just my personal opinion. The story is still really good the way it is. The best part of this story for me was the battle scene towards the end. It is very well written and has interesting developments I found really grabbed my attention. The story has an emotional and satisfying ending which leaves it open for the next part of the journey.
Ellis, clearly has a wonderful imagination and the illustrations are incredible. Overall, this story didn’t wow me, but it is a very good read and enjoyable. Ellis is certainly a talented writer and there are many who will really enjoy this tale so take a look and definitely give it a read. I look forward to reading more of her stories.
White Mountain, by Sophie E. Tallis is a traditional fantasy story about the fight between good and evil. It is a story suitable for the young and the more seasoned.
The start and middle of this story takes the reader on an interesting journey to a number of magical places. The world building is reminiscent of Tolkien with the detail of names, places and history, but written in and easy to read and simple style. This is not an easy thing, so well done Ellis.
The characters are really enjoyable to read about. Mr A. Marval, a wizard who takes the main role in the story, is well developed and unique enough to not be too comparable to other wizards in other well known stories. I loved Garlen, how could I not, he’s courageous and loyal, and a dragon.
I did not feel any strong emotional connection to the characters, however, until the end. For me, it was hard to do anything more than sympathise for the plight of their journey. I prefer the next level of really having empathy for them, but I guess that can’t be helped as it’s a very individual thing.
There were times the story dragged a little and perhaps it could have been condensed a little, but that, again, is just my personal opinion. The story is still really good the way it is. The best part of this story for me was the battle scene towards the end. It is very well written and has interesting developments I found really grabbed my attention. The story has an emotional and satisfying ending which leaves it open for the next part of the journey.
Ellis, clearly has a wonderful imagination and the illustrations are incredible. Overall, this story didn’t wow me, but it is a very good read and enjoyable. Ellis is certainly a talented writer and there are many who will really enjoy this tale so take a look and definitely give it a read. I look forward to reading more of her stories.
November 1, 2014
A dying world hidden from our own. An ancient people conquered by human progress. A ruthless changeling bent on revenge and power…and a sorcerer and wyvern determined to stop him.
“An epic fantasy onion - multi-layered and prone to cause tears!”
A new epic fantasy adventure for the 21st century, full of dark magic, murder, intrigue, love, loss and blistering action set against our modern world.
With a rich interwoven mythological history, dragons, mages, wargols, fire wolves, a changeling, an oracle and a witch, epic fantasy just doesn't get better than this! Highly recommended!
“An epic fantasy onion - multi-layered and prone to cause tears!”
A new epic fantasy adventure for the 21st century, full of dark magic, murder, intrigue, love, loss and blistering action set against our modern world.
With a rich interwoven mythological history, dragons, mages, wargols, fire wolves, a changeling, an oracle and a witch, epic fantasy just doesn't get better than this! Highly recommended!
February 9, 2013
After a long stretch of reviewing seminal fantasy works it was quite refreshing to read something fresh and newly released, and it was with a certain enthusiasm that I tackled White Mountain by Sophie Tallis.
White Mountain is the first book in the Darkling Chronicles and follows the adventures of a sorcerer, Marval Agyk, the Green Wizard and his companion, the dragon, Gralen. Mr. Agyk is drawn to a distress call from an old wizarding friend in the hidden city of Issatun. When he arrives things are not quite as they seem and Mr. Agyk is captured by an ancient evil, M’Sorreck, who feeds on magic to fuel his changeling abilities. Mr. Agyk escapes, although diminished to a tiny size, and embarks upon a quest to regain his magic.
The core of any good fantasy book is a journey, whether that be a quest or a journey that a character has to make within himself. Tallis uses the plot device well—each of the main four characters has a journey to make within the novel, and for some there is further to travel in future books. As the companions complete stages in their ‘quest’ so they evolve as individuals and friends, in a believable and entertaining way.
