Small town life in the Wisconsin Northwoods is not like anything Mary expected.
When Mary Matherson moved into her late grandfather's house in small town northern Wisconsin, she was prepared to deal with the prying locals while digging for clues about her grandfather's curious death. What she was not prepared for was the veil between the supernatural plane practically in her backyard.
It turns out, Mary is a witch. Her new boyfriend is a demon. The Other world is hard to resist and Mary wants to learn the magic her grandfather kept secret from her. Instead of nosy neighbors and coffee shop gossip, Mary must deal with supernatural politics and a threat that has hunted her family's magic for generations.
Elise Posledni's love for writing started at a young age when she wrote a retelling of The Lord of the Rings through the point of view of Bill the pony. Talk about an ambitious first fan fiction! From there, writing just became second nature. Elise is currently a bookkeeper by day and writer by weekend and very early mornings. She has short stories featured in the Creative Wisconsin Magazine and A Wisconsin Harvest of Horror anthology. A New Witch in the Northwoods is Elise’s debut novel.
Having lived in Wisconsin for most of her life, she loves incorporating the lifestyles of the small towns and truly spectacular natural areas into her writing. Elise enjoys hiking with her two rescue dogs, working with horses, gardening, and snowboarding.
Elise Posledni is the pen name for Jenna Dickson. She is a proud member of the Wisconsin Writers Association and the Chicago Writers Association.
How I read this book: Free ebook copy received through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review
I really loved this book, and the only reason I'm not giving it 5 stars is because I've decided 5 stars are only for books that completely blew my mind. But this has been amazing, a cozy book with a very cool world and nice characters. I really hope there is a sequel. I wouldn't mind learning more about this world. It's hard to invent a new magical world when it's one of the most popular things to write out there, but the author somehow managed to make it original all the same. I really loved it and I would like to find such a world myself to explore.
At the start of A New Witch in the Northwoods I was curious and giddy, because it seemed that we'll have a cozy, funny, charming book with an adult woman restarting her life and taking control of her dreams. (Also, magic!)
That went downhill pretty fast, because we got infodumps galore (that didn't really ended up being important to the plot anyway), paper thin characters and not a lot of show for a book about magical powers and learning how to use them.
I am not mad, just expected more than an aged up version of the YA stories where the FMC is super duper special, yet goes from "smart and capable" to "can't communicate" in a span of a romance.
Don't even get me started on her mom, who shows up in a few phone calls and in person only once, but our Mary loves her so much, I honestly forgot she was even alive when she was not in the scene. (Again, show and not tell.)
I did like the little snipets of the lore at the beginnings of the chapters, it's a shame that was not tied in more with the actual story.
Thank you to Netgalley and Ten16 Press for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Mary has recently inherited her grandfather’s home, a home that carries many fond memories. These memories are haunted by one rule, do not enter the forest. Upon moving to the Wisconsin woods, Mary is quickly adjusting to the slower pace of owning her own small town coffee shop, this slow pace leaving a lot of time for exploring. Entering the woods changes everything about what she knows about the world around her, her family and herself.
As a debut the premise is there a woman stumbles into a magical world that she is deeply tied to and meets a demon boyfriend, amazing. The fantasy writing is also there along with the world building, some of the more enjoyable parts were the excerpts at the beginning of chapters detailing bits of lore. But I found that tying the magical world to Mary, creating the romance plot and also a hero arch was a lot to take on at once and ended up creating a non-cohesive story. I enjoyed the romance between the FMC and MMC but with the hero plot it felt a little out of place and not properly fleshed out, as did many of the relationships between the characters.
Again this book is a debut, with the strongest bits of writing shining through with the fantasy aspects. The romance wasn’t bad either, there was just a repetition and a lack of cohesion that made the read not as enjoyable. If you liked The Dragon Heart Legacy Series by Nora Roberts you may enjoy this read.
A New Witch in the Northwoods is Elise Posledni’s debut novel. It’s a cozy romantic fantasy set in Northern Wisconsin. As soon as I saw that this book was set in the Northwoods of Wisconsin, I was intrigued. I have spent some time “up North” in WI and loved hearing the places I know (Mountain, UW Green Bay, etc.) being mentioned.
Much of the book is about Mary’s journey of self discovery, exploring her abilities and how to navigate her role between two worlds. It’s got such great cozy fantasy vibes - found family, a budding romance, and magical mentoring. The last 20% really picks up with action and a villain, and had me on the edge of my seat!
I took my time with this book and really enjoyed it!
Thank you to Ten16 Press for providing this book for review consideration via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.
I loved this book! Finally a FMC in her 30s I felt I could relate to and the MMC 100% book boyfriend was lovely. I would have loved and epilogue with glimps of how future looks like. But overall a nice and cozy fantasy that would totally recomed.
[thanks to netgalley, the author and publisher for the e-arc]
i hate writing negative reviews, so i'm going to start off with the few things i did enjoy about this novel.
the reason why i picked it up in the first place, of course, is the premise: mary moves into her grandfather's house after his death, in a semi-remote town where she opens a coffee shop. she takes a stroll into the woods—a place she has always been forbidden to explore by her grandfather. there, she discovers a portal that leads to a magical dimension called the Other, and finds out she is magical, too. i found the story as a whole quite nice. although a bit predictable at times, it still held my attention. the part i liked the most was the whole plot surrounding the mysterious death of mary's grandfather, what frightened him enough to want to close the portal and never want mary to go near it, and especially why he had willed his house to mary in the first place. the Other was quite nice as well. it's obvious the author worked hard on all the intricacies that go with an entirely new world. the excerpts that introduced every chapter give more insight into the history of the Other, which is something i always like in fantasy books. i truly believe it has the potential to be the foundation of many great stories, as it is so diverse and complex.
but unfortunately, as far as i'm concerned, the good sides of the novel end there.
