I feel like it was more interested in relaying its concept than telling its story. The story itself just sort of happens. The conceptual backbone is great, don't get me wrong but that's all it got. Characters are whatever, and nothing really happens until the end. So nice cool spooky moments, but nothing that really gets you. 5/10
At first I hated this story, but after a reread it was soo good, written so well and provided fun visuals, it felt like a perfect short story to read in the fall as well, kinda wish it were longer