The world of White Mountain is one that co-exists within our own, hidden away by magic and ancient skill. The races are the usual High Fantasy ones—elves are AEllfr, dwarves (the main protagonists) are Dworlls, and dragons are Fyrren. In this hidden world are ancient cities and kingdoms that we visit during the book. Tallis has a skill at description of these locations that conveys their heritage and age in a detailed manner, allowing a believable backdrop to the adventure. There is excellent ‘world-building’, another bastion of quality fantasy books, and I found myself drawn into the concealed cities she has created. There was a definite air of Tolkien and Donaldson to both the characters and locales, notably in the protagonist, M’Sorreck, who conjured memories of Lord Foul in a number of ways.
The tone of the book alters as the adventure progresses. The earlier parts of the book have a lighter, almost fairy tale quality at times, with banter and jokes, especially between Agyk and Gralen. The atmosphere shifts to being quite dark and harrowing half-way through, and by the end is fairly bleak. It will be interesting to see what vibes are set in the future books, as it may be tricky to reset the lighter atmosphere given the events at the end of book one, although they are a welcome break in the narrative.
White Mountain is a well-written and engaging read. Stylistically it is engaging, although there was a habit of capitalisation to convey shouting/yelling that irked me. Although fitting with the High Fantasy style of the book, I was left wanting this hidden world to feel more of a part of our own. Humans are mentioned, but never feature, and in many ways the book could have been set in a totally fresh fantasy world rather than our own. I’m hoping in future books that Tallis brings in more aspects of our own world, perhaps human characters, to make the hidden one a little more magical.
In summary, a good début and I look forward to the next book.
(review posted on Fantasy Book Review)
White Mountain is the first book in the Darkling Chronicles and follows the adventures of a sorcerer, Marval Agyk, the Green Wizard and his companion, the dragon, Gralen. Mr. Agyk is drawn to a distress call from an old wizarding friend in the hidden city of Issatun. When he arrives things are not quite as they seem and Mr. Agyk is captured by an ancient evil, M’Sorreck, who feeds on magic to fuel his changeling abilities. Mr. Agyk escapes, although diminished to a tiny size, and embarks upon a quest to regain his magic.
The core of any good fantasy book is a journey, whether that be a quest or a journey that a character has to make within himself. Tallis uses the plot device well—each of the main four characters has a journey to make within the novel, and for some there is further to travel in future books. As the companions complete stages in their ‘quest’ so they evolve as individuals and friends, in a believable and entertaining way.
The world of White Mountain is one that co-exists within our own, hidden away by magic and ancient skill. The races are the usual High Fantasy ones—elves are AEllfr, dwarves (the main protagonists) are Dworlls, and dragons are Fyrren. In this hidden world are ancient cities and kingdoms that we visit during the book. Tallis has a skill at description of these locations that conveys their heritage and age in a detailed manner, allowing a believable backdrop to the adventure. There is excellent ‘world-building’, another bastion of quality fantasy books, and I found myself drawn into the concealed cities she has created. There was a definite air of Tolkien and Donaldson to both the characters and locales, notably in the protagonist, M’Sorreck, who conjured memories of Lord Foul in a number of ways.
The tone of the book alters as the adventure progresses. The earlier parts of the book have a lighter, almost fairy tale quality at times, with banter and jokes, especially between Agyk and Gralen. The atmosphere shifts to being quite dark and harrowing half-way through, and by the end is fairly bleak. It will be interesting to see what vibes are set in the future books, as it may be tricky to reset the lighter atmosphere given the events at the end of book one, although they are a welcome break in the narrative.
White Mountain is a well-written and engaging read. Stylistically it is engaging, although there was a habit of capitalisation to convey shouting/yelling that irked me. Although fitting with the High Fantasy style of the book, I was left wanting this hidden world to feel more of a part of our own. Humans are mentioned, but never feature, and in many ways the book could have been set in a totally fresh fantasy world rather than our own. I’m hoping in future books that Tallis brings in more aspects of our own world, perhaps human characters, to make the hidden one a little more magical.
In summary, a good début and I look forward to the next book.