honestly, i could've dnf-ed by the first 10%. the exposition felt like a wikipedia page told through some sort of q&a between mary and the magical characters. that lasts through a dozen chapters or so. the narration felt like a screenplay, with a list of actions reflecting close to no emotion. and adverbs! so. many. adverbs. i think the writing did get better as it went, though. which actually made the whole thing look like a first draft. the novel tries to be something really cool and intricate but, ultimately, this is what makes it so badly executed. with the town in the woods and the coffee shop, it leans towards a cozy fantasy; but then it builds up a mystery plot that sometimes feels very thriller-y as well (which was actually the two aspects i enjoyed most). and of course, it is also a romance.
the romance between mary and andras requires an entire paragraph; there are so many things to say. their story starts off on the wrong foot because andras is a scary demon and demons are not to be trusted. however, that lasts all of two chapters, because then andras allows mary to cross between worlds as she wishes, considering she has no further evil motive as per the truth test andras has put her under. it's all mary needs to trust the demon and become attracted to him. andras is also into mary, and he shows it in ways that are supposed be sexy (i think) but made me deeply uncomfortable. (the worst moment was probably and they kiss. i don't know much about relationships between 30-year-olds but that felt a little quick. granted, nothing much was happening except excessive amounts of world-building, so there had to be some type of event; but still, they could've just learnt to know each other? hang out a little bit? become friends, perhaps? (also, if some of you don't like sex scenes, know however! i liked the way their dynamic grew stronger over the course of the novel. they both truly care and wish only the best for one another. their love felt real and sincere. (despite the many "growls" from andras and "purrs" from mary, which made me slightly want to tear my eyeballs out.) so, yes, overall their relationship was sweet…until the token third-act climactic breakup due to slight miscommunication!! yay!! i'm a little biased on that part, because the miscommunication trope is probably my least favourite of all time. but objectively, that plot point (and everything that followed, to be honest) made no sense at all. i'm honestly still not sure how she got to that conclusion, especially since andras has been nothing but an adorable boyfriend ever since they got together.
should i conclude that their romance is a little wonky because mary is not a very good/enjoyable/relatable character? maybe. mary is your regular, good old golden girl. she's beautiful, she's successful in all her endeavours. everyone in the Other wants to be her friend. she is simply adored wherever she goes. and of course, she's an extra powerful witch. i think her character fell a bit flat because she is depicted as this perfect, brave and selfless person, even though she really is not? for starters—and i'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but i will say it anyways because it truly bothered me—it feels like she never truly listens to anyone? there was a lot of information (about the magical world, other characters, etc) that was repeated so many times because mary will ask the same questions over and over again, even though she has already been given an answer (oftentimes overly detailed, to be fair). when she talks with her mother or her colleague beth, she only listens half-heartedly because her whole focus is on this brand new universe she discovered and her brand new demon boyfriend. consequently, she also completely forgets her coffee shop (even though she repeatedly says she doesn’t), where beth works harder than her even though she's just an employee AND a chemistry student at the same time. she thinks little further than her own nose most of the time. andras might be the only exception, but only sometimes. the other characters were not really memorable and pretty surface-level. i did like beth and beatrice, though. the two of them shared only one scene, but i was more into their dynamic than any other in the book.
and now, the ending. i have to admit, even if i have no idea what other outcome there could have been, i feel a little dissatisfied with the way the story wraps up. the novel could have benefited from an epilogue or, even better, an ending that is less rushed. i barely had time to process what was happening that the novel was over. it felt like it went on forever (possibly because i kind of forced myself to keep going in spite of all my instincts) but i still wanted a few more pages.
sadly, i wouldn’t recommend this book as it could use a LOT of rewrites and maybe a little reworking of the last third. but i do believe the author has some good ideas and i hope she can put them to good use with other novels soon.
I was so excited for this based on the premise alone! Urban fantasy/hidden world cozy romance set in a midwest town - this is my jam. However, the version that I downloaded from NetGalley reads more like a first draft than an uncorrected proof. Typos and misspellings are expected with advance reader copies, but downright confusing passages and inconsistent narrative flow is not. I confirmed with NetGalley that I had the right version, but still could only make it through two chapters, even after rereading both of them. Because it's so painful to DNF this book and give it one star, I've marked the review with spoilers to provide specific examples of the writing that kept me from going further.
It starts strong, with evocative descriptions and natural characterization. As soon as the plot kicks in, something felt off. "You're new here," our love interest (Andras) says to our MC (Molly) upon meeting her, followed by "You're not supposed to be here," and finally "Who are you?" These statements/questions are part of a conversation between the two of them, but logically their order is confusing and his words are completely independent of Molly's responses to him.
Later, the forest is described as "unnaturally quiet". "There were no sounds of buzzing insects or scampering squirrels through the leaves. Even the birdcalls seemed muted." Is it silent or not? Are the birds muted, or do they just seem muted?
More of this lack of internal consistency is evident when Molly meets up with Andras (MMC) again. He's described with "a sharp jawline that was clean-shaven, but she was close enough to see the dark stubble that ran all the way up to his thick, untidy black hair." Is he clean-shaven or not?
Molly meets a man who is introduced in the text as a bartender. He works at a bar and serves patrons drinks. Molly later finds out that this man, Josef, is a wizard. When she reveals to Andras that she thought he was a bartender, Andras "...laughs so loudly he rousted a flock of ravens from a nearby tree" and continues "chortling under his breath." Perhaps this is some inside joke revealed later, but pages prior we saw this wizard doing the job of a bartender. Even if there is some compulsion or spell over Josef forcing him to tend bar (as implied), bartender and wizard are not mutually exclusive characteristics. Why is this so funny? Molly certainly doesn't ask.
Andras also explains that the connections between Earth and Other (Faerie) Earth are weakening because modern man cannot accept something the way it is. "That will be a street and I will put buildings there" he says mockingly of modern humans pointing at forests, but we just spent dozens of pages walking up and down streets and alleyways in the Faerie village. The buildings have chimneys and are described as constructed of weathered wood and stone, reminiscent of logging camps, with doors and windows and telephones. How is this any different from the amenities of the cozy little town of Mountain?
At one point, "the trail had narrowed so that they were walking almost shoulder to shoulder between the trees." Three paragraphs later, "[Molly] was so engrossed in categorizing the differences that she nearly ran into Andras when he came to a halt ahead of her." Are they side-by-side or single file? Also, somehow the roughness of the trail makes talk more difficult? I think the author just wanted Molly to stop talking.
