ok, I’ve read a number of the novelizations by the author, and although he can put a good story on the page, he has GOT to work on basic grammar, or at least get an editor that is paying attention. Here’s the problem: there are WAY too many sentences fragments throughout the book, and the problem shows up in numerous other novelizations also. And no, I’m not making this up just to be a douche.
Don’t believe me? Read the book and see.
Just for the hell of it, I took about five examples from this book and tried typing them into a Word Doc exactly as they were in the book, and the grammar check flagged every example immediately as ‘sentence fragment, consider revising.’ So, any Word file will pick up on the problem, so how the hell are all the fragments getting through? Please fix this problem, commas are not your enemy!
The reason it’s frustrating is it detracts from material that I really want to enjoy. Clearly, the author knows and loves the material, and he does a great job putting it on the page, minus that one glaring problem. The pacing is always great, and he really brings these old films to life, but the damn fragments make him seem careless. Then again, any editor should have caught all this, but maybe Echo On publications can’t afford one. In that case, get more test readers.
In closing, if this one annoyance was fixed, I would probably buy damn near every one of the novelizations the company does, cause I love the films. As of right now, I will have to skip them in favor of ones written by other authors that the publishing company puts out there.