(review posted on Fantasy Book Review)
January 17, 2015
White Mountain is a great new traditional High Fantasy, and ticks all the boxes for lovers of the genre. There’s a flawed and believable hero, a suitably evil enemy, action adventure, pathos, excitement and a dragon. Ms Tallis isn’t scared to kill off characters, even if they have garnered the reader’s sympathy. She writes with a skill and emotional depth that draw the reader into the story from the very start. Her worldbuilding is impeccable and believable, her characters finely drawn and real, and the plot interesting. I particularly enjoyed the scene setting and the locations, which added a realism often missing in this sort of storytelling. A great start to a series, and a great debut.
May 19, 2013
What do you do when your friends seem to be disappearing? When the most powerful Wizards and Witches seems to be just not there anymore?
As this begins to happen the last great Wizard sets out to find out what is happening. And from here begins the last fight with the one great changling who could bring the whole world to its knees. As the powers from the magic community are literally sucked out by the changling are they too late to save the world or is there one last roll of the dice to come?
If you like Wizards, Witches, Dragons and Dwarfs this is a book for you. Chuck in a bit of good v Evil battles and the last minute twist where you least expect it and you have a very good book to read.....Enjoy!!!
As this begins to happen the last great Wizard sets out to find out what is happening. And from here begins the last fight with the one great changling who could bring the whole world to its knees. As the powers from the magic community are literally sucked out by the changling are they too late to save the world or is there one last roll of the dice to come?
If you like Wizards, Witches, Dragons and Dwarfs this is a book for you. Chuck in a bit of good v Evil battles and the last minute twist where you least expect it and you have a very good book to read.....Enjoy!!!
August 3, 2015
This novel, the first in a projected series, is set both in our world and alongside it, in the spaces between things, in the lost forests and hidden mountain caverns of an otherworld that’s almost close enough to touch. Three friends, Marvalla Agyk, his dragon companion Gralen, and the young witch Wendya, are drawn into a quest to defeat an evil changeling wizard whose dark sorcery threatens both the supernatural world and the human one. It is predicted that one of them will not survive the encounter…
It’s clear that Sophie Tallis takes great delight both in playing with language and in the natural world. She has said the novel was inspired by nature and landscape and that comes through in her writing, in the descriptions of the world the travellers pass through and the deft turns of phrase that lift this above a standard magical quest. It owes a debt to the the past masters of fantasy, to Tolkien and Lewis, and it’s a book that isn’t afraid to wear its heart on its sleeve. Traditional fantasy, maybe, but with a playful modern touch.
One aspect where the book falls down slightly is the constantly shifting point of view, particularly noticeable in the final climactic battle with the evil Morreck at his semi-living fortress. The author tries to show the perspective of the battle from the point of view of around half-a-dozen different characters, leading to a series of short, very choppy scenes that prevent the reader from becoming fully immersed in the three heroes fight for life, at a time when the story would really benefit from having just one or two viewpoint characters. But hey, I’d rather see an author trying hard and not quite hitting the mark than being lazy and not trying at all, and it’s clear Sophie Tallis has put her all into White Mountain.
The book isn’t marketed as YA, but I think it would suit early teen readers finding their way into fantasy, and anyone who takes delight in clever language and timeless storytelling.
It’s clear that Sophie Tallis takes great delight both in playing with language and in the natural world. She has said the novel was inspired by nature and landscape and that comes through in her writing, in the descriptions of the world the travellers pass through and the deft turns of phrase that lift this above a standard magical quest. It owes a debt to the the past masters of fantasy, to Tolkien and Lewis, and it’s a book that isn’t afraid to wear its heart on its sleeve. Traditional fantasy, maybe, but with a playful modern touch.
One aspect where the book falls down slightly is the constantly shifting point of view, particularly noticeable in the final climactic battle with the evil Morreck at his semi-living fortress. The author tries to show the perspective of the battle from the point of view of around half-a-dozen different characters, leading to a series of short, very choppy scenes that prevent the reader from becoming fully immersed in the three heroes fight for life, at a time when the story would really benefit from having just one or two viewpoint characters. But hey, I’d rather see an author trying hard and not quite hitting the mark than being lazy and not trying at all, and it’s clear Sophie Tallis has put her all into White Mountain.