Similarly frustrating is the extremely repetitive prose. Molly is constantly reassuring herself that the hunting knife she brought with her is still at her belt, and as Andras begins to reveal the Other world, he ends his sentence the exact same way not three pages apart.
"Andras," he said and gave her an elaborate bow. "Andras the demon." "The demon?" Mary asked. "Well, of course," he told her, his eyes swirling darkly. "What else did you think?"
[12 paragraphs later]
"Wizards and demons have a pretty bloody past," he finally explained. "I don't think we will ever trust each other." "He's a wizard?" Mary asked, feeling that at this point she shouldn't feel as shocked as she did. "What else did you think?" He asked.
Thank you to NetGalley for an advance copy, though I hope for anyone reading this review that you can't find any of the passages I quote above because the copy you're reading is a polished proof. I look forward to the opportunity in the future to amend this review based on a revised copy.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Reviewing an Advanced Reader’s Copy/Uncorrected Proof from Net Galley
This novel truly stands out for its epic world-building. I loved how it seamlessly blended magical realism with a fully realized fantasy realm. Both Mary’s human world and the Otherworld felt rich and immersive, and the characters were wonderfully quirky and memorable-they really stay with you long after reading.
The magic system was especially compelling. The idea that witches and demons aren’t limited to a single power, but instead have affinities while still being able to develop other elements, was fascinating. Mary’s training with Cal, Joseph, and Andras was one of my favorite aspects. The imagery throughout these moments was stunning-particularly the scene at the lake, where the water bubble rises from the stream and is later shattered into tiny fragments by air pressure. It was such a beautiful, vivid piece of writing that really highlighted the author’s descriptive strength.
That said, while the story starts strong, it begins to feel a bit stretched after around the 70% mark. There’s a repeated focus on how extensively the magical community is protecting Mary, with several chapters centered on guarding her rather than progressing the plot. While this reinforces how important she is to the world around her, I felt some of this could have been streamlined to maintain tension and momentum leading into the climax.
Mary as a protagonist was a bit of a mixed experience for me. While her fear and overwhelm are understandable given the circumstances, I found myself wishing to see more active use of her training and abilities in key moments-especially during high-stakes situations like Ruthven’s attack. Given her unique potential as a half-witch, it would have been really satisfying to see her step more fully into her power as the story progressed.
I also would have loved to see more exploration of her rare metal affinity, which felt like a particularly distinctive aspect of her magic. Expanding on this-especially during the final confrontation-could have added another layer of depth to both her character and the magic system.
The climax itself felt a little rushed compared to the buildup. The final battle with Ruthven had so much potential to showcase her growth and the full scope of the magic system, and I found myself wishing it had been more expanded and detailed to match the richness of the world-building.
As for the ending, Andras’s sacrifice was emotionally impactful, but it also felt quite significant in terms of what he leaves behind-especially his connection to Dorian and his role in the Otherworld. I found myself wishing for a bit more balance here, so that the emotional weight of that decision felt more fully matched by Mary’s arc.
That said, this is an incredibly promising debut. The author’s imagination, world-building, and unique approach to magic clearly show her potential. There’s a strong creative vision at the heart of this story, and I would absolutely be interested in reading more from her as she continues to grow into a seasoned author.
One Liner: Interesting premise, but needs stronger writing and better execution
Mary Matherson didn’t expect the locals to be that curious about her grandfather’s death. Moving into his house in a small town in northern Wisconsin definitely didn’t prepare her for a tinning veil between this world and the supernatural, right in her backyard!
The flash news is that Mary is a witch, and her new boyfriend is a demon. The Otherworld is fascinating, and Mary wants to learn magic, something her grandfather kept a secret from her. However, she has to deal with nosy locals, supernatural politics, and a threat haunting her family for generations!
The story comes in Mary’s third-person POV.
My Thoughts
Well, I couldn’t ignore that cover or blurb for long, so I grabbed the ARC, excited for a witchy romance with a dash of intrigue and danger.
The beginning was great. No denying that. The description of the setting, the way the FMC feels restless yet hopeful and curious, etc., was well done.
I’ve done my best to ignore -ly adverbs in many books I read, but some of them here stood out like a sore thumb. Those sentences would have sounded better with the adverbs and rephrasing. Many times, I had to reread the details coz they’d be standing at one point and then at a different place or in different position. When did they move? The character can’t be standing now and suddenly rolling over the back (we have to know when they sat or lied down).
The time jumps were seldom clear, so that was an issue. I kept wondering how many days/weeks had passed between the scenes. It got a little better once I could measure in terms of Halloween, November, etc.
Each chapter started with an ‘excerpt’ from the many books/records/etc. maintained by the supernatural species. These were good, but could have been blended into the overall plot. As such, removing them doesn’t really affect the plot.
The world-building, descriptions of the creatures, the politics, internal conflict, and the rest were rather interesting; much more than the romance, TBH. Not that the MMC isn’t nice, but he is pretty much the romantasy hero stereotype (grumpy but kind, a century old but young, sharp jaw, powerful, falls head over heels in love with the FMC who is super special… you get the drift).
One thing I liked was that the FMC was trying to balance her life between the two worlds. She doesn’t just forget her responsibilities and goals after discovering her identity and powers. This aspect is woven into the plot.
However, the climax and the ending didn’t work. So far, it looks like a standalone, which means having an elaborate setup only to shut it down makes no sense. Also, with no epilogue, we don’t have answers to some very important questions.
To summarize, A New Witch in the Northwoods has an interesting premise, but the characterization, execution, and writing need more work. It is just too rough at this point.
Thank you, NetGalley and TEN16 Press, for the eARC. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
Thank you NetGalley and Ten16 Press, an imprint of Orange Hat Publishing for sending this book for review consideration. All opinions are my own.
