Plot
The Puzzle Lady just can’t stay out of trouble. When the late Chester T. Markowitz, a man she never met, leaves $10,000 to his beloved wife, Cora Felton, the Puzzle Lady can’t help cashing the check. Quicker than you can say legal proceedings, Cora’s least favorite ex-husband, Melvin, shows up in Bakerhaven with an attorney and a young bimbo, demanding that her alimony be terminated on the grounds she remarried. When a key witness in the alimony hearing gets murdered, a KenKen puzzle is left at the scene of the crime. Is someone trying to tell Cora something? Before she can find out, she runs into more murders, more puzzles (both KenKen and crossword) and a murder weapon that seems to point to Melvin as the killer! At least it might have, if Cora hadn’t suppressed it. Does the Puzzle Lady still have feelings for the scoundrel she once married? Don’t ask. She might kill you!
My Analysis
While this book comes a bit over half in the series, it’s my first read of the Puzzle Lady and her quirky way of solving crimes.
First, the characters. Pretty surface. I don’t get any deep descriptions of most of the characters. Blonde, redhead, etc. I don’t get an age to the characters, except that Bambi is young. So, I had an issue with getting a mental picture of the main players such as Cora, Sherry, and Harper.
Second, dialogue. Quick. Back and forth. The problem here was a lack of tag lines. This is not recommended because readers like to be remined of who is speaking. Long back and forth with no beats or tags tends to confuse the readers. I was confused, for a second, a couple times. The other problem is if the writer does this while there are three or more characters in the scene. Hall jumps back and forth, then adds a third speaker, then jumps back to the first without a tag. I was able to catch up, but, a simple CHARACTER said would solve the issue.
Third, plot. Wow, what a complex, intricate little story here. It took a while after the first KenKen came into play before the next one entered. I wasn’t sure we were going to get back to that. And then add in crosswords.
The writer does a nice job of inserting the clues so the reader can play along. Most in this book are pretty simple to solve. Those that don’t come to mind right away are filled in as you fill in the easy stuff. Anyway, it’s a nice addition to the story and does well with the cozy mystery subgenre, kind of like when cooking mystery writers add in the recipes.
So, where do we go from here? I may have missed something, but there’s a big alimony case going on amid all the murders. That wasn’t solved at the end. The story wrapped up nicely, but I didn’t see where the decision of the court case was made. I thought the entire thing was a scam, and I think it was. The issue was that Cora never came out and proved it was.
A couple missing words and punctuation, but a very nice little complex mystery that was very enjoyable. I did like how Cora managed to finagle her way out of trouble (okay, stretch your imagination a little with the cops and the lawyers and have fun reading it) with her “logic” and obvious evasions.
I’ll be looking forward to more from Hall. Despite my issues mentioned above, I’ll still give this a:
Blue Belt