The book isn’t marketed as YA, but I think it would suit early teen readers finding their way into fantasy, and anyone who takes delight in clever language and timeless storytelling.
March 25, 2015
This is a charming and whimsical journey full of sneaky jokes and ridiculous characters. I love it.
I went into White Mountain expecting something every different. I was anticipating a grim-dark tale of demons and curses. While there certainly are demons and curses, the grimness is downplayed in favor of a tone that puts everything in a much more unexpected light.
The names are a riot, I have to say. Like I said, I wasn't looking for humour when I went into the book, but as soon as I realized that's what was going on, most of the names got a chuckle out of me.
The world is nicely drawn and pulls you in slowly, thanks to some interesting and relatable characters. I enjoyed the dragon most of all, who sounded like Brian Blessed in my head at least.
Do pick it up if you like your fantasy with its tongue in its cheek half the time.
I went into White Mountain expecting something every different. I was anticipating a grim-dark tale of demons and curses. While there certainly are demons and curses, the grimness is downplayed in favor of a tone that puts everything in a much more unexpected light.
The names are a riot, I have to say. Like I said, I wasn't looking for humour when I went into the book, but as soon as I realized that's what was going on, most of the names got a chuckle out of me.
The world is nicely drawn and pulls you in slowly, thanks to some interesting and relatable characters. I enjoyed the dragon most of all, who sounded like Brian Blessed in my head at least.
Do pick it up if you like your fantasy with its tongue in its cheek half the time.
February 25, 2013
Review based on ARC.
In the end, it fell at three.
While I read this book, my feelings toward it changed often and dramatically. I felt that the beginning warranted closer to four stars, portions of the middle were great, portions were good, and portions were frustrating. And the end redeemed itself a little.
This book falls squarely in the "fantasy" camp. Three friends a/k/a companions find themselves on a Lord of the Rings -esque trek across a large version of our world (or else the dragon flies remarkably slow). Wizard Marval/Marvalla/M Agyk (a-hem) a/k/a the Green Wizard, dragon Gralen, and witch Wendya encounter incredibly extreme situation after incredibly extreme scenario, fighting for their lives at every turn, eventually leading to a fifty-or-so page "climactic" fight for the known universe. In between each of these incredibly extreme situations falls lengthy and involved descriptions of scenery with spatterings of "normal" conversation among(st) the friends.
The book includes "dworlls" (dwarfs), ellfrn (elves), dragons/draken (dragons/baby dragons), dwelf (cross-elves and dwarfs), wizards and witches, and various dark creatures/spirits/monsters such as dark mytes (demonic/spirit-like giant beetles), wargols (troll-like entities), and sauron..er, Morreck/m'Sorreck himself.
Right. That's one of the major issues I had with this book... not the various creatures. Like I said, I'm a fantasy-girl. The issue is that it felt like a regurgitated LOTR w/ some Harry Potter thrown in. Except with HP5-level immaturity and tantrums. M Agyk (I cringed every time I read it) was Gandalf (with some Dumbledore thrown in) .. except instead of being the "Grey" Wizard, he was Green. Wendya was the generic protagonist/Harry Potter (does not yet know (a) how strong she is or (b) about her twisted past). Gralen was Samwise/Ronald Weasley/Hagrid. Of course there are great differences, of course they are not actually the same characters.. but there were SO many times that I thought "uh-huh, LOTR" or "oh, there's HP!"
Additionally, M Agyk's thousand, Gralen's many hundreds, and even "young" Wendya's several hundred years on this planet have not stopped them from making amateur/adolescent mistakes. There were essentially tantrums, pouts, and clumsy dealings with the challenges, rather than the maturity and broad vision that would be expected from someone with at the least several hundred years of life on them. Indeed, the whole book might have been less frustrating to read if the three leads were in the late teens or early twenties. Just that -- and publishing as a YA -- would make the book seem "appropriate."