Unfortunately, this book just wasn't for me. I was really excited about the concept going in, but it ended up falling flat. A lot of the times, the writing seemed like it hadn't been through editing yet. I found a quite a few typos and disjointed moments where I'm not sure how we got from one place to another. Multiple times, I had to reread sentences to figure out how much time had passed between a paragraph and the one before. I had a hard time seeing the exact same bits of dialogue and descriptors over and over again. There was a few times where the exact same verbiage was used multiple times in the same paragraph. Dialogue between the characters was incredibly stiff. To me, the book struggled with being unable to decide if it was cozy fantasy, romantasy, or a mystery/thriller. There were a lot of great elements and ideas, but they ended up never being fleshed out since we were bouncing around between themes. This was a really short book, and things weren't expanded on in the way they deserved. Throughout, I kept waiting for the pace to pick up and something to actually happen, but we mostly got what felt like a lot of filler and info dumps that didn't end up being relevant to the overall story. Things did pick up towards the end of the book, but only marginally, and the final climactic moment happened with only ten or so pages left in the book.
The characters in this story were pretty one dimensional and had absolutely no depth. The main character, Mary, is about as Mary Sue as it gets. I love to see an older FMC, but I don't love an FMC who is unnaturally good at everything and every guy she meets has a thing for and is just perfect. Our MMC seems like most stereotypical Shadow Daddy types that books are currently oversaturated with. And he is, quite literally, surrounded by shadows. The rest of the characters aren't much better.
The romance fell victim to two of my least favorite tropes: insta-love and a third act break up caused by miscommunication. There was also a serious lack of chemistry and there seemed to be no spark or flirtation between the two of them. Like most things in the book, there simply wasn't enough time spent on this to flesh it out the way it needed.
To sum it up: this book had a lot of potential, but sadly didn't live up to it. Concepts are strong, but they need their own time to shine. So many of the things that were focused on could be cut away to expand on what's actually important to the story. #ANewWitchintheNorthwoods #NetGalley
Thank you to Ten16 Press and NetGalley for providing me with an advance review copy in exchange for my honest review.
**Rating: 2.25/5 stars**
If I hadn't received this as an ARC and felt committed to providing an honest review, I likely would have stopped reading before reaching the first third of the book. I read the eBook version, and it wasn't until around the 30% mark that the story became somewhat more engaging.
The cover, title, and book description immediately caught my attention. The premise of a new witch discovering her magical heritage in the Northwoods was exactly the kind of story I enjoy, and the Minnesota setting offered the potential for a fresh and atmospheric backdrop. Unfortunately, the novel never fully delivered on that promise.
My biggest issue was the lack of depth in both the characters and the story. The characters felt one-dimensional, making it difficult to become emotionally invested in their journeys. The timeline was often unclear, and the plot lacked a sense of consistency. Mary's life outside of the magical world also felt underdeveloped. At the beginning of the story, we're told she has just opened a new outdoor adventure business, yet it already appears fully established with inventory, equipment, and a part-time employee. Once the magical storyline begins, her business and responsibilities in the ordinary world seem to be largely forgotten.
The mystery surrounding her grandfather and his death initially seemed like it would be a major driving force, but it never received the depth or exploration I expected. Likewise, Mary's magical training often felt like a secondary subplot instead of a central part of her character's growth. Instead, much of the narrative shifted toward the developing romance, which left the magical elements feeling underdeveloped.
There were also several chapters that focused almost entirely on Mary's restlessness—both at home and at work—which slowed the pacing considerably without adding meaningful character development or advancing the plot. As a result, the story became a tedious read, and many of the plot developments felt predictable.
This book had all the ingredients to become a memorable cozy fantasy: an intriguing premise, a magical setting, and plenty of opportunities for mystery and character growth. Unfortunately, it felt like a missed opportunity. With stronger character development, a more cohesive plot, and greater emphasis on the magical world and family history, this could have been a much more compelling story.
While I appreciate the opportunity to read this ARC, this one simply wasn't the right fit for me.
Thank you to Netgalley and Ten16 Press (an imprint of Orange Hat Publishing) for the ARC! All opinions are my own.
3.5 stars rounded to 4 stars!
As soon as I heard this book took place in Wisconsin I was excited. The premise - a woman (who is actually a witch) inherits a cabin in a tiny town in Northern Wisconsin - was right up my alley. The small mentions of UW Green Bay, hunters stopping in the café in their hunting gear, or even the cheese/cows from Wisconsin made it feel like home.
Overall I really enjoyed Mary as a character. She was likeable and I felt like she was relatable. Who doesn't want to leave the hustle and bustle of the city to move to a tiny town to open a café? One of my problems with cozy fantasy books is that sometimes the character dynamics feel flat because they aren't described well or you don't see the characters having fun little moments. This book did great with that, I loved seeing everyone's day to day and to see how the relationships evolved. I can see how people would think the book was a little slow because of this fact, but I actually appreciated all the little things that we see between the characters and the world.
Andras was a great book boyfriend. For a demon, I expected him to be a little more ruthless instead of a lover boy. I loved Andras's backstory and especially how the author used real research about the demon Andras to tell his story. There were intimate scenes in this book, but they were done tastefully and I found myself kicking my feet while reading because of how cute the characters were together.
The world felt uniquely crafted . There are so many fantasy books out now that it is hard to craft something unique, but I thought the author did really well. Describing different magical creatures and how they work in the scheme of the world all made sense to me. There was one problem with the book that I felt poking me the entire second half, and that is why I am ranking the book a little lower. Why would closing the portal solve the main problem? If there is another portal in New Orleans (that is widely known), I don't think it would take that long for the villain to track Mary down. I understand the points made in the book, but I didn't find them compelling enough.
I do believe that this book could use a few edits because there were spelling mistakes, minor pacing problems, and a somewhat inconsistent ending/resolution? Overall, I enjoyed the book and thought the story was done well.
A New Witch in the Northwoods is a charming witchy fantasy that combines small-town life, supernatural mystery, romance, and a surprisingly detailed magical world.
One of the strongest aspects of the book is its world-building. The supernatural side of the story is genuinely intriguing, particularly the descriptions of the different creatures, the Otherworld, its politics, and the history surrounding Mary's family magic. I also really enjoyed the excerpts at the beginning of the chapters, which add a little extra depth to the mythology and make the world feel larger than what we see directly through Mary's perspective.
