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Along the stormy coast of Lithuania, the Nemežis Manor stands dark and hidden by the ocean's violent waves. There are rumors that scientists from various areas of the world have come together to conduct the greatest experiment in all of biological science—-to create a living being from scratch.
As it turns out, Charles Karolis Drake, III, will meet the most sexually charged synthetic creature ever created, capable of changing genders at will. Once the monster escapes, it seeks to have sex with as many different people as possible, in every way possible. Charles Drake becomes the creature’s main pursuit. What does the creature want with Charles? The monster will stop at nothing to find Charles and have its way with him.
WARNING : This 10,000+ word short story contains explicit scenes of gender transformation , BDSM , gay and lesbian affairs , and erotic encounters with a superhuman monster . Turn back now if you are offended by public romps , humiliation , and explicit descriptions of groups and multiple partners . 18+ only allowed .
As it turns out, Charles Karolis Drake, III, will meet the most sexually charged synthetic creature ever created, capable of changing genders at will. Once the monster escapes, it seeks to have sex with as many different people as possible, in every way possible. Charles Drake becomes the creature’s main pursuit. What does the creature want with Charles? The monster will stop at nothing to find Charles and have its way with him.
WARNING : This 10,000+ word short story contains explicit scenes of gender transformation , BDSM , gay and lesbian affairs , and erotic encounters with a superhuman monster . Turn back now if you are offended by public romps , humiliation , and explicit descriptions of groups and multiple partners . 18+ only allowed .
1365 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 18, 2015
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September 3, 2022
Much the Victorian horror novels from which it draws its inspiration, this is written as an epistolary narrative, consisting of a series of letters written by Charles Karolis Drake III to his son. While it works well in some places, it completely falls apart in others. I mean, who the hell actually writes letters anymore, and how the hell does he manage to keep mailing these letters while feeling (and fucking) his way through the forest?
That narrative flaw aside, it's a well-orchestrated piece of erotic horror that explicitly asks many of the questions left within the subtext of Frankenstein. It's a story about men and monsters, good versus evil, and biological urges versus free will. Naturally, it's also a novel about human arrogance, with a group of scientists crossing the line in their search for answers.
There's not a lot of suspense here, with most of the 'surprises' telegraphed early on, but that's fine. The elements of horror work well, with some really grotesque scenes of fire and mutilation, and the erotic aspects work just as well. They're a little cold and clinical, lacking something in the emotion department, but that may be a deliberate attempt to emulate those Victorian authors like Shelly, Stoker, and more.
As for the gender aspect (which I swear wasn't so clearly tagged in the title when I downloaded my copy), it was the one genuine surprise. It's all a little too quick and too easy, and lacked the kind of detail I think many readers would be looking for, but the consequences are explored quite nicely.
That narrative flaw aside, it's a well-orchestrated piece of erotic horror that explicitly asks many of the questions left within the subtext of Frankenstein. It's a story about men and monsters, good versus evil, and biological urges versus free will. Naturally, it's also a novel about human arrogance, with a group of scientists crossing the line in their search for answers.
There's not a lot of suspense here, with most of the 'surprises' telegraphed early on, but that's fine. The elements of horror work well, with some really grotesque scenes of fire and mutilation, and the erotic aspects work just as well. They're a little cold and clinical, lacking something in the emotion department, but that may be a deliberate attempt to emulate those Victorian authors like Shelly, Stoker, and more.
As for the gender aspect (which I swear wasn't so clearly tagged in the title when I downloaded my copy), it was the one genuine surprise. It's all a little too quick and too easy, and lacked the kind of detail I think many readers would be looking for, but the consequences are explored quite nicely.
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