Nevertheless, there is promise with the author and the series. The descriptions, while long and sometimes gratuitous, DID bring the landscape to life and created a colorful and three-dimensional picture in my head. The loooong battle at the climax of the tale was surprisingly well done - moving between the different locations of the fighters somewhat effortlessly and mostly convincingly. Certain of the characters were even endearing and all of the characters were well-described, if not very well developed. It was easy to turn the page. I did want to know what happened next. I did tense up during the battle scenes.
Moreover, I felt that Tallis nailed the oracle scene and Agyk's first interaction with Morreck. Those scenes fall into "great." If she had limited the sheer number of life-threatening situations in one book to just a couple, if she had limited her descriptions (or, really, the need for such descriptions) to just a few (no need to cover the whole world in book 1 of a trilogy), if she had been just a little more realistic with the whole love-triangle bit (what works in a cartoon does not necessarily work in a novel), and if she had instead taken that space to develop the characters' characters (heh heh) a little more, I think the book could easily jump a star.
As is often the case w/ new fantasy writers, the second book may be leagues ahead of the 1st. I would recommend the book to YA-fantasy readers looking for something to bring back thoughts of HP and LOTR, and I would recommend to die-hard fantasy fans who aren't particular about polished writing.
Overall, THREE of five stars.
June 10, 2015
Follow three friends; Marval, a wise old wizard, Gralen one of the last dragons alive and Wendya a young witch as they travel across the world from one magical kingdom to another meeting new friends and gaining alliances against a dark force called Morreck.
Marval is alone the first time he encounters Morreck and barely gets away with his life. He needs to recover and then takes Gralen to check on their friend Wendya. She is fine but insists on coming along to help her friend and the man she thinks of as a father to her, Marval. He must regain his powers before the sixth new moon or he will fade away and die. Along their way through magical kingdoms they encounter many different beasts most who are not friendly and they endure ferocious attacks but pull together and somehow make it to safety relatively unharmed. They also meet many old friends and make amazing new ones. At the end they all come together to fight one huge battle where many lives are lost, both good and evil.
I loved this story, the characters are so believable I began to identify with them and I felt their losses and happiness at their successes. I enjoyed exploring the magical places with them and meeting the different races and beasts both good and bad. It was written so well that I could imagine what the places and people looked like easily. I got pulled into the book and felt as though I was walking or flying the same paths as the characters. My favorite parts were the pictures dotted throughout the book that the author drew herself, they are amazing and really give the reader a view of what the author imagines the places and characters to look like. I would recommend this book to all who love magical worlds, where there is evil beyond any imagination and to those who love adventure and friendship.
Marval is alone the first time he encounters Morreck and barely gets away with his life. He needs to recover and then takes Gralen to check on their friend Wendya. She is fine but insists on coming along to help her friend and the man she thinks of as a father to her, Marval. He must regain his powers before the sixth new moon or he will fade away and die. Along their way through magical kingdoms they encounter many different beasts most who are not friendly and they endure ferocious attacks but pull together and somehow make it to safety relatively unharmed. They also meet many old friends and make amazing new ones. At the end they all come together to fight one huge battle where many lives are lost, both good and evil.
I loved this story, the characters are so believable I began to identify with them and I felt their losses and happiness at their successes. I enjoyed exploring the magical places with them and meeting the different races and beasts both good and bad. It was written so well that I could imagine what the places and people looked like easily. I got pulled into the book and felt as though I was walking or flying the same paths as the characters. My favorite parts were the pictures dotted throughout the book that the author drew herself, they are amazing and really give the reader a view of what the author imagines the places and characters to look like. I would recommend this book to all who love magical worlds, where there is evil beyond any imagination and to those who love adventure and friendship.
June 10, 2015
Follow three friends; Marval, a wise old wizard, Gralen one of the last dragons alive and Wendya a young witch as they travel across the world from one magical kingdom to another meeting new friends and gaining alliances against a dark force called Morreck.