Mary was another aspect I appreciated. Her discovery that she is a witch doesn't completely erase the rest of her life. She still has to deal with her responsibilities in the human world while trying to understand her new identity and the supernatural world she's suddenly been introduced to. That balance gives her character a little more substance than the typical "discovering my powers" storyline.
The romance, however, was more of a mixed experience for me. The relationship between Mary and her demon love interest is entertaining, but it sometimes feels quite familiar, especially for readers who are already accustomed to paranormal romance tropes. For me, the magical world and the mystery surrounding Mary's family were much more interesting than the romantic storyline.
The book also seems to have divided readers when it comes to pacing and execution. Some elements of the story feel like they could have been developed further, particularly toward the ending. There are several interesting ideas and pieces of lore that made me wish the book had spent more time exploring them.
Overall, A New Witch in the Northwoods feels like a promising debut with a genuinely interesting premise and an atmospheric setting. It may not be perfect, but the combination of witches, demons, supernatural politics, family secrets, and small-town Wisconsin gives it a distinctive charm.
If you're looking for a cozy paranormal fantasy with a strong emphasis on magical world-building and a touch of romance, this is definitely one to put on your radar.
Finally, a mature main character, a human who is confronted with the whimsical and doesn’t simply accept it. She asks questions and actively looks for answers. When faced with a man in the woods, she isn’t swayed by how handsome he is, instead, she focuses on finding a way out and away from danger.
I appreciated the elements that were clearly well researched, especially those related to Andras and demons, and how they were woven into the story. The idea that human development led to the loss of whimsy in their world was also compelling.
That said, I struggled to fully engage with the story. The plot felt slow, and for the first 60% of the book, it was almost nonexistent. There was little sense of direction during that stretch, which made it hard to stay invested. The connection with the grandfather wasn’t strong enough to sustain interest, and at some point it felt like the main female character became too easily satisfied with the answers she received about that mystery.
The world-building unfolds gradually but relies heavily on info dumps. We learn about magic and the world alongside the protagonist, with each chapter introducing something new, a place, a character, a magical element, or a creature. While rich in detail, the sheer volume of information about the past and the magic system overshadows the main plot, leaving little sense of forward momentum or purpose.
I did enjoy the cozy aspects of the book, but the slow narrative pace ultimately made it feel dull. The story could benefit from more personal moments that offer insight into the character’s emotions and motivations.
The ending was decent, though it raised some questions. For instance, why didn’t the villain use other portals to reach the main character? Additionally, many characters are introduced throughout the story, but by the end, we don’t get a clear sense of what their lives look like after everything that happened.
I never read the blurb of the books I choose to read, so what makes me choose a book is usually:
1. The cover… yes, I judge a book by its cover. 2. The title. If it has “witch” in it, I’m sold. 3. The author’s name. Yes, I know this is weird, but here we are.
The author’s surname was actually one of the reasons I chose this book first from my NetGalley library. I live in Eastern Europe, and “Poslední” means “last.” So I immediately thought: girl, you wrote a witchy book with me, you are not going to be last — you are going to be first.
Sorry for this completely unrequested explanation. Back to the book. 🌺
The first thing I loved immediately was the fictional excerpts before the chapters. I loved them to bits!!! 😍 Some of them felt so credible that I wanted to believe they were real books, so yes, I went and Googled them. Elise, you better write at least ten of those fictional books now, because I need them.
Then we have the third-person narration. I love books written in third person. And now I’m going to give you another piece of unrequested information: you know the movie Amélie? You know the narrator’s voice? Every time I read a book in third person, I hear that kind of voice reading it to me. I know, I know. But I love it.
Back to the book…
Until about halfway through, I was just having a wonderful time. I was cozy. I was witchy. I was thinking: okay, this is going to be a cozy magical story about a woman discovering herself, her magic, and maybe falling in love. Remember, I didn’t read the blurb, so I was just happily living in my little witchy bubble.
And then my stomach flipped.
I actually had to sit up straight because I was like: wait. What just happened?
From that moment on, I was completely hooked.
I also loved that the author made me feel complicated things about the main character. There was a moment with her love interest where I thought her reaction was exaggerated, and I got annoyed because I hate unnecessary drama and overreactions. But then I thought: wait… Elise made me love her, then made me frustrated with her, and that is actually good writing. It means I cared. 💭
And then I fell in love with her again.
Her love for her new family, her courage, and the way she grows through the story made me root for her completely.
And the ending? Oh gosh. The ending. One word: YES.
When an author makes me feel cozy, then scared, then annoyed with the main character, then makes me love her again, and finally makes me sigh with happiness at the end, that author gets my 5 stars. 🌟
Now Elise, you are in trouble with me. You know why? Because first of all, I want Book 2. I need to know what happens after this.
But not only that. I also want the backstory. I want to know how her grandfather fell in love with her grandmother. I want to know about the wars. I want the prequel too. I hope you are already writing.
To anyone reading this: if you like witches, demons, magical worlds, cozy fantasy, and all the good stuff around fantasy… read it. NOW!!! 🌺
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC. All opinions are my own.
I absolutely loved this story. It was cozy, magical, heartfelt, and by the time I reached the last page, I wasn't ready to leave these characters behind. They felt like real people, and watching them grow, heal, and find where they truly belonged was such a rewarding experience.
I completely understand why this book doesn't have the highest average rating. The beginning is definitely a slow burn, and it takes its time building the world, the relationships, and the mystery. There were moments where I wished things would move a little faster. But for me, all of that patience paid off in the end.
The characters are what made this book so special. Every interaction felt genuine, and I found myself becoming attached to the entire community. I cared about what happened to them, celebrated their victories, and felt their heartbreaks. There's something incredibly comforting about finding a cast of characters that feels like family, and this book gave me exactly that.
The ending completely won me over. Everything came together in such a satisfying and emotional way that it reminded me why slow-burn stories can be so worth it. It left me smiling, a little teary-eyed, and incredibly happy that I stuck with it. Sometimes the journey takes longer than expected, but when the destination is this rewarding, it's impossible to regret it.
