Sanctum, a holy or sacred place- what could be more sacred than possessing the power of your own true thoughts? Sanctum. It is both lock and key.
Actual rating: 1.5 stars. I absolutely despise giving such a low rating and a harsh review for a book I received as an ARC. However, it is in exchange for my honest opinion. Right? So here it goes:
Oh, the potential that this series had- and the complete disappointment that it was...
Sanctum continues Daniel Crawford and his two friend's journey to discover why they have had bad dreams and hallucinations since leaving the college over the summer. Dan's old roommate is now in a mental hospital, and upon asking to see him, gives Dan a code to follow that sends him on a wild goose chase to find his answers.
I have a lot of questions for the author on why she did what she did in this book. My biggest one is "WHY was so much wasted on rushing??" We had creepy houses being found, broken into, and searched...and we get two pages for each house?! What a totally missed opportunity. There was little-to-no description of these creepy places. They went in, smelled mold, found what they were looking for. That was it. I want some detail! I want to be scared of these houses. I want descriptions, creepy old findings, memories left behind from the owners from long ago. Why? Why? Why?
That brings me to the biggest "miss" in this book. It was rushed. Just like the first book, it went from one finding to another with no information, characterization, history, etc. to the story. We knew nothing about VERY key players in this story. It was just like they met Daniel and we were expected to know who they were, or why they were the way they were. Another hugely missed opportunity.
There was information that wasn't kept straight in the book. For example: Dan lied to his parents about where he was going for the weekend. He said he was going to Jordan's house. He instead went back to the college for prospect weekend. He feels bad about lying. Guilty. Then, just as a random blurb- he gets a text from his mom saying "Hi honey, how is campus? Behaving yourself?" Not like he got caught in his lie, but as if that was the story all along. I am hoping these many mistakes are only because I have an ARC, and these conflicting parts of the story will be fixed before print.
Also, just as with Asylum, these characters could not pass for 18. 14 at most. They were not believable characters. Also along to those lines: why were they never scared? You are telling me these "kids" just witness a live lobotomy, walk away, go hide in a basement, one decides to take a nap, and the other actually responds to someone saying "okeydokey"? No one was ever terrified. No one ever cried.
What the heck happened with Dan and Abby's relationship?? It is mentioned often in the beginning- then forgotten about. Mentioned one paragraph later on...then just *poof* - never mentioned again. When they parted at the end "I'll be in touch." Really? So does that mean the relationship is over?
It was entirely aggravating that everything they were looking for, and all the answers sought, just would "coincidently" fall into their hands. For instance: they start receiving pictures of a creepy carnival. They have no idea why. Then wait!!! The very same creepy carnival that they are looking for falls right into their lap! It just so happens to be at the school the same weekend they are there. Perfect. Amazing. Or when they go from house to house according to the code, and they just so happen to find what they are looking for in the first 30 seconds, even when they had no clue what they were looking for! Astonishing! They find a house full of old mail bags. I mean FULL. As they are being chased away, Abby happens to grab just three letters from a stack to take with her. What a coincidence! One of the three letters (out of 800,238) just so happens to have the answers they are looking for! A little more creativity and waiting in this department would have been great. Like I said before, this book was very rushed. It totally ruined the whole feel of the book.
Then why the 1.5 stars? I gave the book an extra 1/2 star simply because I actually continued reading to find out what happened. I actually was curious. I didn't want to stop because I wanted answers. Yet, I couldn't wait for the book to end.
Great (no, AMAZING!) idea for these books. Great covers. The books just were not that great. Hoping to see something new and improved in the future from this author. The creativity is present, but the aspects of a great book are just not there.
*I received this advanced reader copy from HarperCollins in exchange for an honest review.