Marval is alone the first time he encounters Morreck and barely gets away with his life. He needs to recover and then takes Gralen to check on their friend Wendya. She is fine but insists on coming along to help her friend and the man she thinks of as a father to her, Marval. He must regain his powers before the sixth new moon or he will fade away and die. Along their way through magical kingdoms they encounter many different beasts most who are not friendly and they endure ferocious attacks but pull together and somehow make it to safety relatively unharmed. They also meet many old friends and make amazing new ones. At the end they all come together to fight one huge battle where many lives are lost, both good and evil.
I loved this story, the characters are so believable I began to identify with them and I felt their losses and happiness at their successes. I enjoyed exploring the magical places with them and meeting the different races and beasts both good and bad. It was written so well that I could imagine what the places and people looked like easily. I got pulled into the book and felt as though I was walking or flying the same paths as the characters. My favorite parts were the pictures dotted throughout the book that the author drew herself, they are amazing and really give the reader a view of what the author imagines the places and characters to look like. I would recommend this book to all who love magical worlds, where there is evil beyond any imagination and to those who love adventure and friendship.
Marval is alone the first time he encounters Morreck and barely gets away with his life. He needs to recover and then takes Gralen to check on their friend Wendya. She is fine but insists on coming along to help her friend and the man she thinks of as a father to her, Marval. He must regain his powers before the sixth new moon or he will fade away and die. Along their way through magical kingdoms they encounter many different beasts most who are not friendly and they endure ferocious attacks but pull together and somehow make it to safety relatively unharmed. They also meet many old friends and make amazing new ones. At the end they all come together to fight one huge battle where many lives are lost, both good and evil.
I loved this story, the characters are so believable I began to identify with them and I felt their losses and happiness at their successes. I enjoyed exploring the magical places with them and meeting the different races and beasts both good and bad. It was written so well that I could imagine what the places and people looked like easily. I got pulled into the book and felt as though I was walking or flying the same paths as the characters. My favorite parts were the pictures dotted throughout the book that the author drew herself, they are amazing and really give the reader a view of what the author imagines the places and characters to look like. I would recommend this book to all who love magical worlds, where there is evil beyond any imagination and to those who love adventure and friendship.
July 3, 2015
I loaded this book onto my Kindle after meeting Sophie at Bristolcon last year. But what with one thing and another, I hadn't managed to get around to reading it...
Amongst our modern world lies another, an archaic and hidden world of tradition, sorcery and magic. As dark demons awaken from our past, the last remaining wizards are being hunted and murdered by a changeling of terrifying strength. Attacked and drained of most of his powers, a dying sorcerer must race against time to save himself, and the fate of all, from an enemy intent on cleansing the planet of humanity... Darkness spreads as friendships, betrayals and horrifying truths await...
If you are looking for some modern twist on the classic epic Fantasy setup, this isn't it. Tallis gives us a straight Fantasy tale, complete with an evil mastermind who has been plotting the overthrow of the world for ages -- and now his plans have finally come to fruition. We have a stark demonstration of the power of said evil mastermind very early into the story. It was at this stage, I bonded with Marval and his grumpy dragon Gralen.
Read more at SFReader: White Mountain, by Sophie E. Tallis
Amongst our modern world lies another, an archaic and hidden world of tradition, sorcery and magic. As dark demons awaken from our past, the last remaining wizards are being hunted and murdered by a changeling of terrifying strength. Attacked and drained of most of his powers, a dying sorcerer must race against time to save himself, and the fate of all, from an enemy intent on cleansing the planet of humanity... Darkness spreads as friendships, betrayals and horrifying truths await...
If you are looking for some modern twist on the classic epic Fantasy setup, this isn't it. Tallis gives us a straight Fantasy tale, complete with an evil mastermind who has been plotting the overthrow of the world for ages -- and now his plans have finally come to fruition. We have a stark demonstration of the power of said evil mastermind very early into the story. It was at this stage, I bonded with Marval and his grumpy dragon Gralen.