This wasn't a book that relied on nonstop action or constant twists. Instead, it focused on building meaningful relationships, creating a charming atmosphere, and telling a story full of heart. By the end, I realized I had fallen in love not just with the magic, but with the people who brought it to life.
If you're someone who doesn't mind a slower build-up and enjoys character-driven stories with an emotional payoff, I can't recommend this enough. For me, the ending and these unforgettable characters more than made up for the slower pace. I closed this book with a full heart, a huge smile, and wishing I could spend just a little more time in the Northwoods.
The witchy magical elements of this book were so promising and should have been right up my alley, but I unfortunately did not enjoy A New Witch in the Northwoods. If this wasn't an arc, I definitely would have DNFed it.
I really can't say much about our main character. So much of her story is finding out she is very special and more powerful than everyone else and then being wrapped up in her romance, so we just don't know much about her. Her love interest was a little more fleshed out, but their relationship is instantaneous (or at least it seemed so, it was so hard to gauge passage of time in this book). The third act breakup was so very silly and made me roll my eyes. I can't say much about the supporting characters, and I was honestly more concerned about how the main character's coffee shop was staying afloat with how flaky she was being. I think there was a makings of a found family moment but I didn't connect with any of the characters enough to see that.
The pacing of this book was also all over the place. We jumped days and months erratically, and the actual villain wasn't revealed until the second half! The typical cozy elements were not really there either, so I didn't feel the cozy fantasy ambiance. The magic world and rules were told primarily through information dumping conversations, which is really not compelling to me either. The author tells tells tells through dialogue and nothing is shown to the reader. The writing is also repetitive with recurring words (so much growling in dialogue!) and phrases, and the prose was at times awkward and hard to follow.
Newly discovered witch opens a coffee shop in a small mountain town should be a hit, and with some editing I think this could be a decent story. I do also want to acknowledge this is a debut book, and I hope the author is able to develop their stories more in the future. If you are looking for a low stakes paranormal romance, you might enjoy this book, but this genre has better options in my opinion.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with an eARC in exchange for my honest review.
Imagine small-town Midwest vibes meets Narnia, and you’ll have A New Witch in the Northwoods.
Mary moves into her grandfather’s house after his mysterious passing with plans to open a café and start a new chapter of her life. But she soon discovers that there’s much more to her grandfather—and the Northwoods—than she ever realized. Mary finds a way into another realm, where she begins uncovering the secrets her grandfather kept hidden.
One of my favorite things about this book was the setting. As someone who lives in Wisconsin, I absolutely loved seeing familiar places, references, and little Wisconsin tidbits woven throughout the story. I could picture the Northwoods so easily while reading, and that made the book feel especially cozy and personal to me. The small-town atmosphere was one of the strongest parts of the story.
I also really enjoyed Elise Posledni’s storytelling. There’s a genuinely interesting premise here, and I loved the idea of discovering a hidden realm alongside Mary while uncovering her grandfather’s secrets.
That said, I felt like the story was rushed. There was so much potential for deeper world-building and character development, but it often felt like everything was packed into one book when it could have benefited from more room to breathe. I wanted more time with the characters, more development of the magical realm, and more exploration of the secrets surrounding Mary’s grandfather.
Overall, this was a 3/5 ⭐️ read for me. I enjoyed the story and especially loved reading a fantasy set in an area that feels so familiar to me. The Wisconsin details and Northwoods atmosphere were a definite highlight. I just wish the book had slowed down a little and given its characters and world more opportunity to develop.
If you enjoy cozy fantasy, small-town settings, magical hidden worlds, and a little Midwest charm, this may be worth checking out! 🌲✨☕️
This whimsical urban fantasy offers a cozy, atmospheric mystery set in a supernatural Wisconsin, though its deliberate pacing may leave some readers wanting more momentum. A New Witch in the Northwoods by Elise Posledni introduces a world where moving home means discovering a heritage of magic and a town full of secrets. I’m giving this 3 stars! ⭐⭐⭐ A huge thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this ARC. As always, all opinions expressed here are entirely my own. The Review I liked the book overall, but to be honest, I found it rather slow-paced—to the point where I almost gave up and DNF'd it. While I liked Mary and Andras as the lead characters, there wasn't anything particularly "eye-catching" about them or the world that made me feel a strong pull to keep reading. It’s a pleasant enough story, but it lacked that gripping hook needed to make me truly invested in their future. The Good: The setting is beautifully atmospheric, capturing the quiet, slightly eerie charm of the Northwoods perfectly. Mary’s journey of self-discovery as she navigates her new reality is relatable, and her interactions with the local community provide some sweet, cozy moments. For readers who enjoy a "low-stakes" magical mystery that focuses more on vibes and setting than high-speed action, this book delivers a very specific, calming mood. The Not So Good: The pacing is the biggest hurdle; the plot takes quite a long time to truly get moving, which can make the middle section feel like a bit of a slog. Additionally, the character development for Mary and Andras felt a bit safe; they are likable, but they didn't have that spark or unique edge that makes a character stay with you long after the book is closed. If you're looking for a page-turner that keeps you guessing, the slow-burn nature of this mystery might feel a bit too stagnant
When I first started this debut novel by Elise Posledni I didn’t know what to expect, but it quickly pulled me in. The FMC, Mary, was instantly likable to me. Classic trope of city girl moves to the small town to start over but mixed with magic and mystery. This book was whimsical, cozy, fun and honestly, light. It was just a simple fun read.
I gave this book 4 ⭐️ because I truly enjoyed reading it! I have more positive things to say than negative.
I think the author describes the scenery and background with the perfect amount of details. Enough that I can see the woods, Katrina’s(Tavern) and Mary’s coffee shop in my head but not overdone where I start skimming the page. I think overall the characters all lack real depth, but tbh I liked it that way. It was part of what made the book a light easy read and a perfect break from the heavier darker books I usually read. I did find all of the characters likable and interesting. I especially loved the female friendships, my only complaint is that her human friend and witch friend were basically the same character and personality (I still love them tho).
I loved her romantic interest, he was sweet, romantic, thoughtful and I was swooning. The pacing was a little unpredictable, there were some time jumps, a few days here, a few weeks there etc. so I feel like we missed out on seeing some of the building of their relationship.
The conflict was something I was not expecting. At the time I was mad bc it made my cozy fun book a little darker but in the end it did add to the story and give another element of mystery to it. The book ending felt complete but open ended.
Thank you Ten16 Press, Orange Hat Publishing for providing this book for review consideration via NetGalley! All opinions are my own.
If you are looking for a blend of mystical fantasy, cozy witchy cottage core, and a little bit of romance and danger this book is for you. I was happy to read this debut novel by author Elise Posledni because the themes are right up my alley and the cover caught my eye. The story follows Mary, a young woman who's inherited her grandfather's cabin in the woods of Mountain, Wisconsin. She's decided to start a quiet life opening a coffee shop and starting over in a small town. She soon stumbles upon another world hidden in the woods behind the cabin while exploring and it sets the trajectory of her life in a direction she never could have imagined. Mary discovers that she's a witch and all of the creatures she thought were fairytale lore are real. At first it's literally a magical experience discovering her powers, new friends, and even romance. But soon her grandfather's secrets catch up to her and she realizes there's a dark side to this exciting new life. I have to admit that the first half of the book was a bit slow. I appreciate the building of the world Mary discovers and her journey to understanding and becoming a part of it, but it took me until about half way through the book to really get into the story. I loved the romance between Mary and Andras along with the relationships Mary makes with those in her new world. When the story got moving and the real danger and mystery were uncovered that was when I was fully in. It just took a while to get there. I think this is the perfect read for lovers of movies like Practical Magic or shows like the Good Witch. There's just enough suspense without too much stress for those that don't like a dark read and there's lots of sweet romance and cozy vibes.
A New Witch in the Northwoods is Posledni’s debut novel about a woman who inherits a house in her grandfather’s will and then discovers a portal to a magical realm where she finds out she is part witch.
I really wanted to love this one but I just wanted so much more. There was a plot but due to the secretive and mysterious nature of the danger, a lot of the book felt just like daily life. The romance in here was sweet and I did enjoy a lot of their interactions but I’m not sure how we got to that point to fast. The third act romantic conflict was also very irritating to me because our main character, Mary, thinks it was a betrayal for her love interest to have not trusted a stranger immediately and for him to want to protect his people. Maybe there was another way to read that but I just didn’t get it. My favourite part of this book was most likely the side characters. They all felt unique and they added a lot to the story. I especially liked Dorian. There were also a lot of sudden time jumps in this book. The most notable one for me was when her mom was visiting. It was made very clear that Andras’s powers were weakening and he was worried about Mary going out to a party. I thought that we were about to get a dramatic and tense scene but instead it jumped to after her mom had flown home.
I usually look past typos in books because no one can catch them all but there were some in here that really interrupted my reading and enjoyment. At one point Mary is referred to as Mark and I had to go back through to figure out if a new character was introduced. There was also a moment when Andras was called a wizard when he is a demon. Again, re-reading was needed.
What seemed to be an ordinary ‘normal girl discovers magical place and realises she isn’t so normal’ book became one of the most comforting and beautiful books in the genre that I have read in a while.
A New Witch in the Northwoods follows Mary Matherson, who takes up her Granddad’s home after his mysterious death. As she begins to explore the area, she discovers a magical town in a realm called the Other. Here she builds some really heartwarming relationships, including a well written intimate relationship… with a demon!!
I found the scenery of the Other to be pretty standard for the cosy fantasy genre, with nothing to set it apart too much from other similar worlds. However, the characters in here were just wonderful, and really made the story stand out for me. I especially got drawn in even more half way through the book when the main antagonist was introduced.
With plot twists and harsh realisations, this book kept me on the edge of my seat every time I picked it up, only to be comforted by some really cute moments between the characters.
The epigraphs before each chapter take direct quotes from books written in the Other, and provide some really intriguing context for the realm and its society. I would love to see a book written solely in the Other, possibly following one of the Wizard-Demon wars.
Elise Posledni has hit it out the park with her debut novel, and I’m excited to see what she comes out with next. I usually rate my books based on my enjoyment of the book rather than objective quality (which wouldn’t rate it much lower at all) so this deserves a 5 star from me!
A huge thank you to Posledni and NetGalley for an early copy of this book!
Thank you to NetGalley for the Advance Reader Copy 3.75 rounded up to 4.0
First off I love books set in Wisconsin because as a life long native there is something about me being able to easily visualize the surroundings or where the town over is located that makes me happy.
This book follows Mary who arrives in Mountain, Wisconsin after her grandfather's death to open her very own coffee shop. She is staying in her Grandfather's old house when she wanders into the forest where she was always warned to stay away from. She stumbles into the Other where she learns that she is a half-witch and finds Andras a very attractive demon who she has a lot of chemistry with. She begins to learn more about her powers, but also why her grandfather tried so very hard to keep her away from the magical world in her backyard.
I absolutely adored the characters in this book including many of the side characters both her magical friends from the Other and her friend/employee Beth who works at the coffee shop. I will say that the first half of this book is focused on developing the magical world and exploring Mary's relationship with the Other. It felt a little slow early on especially as it was unclear what the main conflict was. However the second half of the book we learn that there is a creature her grandfather was scared of and is now hunting Mary, I was sucked back in. This is a very cozy book with a few eerie elements that keep you on the edge of you seat towards the end of the book. I would definitely recommend if you want an cozy supernatural read.
(English below) Dit boek begon heel interessant. Met het idee een cozy fantasie te gaan lezen was ik al snel enthousiast. De hoofdpersoon werd achtervolgd door een vreemdeling en de interesse was gewekt. Zo bleef het een tijdje interessant, maar helaas ben ik maar tot de 30% gekomen. Ik vond het erg snel gaan dat de hoofdpersoon werd geaccepteerd, en vrij snel heel vriendelijk werd met de demon Andras. Daarna werd het meer een info-dump dan een lopend verhaal. Ik heb het idee dat de schrijfster zelf nog niet wist waar het verhaal heen gaat. Een hoop oppervlakkige personages in het boek, die alleen worden omschreven door hun haar en/of een enkel kenmerk.