Read more at SFReader: White Mountain, by Sophie E. Tallis
October 3, 2012
Note: please keep in mind that I am the managing editor for this book
When I first got this submission, I thought "hmm... sounds interesting." I liked the way the story unfolded, the detail on characters, enticing plotline...
Then I started reading the whole manuscript, couldn't put it down for one second, had full-body chills (and still do just by THINKING about the story), tears streaming down my face, felt anger and frustration for the characters, got to the last line and thought "oh my God, I NEED to read the next book!"
White Mountain has a fantastic story, a score of deep and detailed characters that you'll love and hate, and an epic plot that will draw you in. It is also full of beautiful line-drawing illustrations that fill out the story and help the reader visualize exactly what Sophie saw as she put this tale to paper.
I think you'll love this book as much as I did.
When I first got this submission, I thought "hmm... sounds interesting." I liked the way the story unfolded, the detail on characters, enticing plotline...
Then I started reading the whole manuscript, couldn't put it down for one second, had full-body chills (and still do just by THINKING about the story), tears streaming down my face, felt anger and frustration for the characters, got to the last line and thought "oh my God, I NEED to read the next book!"
White Mountain has a fantastic story, a score of deep and detailed characters that you'll love and hate, and an epic plot that will draw you in. It is also full of beautiful line-drawing illustrations that fill out the story and help the reader visualize exactly what Sophie saw as she put this tale to paper.
I think you'll love this book as much as I did.
November 26, 2012
I don't usually read fantasy books but was drawn in to this one from the first page by well-developed, interesting characters and dramatic settings described in vivid, painterly detail. It's a book that really hits the ground running.
The feeling of being immediately immersed in a three-dimensional, multi-sensory fantasy world caught me by surprise, given the stark but distinctive monochrome front cover. It also felt as if there was a strong back-story, as if the tale had been maturing in the author's imagination for a very long time. This impression added depth and conviction to the story, which galloped along at an exciting pace. It ends with a clever set-up for a sequel, and with such likeable characters at the heart of the book, it's good to know the story is to be continued.
I'm sure White Mountain will enchant fantasy fans of all ages. (And if I was a fantasy fan, I'd probably be giving it 5 stars!)
The feeling of being immediately immersed in a three-dimensional, multi-sensory fantasy world caught me by surprise, given the stark but distinctive monochrome front cover. It also felt as if there was a strong back-story, as if the tale had been maturing in the author's imagination for a very long time. This impression added depth and conviction to the story, which galloped along at an exciting pace. It ends with a clever set-up for a sequel, and with such likeable characters at the heart of the book, it's good to know the story is to be continued.
I'm sure White Mountain will enchant fantasy fans of all ages. (And if I was a fantasy fan, I'd probably be giving it 5 stars!)
March 29, 2013
I have to say I really really loved this book, not just because it has a wonderful brave dragon in it and some amazing illustrations, but also because the story is gripping and exciting.
The story follows two friends Mr Agyk a wise old wizard and Gralen a large portly green dragon. They receive a message from a wizard friend of Mr. Agyk who appears to be in trouble and set out to help him. This is the start of an adventure that tests them to the limit and takes them to many far off corners of the world.
The descriptions paint vivid pictures, which draw you into the story and the story line keeps you wanting to read more and more. I thoroughly enjoyed this and can’t wait to get my hands on the next instalment. I would recommend White Mountain to anyone, a truly wonderful story.
The story follows two friends Mr Agyk a wise old wizard and Gralen a large portly green dragon. They receive a message from a wizard friend of Mr. Agyk who appears to be in trouble and set out to help him. This is the start of an adventure that tests them to the limit and takes them to many far off corners of the world.
The descriptions paint vivid pictures, which draw you into the story and the story line keeps you wanting to read more and more. I thoroughly enjoyed this and can’t wait to get my hands on the next instalment. I would recommend White Mountain to anyone, a truly wonderful story.