Netgalley bedankt dat ik dit boek mocht lezen, helaas niet heel ver gekomen. ----------- This book started off very interestingly. With the idea of reading a cozy fantasy, I was quickly excited.
The main character was being chased by a stranger, and my interest was piqued. It remained interesting for a while, but unfortunately, I only made it to the 30% mark.
I felt it moved very quickly that the main character was accepted and became very friendly with the demon Andras quite fast.
After that, it became more of an info-dump than a flowing story. I get the impression that the author herself didn't yet know where the story was going.
There are a lot of superficial characters in the book, who are only described by their hair and/or a single characteristic.
Thanks Netgalley for letting me read this book; unfortunately, I didn't get very far.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I received this ARC as an e-book through Netgalley.
This one was a mixed bag for me, I think because the author wasn't sure where to take the book. We have elements of cozy fantasy (learning she's a witch and how to use her powers, found family), romantasy (brooding demon boyfriend, jumping into bed at the first chance without really getting to know each other, miscommunication tropes galore), or political/murder fantasy thrilling (the vampire).
I think the best part was the world-building. The history, the portals, the hints of other things in the world... I would have loved the focus to be more on Mary learning about the world with a bit of romance. Instead, we ping pong around without getting too deep into anything. We took a long time to really get to the thriller part of the story, which mean that the ending was abrupt and disappointing. I kept watching the page numbers tick down as I read, knowing there wasn't enough time for a really satisfying conclusion.
The best character, and the one who stole the show when he was in the scene, was Dorian, followed by Beth and Beatrice. And I think it says a lot that the best characters were not the main ones.
I'd love to see this book revised. I think the concepts are there in the worldbuilding, and that's why I gave it as many as three stars, Tone down the romantasy tropes and either lean into the cozy fantasy found family aspect or lean the other way into the fantasy murder vampire.
This wasn't my cup of tea and I’m really bummed out about it. The writing itself was okay, and if you're looking for an insta-love, easy-going, cozy, magical, low stakes, small-town vibe then this is totally for you. Unfortunately, those things just didn't line up with my interests as much as I hoped it would. I can definitely see this book being part of a longer work or series, where everything gets a bit more in-depth over time. However, as a stand alone book this just wasn't quite doing it for me.
There were parts with the world building and character development that I would have loved to see more of. For instance, the MC Mary was a little too stereotypical and one-dimensional for my taste and I would have liked to know more about her. The coffee shop plot seemed like an after thought, and I didn't quite see Mary's interest in actually running a coffee shop. Since that was one of her main motivations for the move, I think placing more of the story within that setting or somehow showcasing Mary's affection for running a coffee shop would have been great additions to the story.
I will say that the magic system was really interesting and I definitely wanted more of it. Mary's training with Cal + her reactions to the stones probably my favorite part of the whole book. The prose describing her affinities and avoidances for each element was so well done.
Thank you NetGalley for the ARC. [I received this ARC for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.]
Thank you to NetGalley for an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I had a really hard time figuring out how to rate this book. I love the premise and the world of the Other, but the writing felt a little clunky and the story really dragged for me. I actually wanted to DNF by 25% but in the end I’m glad I kept going. I’m going to give this one 3.5 stars rounded down to 3.
As I mentioned, I really loved the Other and I would have enjoyed the book more if we had just stayed there the whole time. The scenes set in the human world felt monotonous and pointless. I enjoyed the romance and seeing Mary’s relationships with the magical beings blossom.
The writing often felt clunky and kept pulling me out of the story. I know it’s a little unfair to say since this is the author’s first book, but Mary had no real personality and the book started with way too many info-dumps to the point where it felt like there was no real plot. It picked up once the vampire storyline was introduced, but then even that started to drag. The plot line with Ruthven hunting Mary went on for way too long and I stated to feel frustrated and just wanted the book to end.
I really did like the Other and wish we could have a whole book set there in all its coziness without the vampire drama. It felt more like a YA book to me, so I would recommend this book to those who enjoy vampire novels and are looking for a cozy YA read.
ARC from NetGalley - A New Witch in the Northwoods by Elise Posledni
There’s something magical about finding a book that leaves you feeling homesick for a place that doesn’t exist—and A New Witch in the Northwoods did exactly that.
As someone who typically gravitates toward romance, I really appreciated that this story leaned more heavily into fantasy and magic. It was a refreshing change of pace and allowed the world-building to take center stage.
The opening took me a little while to settle into, as there’s a lot of important information about the two worlds to absorb. Once everything began to fall into place, though, I found myself completely immersed.
This story had me wishing I owned a grimoire so I could start brewing potions and practicing spells. The magic felt enchanting, and the world was so vividly imagined that I genuinely wished I could step into it.
The development between the main characters was beautifully paced, and the supporting cast added so much warmth and heart to the story. They left me wishing for a few more kindred spirits in my own life.
Overall, this was a wonderful read, and one I’ll happily be adding to my bookshelf when it’s officially released. If you’re looking for a cozy fantasy filled with magic, friendship, and a richly imagined world, this one is well worth picking up.
This was such a fun read I enjoyed this, anything with Witches or Demons I will read it instantly as these are my favorite tropes.
We follow Mary, who moves to a small town after inheriting her grandfather’s house, thinking she’s just starting fresh and then finds out she’s a witch and there’s a whole supernatural world around her. I really liked the overall vibe of this it’s very small town, cozy, a little bit magical, but with some mystery and danger mixed in everything was easy to follow I wanted to keep reading and I didn't find myself being bored or uninterested, I really liked the characters I thought they were fun and fit the story well, I thought the story line was different from all the other cozy demon/witchy books I have read which is refreshing.
The world-building was simple but still added enough knowledge that you understood and were not confused throughout.
overall, just a really enjoyable read that I flew through in a couple of sittings — 3.75⭐ for me
if you love: 🖤 cozy fantasy/paranormal 🖤 small town settings 🖤 witches & supernatural drama 🖤 easy, comfort reads
you’ll enjoy this one
thank you to netgalley, the publisher & elise posledni for the arc