June 2, 2015
A wonderful read - dragons, shapeshifters, monsters, more dragons, wolves and wizards and dwarves and heroes! The story jumps straight in and Mr Agyk's soon travelling with Gralen (who is possibly my favourite character), and the pace doesn't slow all the way to the twist at the end! I did find the names and places hard to follow on the first read, but considering the book's well worth a second (and third) read, it wasn't a problem at all. The drawings scattered through the text are a really nice detail, the writing is excellent, and the story definitely keeps you hooked. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series to find out what happens!
August 24, 2013
I only read to around page one hundred. The world building was interesting and I didn't dislike any of the characters, but I had a hard time staying interested. I wasn't able to connect with any of the characters, but that could be because I'm the wrong audience (there didn't seem to be written for YA). I got the feeling that the dragon was supposed to funny, but I didn't find him such.
I also felt that it was too dramatic. The book was riddled with lines such as "a strange and deep foreboding fell upon the two once more, and though neither could explain their fears, they both felt reluctant to close their eyes." Even the chapter headings seemed designed to wrack up the tension and suspense. For example, one chapter was titled "A Stony Clearing in the Ancient Grey Forest, Danger Lucking in the Shadows." All and all, it felt like overkill. It didn't compel me to read farther, it just made me annoyed. If the writing was just toned down a little, it would be a much better book.
Another thing that bothered me was how things would be shown, not told. We don't learn about the characters from their speech or actions, but from long paragraphs introducing them and telling their character traits. In places, White Mountain seemed repetitive. For instance, fairly early on in the book the main wizard shrinks himself. From then one the adjective 'little' is constantly applied to him. I get that he's shrunken, I don't need the word 'little' to constantly remind me.
I can see other people liking White Mountain, but it just wasn't for me.
I also felt that it was too dramatic. The book was riddled with lines such as "a strange and deep foreboding fell upon the two once more, and though neither could explain their fears, they both felt reluctant to close their eyes." Even the chapter headings seemed designed to wrack up the tension and suspense. For example, one chapter was titled "A Stony Clearing in the Ancient Grey Forest, Danger Lucking in the Shadows." All and all, it felt like overkill. It didn't compel me to read farther, it just made me annoyed. If the writing was just toned down a little, it would be a much better book.
Another thing that bothered me was how things would be shown, not told. We don't learn about the characters from their speech or actions, but from long paragraphs introducing them and telling their character traits. In places, White Mountain seemed repetitive. For instance, fairly early on in the book the main wizard shrinks himself. From then one the adjective 'little' is constantly applied to him. I get that he's shrunken, I don't need the word 'little' to constantly remind me.
I can see other people liking White Mountain, but it just wasn't for me.
February 2, 2017
Tolkein's The Hobbit aside, I do not often read the sword and sorcery fantasy that involves dragons, but Sophie Tallis' White Mountain is too beautiful a book not to read. Even in the Kindle version, the illustrations by the author shine through and help you draw you into a world - epic in scale - and under control a dark and powerful wizzard.
The story has the feel of of Elizabeth Kerner's Song in the Silence in the way that humans, wizards, and dragons co-exist in the world. Whenever I think of dragons I thing big, Tolkien Smaug-sized beasts that dwarf the other characters, and so I did stuggle a bit with placing the size of some of the dragons we meet in this story.
Where this story succeeds marvellous is the relationship between the old, wizened Mr Agyk and his apprentice witch, Wendya, and through them their relationship with Gralen. No spoiler's here, but the closing chapters are heartrending until the end...
The story has the feel of of Elizabeth Kerner's Song in the Silence in the way that humans, wizards, and dragons co-exist in the world. Whenever I think of dragons I thing big, Tolkien Smaug-sized beasts that dwarf the other characters, and so I did stuggle a bit with placing the size of some of the dragons we meet in this story.
Where this story succeeds marvellous is the relationship between the old, wizened Mr Agyk and his apprentice witch, Wendya, and through them their relationship with Gralen. No spoiler's here, but the closing chapters are heartrending until the end...
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March 10, 2013Author: Dinah McCall
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